[Report This]Date: 17 May 2010 2:40 PM Title: Edward Cullen
Ha Ha! Can't wait till Bella gives him what for!.
So much fun..
I'm enjoying your story immensely.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2010 3:03 PM Title: Family Time Part II
poor Bella
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2010 2:57 PM Title: Family Time Part I
that was such an intimate moment
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2010 2:48 PM Title: Prove It
at least he's finally made a decision
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2010 2:34 PM Title: Junior
bye bye Tanya
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2010 2:20 PM Title: Decisions
she's got every right to be upset with him
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2010 2:12 PM Title: Edward Cullen
Edward's a jackass, I hope Bella blows up on him
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2010 2:03 PM Title: New Beginning
lmao oops
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2010 1:56 PM Title: Bella Swan
Bella's quite the little tart lol
Date: 26 Apr 2010 1:15 AM Title: Family Time Part II
love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope you have a chance to update sooner. i would love it if you were able to.
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2010 11:46 PM Title: Family Time Part II
Great chapter! I wish we could have heard Edward and Carlisle's conversation.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 2:31 AM Title: Family Time Part II
I don't mind waiting until May. You're on my fave's list so I won't miss it when it comes out. You really write the emotional stuff well and I'm looking forward to seeing where this one goes.
Motherthing
Date: 25 Apr 2010 1:47 AM Title: Family Time Part II
Ok, but I want to know what and who Carlisle got his information? Or show this be whom? Never did get that right in secondary school. Always have to look it up. Now my gray cells wouldn't hold that information if I did look it up.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 6:04 PM Title: Family Time Part II
I have really enjoyed this story and your character building... I appreciate you didn't leave us in to much of a cliff hanger as well!
I will miss this story, but, I do understand personal life and the things that pay the bills have to come first.
That being said... I look forward to getting to read another chapter just as soon as you can get it out for all of us!
P.S. May 20th is my birthday... I look forward to the next chapter being one of my own personal gifts!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 2:38 PM Title: Family Time Part II
I'm a little confused... If Charlie doesn't remember Bella, how can he know to ask after Sheila?
Good luck with your work. I'll still be here. :)
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:06 AM Title: Family Time Part I
love the story. update soon =)
Date: 19 Apr 2010 1:04 AM Title: Family Time Part I
LOVED it!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2010 9:10 PM Title: Edward Cullen
LOL...I just love this story...ok back to reading!!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 7:41 PM Title: Family Time Part I
I am loving this story!! Bella is unstoppable!! But I was wondering if we are going to get an Edward POV?
Date: 18 Apr 2010 10:17 AM Title: Family Time Part I
Great story...interesting how Alice is her personal wardrobe assistant and not a person. Can't wait to read more, a POV from Edward would be great. Please update soon!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 8:48 AM Title: Family Time Part I
Nicely done!!
Loved the interaction between your Bella and Edward characters! Definitely looking forward to the "slow burn" of these two finally getting together...
I like the slowness of this story and the tough exterior of Bella---well the one that everyone see's nice facade and all, however, there is definitely a sweet romantic attempting to break out of that shell of hers!
Looking forward to seeing where these two go next! I know you will not comply, however, I am assuming/guessing that Aro and Edward's relationship has more to do with personal issues then business issues... could I be warm at least? And furthermore, is there a possible potential that it has something to do with Bella and something somewhat sleezy that Aro may have mentioned or spoke of during Bella's prior employment years prior with the Cullens?
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 11:42 PM Title: Family Time Part I
Just started reading this story today and I like it. Very interesting looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 10:02 PM Title: Family Time Part I
love it. very good so far. i cant wait to see whats going to happen now.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 8:54 PM Title: Family Time Part I
Really enjoying this very different story. I don't mind a slow burn, as long as it's constantly moving forward!
More, please!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:34 PM Title: Family Time Part I
Sooooo freaking good!!!!! The tension in building and I can't wait until it explodes! And Jake doesn't like Edward no suprise there really. But does Edward not like Aro?? Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:58 PM Title: Family Time Part I
Great chapter, I like the way you write your story and how their relationship is changing. Slow is good but sometimes can't wait for a little more ;-)
Hope you update soon!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:50 PM Title: Family Time Part I
Oh, yeah... that was quite a moment they had there. I *love* a slow burn.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:34 PM Title: Family Time Part I
i love the face touching. So sexy without all the smut! not that smut isnt good btw. lol.
And Jacob needs to learn his place. Hes a friggin driver. Where does he get off being rude?!
Cant wait for more! x
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:12 PM Title: Family Time Part I
thanks good chapter
Date: 11 Apr 2010 7:24 AM Title: Prove It
awesome. i cant wait for more.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 9:25 PM Title: Prove It
I like bella best when she's yelling at people! LOL
Date: 09 Apr 2010 7:40 PM Title: Prove It
This was an awesome chapter!!!!! I can so feel the sexual tension between Bella and Edward I can't wait for more!!!!!
Author's Response:
You're the first person to say that! Thank you, I wanted to bring it across slowly with angst and stuff, so glad it worked, kind of, plenty more of that to come :)
Date: 09 Apr 2010 5:47 PM Title: Prove It
This was a cute chapter but I would really like to know the deal with Aro and the clan. Also I think he really likes her, Edward I mean. He seems just nervous about putting himself out there. Probably because of the name he's made for himself so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, all things with Aro will be revealed gradually, I may even do a POV of his at some point. The thing with Bella and Edward will be slow building, torturously slow in my opinion.
Date: 07 Apr 2010 1:42 PM Title: Lunch
You have developed such dinamic characters and have me riveted waiting to see what will happen next.
Great job!
Date: 07 Apr 2010 6:11 AM Title: Lunch
Love this story!! I can't wait to see Bella put Edward in his place. Please Update soon!!!
Date: 05 Apr 2010 3:07 PM Title: Lunch
What the heck is going on with Aro and his brothers? Are they trying to take over the company and if so why not just tell Bella what's going on? Why all the secrets?
Date: 05 Apr 2010 12:15 AM Title: Lunch
damn daddy cullen is going to get jr!
Date: 04 Apr 2010 11:27 PM Title: Lunch
Here's some love. Lol. Love this story
Date: 04 Apr 2010 8:51 PM Title: Lunch
Really love this Bella. It's nice to see a strong independent Bella for a change. Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 9:54 PM Title: Lunch
You, madame, are an evil, evil woman.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 8:54 PM Title: Lunch
I actually liked it. Everything's not rainbows and unicorns :P
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 8:35 PM Title: Junior
Love it and I am so glad Tanya got transfered
man she got what she deserved. too bad she didn't watch what she said, but she would have been going anyway
can't wait for lunch with Aro
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 7:57 PM Title: Decisions
she could have gone harder but i love the strong she devil she knows what she is doing
he so needs to be whipped into shaped I hope she can. he seems like a lost hope.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 7:19 PM Title: Edward Cullen
man that boy needs to be knocked down a peg.
i can't wait for bella to give it to him, what a prick
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 6:31 PM Title: New Beginning
love it bella is a spitfire
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 5:45 PM Title: Bella Swan
cute, bella is so strong and doesn't let her sight be a hindrance to her. love papa c in this. loved it when he called them his bitches
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:59 PM Title: Lunch
So who ordered the steak? I thought it was Aro, then he ordered the spinach and ricotta cannelloni.
Author's Response:
I've just re-read the chapter...all i can say is major oops, it was meant to be aro, little typo there, sorry.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 2:22 PM Title: Lunch
Loved how he slipped by calling her "sweetheart"!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 12:57 PM Title: Lunch
Intrigue--gotta love it.
However, I feel like there were more typos and punctuation errors than usual in this chapter. It was a bit disruptive in reading it. :)
Author's Response:
Terribly sorry for the lack of care in grammar. I don't tend to read over my work once it's written, nor do I have a beta. In future, I shall endeavour to edit, thank you for your review.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:53 PM Title: Decisions
I love this story as sometimes I feel like this is my life. Cannot wait to see what "hell" she puts Baby Cullen through next. LOL
Date: 30 Mar 2010 6:31 AM Title: Junior
wow, i love it! Bella, is confident, snarky and WONDERFUL! Give me MORE!! LOL
Date: 29 Mar 2010 7:13 PM Title: Junior
Ooh Edward's getting touchy already. Hmm...I think Junior has a bit of a crush.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 5:17 PM Title: Junior
I am enjoying this story and it's getting quite interesting. Looking forward to see how this relationship unfolds and why Edward is so not into Bella going to lunch with Aro...
Date: 29 Mar 2010 4:39 PM Title: Junior
It was good. Really good. I love how stupid you made Tanya. You would have to be really dense to not know someone wearing glasses and having a guide dog is probably blind. Good writing.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 2:01 PM Title: Junior
Loved this chapter, E and B conversation was hilarious , I just wished a stronger Edward regarding Tania, he didn't say anything to her about her cruel comments in front of Bella not even told her to shut up!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:58 PM Title: Junior
He got the holy grail right ... there's hope for him yet. I am kinda amazed, though, that he flipped his switch on Tanya so quickly.
Can't wait to read what happens next.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:01 PM Title: Junior
I am excited to see where this story is going! :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 11:40 AM Title: Junior
Oh I really like this story....I hope you update soon - I love the fresh take on the storyline. Look forward to your next installment.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 11:30 AM Title: Junior
I am intrigued. I'm sure all will be made clear in time, though.
Having said that, please reconsider your decision not to write any EPOV? I so love getting his perspective on things. :)
Date: 24 Mar 2010 8:51 PM Title: Decisions
wow I cant believe he is such a DICK to her!! Its rather funny how she puts him in his place :)
Date: 24 Mar 2010 7:53 PM Title: Bella Swan
Awsome! This seems like it is going to be fun! Where did you come up with the story idea??
Date: 23 Mar 2010 6:19 AM Title: Decisions
it's really interesting
i'd like to see from edward's p.o.v.
thanks so much for the very refreshing story
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:14 AM Title: Bella Swan
I loved the name of the closet "Alice" - great first chapter
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 1:45 AM Title: Bella Swan
oh goody! this is amping up to be a fantastic story. can't wait to read more. this is much more interesting and way less painful than watching kate gosselin attempt to do a viennese waltz on dancing with the stars. if i didn't want to continue reading this story so much i would totally spork out my eyes right now.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 10:21 PM Title: Decisions
i love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope its up soon. im excited to see what is going to happen next.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:55 PM Title: Edward Cullen
HAHAHA! :D
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:31 PM Title: Decisions
Made of Awesome!! I'm glad she has problems with him, not so much as because of him! thanks!!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:16 PM Title: Decisions
Love the chapter.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 8:57 PM Title: Decisions
Hm. I'm not exactly sure what precipitated Edward's seemingly sudden about face. I'm assuming we'll get better insight into that in a future chapter. :)
Date: 22 Mar 2010 8:44 PM Title: Decisions
cannot wait for the next chappy.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 8:40 PM Title: Decisions
Enjoying the story! Look forward to the next chapter!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 8:38 PM Title: Bella Swan
ah- not to worry mate. Cant wait to read more...really excited about this story! x
Date: 22 Mar 2010 8:37 PM Title: Decisions
I just love Bella she is so sarcastic and funny! The way she verbally bitch slapped Edward was masterful! Cant wait for more!!!!!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 8:25 PM Title: Decisions
I wasnt sure how i felt about it at the start, but i think i like it! the story is great! Im a londoner so i LOVE all the UK stuff.
One thing though, why do you have these massive gaps between lines? its a tiny bit strange.
Author's Response:
I know! The gaps annoy me too, I don't know why they're there, I think it's because I can't upload the document, so I have to paste it in, and that's just the format, it would take me HOURS to delete the spaces between the whole thing. Sorry about that, I know it's a pain, but c'est la vie :(
Glad you're enjoying it though, thanks for the review :)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:11 AM Title: Edward Cullen
oh my gosh i cannot wait until bella tells his ass off!!!
he better straighten up his act soon
love the addition of rose in the story
more soon please
Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:23 AM Title: Edward Cullen
i love the chapter. im looking forward to more of them.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 8:10 PM Title: Edward Cullen
I am very much looking forward to Bella tearing into his ass. Oh, this is gonna be fun. :)
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:47 PM Title: Edward Cullen
Oh yeah...can't WAIT to see her rip his balls off and stuff them down his cocky throat! Edward needs to learn more than just how to be a CEO. He needs to learn to be a man. Step 1: Bella needs to find a new head of HR. Step 2: Show Edward how little he knows Step 3: Show him how to grow up and the benefits of what a mature relationship can bring.
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:37 PM Title: Edward Cullen
I like and can't wait to see Bella freak on Edward.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 12:45 PM Title: Edward Cullen
more more more more more.....
loving this!!!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 6:03 AM Title: Bella Swan
All the votes aren't in yet but willing to give it a chance.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 9:23 PM Title: Bella Swan
i like the story please keep it up and update soon
Date: 07 Mar 2010 7:20 AM Title: New Beginning
Just found this story and it's definitely a different take on things! Can't wait to see B&E start interacting.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 4:35 AM Title: New Beginning
lol that was funny! I cant wait to see more of Bella and Edward interaction!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 4:20 AM Title: Bella Swan
I love this story so far!!!! Bella is so totally kick ass! i love the fact that she doesnt let her blindness hinder her and actually make her that more hell bent on making everyone see that she is better! seriosuly this chapter is totally awesome! I cant wait to see the interaction with Bella and Edward!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:50 AM Title: New Beginning
LOL. Edward not staying for dinner? Hm. Enjoying it so far. :)
Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:08 AM Title: New Beginning
hope to see the update sooner
the story plot is so interesting
i like your strong bella, hope edward isn't an ass...
Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:04 AM Title: New Beginning
I can't wait to see where this goes.