Date: 09 Oct 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
First off congrats on your win! and getting closer and closer to becoming a published author. On to the story. lol can we say aww with Bella being "jealous" of those girls being able to touch him and not her? Then for the last part, so what if Rose saw Edward holding her hand. She was latched onto Emmett earlier so holding her "brother's" hand can't be too different right? Oh I hope there's only a couple of weeks in between updates. this story owns my ass. lol keep up the great work. thanks again. bye
Date: 06 Oct 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great job, thank you for writing.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
Really, they stopped????
Date: 06 Oct 2010 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 5
Is there a Tanya one shot? that would be interesting.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
Typical Bella always forgiving I can't say it's too soon bacause it's not me in the situation ...
But something didn't quite sit right with me for some reason, I just can't put my finger on it.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
she should have been a bit meaner to him... make both of them open their eyes a little and why didn't Emmett apologise? (I think I can understand why)
Date: 06 Oct 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
She's asking just a bit too much isin't she - a night out with out her bro's attentions...
Oh well we'll see what happens.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
Congratulations on your award for your original story.
I'm glad they are exploring this relationship on their own before they tell the family, bc I don't think it will be taken well.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
Back to school and a little more freedom. I can understand Bella's reluctance to finally go all the way with Edward. Even though they are in love she still isn't quite ready and that is okay. If their love is really true it won't hurt anything for them to wait. At least he realizes this and isn't pressuring her. Love him all the more !!!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
back at school, and i loved edward's little pick me up speech to bella!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
How is the family going to react??? Emmett is going to rip Edwards head off .
Date: 05 Oct 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
You evil evil evil one... Why not continue???
Anyway... Congrats hun! You deserved it!
xx
Marianne
Date: 05 Oct 2010 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
I can just imagine Emmett catching them. :-)
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
hmmm, great chapter - slow burn is sooo good
Date: 05 Oct 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm right there with Bella on her berated herself for stopping. she shouldn't have stopped. lol I can't wait for another chapter. I absolutely love this story and I'm right there with them on the sneaking around being a turn on thing. :D keep up the great work. Till next time (which hopefully will be soon) thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
whew! things are heating up, why do i think Emmett will be the one to find out 1st (or catch them 1st)
Date: 03 Oct 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
I hope this is going to be a fun break for them. They are NOT related and should not a problem. I am going to try my sorta sister next. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITIG. Sherri
Date: 03 Oct 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
Okay so now we have Jacob in the mix. This should definitely be interesting. I cannot wait to see what happens next. The plot thickens. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING. Sher
Date: 03 Oct 2010 6:28 PM Title: My Other Brother
Now this is going to start to get intresting. Iam sure that the shit is going to hit the fan. I hope that Bella and Edward are going to be able to handle what they are about to get themselves into. THANKS FOR THE INTERESTING WRITING. Sher
Date: 27 Sep 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
I feel a little bad for them having to sneak around, but at the same time that can be fun. I am sure it is very hard over this Christmas break. They will be back at school before they know it and I can't wait. Great job...thanks so much!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter. I really feel for these two to have to hide from your family.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm really curious how Carlisle and Esme are going to take the news, part of me is thinking one of them will be understanding while the other will be over the top. Don't know which one though. I also think Emmett will go nuts over this.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad they finally admitted their feelings. I can't imagine how everyone around this going to reacted.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
That would be rough having feelings for a step sibling but feeling that it was wrong.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 5
So glad she didn't hook up with Jake. Tanya yeah real sweet girl there.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 3
I don't trust Jake at all.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
Really enjoying this story.
Date: 23 Sep 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great job!
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2010 9:43 PM Title: My Other Brother
WOW, interesting.
Date: 22 Sep 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
Very nice :) I just knew that dress would cause more problems than the tightening of Edward's pants. The New Year's kiss they had to share was sweet. At least with Em kissing his sis first they were able to pull off the little one they did. I can't wait to see how they sneak around at school. I can totally see Alice and Jasper being in on their secret relationship and helping them out.
Does Esme know more than we realize? I can totally see her catching on to Bella and Edward and being supportive.
Date: 22 Sep 2010 3:12 PM Title: My Other Brother
Nice first chapter. Def, keep reading. THX
Date: 22 Sep 2010 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bella is a fisty little thing isnt she. Some one has to be catching on that something is going on between them????
Date: 22 Sep 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
They better be carful if they dont want to be found out how are they staying away from each other???
Date: 22 Sep 2010 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 7
there is no going back now that they have admitted they love each other and not like brother and sister. Please dont let Emmett try and kill Edward
Date: 22 Sep 2010 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well I am backwards I read My Sort of Sister first and it was inlighting. I didnt mean to read it first I got screwed up witch one was to be first I dont think it really mattered I loved both of them.
Date: 22 Sep 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thank god he found out Tanya was a lying skanky bitch out to trap him before she did trap him.
Date: 22 Sep 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
She needed to show them she ment busness at least a little.
Date: 22 Sep 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
Alice and Jasper getting there grove on. That would be tough having big brothers like that.
Date: 22 Sep 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
wahoo!!! Happy New Year!! still sucks having to be so sneaky, but there are many who will not understand.. I wonder though if Esme knows? A mother's intuition maybe? thanks for the post.. Pam B.
Date: 22 Sep 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh my, this is such a wonderful, steamy (hopefully more soon). i love the background you have laid, sure do wonder how Emmett will handle this. I really think the parents will be cool. How often do you update? Thanks for sharing.
Date: 21 Sep 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
love the jealous sides . I think mom knows something- mama always knows
Date: 21 Sep 2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 9
Aww...they're so cute! It's too bad they didn't get their midnight kiss, but the bedtime makeout session made up for it! Can't wait to see how their relationship grows once they're back at school! I'm thinking though, that they should probably tell their family soon. the longer they wait, the harder it will be, and if someone catches them, there will be a whole lot of hurt. Just my opinion:)
Date: 21 Sep 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 2
She is a smart girl that just wants to be loved. Jacob is Billy's son right???
Date: 21 Sep 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
They are so going to get caught one of these days... I personally can't wait for the shit to hit the fan...
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
I so like this romantic "twist"! ; )
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 21 Sep 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
Ooh they're having a hard time! Can not wait for more!
Date: 21 Sep 2010 8:30 PM Title: My Other Brother
Change can be hard to handle.
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
Awwwww how very cute :D
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow. Talk about sexual tension as another guest at the party!
I'm wondering if Esme suspects anything yet.
Sorry about the writers block but oh so happy at the same time! Greedy I know but happy that you share all your talents with us!
Date: 21 Sep 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
If that was the delay you where talking about I am veeeery glad about it!! lol
I can't wait to see what's in store for when they return!!
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
This was a lucky break in my original fic concentration. The next update may take longer since I've been doing better on the CofC front...then again...saying that may jinx me! LOL
Date: 21 Sep 2010 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
ow ow!! that was hot. I loved it. the whole sneaking around thing is getting to be just plain Wow! lol I loved jealous Bella. she's awesome. keep up the great work. I hope you have another bit of writer's block. lol thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 9
That was so sweet! I really hope they can have a real relationship but it's going to be difficult. I think once they figure out what they are then try need to talk to the parents. I think Esme may have an idea but I guess we shall see.
Thank goodness for writers block....love this story!
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
I can't even begin to imagine the restraint that it would take to keep a relationship a secret. When all you want to do is tell the world that you are in love with the most amazing person on the planet, it's gotta be torture. I know I couldn't have done it. I would have attacked him in the middle of that party.
I knew they were going to be going through their bouts of jealousy through that party. I loved Bella's thoughts about ripping Jessica apart while she was talking to Edward. And then wanting to hack up all the girls and burn the pieces...priceless.
I'm so happy they said they loved each other. Its not like other couples where they need to take forever to do it since they've been a part of each other's lives for so long. I only want to know one thing...the family already knows how close they are and it was always normal for Edward to sleep in her bed to comfort her. Why would there be an issue now if he slept in her room as long as they were careful and it was only for the night? Of course that probably stems from me wanting them to be able to be out in the open. Who knows???
Love this story and, as much as I love CofC, I love it when you get writer's block. I can't wait for the next chapter - D
Author's Response:
Well, they haven't done the sleeping in the same bed thing since her nightmares ended when she was about 12 or so. I haven't really given this away to anyone yet, but the sudden change in their interactions...how they are LESS physical than usual is not going unnoticed either ;) Remember, it wasn't unusual for them to lock arms, hook E's hand over B's shoulder, hug and comfort. Now they're so afraid of being caught they aren't touching at all, which is a bit of a tell in and of itself to those who are paying attention.
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
whew....getting risky.....can't wait to see how they do once they get back to school
Date: 21 Sep 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 8
I was at boring meetings for work today, so I spent my time reading this crazy story. There are so many ways that you can take this and I can't wait to see where exactly it will go.
I am so glad that they are being honest with themselves and each other. This is going to be a crazy ride, with the potential of everyone being riped apart. This is crazy and fun and the potentail for drama is great.
Am looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Date: 19 Sep 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 8
LOL! I totally thought Esme might pick up on both of Bella and Edward's happiness and put two and two together. I just wonder how long they will be able to keep everything a secret.
Date: 17 Sep 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
so i wonder is esme already suspects? loved edward's little secret can't wait for more!
Date: 17 Sep 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it! I really don't mind the waiting so take ur time and give us sth good!!!
xoxo
marianne
Date: 17 Sep 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
aww she got a necklace and Edward has Bella-porn lol that's awesome. I'm going to be so sad until you update again. :( does that make you want to update faster? :) lol just kidding. keep up the great work. I love it as you can probably already tell. thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
"I don't think he met anyone new." No, he certainly didn't. Wondering how long they will be able to keep it a secret. Spring break or will Emmett realize something before then?
Take your time with the n ext update but know that we will be here waiting patiently. Well, sort of patiently!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
Kind of torn between wanting Emmett to be clueless AND suspicious... I'm thinking Esme's waaaay ahead of the others here (yeah!).
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 17 Sep 2010 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
This story is very good. On one point I can see the "weirdness" but on the other (since its THE couple), I am touched by the sweetness in it. Their love is so new and special---I am rooting for them!!
Will try to be patient, but am looking forward to updates for this story! Keep up the good work :-)
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
the neclace sounds so pretty :) i wanna know what keepsakes he has in there too...lol
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
This was wonderful!!! Power to Bella!! I actually thought it was so sweet the way Edward confessed about his Bella Bounty Box! I also loved how they sneeked kisses and mmm mmm in her bedroom. Young love is so precious!
Don't know what will happen during the break, how much more they will progress or if they are found out but I'm sure when you get the chance, you'll let us know!
Thank you for writing this. You have no idea how much I will miss waiting for the next update!!!
Date: 17 Sep 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
i loved this chapter. can't wait for the next one! can't wait to see what happeneds during new years!!
Date: 17 Sep 2010 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
I don't know how everyone is going to take this. I hope they don't freak out. Esme is smart. They are going to have to be careful or she will figure it out. I don't blame them for keeping it to themselves for a little while. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 17 Sep 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love it! Great job...thanks!
Date: 17 Sep 2010 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great job!
Date: 17 Sep 2010 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
Awww he gave her his heart for xmas that is so cool. I get the feeling these two ar going to go from zero to a hundred in the blink of an eye.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
Yeah. So I'm thinking Emmett's going to be the one with major issues. Love to see more of the others soon!
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 17 Sep 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great job!
Date: 16 Sep 2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
YAAAAAAYYYYY!!!!!
Ok that feels a little wierd being happy that for all intents and purposes Brother and sister just made out.
Mmmm i think i am really going to enjoy this ride
Date: 16 Sep 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
FINALLY! i loved the whole scenery and how edward was damn it all to hell, and just admitted his feelings! i can not wait for more!
Date: 16 Sep 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hugs to you and AgoodWITCH for getting these first few out so timely, though it will have spoiled us when the postings slow. But I will patiently (maybe) wait for the future updates when they begin to space out...now to on to it --- nah nah nah nah nah nah, Emmett's gonna kill Edward. Poor Edward, he is going to be such dead meat! Even though technically, Edward and Bella have done nothing wrong. I've a feeling things are about to become quite interesting in the Cullen household.. thanks as always for updating..Laters. Pam B.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ahhh I don't know what I'm going to do without frequent updates. :( I might just go insane. lol that chapter was sweet. and the kiss? wow that was something else. I love it. I can't wait till Edward and Bella have to really start hiding their relationship even when others are interferring. I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 16 Sep 2010 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Let the drama begin :) I'm anxious to see how all of this will play out. I can see Emmett going all brother bear on both of them. Carlisle and Esme might be more understanding. Since most of the school already knows they are step siblings it could be very awkward around there.
OMG, this story reminds me of my cousin. When she was 12 her dad got remarried and she had the biggest crush on her step brother. LOL I can't tell you how many times that girl said he's not related by blood so it's ok for me to crush on him.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
YAY!!! That's damn straight! Now the angst to come!!
xoxo
marianne
Date: 16 Sep 2010 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
You are spoiling us!!! Totally!! This is awesome!!
xx
marianne
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
wow - big night - when will the **** hit the fan - it has to, this is just too sweet. Hope they are strong enough to weather it.
great chapter
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
What a beautiful gift to give each other at Christmas. Difficult times ahead for sure but they have love on their side.
Thanks. Can't wait for more!
Date: 16 Sep 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
I actually said hell yeah out loud at work when Edward was talking about them possibly having been together if circumstances had been different. Luckily the boss was out of the office at that time ;) I wonder if they would've kissed had Emmett not interrupted. I feel better about her having these feelings for Edward and being home since the break up with Riley. I would've worried about her conscience giving her a hard time all during the holidays.
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
Damn so close. Edward came as close as he possibly could without saying the actual words. The intensity of the moment when they were about to kiss has to tell them both how much they want to be with each other. Unfortunately, because a relationship like theirs would cause such a scandle, Bella is seeing it as wrong. Poor Edward has to be dying inside because you can tell just by his words, how much he cares about her.
I really hope he understood what Bella was trying to say in the car on their way home. She was using Riley to take his place but he was never able to take her mind off her feelings for Edward.
Great chapter. You're killing me here. I hope you know that. I am so excited to jump over and read Edward's side of things. I can't even move on to chapter 7 until I do. Love this - D
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
that was very sweet. I'm glad they are on the same page now
Date: 16 Sep 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
Go Edward!!! Way to take charge, now comes the drama!!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
It's gonna be tough but I think they can handle it...I hope. At least they are both on the same page.
I hope they can make it work. Glad the extra people are out of the picture and while I know you said their may be others involved physically for Bella, I hope you change your mind. It would have been different if both were in denial or hadn't recognized and confessed their mutual feelings for each other. But now that they have, I'm hoping Bella and Edward are together in all ways and will weather the storm.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 6
I love it!!! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 6
I like that they each know now but I hope they suck everything up and get together can't wait for more!
Date: 15 Sep 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great job!
Date: 15 Sep 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
aww how sucky, I thought for SURE we were going to get a kiss out of that chapter. :( poo! lol oh well. that just makes me want to come back and read more. keep up the great work. I'm going to go read My sort of sister now. I can't wait to see where Edward's head is in all of this. :D thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
Goodbye Riley, HELLO Edward! At least they are both realizing there is something more there.
Thanks for EPOV. I'm off to read it now.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loving it! Brilliant!
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh boy....very awkward break indeed.....i guess she's hurt since he says it was a mistake
Date: 15 Sep 2010 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great job!
Date: 15 Sep 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
I am so glad that Edward talked to Bella and she saw through Tanya and knew she was lying. That made me laugh when be said Tanya said it just proved how much she love him since she would do that. What a line...
Great job...thanks so much!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
Date: 14 Sep 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
First and foremost-- Happy Birthday girl!! And who are you calling impatient ones?? you couldn't see me drumming my fingers or rolling my eyes from where you are?? (could ya??--lol) It's amazing to me when guys are with really bitch girls. are they so caught up on just "getting some", that they are oblivious to anything else as long as the peen is happy?.. Why would a girl try to trap a guy just to have him? the relationship would be miserable for her as well.. you know,, i think i am glad i am old and married and that i don't have to worry about any of that kind of crap anymore..( but I do have a 25 yo daughter and 22 yo son to still worry about) thanks for posting and hope you bday is awesome.. Pam B.
Date: 14 Sep 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
Glad Edward is starting to talk to ya.. bet it's good stuff!! looking forward to you sharing Edward, well his thoughts anyway! Also glad everyone kissed and made up.. was a really sweet chapter.. thanks for posting.. Pam B.
Date: 14 Sep 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
Yep... the line is there and not there... If you know what I mean...
HAPPY B_DAY!!!!!!!
xoxo
marianne
Date: 14 Sep 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
Enjoying your story so far. Good chapter/