Date: 04 Dec 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it! Romantic, sexy Edward! The fantasy of women everywhere!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
I love that em is better i can't wait for more!
Date: 30 Nov 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
L-O-V-E it!! lol i was luaghing my ass of at edwards sparkling "peen" as you put it lol you should have made it something like pen15 because it looks like the proper word for it haha lol
Date: 28 Nov 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
This family will be fine. They all love each other. They have always loved each other. Bella and Edward just love each other a little differently now.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
Great job with Emmett/
Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
It's great that Em is coming around.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
love it cannot wait for more:)
Date: 26 Nov 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 18
awesome story love it.glad emmett came round to them.they are meant to be together.update soon
Date: 25 Nov 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh I'm so glad Em is slowly coming to terms with this. It stressful enough for them without have your own family givin you grief
Date: 25 Nov 2010 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
Well at leat that is a little better for them. I cannot until I see shat happens from here. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING. HAPPY THANKSGIVING. Sher
Date: 25 Nov 2010 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
YAY!! You ARE back!!!! I loved the cover!!Can I access from here (Greece)?? I can't wait!! It comes out two days before my B-day thanks it's a soo bloody perfect timing!!!!
I laughed my ass off in the car drive sorry.... I know it wasn't meant to be funny but I got the picture so vivid that I just couldn't help my self!
Loved it!
xx
Marianne
Author's Response:
LOL...actually I did plan on it being a little funny. Glad you enjoyed it. As far as the book, I think it will ship everywhere if you order it online. I hope you enjoy it if you get it. Thanks for the review and the support!
Date: 25 Nov 2010 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 18
Things are looking much better having the family suport. Emmett hide or not hide he cant make up his mind LOL
Date: 25 Nov 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
FINALLY!! I think I let out my own audible sigh of relief when I saw that this had been updated. lol thanks so much. that chapter was sweet with Emmett establishing his own ground rules but if we could get back to the sneaking around that would be great. lol keep up the great work and congrats on your book publishing again. :D thanks again bye
Date: 25 Nov 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 18
Congratulations on getting your book published. I am so glad this story is back I really enjoy it.
Date: 25 Nov 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 18
Poor Emmett, he is trying so hard to be the understanding big brother. Loved the line about hiding stuff from Emmett without seeming like they were hiding stuff... very cute... And now to find out how things will happen out in the real world..Thanks for posting... Pam B.
Date: 25 Nov 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 18
Im glad Emmetts coming around. Post again soon please
Date: 25 Nov 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 18
Glad you're back! Happy to visit once again with our confused family. I am so happy Emmett is making an effort to adjust. He loves his sis so much he doesn't see straight. I look forward to quality time between our young couple.
Date: 25 Nov 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 18
So glad you're back! And glad to have the gang back too.
At least Emmett is coming around finally. Can't wait for more!
Date: 25 Nov 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 18
Sweet...glad they have family support!
Date: 24 Nov 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
Glad your back and that editting is over. Yeah for MY OTHER BROTHER. I've missed this story. I'm also very happy that Emmet is coming around and I LOVED the bit in the car on the way back to school. Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 24 Nov 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
At least they're not hiding anymore. :-)
Date: 24 Nov 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 17
So glad that Emmett stood up for Bella and Edward, he probably still has a long way to go, but that man has a big heart!
Excired for more
Date: 27 Oct 2010 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG I can't believe I missed reading this one. I loved it. This whole glitter thing was hilarious. I'm sure there are plenty of guys that can complain about stuff like that considering all the girls out there that do use glittery products. I'm sure it looked pretty good though and I loved how Bella called it "bling".
I loved how Edward was able to put the crowd out of his mind for those first couple of dances while trying to keep Bella in the moment with him. That's love. I'm also glad that Emmett was able to stand up for them when it counted. He may not like the situation but I'm sure Edward's words from before had been ringing in his head all day. It's going to take a lot of work on his part to fully accept the situation but I hope that, since he was able to defend them, he is beginning to understand and embrace the love that they have for each other.
Edward and Bella are such a good couple together and, like their dad said, they are coming into this relationship at a place where others only dream of getting to. I know they can stick it out for the long haul. Great job on this chapter and this story. I can't wait til you come back to finish. Good luck with the editing phase. I will definitely be one of the first in line to buy the book. Miss you on the WC. Much love - D
Author's Response:
Awe,thank you hon. I miss you guys too. WC is fun. I almost joined the other night but my cough meds make me sleepy and I had to go to bed before you came back together. I had way too much fun writing the glitter part, as well as the rest. Em won't be all there yet, but he's slowly acclimating. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and I hope you like the rest when I get back to it. The book HAS to be done with all edits by Mid November and I'll be aching to write again instead of all the editing by then. Hopefully I'll get back into the flow by then. Anyway, take care and TTYL Thanks again for the awesome review!!!
Date: 23 Oct 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great job, thanks for writing.
Date: 21 Oct 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 17
*squeeeeeee* Love the family support---excellent!
And sincere congratulations on the RL publishing!
Gwen
Date: 21 Oct 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 17
First, I wish you the best of luck with your book and certainly hope that it does well. I think that this chapter was done very well and truly enjoyed reading it. I knew that if anyone tried to hurt Bella that big brother Emmett would be there to save her because that's what big brother's do. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING. Sherri
Date: 20 Oct 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well, everyone knew that the big reveal would most likely be quite ugly! I hope this offers something of a perminant shift in Emmett's view, Rose's too. So long as Bella and Edward remain confident in their love, they should be good.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
Gosh I love these two. If know thing else it brought them together as a family. The Skanky twins accosting Bella is so not cool. To physically attack her in her own home is a sad testiment to the mindset of this town and the jealousy of those girls. I hope they remember this for the positives that came out of it and not the negative reaction of a few. They are not biological siblings. People need to get their heads around that.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
awwhhhhhh. ! <3
Date: 20 Oct 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
i feel awful for them, and i just hope they stick it out, good luck with your book!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 17
So sweet. Will wish the next few weeks away for an update!!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
I have a feel that this is what it took for Emmett to see Edward and Bella together is not really so bad. I like how the 3 couples ending the evening dancing. I love it! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 17
I am really going to miss the updates but you left us on a good note. The sparkling peen was too funny, it still cracks me up. Good luck and cant wait for you to return.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
Congratulations! While I bemoan the lack of updates, the reason is fantastic!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 17
I just knew the town wouldn't take the relationship well. I'm surprised the harpy twins didn't do more damage. I just knew something bad was going to happen when Edward went off to the bathroom. I was just scared the harpy twins would corner Edward in the bathroom and attack him. At least Emmett stood up for both Edward and Bella. One small step forward :) That was the perfect ending for their Valentine's Day.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 17
oh my god! I won't be able to read this for a while? I might not survive. Honestly. :D I love the sparkling peen thing. too funny. As for Bella getting beat up? what the heck were those two bitches problem? Edward hasn't been with them in FOREVER and they attack his gf. I do love that Emmett above anyone came to her rescue. too sweet. love love it. I'm so sad that I won't be able to read this for awhile but congrats anyway and good luck when your book comes out. God knows I'll be reading it. :D thanks again and see you in a couple of weeks. thanks again bye
Date: 20 Oct 2010 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
WOW is all that I can say. This was an extremely powerful chapter. I am extremely glad that their parents have accepted them. Maybe Emmett will come around as Edward stated that he wouldn't be able to live out Rose. Maybe he will finally realize how much Edward and Bella really love one another. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING. Sher
Date: 20 Oct 2010 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 17
This was a good chapie! I am glad we have it!
Now on an even happier note... CONGRATS HUN!!!!! The news about the earlier editing are amazing!!! I can't wait to get my hands on it....!! I don't fucking care that I live in Greece so many many miles away...! I'll find a way!! lol!
Try to enjoy the whole thing and keep focused!!!
xx
marianne
Author's Response:
LOL...well Amazon delivers to Greece right? It will be on Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and Borders.com, so hopefully you can pick it up. It's also going to be in ebook form, so there is always that route as well. I am SOOOOOOO nervous. I hope everyone likes it!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
I hope that is the worst they will endure. Bravo Em for defending them!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 16
Edward is so smart to give Emmett a senario that he can understand. Emmett has something to think about. He can accept and still have the close relaitonship with Edward and Bella or it will never be the same again.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 17
Love love love the sparkling peen! Too bad it isn't permanent!
Glad that Emmett finally came to his senses and defended Bella and Edward. Nice too that Carlisle ended the party the way he did.
Unfortunately, the small town morality police will always try to inflict their judgements whenever and where ever possible. Small towns are nice places to be FROM !
Date: 20 Oct 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 17
Cat fight! That was a classic.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wow now they know what kind of friends they have in the town. Jess and Lauran need a beat down like now. I am glad that Emmett came to her aid and said what he did. Good Luck with your editing hope it goes well I will be waiting for you.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 17
First off.... CONGRATULATIONS on your story getting published!!! On the sad side, I feel very selfish, because I am going to miss your updates.... I L-O-V-E this story (feel like I am quoting Bella here).
Good luck with your editing, and truly hope all goes well!!! Will TRY to be waiting patiently for your next update to hit my email box. If we don't hear from you before-----HAPPY THANKSGIVING!! :-)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh I love this story i get so excited when i see it up date. I will be sad for the small break but do understand. Good luck with your book.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
ooh so i like that edward said all that to emmett and rose and i can't wait for more!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ya take that Emmett Edward is right .
Date: 19 Oct 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 16
good good glad ed finally talked to em
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 16
I have to tell you when I see this story update I can't wait to read it, but try to resist so that I can savour it. I don't know why but this story really has me hooked.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
so glad Edward stood up to Em! Can't wait for the party.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 16
Can't wait for the Valentines Party!! Hope it's not to bad for them! Keep up the great work!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
Got to love Esme. That was very sweet of her to do for her kids. I hope what Edward said to Emmett will sink in. I can kind of see where he would be shocked, but at some point he has to get over it, or he is going to lose his sister and his brother. I am glad they are not going to hide anymore. They deserve to be happy. Great job..thanks so much!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh...no jakob :)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
wonderful chapter i am glad edward stood up to emmett. can't wait to see the reaction of the town and how bella and edward handle it. keep up the good work.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
Hooray for Edward in finding a way to make Emmett really understand. I'm sure the people in town will not be so easy or understanding as Esme and Carlisle. Rough times ahead.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
I don't think it's fair that Edward and Bella can't have sex while in the house but Emmett and Rose can. I really liked that speech that Edward gave to Emmett, hopefully now he will be alright with them dating.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
loved the chapter. Great parents and I am thinking that Emmett will come around if nothing else than to their defense at the party if needed. Can't wait for more.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 16
I feel sorry for Emmett. That's like a wtf happened here?
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
Go Edward!!! its about time someone got through just a little bit to Emmett. I love this story. I'm running right now to read the teaser for next chapter. I can't believe they have to respect Carlisle and Esme's wishes but emmett and Rosalie don't. that doesn't seem very fair. :( keep up the great work. thanks again bye :D
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
Awesome can't wait for more!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
that was an awesome speech Edward made, hope it gave Em a lot to think about. i'm so nervous about the party.....
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 16
well i have a feeling that is not going to be a pretty party! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
Good one, Jen - "faced the social firing squad" - I like it!! :-P More please?!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
This story just keeps getting better and better.
can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it!! I don't even feel like bitching about it not being the party chapter!! lol
xx
Marianne
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
I have to say, right now this story "owns" me---I guess that is the saying!! When I see in my email, that an update has been posted, I pretty much drop everything, and open it up. Only a few stories are like that for me!!
GREAT JOB!!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
Good for them! What Edward had to say to Rose and Emmett was exactly right. Maybe this is what it takes for Emmett to realize it isn't incest, there is no DNA or bloodline involved. They are simply related by marriage and if but for the fact....
I think it deserves a 10 because it moves the story along. Great job!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
Esme totally rocks! If it weren't for her this whole situation would be FUBAR!
I squeed when Carlisle came up with the new ground rules. It's nice to have him on board now.
My heart broke for Bella when she saw Em and Rose being all handsy in the hall. It totally sucks that he and Rose can have a normal relationship because they aren't related in any way. At least they had their big blow up and Edward stood up to Em for their relationship. Maybe that's what was needed to calm Em down some.
I can't wait for the big reveal to the town of Forks.
Congrats on the judge's pick :)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
knew poor Edward was going to get a pounding.... sigh....
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
well,, at least they finally got some of the most difficult part out of the way... Emmett and the parents now know... and no one died.(though Emmett did give that a go with poor Edward)... Momma Esme was great..... awesom update... thanks muchly.. Pam b.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
See my FFN review, hon!! :-P
Date: 16 Oct 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 15
glad the talk went good now we just have to get emmett on the team belward
Date: 16 Oct 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
I just knew Esme would be the one to think logically. I would expect a mother to notice both her kid's feelings. I was hoping Carlisle would be listening in on the girl talk. To me, that was what he needed to hear. It would give him a better picture of what Bella was truly feeling. I can't wait for the Valentine's party. I bet that should be quite interesting.
Date: 15 Oct 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am really happy that Esme is okay with them. I was hoping that both parents were gonna be unsurprised and okay with the announcement. I can see where Carlisle is coming though. He couldn't see Edward's feelings because of all the whoring around he did. Thanks for the story.
Date: 15 Oct 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
Glad you kept it all together. The sex talk with Esme went so much better than I expected. Loved the bleach line. Can't wait for more.
Date: 15 Oct 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved esmes logic!
Date: 15 Oct 2010 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 15
That talk went a lot better then it could have. I had a feeling that Esme wouldn't be upset. I am glad Carlisle has had a little time to think it though and is a little better about it now. I am sure he is worried about his children and that is what bothers him to most. He doesn't wait them to be hurt. The thinking will have to change just a little, not much.
I am worried about Emmett. I hope Rose can help with him in some way. I am sure he feels betrayed, but if he too stops to think about it, maybe he will come around. No one will protect his sister more then Edward and isn't what brothers want? Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 15 Oct 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
I guess I dont' get the big deal. They waited until they were older and understood what true love was. They will make it. They have always been close. The family will just have to think of their relationship a little differently.
Author's Response:
Exactly...this is a mountain out of a molehill all due to perception. What they are doing is not wrong, it just appears so because of circumstances. Esme Sees this. Carlisle's just worried about everyone getting hurt if things go wrong. And Emmett is confused because while Bella never really got to the brother place with Edward...Emmett did and feels like he would if they had been biological bro and sis. He'll get past it eventually, but for now all the chaos is based solely on perceptions, which often create chaos when none should exist.
Date: 15 Oct 2010 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
aww Esme! she is always the one to understand. LOVE HER!! I love the awkwardness of the sex question too. lol I'm sad that you won't be updating for awhile but I kind of expected it. :( keep up the great work and update when you can. :D thanks again bye for now
Date: 15 Oct 2010 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 15
Lovely!! I knew Esme knew it and Carlisle's reaction was priceless indeed!
xx
mariane
Date: 15 Oct 2010 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow that went really well i was thinking shit would hit the fan but Emmett was not involved.
Date: 15 Oct 2010 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
Actually a sweet chapter. I'm glad Carlisle and Esme are taking it well. The party should be very interesting.