Date: 15 Oct 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
Awesome chapter! I'm glad that Esme and Carlise didn't react as badly as E+B thought they would. Lets see how tomorrow goes. Can't wait for another update.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
Esme and Carlisle were certainly more understanding than Emmett. Long, tough road ahead for them but at least the parents are on their side. How long before Emmett comes around and finally accepts them as a couple?
Great chapter! Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
great chapter glad to see the parents so understanding, can't wait to see the towns reaction at the party. keep up the good work!
Date: 15 Oct 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
Intense! Loved it! :)
Date: 15 Oct 2010 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 15
*SIGH* If that is where we must wait, so be it. Better than if this chapter had not been posted. Sooo very glad mom sees things as she does and that pop has enough of an open mind to adjust if given time. Ultimately a very sweet chapter of family bonding and character development for each member too.
Date: 15 Oct 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
well now emmett is the only problem! cant wait till the next chapter! keep them comming
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
well, it started off tense, but i'm so glad Esme was ok with it, and Carlisle looks like he'll come around soon. Em and Rose and the rest of the town are going to be a tougher nut to crack though
Date: 14 Oct 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 14
WOW !~!!!!!! hopefully emmett will see it differently inthe morning. I think the parents will unserstand alot better.
Date: 14 Oct 2010 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
Whew.......that was certainly rough. There was no way that Emmet wasn't going to get in a punch to two. I am glad that Bella was able to reason with him. I know that Emmett is upset with them because he thinks of Edward as Bella's brother and not is girlfriend. I just hope it goes somewhat okay with Mom and Pop. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING. Sherri
Date: 14 Oct 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
OFMG......Telling Emmett. I hope it goes well for them. They love one another and that is just the way it goes. THANKS FOR THE INTERESTING READING. Sher
Date: 13 Oct 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
Well Emmett didn't take it well. I didn't expect that. I thought that at least he knew Edward would protect her and keep her safe always. I did not expect him to want to beat the crap out of him. He know Edwards is a great guy from a great family. He knows that Edward loves Bella. I expected shocked not pissed.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed on FFN hon!! :-D
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, I'm surprised Emmett didn't do more damage to Edward. I guess with Bella trying to get in the middle to break it up he gained a little control because she got caught in the crossfire. I totally get Em being hurt and worried because Edward has a past as a man-whore. I just hope he can calm down and see how much they love each other. OMG he's going to flip if he finds out that Rose knew before he did. I can't wait for the big reveal to Esme and Carlisle.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
I was expecting hospitalised Cullens but I can see why this is better! I must say I had a fit of giggles in there but it was more cause of the anxiety than finding it hilarious....
Loved it! I can't wait to see Carlisles face!!
xx
Marianne
Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 14
whens the next update i can't wait!
Date: 13 Oct 2010 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
hope this goes better at home.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 14
I feel bad fir them all!
Date: 13 Oct 2010 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
is there going to be something from emmett. why did emmett automatically assume the edward was in the room with her. he had to have some suspicisions, right? did he talk to rosalie? i'm eager to read more. thank you.
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 14
Well then, after that its not looking good at all for when they get home :(
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 14
shame that em reacted so badly ... if he stops to think about it, he would realise that tho they'd all been raised together for the last 8 yrs or so, edward and bella are not blood related and there is no reason for them to b miserable and alone when they love each other so much ... as lovers rather than as siblings
em prob feels a bit betrayed coz left out of the loop and illogically thinks of edward as a real sibling rather than as a step bro .. i wonder if he'll b able to emotionally stand back and really try to understand edward and bella's love for each other ... like his love for rose???
looking 4wd with dread to telling the parents ... hope bella and edward remain strong and united against the naysayers
xoxo ety
Date: 13 Oct 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
Poor Emmett feeling like a fool I hope the meeting with the parents goes better.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
Dammmmmmmnnnnnnn! I cant wait till they tell the 'rents. This is one of the best fanfics I've read. Keep up the great work
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 14
ok better than I thought. I think Emmett will come around, he is just in shock.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 14
That was a well written chapter---I could feel Emmett's pain as well as Bella & Edwards (well okay, not the bruised face, but internal pain). Am so looking forward to the parentals talk.....OH BOY!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 14
So is Rose gonna get an earful from Emmett about them sneaking round? And then find out the she knew?
Oh shit! - I'm glad its not me in this sitution/story.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 14
Poor girl. Nightmares.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 14
wow how did Emmett know it was Edward in there? I liked that chapter and I'm so glad Emmett kept an open mind. good for him. lol (rolls eyes) that fight was sad though. poor Edward. I can't wait till all the stress is done and they can go back to lovey doviness. :D thanks again bye
Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 14
oh i don't word sorry but you do have me hooked!
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
Mt Emmett is right! I worry that he will never see reason when it comes to Bella and Edward. the trip home is going to be awful and the meeting with the parents should be a real fiasco.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
well i hope they are ready i know iwould be ready for what they are about to face! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 14
Well, glad that part is behind them. Knew that wasn't going to go well. Not like Em could take hearing that Bella begged Edward to make love to her in her dorm. He was barely able to stomach any of it. He, however, has not been in their heads all these years to witness the yearning each of them felt. Em didn't see that his sis and brother were best friends, not siblings. Now, they have to convince their parents of that technicality.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
Emmett needs to chill this isn't about him. At all. Thanks for the fast update. I know you have lots going on, but I hope we don't have to wait too long before we hear about how the parents react.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
well atleast they wont die virgins
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter. I liked the humor in the beginning and the romance in the middle and I'm freaking out for them at the end.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 13
dun dun dun dun....... Loved the chappy... can't wait for the next one.... hope Emmett does not go too postal.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh boy. Oh boy. This isn't gonna be pretty! Yikes, bad timing Emmett! Poor Bella and Edward. They had such plans for breaking this to him gently...
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Hurry please! No, take your time and write it well. Oh, I'm impatient as hell.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
The description you gave of Bella giving her first BJ was just hysterical. Even the barfing part.. Glad they finally got all their necessary buisiness out of the way,,, at least before Edward dies at the hands of Emmett...thanks for the posting.. Laters Pam B.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
totally loved it.
I get the feeling the next chapter is going to be a little emotional
Date: 11 Oct 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
damn cliffy!!!! oh well its amazing! cant wait to see how emmett reacts to this!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
Dun dun dun! I guess the revelation would be sooner rather than later.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
I just want to say I love your writing. Your story Behind the Images is what got me on to this site in the first place (I folowed it over from Fanfiction.net) and now I am totally addicted. I like how you mix the sweetness with just enough drama to keep it from being fluffy. Its important point that its not about time or place but who you are with. Keep up the good work. I don't normally write reviews but I wanted to let you know I am a long time follower. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 13
Dun, dun, dun. Looks like Em's gonna find out sooner than planned. Can't wait for another update.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 13
I just started reading this story and I'm really hoping Emmett, Esme and Carlise don't react as badly as E + B are expecting them too. Sure the people of Forks may act weird but who cares about them. Hope to see another update soon.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow! Next chapter's going to be intense!
Btw, ITA on the bleach. LOL, false advertising! *nods head*
Gwen
Date: 11 Oct 2010 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
Somehow I saw that Emmett was going find out the hard way. At least he did not walk in on them. lol. Enjoying your story!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
Emmett is going to lose his mind. I am going to go and hunt down the bastard that popped my cherry and slap the shit out of him LOL
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
Ah, I knew you would have Em catch them, I just didn't predict him to catch them in THIS position. Will Edward jump out the window and take off or confront Em with her? Cannot wait to find out. I truly love this story, you have created an amazing connection between Edward and Bella here. I know it will be hard once the family finds out, but I hope it's not to angsty. It will certainly break my heart if they end up being apart for any lengthy period of time. But, since you are the author and your writing is amazing, I'll let you tell the story and I will follow you wherever you chose to take them on this journey.
Thanks for writing and using our favorite characters to do so.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 13
Now THAT is the way to start a Monday!!!!!!!!!! Not the Emmett part so much but the rest was heaven!
Edward is so kind and gentle with her and I'm afraid Emmett is going to be the opposite with them. That is his baby sister he has to protect and I'm sure he is going to act first and listen later. But will his reaction be any worse than what they will face at home?
Thanks for posting early! Can't wait to see Emmett's reaction.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 13
False advertising! CLASSIC!!
Candy, ice cream, sunshine? Where the hell do ppl come up with those discriptions
Poor Edward and Bella - but more so Poor Emmett, not only is he going to find out about them being together and lovers but his friends and girlfriend also know! Then he's gonna have to battle the big bro instinct wanting to beat the crap out of Edward even if he is one of his closest friends.
You get the picture I'm trying to paint here?
Very humours chapter. :)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
LOL, OMG it's never easy for the two of them is it? I died laughing with all the fanfic glamorizing blowjobs. That was great! I really needed that laugh today.
Edward was so sweet for their first time. He took such good care of her. Of course leave it to Emmett to ruin the perfect moment. I so can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
LOL...I'm glad you enjoyed it. I always roll my eyes reading the glamjobs and wonder if anyone really feels that way about them! I couldn't resist the comedic, somewhat autobiographical, nature of the chapter. Glad I made you laugh. :)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
LOL THE SHIT IS GOING TO HIT THE FAN!!! poor Emmett. although that sex scene was HOT, minus the vomiting lol. I loved it. I can't wait to see how Emmett reacts. knowing they're together is one thing but finding out on the same day he knows Edward was screwing her? Yeah Edward's going to walk away bruised or missing an IMPORTANT limb. lol Please post again today? I'm so excited. thanks again bye
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
ROFL! OMG I died when they got busted by Billy Black. That was greatness :)
At least Rose is being cool and holding off until B&E can tell the family.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
Awe, it broke my heart for Edward and Bella to have to act like a brother and sister in public and not a couple. I'm dying for them to go public and see everyone's reaction.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh crap...here it comes! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
I hope you prepared Emmett!! Does he have some tranqulizers handy??? :)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
I am glad Bella said what she did to Rose. She needs to find a calm way to tell Carlisle and Esme the same thing. I couldn't believe that Billy was the one that found them. The talk they had was good though. Great job...thanks!
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
Lady, I am seriously never gonna be able to look at my husband the same again. Bella trying to find a word to call Edward's...um... "thing" had to be the funniest thing I've ever read. A little Asian dude...priceless. And, one of these days, you are gonna have to explain to me the purple headed yogurt singer. haha. I mean I can see the visual but that's one I've never heard before.
Poor Bella throwing up after an unexpected surprise that didn't taste like candy or sunshine *snickers*. Maybe I should say poor Edward, nothing sexier than the girl you weant to have sex with throwing up right before you do. But, when you got right down to it. It was good for both of them and sooo worth waiting for. When Edward told her he had never made love before, I loved him so much more for that. He understood what it truly meant to be with her. And Bella, not caring so much about herself, just wanting him to enjoy it says so much about her love for him.
I do feel sorry for Emmett thought. He's interrupting them not really knowing who's behind the door. When he finds out he's going to be crushed because he was lied to and then pissed that his brother and sister are doing what he thinks they shouldn't be. Take it easy on the poor guy. This is going to be hard enough for him.
This whole thing was exactly what I would expect from a first time. Sure Edward had experience and he was trying to get her through it but she had those awkward feelings and thoughts that are normal for anyone. I love it when a writer can keep it real. Great job lady. I can't wait for them to tell their parents. TTYL - D
Author's Response:
LOL..Purple Headed Yogurt Slinger came from a teen movie. I can't remember if it was American Pie (want to say it was) or one of the other similar types...but it stuck. LOL
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh shit em is going to go ape shit on them i can't belive the bad luck they have i loved it very sweet and sexy
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
thats going to be one acward conversation! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
I just hope it was Rose and not Tanya. I figured Rose would figure things out or see something. I hope she supports Bella and Edward and doesn't make things harder for them. Great job...thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
oh, crap! what the hell, did he hear them thru the door!? *GLUP*!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
4 words.... Emmet knows! BLOODY HELL!!!!
lol
xx
Marianne
PS Thanks for the 2 chapies in a row
PSS: So not 4 words lol...
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
iam glad rose didn't tell em yet and will let edward and bella tell everyone it's the best way loved it
Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
Of course Alice knew. I am glad they will fainlly start having some alone time. Great job...thanks!
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh crap i hope rose didn't see them but i bet she did i don't think em will freak but lol i bet he does i like the whole indoor couple thing so cute
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 10
i loved it iam so happy that alice and jasper saw that there was love between these two i just hope bella gets over her fears of not being enough for him she is more than enough for him .
Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
See FFN review, hon!! :-P
Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
oh no
can't wait for the next update!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 13
what!!!???? so i loved their first time, but em is going to be pissed!!!! please update soon!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:37 PM Title: My Other Brother
so good, loved E and B's first time... it would figure that Em would show up.... can't wait for the next chapter. Awesome writing. :)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
oh no-trouble a brewing! Sweet first time for E & B. I loved it!!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 12
I am sure that the cat will be out of the bag soon enough. The fact remains that they are NOT related, even they grew up like brother and sister. True love wins out. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING. Sherri
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
another great chapter, I think it was funny how Billy found them. Yeah it will definetly be interesting to see how the family takes the news.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
It's a dangerous territory. But I agree. They're not even blood related so go for it.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 12
Valenitine's weekend should prove to be quite interesting.. and maybe not in a good way... maybe Edward should check into more life insurance??... hope their relationship can hold up to the scrutiny that may insue...Pam b.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 12
I loved it! I can't wait for them to tell them so that they can love each other freely! Can't wait for more!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Bella ,I would hate not being able to be open about my love with someone in public!
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 12
please don't let Em be mad.....i just don't know about his parents though...that might be the tougher sell
Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 12
good chapter. i really hope that they will at least have emmett on their side.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
Just hope the stress of the next two weeks doesn't kill them! I'm sure Emmett is going to figure it out before the trip home.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
They're getting closer. Hand holding isn't much but it's better than nothing. Billy's talk gave them the confidence they needed to take a small step forward. Two weeks is going to seem like forever but, when they're facing their family, I'll bet they'll be wishing for more time.
Edward is right and Emmett is definitely noticing. He is seeing more than they think he is and I believe he's just waiting for them to confirm his suspicions.
Keep 'em coming lady. I ready for the next chapter and some much needed "alone time". Great chapter - D
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
This is so crazy. I feel so bad for them...wanting to be together publically and not being able to. I'm glad she was able to show some strength when she saw Edward with those girls and didn't get jealous at their obvious flirting efforts. She needs to trust him and his love completely in order to get through the next month of secrecy.
I can't wait for them to tell the family. It's going to be hard but, hopefully, they will be accepted and they can be happy. It will kill them both, I think, if it turns out any other way. Another great chapter lady. I'm off to read 12. D
Date: 10 Oct 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
well i think its going to get around that it was them that got caught ! cant wait till the big reviel!
Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 12
See my FFN review hon!! :-P
Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 12
Emmett is going to be devistated when he finds out.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
aww they're too sweet and they totally got caught! lol that was funny. good thing Billy isn't saying anything. I love that Rose is (now) okay with the situation and hopefully Emmett will pull a Breaking Dawn and surprise us by not being mad so that we got stressed out gearing up for a fight for nothing. lol thanks again bye
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
update soon please, i'm begging you......
Date: 10 Oct 2010 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oops.... Rose knows!! Oh that is priceless! Can't wait!
xx
Marianne
Date: 10 Oct 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 10
Honestly I can't blame Bella for worrying about Edward losing interest once he finally has sex with her. The way the girls were in and out of his life I would worry if she didn't think about it.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great job, thanks for writing.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 11
wonder how much Rose saw??.. lots of complications i think with their relationship.. their committment to one another will be tested majorly I am sure.. Pam B.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 11
<3 <3
Date: 09 Oct 2010 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
This is tough to be in love with some one that is to be your bro.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
uh oh!....potentially caught??? Gianna better back off, fake wench! i wonder when Em finds out if he'll be supportive or will this cause a huge rift in their relationship
Date: 09 Oct 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
well its not like they are related! cant wait till the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 11
So happy with your annoucement, but sad too, because I love this and your other story you having going right now. Good luck in your endevour.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'm voting for Rosalie seeing it. :-)
Date: 09 Oct 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
hmmm it is not going to be an eaqsy road for these two but i think they will come out the other side stronger and happier