Date: 11 Aug 2010 11:29 PM Title: Bella Swan
love your story! the last chapter was great=)
Date: 11 Aug 2010 11:21 PM Title: At Last
Not bad or good.... freakin EXCELLENT!!! GAWD I am so happy!! I love how you did this, so beautiful! I look forward to your next chapter :)
Date: 11 Aug 2010 10:48 PM Title: Junior
Oh wow- loves it!! We just had a strong storm come through and lost power, I was SO upset I couldn't read the next chapter!
Date: 11 Aug 2010 10:04 PM Title: Edward Cullen
I hope she lets him have it!
Date: 11 Aug 2010 9:37 PM Title: At Last
Firstly, wow thank you for sending this off during your lovely holiday with your family! Very generous of you!! It's so grately appreciated!
Secondly... I LOVED this chapter!!! Yeah~now is there angst on the way huh? I know this chapter sort of touched Bella's inexeperience... I am curious to see how this will be broached in the chapters to come... definitely looking forward!!
Nina Simone... LOVE HER! Have for years!!! Isn't she amazing?! She was such a "bad girl" in her era, singing about "such things" (giggles) I think that's why I admire and love her so much!
anyways... I hope you had a great holiday/vacation with your family and had some peaceful relaxing days!
So definitely looking forward to the next chapter!!
Date: 11 Aug 2010 9:04 PM Title: Edward Cullen
Still good, off to read more!
Date: 11 Aug 2010 8:39 PM Title: New Beginning
lmao!!! very good!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2010 7:54 PM Title: Junior
Tanya gone, yay. What's with Aro and Edward?
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2010 7:33 PM Title: Decisions
She wasted no time in wanting his hands on her LOL. How long before she falls?
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2010 7:09 PM Title: Edward Cullen
Go on Bella sock it to him.
Date: 11 Aug 2010 6:58 PM Title: At Last
I like the thought of Edward as a lion. Never thought of that before.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2010 6:51 PM Title: New Beginning
Great first meeting with Edward LOL.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2010 6:10 PM Title: Bella Swan
Loved it. Really looking forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2010 5:50 PM Title: At Last
I thought this chapter was so sweet. I like how Bella became a little vixen while doing yoga.
Date: 11 Aug 2010 1:41 PM Title: At Last
Ha. Nice on Angela showing up. I imagine that will be office gossip in the morning. Or not, since Bella's been nice to Angela and helped her with Ben. Hmm. Can't wait to see what you do with it.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 11 Aug 2010 11:05 AM Title: At Last
It will be interesting to see what Angela thinks of them being together.
Date: 11 Aug 2010 10:42 AM Title: At Last
Loved it. It was so sweet.
I loved Bella's yoga torment!! Priceless.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 6:53 AM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
I kind of wish she'd made him suffer some for being the idiot he was all week.
Date: 06 Aug 2010 10:33 AM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
yay! finally..
Date: 06 Aug 2010 10:31 AM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
aww.. that's so sweet <3
i love this. i really, really do!
and i can't wait for the next chap;D
the idea is phenomenal and the way you transcribe it is 1A
maybe you see some mistakes because my english is not that good.
i am from austria, that's why. so now you know that you have fans in other countries :]
take care (can i say that?) anna
Author's Response:
It's fantastic to hear that I have fans from anywhere in the world, thank you very much for reading and reviewing.
Your english is great anna :) and you can say 'take care', that's absolutely fine.
:)
Date: 06 Aug 2010 8:04 AM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
Edward is an idiot always jumping to conclusions but Im glad they finally kissed. Great update!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 2:52 AM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
As always dear you rocked the chapter! I was so hoping you weren't going to leave us totally out in the cold... and I appreciate that you didn't.
Love how they are crashing into each other... this will be interesting... specially when he realizes she had no experience prior to his touches and whatever else should happen... lookin' forward to it all!
Have a safe trip! see ya soon... or at least your next chapter that is! ;-)
Take care!
p.s. I think this chapter was written well, however, I kind of thought with Bella's brazen pushes she makes potentially she'd have pushed into his room and demanded him to hear her out... but alls good... it was great!!!
Date: 05 Aug 2010 11:35 PM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
Finally. i love it.
(i´ve started to read the story today and in the beginning i was sceptical, but now, the more i read the more i like it.)can´t wait for the chapter. please update quickly.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 10:57 PM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
lol ghpes tp prove even the smart perfect guys can be so dense. loved the chappy
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2010 10:45 PM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
thanks an awsome chapter always misunderstanding going on
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2010 7:51 PM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
That was awesome!!!
Date: 05 Aug 2010 6:24 PM Title: New Beginning
loving this.
was tickled to read about maidstone,as i live about 30 miles from there.lolxxx
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2010 6:12 PM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
Good stuff!!! I am so happy they finally told each other how they feel.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 4:35 PM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
Finally a kiss.....
Date: 05 Aug 2010 4:04 PM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
whoo i think I may need a cold shower after that one.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 2:38 PM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
yay its about time.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 1:29 PM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
“You know your mood wings are giving me whiplash.” I have this as a notification tone on my cell phone.
Author's Response:
Excellent :)
Thanks for pointing that out, changed now.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 1:22 PM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
Yay! Now are they just going to cuddle and make out, or are they going to do a bunch more? Great chapter. Glad they got things out in the open.
Cheers,
Balti K
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, as to your question, you'll have to wait and see. I'm not cruel, I won't leave them waiting too long.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 12:35 PM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
It's about time these two got it together.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 11:52 AM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
ohh very good, I knew he would mistake her talking about someone else..glad that worked out
Date: 04 Aug 2010 7:07 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
Amazing story, one of the best i've read here (and i do read a lot). Please write more, you are a very talanted author!
Date: 31 Jul 2010 2:54 AM Title: Undisclosed Desires
OOH a nice little cliff hangar! So... is Edward pissy cause she went to see her father; and didn't ask him to take her and he found out and assumed she and Jacob were a thing... or did Jacob make it seem that way... ARRGH!
Must have more... I'm such an impatient twit at times... sorry. I just simply really love these characters and your story!
Hope you have a great week and I am very anxious for more soon!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2010 7:45 PM Title: Bella Swan
I love it. Edward doesn't know whose about to hit him in the arss. Hehehehe.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2010 7:10 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
I am confused by his sudden change in attitude cant wait to find out why.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2010 7:02 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
thanks good chapter
Date: 30 Jul 2010 5:11 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
interesting response from edward great chappy can't wait for the next one :)
Date: 30 Jul 2010 2:41 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
hmm wonder what crawled up eddie's butt
Date: 30 Jul 2010 2:33 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
WTF! I wanna punch Edward
Date: 30 Jul 2010 2:27 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
We all know Edward has asshole tendecies. The boy can't help himself.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 1:42 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
Hehehe. Is it just that Edward can't handle a Bella who looks like a woman? Is that the problem? I think it might be. Can't wait to see how that dinner is going to go.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 30 Jul 2010 11:39 AM Title: Revelations
love the story, keep up the good work
Date: 30 Jul 2010 11:16 AM Title: Undisclosed Desires
Hmm I really don't think he's acting like an ass just cause if her wardrobe change there has to be something else..
Date: 08 Jul 2010 7:00 PM Title: I'd Rather Be With You
:)
Date: 08 Jul 2010 6:16 AM Title: Stepping Forward
as always... your writing is great!
Jacob is full of angst and I have a feeling he won't stop and keep pushing and pissing off Bella and potentially creating a ripple in the water towards her potential "friendship" with Edward soon...
Hope you have a better week and are better now. Take care.
Looking forward to more as always!!!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 6:04 AM Title: Stepping Forward
Great Chapter. I love how niave Bella is about everything. It's adorable. Poor Charlie though.
Hope RL gets a little easier.
Cheers,
Balti K
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2010 11:22 PM Title: Stepping Forward
thanks pretty good chapter
Date: 07 Jul 2010 9:48 PM Title: Stepping Forward
Good to see these twoare opening up to the possibilty of "them"
Date: 07 Jul 2010 9:43 PM Title: Junior
Oh they will be so great together. And I would high five her if I could for putting Tanya in her place. Awesome update keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 07 Jul 2010 9:16 PM Title: Decisions
Damn I like Bella. She isn't afraid of anything. And she puts Edward in his place even though he is her boss. Awesome chapter keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 07 Jul 2010 8:14 PM Title: Edward Cullen
Oh no this was perfect. I loved when she was with Rosalie. Sounds just like Bella. I so want to read the next chapter to read how she deals with that ass of a boss she has. As fro suggestions maybe get a beta reader. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 07 Jul 2010 7:57 PM Title: Stepping Forward
All I can say is thank goodness for Rose.
Date: 07 Jul 2010 7:50 PM Title: New Beginning
Awesome update. I like how independant she is and she's not a whiner. I laughed when she called Edward an ass thinking it was Carlisle. Funny. Them working together should be fun. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 07 Jul 2010 5:41 PM Title: Bella Swan
Oh I really like this story a lot. Much different from what you usually find here. I can't wait to see how they get along with each other. I suspect that there will be fireworks. AS for suggestion maybe proof read a bit more. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 07 Jul 2010 5:00 PM Title: Stepping Forward
aww too bad she couldnt get to her dad
Date: 02 Jul 2010 4:46 PM Title: I'd Rather Be With You
I love your story, it is well written and has kept me captavated.
Date: 02 Jul 2010 6:54 AM Title: I'd Rather Be With You
Lovely chapter! so glad you are well too!
Can't wait to see if she gets the nerve first or will Edward? This is just angsty enough...
anxious and looking forward to more!
have a great weekend and week!
Date: 02 Jul 2010 4:16 AM Title: I'd Rather Be With You
So good! i love this story! fantastic
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 6:46 PM Title: I'd Rather Be With You
Great chapter!!!!
Date: 01 Jul 2010 4:15 PM Title: I'd Rather Be With You
aww very sweet
Date: 01 Jul 2010 12:20 PM Title: I'd Rather Be With You
Good chapter. Bella's actually becoming a woman. How cute when they grow up! Edward is right to take the physical stuff slow, but I wish he would kiss her!
Cheers!
Balti K
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 12:03 PM Title: I'd Rather Be With You
thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 6:20 PM Title: Revelations
aw, Edward's gone all romantic all Bella and she doesn't even realize it
Date: 09 Jun 2010 12:54 AM Title: Revelations
I love it. are you planning to write Edward's point of view?
I can't wait yo read the date!!!
Hugs
Date: 09 Jun 2010 12:22 AM Title: Revelations
awww Angela is sweet. And the lunch was a nice idea.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 10:33 PM Title: Revelations
Awesome chapter!!! Looking forward to their dinner.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 8:47 PM Title: Revelations
great chapter. I hope jacob backs off soon and that edward doesn't fall back into old habits and ruin what is starting with bella.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 5:13 PM Title: Bella Swan
suggestion: can u plz quit the major spacing between paragraphs? it would help the story read btr
Author's Response:
I agree with you 100%, I'm confused as to how to get rid of it. I've literally just now tried to go back and edit chapters to get rid of the spaces, something to do with the 'tiny' button. I will honestly try to fix it, believe me, it annoys me too.
Thank you for reading nonetheless :)
Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:54 PM Title: Revelations
Bella's in love!!!!! Come on Edward and don't disappoint her!!!! :)
Date: 08 Jun 2010 2:23 PM Title: Revelations
Oh, how cute! Bella has her first crush... Sweet.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 1:13 PM Title: Revelations
So definitely looking forward to the next chapter! This is a really nice change - and yet so very 'Edward & Bella' still! I like these two and I really like Bella's inexperience, and with that she has no fears of being honest, no filter to stop what her mind truly says... I think if we all tried to be a bit more like your Bella character we'd not be being disapointed overall with how things wind up in our day-to-day lives! and quit possibly we'd manage to have a happier existence too!
Well Done! Looking forward MOST DEFINITELY for your next chapter!
P.S. I sure hope you are getting loads of frequent flyer miles!!! Then once all this (if it actually does for you) slows down a bit you can escape to someplace tropical, peaceful... if you're anything like me it would be tropical, very few people around, loads of warm sandy beaches, nothing to do but be relaxed, maybe a few drinks with umbrella's, a hammock would be there for naps...
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the review! I'm glad you picked up on Bella's 'lack of filter', I've been trying to portray her total naivety and innocence and I think honesty is the best way to show it.
Definitely clocking up airmiles at the moment, although airline strikes are doing my head in! Funny that you should mention tropical paradise, I'm off to Cuba Monday morning for a bit of work for a couple of weeks but I've managed to extend it for a couple of days holiday. Still not looking forward to 10 hour flight though. I'd have to agree with you on having few people around, but a couple of days of peace and quiet is such a luxury, I'll just have to grit my teeth and bear with my colleagues for the first bit.
Enjoy your day!
Date: 08 Jun 2010 11:33 AM Title: Revelations
I definately think Jake crossed the line. I hope he will mind his own business.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 7:41 AM Title: Revelations
thanks good chapter
Date: 23 May 2010 11:24 AM Title: You Give Me Something
I've just read this story for the first time and am really enjoying it. It's interesting to view the world from Bella's perspective, but I would love to know what is going on in Edward's head.
Date: 22 May 2010 4:39 PM Title: You Give Me Something
I think it was wonderful.
Date: 22 May 2010 6:12 AM Title: You Give Me Something
This story just gets better! Definitely missed getting my weekly dose... hopefully things get "back to normal" for you real soon!
Thanks for the "shout-out", I've never been mentioned in anyone's notes and to me that was a nice, pleasant surprise... so thank you! I kind of felt like a little kid getting a special treat!
I really am enjoying the building of your characters and am excited to see what happens next!
Date: 21 May 2010 10:27 PM Title: You Give Me Something
:)
Date: 21 May 2010 8:16 PM Title: Junior
hmm eddie getting protetive already.
Date: 21 May 2010 7:55 PM Title: Decisions
Eddie gave up way to easily
Date: 21 May 2010 7:45 PM Title: Edward Cullen
cut off his balls.....please.
Date: 21 May 2010 7:31 PM Title: Decisions
Do we ever get Edwards POV??
Date: 21 May 2010 7:30 PM Title: New Beginning
Daddy C is evil. LOL
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 7:21 PM Title: You Give Me Something
like it a lot. very sweet
Date: 21 May 2010 7:17 PM Title: Bella Swan
hmmmm yeah I get the feeling that Daddy C isn't telling her a few things
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 5:43 PM Title: You Give Me Something
aww, poor kids, they keep saying the wrong things at the wrong times
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 3:43 PM Title: You Give Me Something
thanks good chapter
Date: 21 May 2010 3:25 PM Title: Bella Swan
Blind Bella w/ attitude does it get any better??? Great start! :)
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2010 5:55 PM Title: Family Time Part I
I really wish you'd do EPOV. Gotta wonder what's been going through his mind through some of the changes in attitudes he seems to be going through.