[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Edward. I hate girls who use a prenancy to trap a man. He is so lucky that Bella knows him as well as she does. She just had to look at him to know something was really wrong. Why did he think he couldn't just go and talk to her about it right away? He should have known that she wouldn't let him go through this alone. I wonder if he would have just accepted it if Bella didn't tell him to make Tanya take another test with him in the room.
I was actually waiting for them to share that first kiss when he came back to her room so happy. It would have been one of those 'I'm so happy I could kiss you' moments. It would have taken them both by surprise. I did love how Bella kept referring to him as "MY Edward". She's got a little of that possessiveness in her. She knows her life just isn't right without Edward in it and I believe he knows the same thing. The sweetest part of the whole thing was him holding her hand all the way into the elevator on the way to dinner.
Great chapter again. I can't wait to hear from Edward. He will definitely be able to clear up some questions running around in my head. Have a great birthday lady. Have an awesome time relaxing with your family. TTYL - D
Date: 14 Sep 2010 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
Tanya never get a fair shake on fanfictions - any way i loved how Bella was a good friend to Edward and stopping a huge mistake if he had just taken Tanya's word. What a thing to do to someone - very low self esteeme.
PS love the story so far.
Date: 14 Sep 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
great chapter and great story!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh thank God!! I was having heart palpitations thinking Bitchya was preggers. I had a feeling it was a trick but ya never know. Thank God Edward took Bella's advice & forced a test. What balls Tanya had to try & justify her " love" for Edward that she wanted to have his baby. She didn't go to school to get her B.A. Or MBA; more like her MRS.
Can't wait for the next one & getting to hear Edward.
Date: 14 Sep 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
Advance happy birthday! It's my birthday yesterday and I'm glad that you wrote a new fic. :-)
Date: 14 Sep 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
YES I am one of the impatient ones, sue me! lol no I just am excited to see the drama and (lemons hopefully) start. lol keep up the great work. I loved it. Tanya is a HOE that needs every square inch of her ass kicked, picked up and then kicked again. :D thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
Crisis avverted thanks to Bella's quick thinking (and hatred of Tanya!). I think this is going to bring Edward and Bella even closer than they were before.
How long before Riley is a distant memory too? Soon I hope!
Happy Birthday! And congratulations on another trip around the sun!
Date: 14 Sep 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
Happy Birthday! Great chapter. I'm glad Bella was there for Edward.
Date: 14 Sep 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
Good stuff!
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 14 Sep 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
First off, Happy Birthday!
Holy hell! The devil bitch Tanya rears her ugly head in this fic. I just knew she was faking it. I'm sure she saw how Edward reacted to her at Thanksgiving and wanted to ensure he was hers. Of course she was threatened by Bella too. I bet she realizes that step-brother and step-sister can still hook up. I couldn't believe how my heart dropped when Edward said Tanya was pregnant. My heart broke for both him and Bella at that point.
I'm just wondering exactly when Bella will have her epiphany and if it will change how she acts around Edward.
Date: 14 Sep 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
Of course bitch Tanya I was so scared!!I'm glad everthing is good now and I can't wait for Wednesday and happy birthday!
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
smart girl Bella!, i knew Tanya was lying too!
Date: 14 Sep 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
We're getting there!
Date: 13 Sep 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
Theyre good now but I am so anxious for them to tell each other and admit their feelings, will it be long? As always loved it, can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
Apology accepted, and now they can do it all over again ;) haha, silly bruts of brothers...
loved it :)
Date: 13 Sep 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
Awe, they all kissed and made up. I knew she couldn't stay mad at them for too long. Maybe they actually listened to her and will not be as caveman in their protective ways. I don't see the protective brothers totally disapearing but maybe not as visible. I knew she would see through Jake's bull shit. I'm just really starting to think about how B&E are going to get together and how Em is going to handle that. That should be an interesting plot point.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
they are so sweet together! Great chapter
Date: 13 Sep 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
Nice...! I can see how easily Edward will cross the line to the "other side" (lol) if he isn't already there!!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 13 Sep 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well at least they all made up. I would be just as mad as Bella though. They can't protect her forever. They have to let go too. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 13 Sep 2010 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
this is pretty good update soon please
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love has blossomed from a lot less than these two have going for them. Years of compassion and comfort to build on.
And a big YEAH for Edward for talking to you and wanting to tell his side of this at least in part. He could sweet talk any one of us in to many many things!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
This chapter was sweet and showed the love they all have for each other. I'm glad the boys didn't take no for an answer. Brothers and sisters fight, holler and scream at each other and its plain to see how much they all truly care about each other. I don't think Bella would ever leave her brothers like that because she knows what they are like. It gives her a small bit of leverage to make the threat though...at least she has that.
She knows just by looking at him that this whole situation hurt Edward way worse than Emmett. She knows the bond that they have always had and can feel it just standing there with him. I don't think she realizes yet that its changed. Maybe the change is only happening in her now because its possible that Edward has felt it for much longer. His behavior is more along the lines of someone protecting what's his instead of a brother protecting his sister.
Anyway, I agree that there has to be something from Edward's side because his actions right now are keeping me guessing. I'm excited that you're going to post every day. This is going to be one of those 'drop everything you're doing and read' type of stories for me. Can't wait til tomorrow - D
Date: 13 Sep 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
aww well all is forgiven now.....bring on the HOTNESS!!! PLEASE???? that chapter was cute though. I liked the big brother attitude. thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
Good chapter....when reading, you can tell the difference on how each brother feels & reacts to Bella. Emmett does go all "Brother Bear" on her while Edward hits the emotional part; the part that speaks to the heart which is what brings the eros love into play.
I think they are both in the platonic sibling stage right now but the beginnings of "in love" are there. Edward is confused and I think he'll recognize his feelings for Bella before she does since he seems to be more in touch with them when it comes to her. Bella loves Edward, thinks of him as her hero and protector and feels safe with him. It may take a bit longer for her to recognize it.
Great job...glad to hear you'll post more frequently!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
they just want the best for her they love her and want to keep her safe very sweet
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
yay! they made up......but of course they still be overprotective....:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
I like how Jacob dropped the cocky attitude once Bella realized who he really was. It was cute when he told her that he always wondered about her. I can see her hanging out with him in the future for two reasons...1) she might really like him and 2) to piss her brothers off.
I can't believe (well yeah maybe I can) how they tore in there like that and embarrassed the hell out of her. Good for Bella for standing up to them like she did. They can't treat her like a little kid all the time. The only thing that has me worried is that Emmett seemed to know something about the "SAE parties" that Bella doesn't. I wonder if he'll tell her why her being there was such a big deal. It may be nothing but there was something about the way he said it that bothered me.
Great chapter. I can't wait to see what's coming next. Keep those chapters comin - D
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
I think its pretty funny that Edward was suspicious of Billy. Not only is he her instructor but he was her dad's best friend. Bella knows that would be crossing way to many lines even if Billy saw her that way.
I think Jacob sounds incredibly HOT. I'm guessing that he and Bella are going to find themselves alone together at that party just in time for Emmett and Edward to show up. Emmett is going to flip over Bella's outfit but Edward is going to go crazy when he sees her with Jacob.
Can't wait for some fireworks to fly. Loved it and I'm off to read chapter 3 - D
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
Looking forward to the next chapter! Loving the strong characters and Edwards protectiveness!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 3:25 AM Title: My Other Brother
I can only imagine how confused they both are right now. You grow up with someone referring to them as a brother or sister even though you know they're not. Then out of the blue, something happens and they seems less like the brother or sister they were the day before. What would any of us do in that situation?
Its a crazy kind of love and I'm dying to see where the rest of this goes - D
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
Really enjoying it :D
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 3:04 AM Title: My Other Brother
Awesome, I'm loving this :)
Date: 13 Sep 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
awesome chapter
Date: 12 Sep 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hope you update soon, i love it
Date: 12 Sep 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
I just love your stories. This one is really promising. Cannot wait to see the chapters I know are sitting on your computer right now!
Date: 12 Sep 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love Alice and Jasper. I can see her trying to sneak in. So funny!
I feel so sorry for Bella. I can see that her brothers are trying to protect her, but come on. The double standard is crap!!! I would be just as mad as Bella!!! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Sep 2010 4:16 PM Title: My Other Brother
Let's face it we all have writers that we fangirl over. I do the same when they read my stories. LOL
Date: 12 Sep 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
I agree. Edward especially is going to freak out when he see Bella in that dress talking to Jacob. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 12 Sep 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ah, poor Edward. Still, B has a point. ; )
Honestly, I wouldn't mind if you posted twice a day! *giggles*
Hugs,
Gwen
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2010 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Will she take her brothers advice and stay away from the frat boys? I doubt it and I'm sure we haven't seen the last of Jake. (Still don't like him!)
Hooray for Alice and Jasper!
Go ahead and post the next chapter...you know you want to!
Date: 12 Sep 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow Edward and Emmett sort of SUCK!! what is Edward's issue? god I can't wait till you update again and if you have so many chapters already updated.....POST THEM!!! lol not every day but one day one right after the other. then we will catch up and be happier! just saying. :D take your time. this is really good. thanks again bye
Date: 12 Sep 2010 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
I would not be so forgiving if I was Bella. The double standard garbage is just wrong. Emmett and Edward need to chill.
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
great chapter - brothers!
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm so glad I'm the oldest in my family. Although it would have been nice to have an older brother to look out for me...occasionally
Author's Response:
Is it sad that I totally fangirl squealed to see you review one of my stories? Glad to see you seem to be enjoying it! Thanks for the review!
Date: 12 Sep 2010 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
very angsty... like it. Will Edward admit his true feelings?
Date: 12 Sep 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
You go, Bella. You give Edward hell about his double standard. It pisses me off more each time he pulls that shit. I loved Bella seeing the two sides to the frat. Maybe it kinda opened her eyes that people can play two roles. Jake was starting to get on my nerves. He seems like a cocky guy who is just after a piece of ass.
Obviously Alice and Jasper hit it off. Can't wait for the girl talk about the night before :)
Author's Response:
:D So glad you're enjoying it. I'm glad people are seeing this the way I intend because you are totally catching onto some of my ideas :)
Date: 12 Sep 2010 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
Could Edward be jealous & over-protective?
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2010 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
Jeez, how did they even know they were there? I'm glad they got her away from Jacob (sorry I'm team Edward all the way, I don't like Jacob in any fic, unless he's gay or already in love with someone else, then he's Bella's best bud and so hilariously funny and NO threat to the B & E connection) Emmett should remember Jacob too right?
Date: 12 Sep 2010 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Bella I can't wait for their feelings to be shown I wonder if Edward already has feelings for her!
Date: 12 Sep 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
Good one. Feel bad for Bella since it must be hard to have 2 bodyguards with her at college. However, it's also nice to have 2 guys who want to protect her as well. Rare to find that at their age & in this time!
Date: 12 Sep 2010 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
I didn't find her reaction unrealistic... I think mine would have been much worse aka slap that worried expresion off their faces....
lol
xoxo
Marianne
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
Looks like this will be a fun story. Love the "siblings" angle. Can't wait to see how it develops!
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2010 11:20 PM Title: My Other Brother
Enjoying this! ; )
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 11 Sep 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well I wonder why Edward didn't answer the door and what is going on? He likes Bella more than he should and now he is getting weird.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 9:45 PM Title: My Other Brother
That is kinna sad that their family started because one of each of their parents died. I like what I hae read so far and can't wait to see what is going to happen.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
LOL protective Brother mode my butt. more like MINE!! lol I love it. I can't wait for more. to be honest I can't wait for the sneaking around to begin. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 11 Sep 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
HOLY CROW!! I guess this is where your plot starts to thicken...?! Leeme guess - one look and he's falling faster than a drunk man - and it's not becuse he's drunk!! *wink wink*
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
I cannot wait for his reaction on the outfit! And then plus Jacob will be after her.....
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2010 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
love this story oready cant wait for the rest
Date: 11 Sep 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
Lovely!!
Date: 11 Sep 2010 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
So will this have that thing that they date other people before they get together? Well I cannot wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2010 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hmmm....dont think Billy has strange intentions but I coukdbe be wrong. Older Jake? Maybe recognizes her from Forks?
Love the jealousy & possessiveness from both Bella & Edward. They still don't have a clue which is sad yet cute.
I know I'm not going to like their hook ups but I'll endure as it seems to be right of passage.
Good chap tee.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
reviewed the first chapter on ff so i thought i would give a fair turn and do the second here.(did not get an alert for this site but added story to fav's so maybe i will now).. enjoyed the this chapter. was very collegish. My daughter had an issue with classes being across campus from one another as well,(i heard lots of whining),. will be interesting to see how the mixer goes with Jacob being present and i am betting at least one overprotective step bro. thanks for the chpt.. ttfn Pam B.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
LOL. I hope Edward is at that party and doesn't realize the hot girl in the tight black dress is Bella. I can just imagine his surprise when he goes to hit on her and she turns around and he has a heart attack. Of course it would also be great for Bella to be dancing with Jake or something and Edward go gaga over the smoking brunette and then realize it's Bella. OMG, the possibilities are endless. I can't wait to see what you end up doing.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 1:22 PM Title: My Other Brother
That was a great intro chapter. You've got me dying to see how the relationship develops into more between Edward and Bella.
I'm thinking that box might not be porn. I bet it's something about Bella and Edward would just die if she found out he's secretly obsessed wtih her. LOL, I could be wrong and it could be a big old box of porn.
What is it with guys and their double standards when it comes to their sisters and sex? Do they not stop to think that the girls they are just using for a release are someone's sister or daughter?
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh this party should be fun i think edward will go nuts when he see her dressed that way and looking more grown up loved it great chapter
Date: 11 Sep 2010 6:31 AM Title: My Other Brother
Nice start :)
Edward is already feeling more for her, isn't he? and also Bella, but she doesn't seem to notice what it is yet.
Should be interesting to read considering that it will be frowned upon for them to be together.
Can't wait for more :)
Date: 11 Sep 2010 2:26 AM Title: My Other Brother
i'm liking it so far..... can't wait to read upcoming chapters!
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2010 2:20 AM Title: My Other Brother
great beginning!, seems like the 2 of them are having certain feelings they can't explain
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 10:51 PM Title: My Other Brother
Great start....sounds promising. I know you said mostly Bella's pov but I'd love an Edward pov as well if you're up for it. I'd like to hear his thoughts as it seems he's confused or conflicted as well.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 9:49 PM Title: My Other Brother
OOOOOOOO.....This is going to be fun to follow!
Kat
Date: 10 Sep 2010 9:15 PM Title: My Other Brother
look forward to more.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 7:53 PM Title: My Other Brother
Interesting start! I'm looking forward to reading more.
Rhonda
Date: 10 Sep 2010 7:51 PM Title: My Other Brother
I really like this start and the dynamic between Edward and Bella, and the hints that Edward already has feelings for her and is repressing them.
The only problem i have is I don't understand why Bella is always the innocent virgin and Edward is the playboy making his way through the female population. Please make this realistic for Bella, she in college let her party and round some bases and definalty let here have a few home runs with some different players. This is a time were you learn who you what you like, Edward already done that now it's Bella's turn.
Kind Regards
JC
Date: 10 Sep 2010 7:20 PM Title: My Other Brother
wow i already love it, and i already feel that connection they have and i wonder if they both already have some feelings for each other!? i hope this doesn't have too much angst, i can't wait for more!
Date: 10 Sep 2010 5:37 PM Title: My Other Brother
Nice idea I like that story a LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT can't wait for next.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 5:07 PM Title: My Other Brother
oooh goody - I like it - lighthearted (mostly) and just feel good - thank you for writing this ACW - there is enough angst/dark/heartfail around ...
I can't wait to see how you play this out!!
Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:05 PM Title: My Other Brother
Very interesting! I can't wait to see how this unfolds! Great start...thanks!!!
Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:01 PM Title: My Other Brother
Great chapter setting up the back story and family dynamics.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:34 PM Title: My Other Brother
Nice chapie! It's really intriguing to see how you will guide us into the story!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:28 PM Title: My Other Brother
can't wait to read more
Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:19 PM Title: My Other Brother
Very interesting ... looking forward to more!
Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:19 PM Title: My Other Brother
Ahhh! So good! I know I've said this before, but I absolutely adore your writing!
(Also, please excuse all the exclamation marks, I'm just really excited about all your new stories.) Can't wait to read more :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:08 PM Title: My Other Brother
two new stories wow ! this looks good can't wait to see how bella's feelings for edward change and how he takes this news