Date: 29 Oct 2015 5:04 AM Title: Complications and Awkward Conversations
Ok was it me or did Edward think about Bella really being pregnant when he had his hand on her stomach. Also i am sooooo in love with this Edward!! It's nice for once that a guy doesn't freak out when it comes to "women issues". I can't wait to see how he acts when she tells him she's on the pill now lol.
I want to know what he was thinking after they had dinner and when she came in with her new look...and most off all when he open the box up and she told him to keep the pair lol!
Date: 10 Feb 2015 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 29
I just started on TWCS, and I sure hope you are going to continue this story, Aurora! Yours is the first story I've read, and I finished all 29 chapters from Saturday, 02-07-2015 until Tuesday, 02-09-15. Please know someone (ME!!!) would love to know what happens to your Bella and Edward!
Date: 04 Oct 2011 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 28 - I Want To Hold Your Hand
Bella got played. She thought she got the best of him at he office. He played her when he got home. He showed her who was in charge.
Hey thanks for reviewing, it's interesting that you say that. In a way I believe she did yes, but alternatively I believe he was allowing her to express her own mind and show him what she wanted. He was trying to bring her out of her shell a little more.
Thanks for your thoughts, I hope to see you next time,
Date: 02 Oct 2011 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 28 - I Want To Hold Your Hand
I just completed all the chapters and I love your characters and the plot. Lemons are exceedingly well done. Looking forward to how you solve the Aro and going public issues.
Wow - I'm impressed you did it all in one go, very impressed. I'm really glad you like the lemons, it's harder to write them than I thought and it's important to e that it doesn't just read like a porn script.
Look out for Aro and certain discussion in the next few chapters, thank you for reviewing.
Date: 02 Oct 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 28 - I Want To Hold Your Hand
Hee hee hee. I love that Edward played her until she came out and said what she wanted. For all the teasing and the energentic joining in, there's something about initiation that makes a difference. Good for her taking the lead. I'm sure Edward loved it too.
Cheers, Balti K
Hey Balti! I'm so glad you pointed that out, it's something that I really wanted to come across to the readers, that Edward wanted her to make the first move. And I'm also glad you liked the chapter - hoping to see you next time, Aurora
Date: 01 Oct 2011 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 28 - I Want To Hold Your Hand
great chapter. LOL for wax and silly man ignoring her at first. Welcome to the GloryAwards.
Hey nice to see you again, thanks for reviewing so quickly after I posted. Glad it made you laugh and you enjoyed it and I appreciate your welcome, are you involved with them in any way? Aurora
Date: 29 Jul 2011 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Rapture
Edward loves Bella so much. She just has to let her doubts go and love him back 100%. She needs to stop holding back.
Yes she does, but everything with her will take time. I like writing storylines that highlight their differences, insecurities and doubts, we know they love each other but it will take them time to adjust. Thank you for reviewing - Aurora
Date: 29 Jul 2011 8:20 AM Title: New Beginning
i love Renee and Alice,even in their electronic avtar!
5 am?who goes to work that early?but then i read further on and...still think she is crazy! :P
do hyenas even laugh?maybe i will google that...
Ahh yes the 5am start, unfortunately I've had to go in at that time more than I'd care to remember so I thought it'd be a good way to stress the importance of Bella's job to her and how seriously she takes it.
Not sure if hyena's laugh, but they do make a sound that is similar to a cackle, whether this is to express laughter or not I don't know, it's just a phrase.
Thank you for reviewing,
Date: 29 Jul 2011 7:47 AM Title: Bella Swan
just one chapter and i am hooked!definitely going to follow it.it's funny and interesting,and Bella is amazing.
Fantastic! I'm glad to hear it. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. Thank you for reviewing - Aurora
Date: 29 Jul 2011 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Rapture
So freaking sweet! How adorable is Edward? And to have written and recorded the song that long ago? So sweet.
But when are they going to go public, and how to deal with the blackmail?
Cheers, Balti K
Hey Balti it's good to hear from you again :) I'm really glad you liked this one. I love writing adorable Edward but I find myself wanting to go overboard...a lot, so I have to reign in the fluff now and then. The things you mentioned are going to be discussed in the next chapter, I have to pop their little bubble and send them back to work.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 10:20 PM Title: Emmett
Emmett is my absolute favorite. You did a great job in introducing him!
Thank you for reviewing! I'm really glad you like Emmett, I love his character :) I'm flattered you thought I did a good job.
See you next time,
Date: 13 Jun 2011 11:12 AM Title: The Benefit of Candid Conversation
Oh! I cant wait to see the surprise!
And *swoon* Jasper... hawt southern dreaminess *wipes off drool*
I wonder if Alice in Bellas closet is his Mary Alices voice? That would be a small world thats so awesome :)
And I can't wait to read your reaction to it :) Thank you for reviewing, I can tell you now that Bella's wardrobe voice (dubbed 'Alice') is not the same as Mary Alice's, I couldn't quite pull that one off I'm afraid, but I promise you that the two will meet in the future!
Date: 11 Jun 2011 4:25 AM Title: The Benefit of Candid Conversation
hmmm Esme has to have guessed by now. I Love Rose.
Hey thanks for your review, I'm pleased you liked the chapter. Esme certainly is a sneaky one, and mother's always know what's going on with their sons.
Date: 10 Jun 2011 9:09 PM Title: I'd Rather Be With You
Legally speaking, Jacob was right. Any unwanted contact is considered an assault in the name of law.
You're right, but from Jacob's point of view, he didn't totally nderstand the situation, and Bella didn't see it as an assault. Thanks for your review.
Date: 10 Jun 2011 8:02 PM Title: The Benefit of Candid Conversation
I am glad that you posted. I was missing this story. I am glad that the party went well. Can they go public yet?
Hey thanks for reviewing. No - not yet, this is something that will be discussed more in the next chapter, so I hope to give you answers then.
Date: 10 Jun 2011 7:19 PM Title: The Benefit of Candid Conversation
Oh, I'd love to see what Edward thought of her all dressed up. Perhaps thanking Rosalie and the gods?
Glad the benefit went well, and I can't wait to see what surprise he has for her.
Cheers, Balti K
Hey :) thanks for the review. I'm sure he was very, very grateful, it's something I plan to include in a future outtake.
Glad you enjoyed the chapter and looking forward to more.
Date: 22 Apr 2011 12:58 PM Title: Substance
Aro is a sketchy asshole. I knew there had to be something happening. Perhaps Carlisle can help, or they can get tape of him trying to blackmail Edward. There has to be something that can be done to get rid of that slimeball. But kudos to Bella for the support.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:24 PM Title: Substance
I loved every BIT of this chapter! The Rosie and Emmett bit was priceless :)
Of COURSE Aro is a manipulative bastard. I want him stung up by his toes!
Oh I cant wait to see what happens next :)
Hey, thanks for reviewing. I'm really happy you liked the Rosalie and Emmett bit. He will be punished I assure you, I'm glad you liked the chapter. Aurora
Date: 20 Apr 2011 12:05 PM Title: Substance
Blackmail. Interesting reason for the whole "Aro" issue. It will be interesting to see how you have Bella resolve this. I wonder if Carlisle has anything on Aro to help turn the tables.
Thanks for reviewing, glad the chapter got you thinking. Aurora
Date: 03 Dec 2010 5:19 PM Title: Friends and Foes
Oooh I'm so happy they said it! That means they are gonna get it on now right HAHA Just joking. Kind of. Anyways. I'm so excited about you writing Emmett too. Hes always the fun character and I am so looking forward to his interaction with Bella. So exciting! Keep up the awesome work :)
Date: 02 Dec 2010 6:59 AM Title: Friends and Foes
That was wonderful fluff still cant believe the will power it is taking for them not to go all the way wow. I wondered when Edward would see the tape he held it together pretty good I think and yes about time for some I love yous.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 11:37 PM Title: Friends and Foes
I have a feeling that Rosalie is going to tell Esme and Carlisle about these two befor they get a chance. They didn't tell her not too and she seems way too excited about it. I can see her calling Esme as soon as the door closes. She seems like one to gossip.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 8:27 PM Title: Friends and Foes
Excellent story. Blind or not she is awesome. I love Bella written with style and strenght if even she has challenges she rises above them.
Edward is cleaning up nicely. LOL
Thank you very much for reviewing and even more so for your kind words.
Oh he certainly is, our boy always rises to the occasion.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 8:14 PM Title: Friends and Foes
that was a nice chappy but it was not nice of you to remind me that it is snowing today....i was happily drinking tea at caribou ignoring the weather as a whole.
My sincerest apologies for the reminder of the snow. I'd give anything to be able to ignore the weather, I haven't been able to get into work and the roads here are a complete nightmare.
Drink an extra tea for me, thank you for the review.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 4:25 PM Title: Friends and Foes
Finally - they said the three words!!!!
I must admit, I am always a bit "shocked" when I read BPOV "my eyes shot open" or "I did not see Edward in the morning" it seems kinda weird that being said by a blind person. But anyhow - I really liked reading this chapter.
Have a good time at Moscow and be safe!
Hi Sabs, thank you for your review,
Glad you enjoyed the 'i love you', I was worried about writing that. You've made a good point about my BPOV, I purposely write her saying things like that because she;s been blind for eight years, she doesn't necessarily think of herself as 'different' per say, so she doesn't think of what she's saying as being abnormal because she can't actually see. When she talks about 'seeing' Edward it's used loosely and meant to be her way of expressing a wish to be around him. The thing about the eyes 'flying open' is a natural response to surprise, old habits die hard and it's just a reflex reaction for her.
Hope that helped, but I'm really glad you spotted that so thank you. I'll be in Moscow for work (if my flight isn't cancelled) so I won't get to see the beautiful city that much, but I shall be sure to wrap up warm, thank you for your regards.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 2:45 PM Title: Friends and Foes
Well now, that's a wonderful way to wake up. I'm jealous; I want a naked Edward in my bed too.
Glad they got the 'I love yous' out of the way. I had a feeling he was just waiting on her, so she didn't feel pressured. Good boy.
His reaction over James was better than I expected. But then again, he may have been slightly distracted.
Nicely done. Have fun in Moscow. I've never been, but I hear it's beautiful.
Cheers, Balti K
Hey Balti thanks for the review :) What I wouldn't give to wake up to a man like that, I feel your pain...
He's ever so patient, but I couldn't make him wait much longer, that would've been cruel.
Distraction is key, even though she didn't say it for that purpose, it certainly worked. Thank you for your kind words. Moscow will be very very cold but I'll be in conferences for most of it so not outside at least.
Until next time, Aurora
Date: 01 Dec 2010 11:48 AM Title: Friends and Foes
OMG Yay!!!! They finally said it!
How perfect, that was just perfect!
I cannot wait to see Emmett!!!
I know, I was excited to write it believe me :) Really glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reviewing, have a great weekend. Aurora
Date: 27 Nov 2010 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love bossy Bella, she really went all out on Sam Uley and James. Can just picture James' face. Never mind the fact that Felix is so willing to commit murder for Bella.
Another great chapter.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 22
I am so happy that Bella was smart enough to have some one close by when she was having her meeting with Jameson. He is such a creep. In a way I hope Edward sees the security tape of the meeting, Bella should be honest with him. He needs to know what happened in case something happens in the future.
Hi, thanks for reviewing :) You're right, he does need to know, but I didn't want to have him present for it because she can handle herself, but I agree with you.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
Glad she dealt with both of those idiots quickly and succinctly! And I'm betting that somehow Edward's going to find out about Jameson's little try at intimidation.
Me too, James needed to be brought down from his high horse. Well, Edward's a crafty one, so you never know...
Thanks for reviewing, Aurora