Date: 26 Nov 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 22
I am so happy that Bella was smart enough to have some one close by when she was having her meeting with Jameson. He is such a creep. In a way I hope Edward sees the security tape of the meeting, Bella should be honest with him. He needs to know what happened in case something happens in the future.
Author's Response:
Hi, thanks for reviewing :) You're right, he does need to know, but I didn't want to have him present for it because she can handle herself, but I agree with you.
Aurora
Date: 26 Nov 2010 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
Glad she dealt with both of those idiots quickly and succinctly! And I'm betting that somehow Edward's going to find out about Jameson's little try at intimidation.
Author's Response:
Me too, James needed to be brought down from his high horse. Well, Edward's a crafty one, so you never know...
Thanks for reviewing, Aurora
Date: 26 Nov 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 22
Awesome. I love a bad ass Bella. And she certainly kicked ass and took names in this one. Great job. And glad she finally figured out her feelings for him. I get the idea he's been waiting for her to catch up to him this whole time.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Hey :) I'm really glad you liked the chapter, thank you for the kind words, it really means a lot.
Tell me about it, it took her long enough, but once she's made up her mind that's it :)
Thanks for reviewing, Aurora
Date: 22 Nov 2010 11:34 PM Title: Element of Surprise
I just startet reading your story yesterday and I can't wait for the next chapter.
I am totally Team Edward, so I am not too keen on more of Jacob in the next chapters, but I would love some more Emmet - with Rose maybe?
Waiting impatiently....Sabs
Date: 21 Nov 2010 5:47 AM Title: Element of Surprise
Oh yeah, I really liked this chapter :) nice mystery/cliff hanger at the end and very nice, hot, lemon :D
Date: 20 Nov 2010 7:21 PM Title: Element of Surprise
good chapter
Date: 20 Nov 2010 5:57 PM Title: Element of Surprise
So when is she going to tell him about the pill???? I knew things were going to good for them that some kind of shit was going to happen. James ya I dont like him creepy bastard.
Author's Response:
All in good time :) He is indeed, and he's only going to get creepier.
Date: 20 Nov 2010 11:39 AM Title: Lunch
Wait! He said WHAT?????He just called Bella sweetheart!!!!I knew it!!!!!!!!!!!!I'm so happy right now!!!!!!!! This is an amazing story and I hope that wi will see them together soon.It is just...Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 20 Nov 2010 8:55 AM Title: Complications and Awkward Conversations
That is true love he is worried about her and her period how sweet. He thinking about what she will look like when she is preggers rubing her belly????
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:02 AM Title: Element of Surprise
Great chapter!!!! I just wish that she could tell Esme and Carlisle about her and Edward.
Date: 19 Nov 2010 10:15 PM Title: Element of Surprise
Great chapter, glad Edward got some lovins. He's been such a sweetheart through all this.
Sounds like Bella's going for blood against James. Can't wait to see that play out.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Indeed, it was well overdue for him.
I don't think there'll be too much of JJ left to tell the tale...
Thank you for the review, Aurora
Date: 19 Nov 2010 9:21 PM Title: Element of Surprise
Like it?? Love it!! Keep it up!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 19 Nov 2010 9:08 PM Title: Element of Surprise
well i hope in the end that they get everythign that they want ! cant wait to see what happens next
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2010 8:10 PM Title: Element of Surprise
Oh HELL YES!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pit Bull Bella has been released!!
James is goin' down!!!! Love it!!!
Author's Response:
A pit bull she will certainly be, I wouldn't like to be James right now, she's furious.
Thanks for the review :) Aurora
Date: 19 Nov 2010 8:04 PM Title: Element of Surprise
They have worked so hard on this project. I can't believe Mr Uley is backing out of the agreement now. I hope they can work it out, so Bella and Edward can tell Esme and Carlisle. I bet they know. They are sneaky like that.
Author's Response:
Indeed, they've all got a lot to do before it all gets sorted but it'll be worth it.
We shall see about Carlisle and Esme, it's interesting to know that most of you they know already. And yes they are sneaky, especially Esme...
Thanks for the review, enjoy the weekend. Aurora
Date: 19 Nov 2010 6:25 PM Title: Element of Surprise
Hmmmm I'm betting Esme knows.
Author's Response:
Maybe, maybe not. Could be mother's intuition. :)
Thanks for the review, see you next time! Aurora
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2010 5:16 PM Title: Element of Surprise
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, you're nearly always the first and it always makes me smile.
Enjoy the weekend,
Aurora
Date: 24 Oct 2010 11:42 PM Title: Complications and Awkward Conversations
:)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 10:57 PM Title: The Best Is Yet To Come
:)
Date: 22 Oct 2010 10:12 PM Title: Complications and Awkward Conversations
Thanks for the update :) the chapter was good
Date: 22 Oct 2010 4:41 AM Title: Complications and Awkward Conversations
well i think somethings going to blow up in their faces and its not goign to be good cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Maybe, maybe not. Thanks for the review :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2010 1:36 AM Title: Complications and Awkward Conversations
Yay their moving in together. Very sweet of Edward to do research on what helps with that time of the month.
Hmm I can't decide which I would like more for the outtake but I always wondered what went on in his head when he first met her since she confused him for Carlisle so I'm leaning more towards when he first met her:.
Author's Response:
I just think it's a very typically 'Edward' thing for him to do, so I made him do it :D
I've decided for the first outtake I'm going to be doing their first meeting so I'm glad you agree with me there, and thanks for reviewing btw. Enjoy the weekend :)
Aurora
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 8:15 PM Title: Complications and Awkward Conversations
thanks good chapter
Date: 21 Oct 2010 8:04 PM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
:)
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 6:50 PM Title: Complications and Awkward Conversations
Love it!!!! How exciting they are moving in together. Are they going to tell Esme and Carlisle about their relationship?
Author's Response:
It is exciting isn't it? I'm going to have a lot of fun with that.
You'll find out about telling Carlisle and Esme in the next chapter, I promise.
Thanks for reviewing, have a great weekend :)
Aurora
Date: 21 Oct 2010 3:49 PM Title: Complications and Awkward Conversations
Great chapter.
Date: 21 Oct 2010 3:26 PM Title: Complications and Awkward Conversations
Wow - that period thing sounds terrible. Do you know someone personally who has to put up with that? I hate mine, but it doesn't give me the preggo belly. I bet you didn't want to talk about periods today, did you? LOL
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Lol, no worries. No, Bella experience is actually based on what I had to put up with growing up, my mum used to call it my 'preggy belly' as well which was just awful because it was so accurate!
But enough talking about periods, thank you for the review :) Have a good weekend,
Aurora
Date: 21 Oct 2010 2:11 PM Title: Complications and Awkward Conversations
loved the chappy :)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 1:27 PM Title: Complications and Awkward Conversations
Great chapter. I know guys are supposed to be totally weirded out by girls' cycles, but like Edward, I've found that the good ones are just caring and supportive and try to help. One thing I'll also add, orgasms are a great way to relieve cramps. Just saying.
For the outtake, I think I'd love to see what Edward was thinking when he first met her, and somewhere along the line, I'd love to see the panty debacle from his POV.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Absolutely, I agree with you, which is why I wrote Edward like I did. Thanks for the 'cramp' tip, may have to include that in future chapter, Bella will be very grateful!
For the outtake I've decided to do their first meeting from his POV, and then slowly work up to where Bella POV is at the moment. I've really wanted to write the panty scene from his POV though, so that should be fun.
Thanks for the review and have a lovely weekend,
Aurora
Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:56 AM Title: The Best Is Yet To Come
post.........post faster please im desprate
Author's Response:
I'll be posting Friday after midday. The next chapter is almost finished but I just got back from Stockholm this morning so I haven't had a lot of time.
Not much longer :)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 9:08 PM Title: The Best Is Yet To Come
Wooohoo!! He found Bella's magic button!!
Date: 03 Oct 2010 8:23 PM Title: The Best Is Yet To Come
I dont know if this is too late but I would love to see the misunderstanding and him hearing her phone call and then showing up at her apartment from EPOV. When he calls her Baby for the first time standing in her door, I melt every time I read that! I would love to see it from his point of view because him hearing her voicemail about it only being him and that it was always him must have been really powerful for Edward.
Author's Response:
It's not too late at all, I actually haven't started the EPOV yet because I want to get as many people's opinions as possible. What you mentioned in your review is definitely something I will be including, it will probably be from then up until where Bella is at the moment. Thank you for taking the time to tell me.
Aurora
Date: 26 Sep 2010 12:15 PM Title: New Beginning
Haha, what a way to meet your boss
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 8:26 AM Title: The Best Is Yet To Come
thanks good chapter
Date: 25 Sep 2010 9:38 AM Title: The Best Is Yet To Come
LOVED IT
Date: 24 Sep 2010 10:23 PM Title: The Best Is Yet To Come
Awesome. Is Bella going to become insatiable now? Ha ha.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 24 Sep 2010 7:08 PM Title: The Best Is Yet To Come
I would love to hear anything and every thing from Edward POV. That was a very sweet lemon
Date: 24 Sep 2010 5:34 PM Title: The Best Is Yet To Come
awww he is being so sweet
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2010 5:06 PM Title: The Best Is Yet To Come
Love it!!! I am glad they are progressing in their relationship.
Date: 24 Sep 2010 4:47 PM Title: The Best Is Yet To Come
I'm anxious to read the EPOV. Not really sure what I'd like to read though. I guess I'd like to see what EPOV has been over the last few chapters at least.
Date: 24 Sep 2010 4:30 PM Title: The Best Is Yet To Come
Bella is always so sure of herself. It was nice to see her vulnerable. Edward is so sweet and caring. He has grown so much since they have been together.
Date: 20 Sep 2010 4:47 PM Title: Everything
perfect date. perfekt ending of a perfectly perfect chap ;DD
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 1:18 AM Title: Everything
Loving the story its different and i like it. Sorry for not review each chapter but i was just to excited to continue. Plus reviewing from my bb doesn't always work. Cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 14 Sep 2010 9:34 PM Title: Everything
nice filler chatper
Date: 14 Sep 2010 1:43 AM Title: Everything
Really enjoying this story!
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 13 Sep 2010 10:59 PM Title: Everything
Great dinner so they still have not said that they love each other???? I was worried that you had forgoten us I am so glad you didnt.
Date: 13 Sep 2010 7:52 PM Title: Everything
promise ring, 11 days, a manhore? tu funny
Date: 13 Sep 2010 7:19 PM Title: Everything
awww, I really liked this chapter! I like playful/loving edward! :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 7:13 PM Title: Everything
Great chapter!!! Their first date was so sweet.
Date: 13 Sep 2010 6:04 PM Title: Everything
So Sweet! I want an Edward for my very own!
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 13 Sep 2010 4:21 PM Title: Everything
I loved this chapter. Edward has grown up so much.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 3:47 PM Title: Everything
thanks good chapter
Date: 13 Sep 2010 3:13 PM Title: Everything
soooooooo sweet love it
Date: 05 Sep 2010 1:23 AM Title: Bella Swan
This story is pretty awesome! I love how you named the Kaleidoscope Alice; that was rather funny. Also it was quite sweet naming the EPA Renee. I thoroughly enjoyed this first chapter and glimpse of Bella. Your Bella seems pretty cool and a kickass character that I will definitely appreciate.
Your writing is fabulous, however I would like to point out a minor detail. Bella mentions that her workplace is called JIG. This acronym is quite funny but it doesn't fit with her previously saying she worked at 'Jameson International Banking' as this would then be JIB. Other than this very minor part of this chapter this is an overall excellent beginning!
~Anna-Margaret
xx
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your thoughtful review. The first few chapters are the least edited and when I complete the story I'll be giving everything a thorough typo / grammar / style / details check but it's extremely helpful when readers such as yourself point things out that I missed, so thank you.
I sincerely hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Aurora
Date: 24 Aug 2010 9:19 PM Title: Charlie
I am so happy for them. I hope Carlisle is as well.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 7:33 PM Title: Charlie
aww sweet chapter/
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2010 1:07 AM Title: Charlie
Love it !!! I am glad they spent time with Charlie.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:48 AM Title: Charlie
How sweet with Charlie. She's right about her thinking on his disease, at least she still has a dad, even if he's unaware. I want a tasty sweet Edward to wake me up in the morning too, btw. Know where I can get one?
Waiting for my next taste of devoted Edward,
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 22 Aug 2010 10:00 PM Title: Charlie
I am so glad that Charlie was doing better and they had a good visit it is very important to feel some kind of closness even if he doesnt remember who she is he knows he loves his daughter I am glad she is ok with that. When are they going to tell Esme and Carlisle about the two of them or are they going to get caught????
Date: 22 Aug 2010 7:19 PM Title: At Last
That was sweet and steamy. Angela is cool I hope no one freaks out because she seen them.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 5:30 PM Title: I've Got You Under My Skin
Thank goodness they kissed. Does he know that she is a virgin?????
Date: 22 Aug 2010 8:22 AM Title: Undisclosed Desires
So is he pissed because she had Jacob take her to see her dad??? Rose is a naughty girl lol
Date: 22 Aug 2010 7:46 AM Title: Stepping Forward
Rose is a riot lol. I am glad Bella talk with Jake.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 6:31 AM Title: I'd Rather Be With You
I think he did a pretty good job of telling her he liked her but not how much he really liked her like he loves her. When they got to his appartment he carried her over the threshold so he is already thinking about marrying her?????
Date: 21 Aug 2010 8:10 AM Title: Revelations
So does Jake have a crush on her or just friends???
Date: 21 Aug 2010 7:16 AM Title: You Give Me Something
So does his perents know how he feels about Bella????
Date: 21 Aug 2010 6:28 AM Title: Family Time Part II
That is sad My grandfather was like that it hurt my heart to see him. Is Aro the one that was saying shit about Edward.
Date: 21 Aug 2010 5:49 AM Title: Family Time Part I
Shit that was making me pant LOL
Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:52 AM Title: Prove It
So when is he going to call her sweetheart again?????
Date: 21 Aug 2010 2:58 AM Title: Charlie
Wow, this fic is just amazing! I've read all chapters this evening and heartily applaud your Bella! I adore her!
(There are so many fics out there with OOC Bella's that I cannot even begin to identify with---your Bella, while not canon, is more in keeping with the spirt of SM's Bella. I tend to run quickly away from drugged-up whore-Bellas---or Edwards. I must be one of the few who appreciates SM's original characters as written. Again, kudos.)
This give/take, up/down relationship between B&E? I love it so much!!! It is so yin and yang and the very epitome of a true partnership. Almost like interlocking pieces!
I identify greatly with this Bella---being confident and extraordinarily competent in one facet of life, yet completely lacking experience in other areas. I think more people are like this than we realize.
Great job! And hey, give yourself a break regarding updates! I, for one, totally understand and will be here patiently awaiting the next chapter! Thank you for sharing!
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 21 Aug 2010 1:32 AM Title: At Last
Sweeeeeeet! ; )
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:59 AM Title: Lunch
He called her sweetheart????? Aro is a creepy dick.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 11:54 PM Title: I'd Rather Be With You
Love this Bella & Edward. The uniqueness of the characters is wonderful!
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 20 Aug 2010 11:26 PM Title: Junior
I think Edward is protective over her???
Date: 20 Aug 2010 11:06 PM Title: Charlie
I liked the scenes with Charlie, especially the discussion over Edwin!
Good chapter.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 11:00 PM Title: You Give Me Something
I am really, really enjoying this story soooo much!
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 20 Aug 2010 9:51 PM Title: Decisions
I want to know what does he think of Bella????
Date: 20 Aug 2010 9:06 PM Title: Edward Cullen
Holly shit he is going down poor boy LOL
Date: 20 Aug 2010 8:27 PM Title: New Beginning
That is funny what a way to meet your boss.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 7:56 PM Title: Bella Swan
This sounds like it is going to be fun to read
Date: 20 Aug 2010 6:42 PM Title: Charlie
I'm just wondering what happened with Angela...
Date: 16 Aug 2010 8:27 PM Title: At Last
hmmm caught by Angela...
Date: 15 Aug 2010 4:13 PM Title: At Last
Good? Romantic.. Sexy.. Not good. Perfect!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 5:21 AM Title: At Last
I can't WAIT till Esme and Carlisle find out!!!LOL!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2010 6:02 AM Title: At Last
Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2010 3:53 AM Title: I'd Rather Be With You
So hoping for a good night kiss. Oh well.
Date: 12 Aug 2010 2:49 AM Title: Family Time Part II
loves it!
Date: 12 Aug 2010 2:22 AM Title: Family Time Part I
Awe- I loved where she was touching his face. So sweet. And did he pick her up the first week of work or did Jacob?! I can't figure it out
Date: 12 Aug 2010 1:40 AM Title: Prove It
loves it!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2010 11:43 PM Title: At Last
oops thanks good chapter