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Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 7

so basically momma and poppa went and fucked with eddie  and bella's destiny when they got married. that is sonot cool.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 6

i knew he was into her! i knew it was more than brotherly. i wonder how it all would have gone down if the parents had waited like a year or so after bella and eddie met on their own? would they have followed the sibling code or gone in a kinkier direction? makes you wonder if they were dating before the parents got married what would have happened? would it have still been wrong?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 5

that bitch! it is crazy stupid girls like that that make things hard for the rest of us. i am so glad bella was able to help eddie find out the truth and now they can move forward. it is a christmas miricle!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 4

it is funny how even to apologize the boys go over the top and force her to listen.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

holy shit can you say cave man? they should both be happy she is a responsible girl with a good head on her shoulders and leave it at that.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 2

so now that she said that you just know one of the brothers are gonna show up at some point! heehee that is sibling karma and yet one more reason i am so very happy i am an only child!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:23 PM Title: My Other Brother

so not fair! why is it always ok for the guys to just throw any girl in bed for fun but when a girl wants to do the same thing the brother and friends get all protective and ' you're better than this' ?but i think eddie may just have a little more to his side than she thinks....

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 24

good i loiked ir

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2011 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 24

Great ending.  Good luck in writing your book.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 24

That was a wonderfully told story. Thanks for sharing it.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 23

not going to be easy

Reviewer: love2read Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great story!  I laughed so hard at the "virginity" scene!  Great, well written story!  Ending was a little rushed, but the overall story was excellent!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 17

aww sweet just a family love should be

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 16

well said Edward

Reviewer: SherriB Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 24

A beautiful end to a very beautiful story.  THANKS SO MUCH FOR YOUR AWESOME FIC.  I really enjoyed reading it.  Sher

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 15

such a wonderful story

Reviewer: SherriB Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 21

WOW a Juliard scholarship.  No one should have to pass up on that.  I think that Bella is doing the right right by her man and should go with him to New York.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING.  Sher

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 5:51 AM Title: My Other Brother

good start

Reviewer: morada Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 24

AW....SO SWEET....

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 24

I have really enjoyed this story.  The relationship between your Edward and Bella is romantic and passionate.  They are truly soulmates.  Thank you.  You are a wonderful writer. 

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2011 5:55 AM Title: My Other Brother

Hi

I like yor introductor chapter it is awesome.  I see you have written a lot of chapters.  So it will be nice to read tell I get to you last One.  I will give you a over all review once I finished reading all your chapter.  So far I think you go mystical mind going..  I can't wait.  Lucky me I don't have too for the 23 more chapter.  Smiles Leona

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 24

This was really great thank you for sharing it!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2011 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 24

They did it their way. It was how their relationship was. They had to leave their family to be a couple, but they made it in the big city. It might be financially tight right now, but in a few years it will be better and they did it all on their own. Their parents should be proud at the strength of their children and their love for each other.

Reviewer: nikki62581 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 24

that's sooooo sweet! I'm gonna miss your writing...but have a great break and get back to us soon.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 24

Awww i am going to miss these two i was so hoping they would have babies baby we can get a futuretake sometime.

Thanks for another excellent story

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 24

That was a wonderful end to a wonderful story about love that will concer all even the family.  I will be looking forward to anything else you do.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 24

Congratulations on a job well wriitten.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 24

Beautiful!! They did this all their way! Great job!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 24

Surprised they waited 6 years to finally get married but with both of them in school and working I can understand not having the time. I'm happy the family wasn't too upset over missing the wedding.

Thanks for sharing your talent with us!

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 24

awwwe loved the story

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 24

I can't believe it is over.  I love it as always!  I can see why they got married when they did.  It was time for them even though it didn't work for the rest of the family.  I am so glad everything has gone so well for them in New York.  They are so happy and that is all their family can ask for.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 24

nice wrap up

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 24

wow great, great, awesome chapter!!! thank you for that!

Reviewer: GwenCooper426 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 24

*happy sigh*  Lovely ending! This is so sweet!

Hugs,

Gwen (and best wishes for your second book!)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 24

awesome ending! wrapped up very nicely :) as always...lol. loved this! Good Luck with 'Induction'!!!!!!

Reviewer: Catemom Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 24

so great! but so sad it's over

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 24

Awwww. Very nicely done. I liked the closure offered here.l

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2011 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 24

This was a very good story---I have to say, I teared up at the end....bitter sweet but special as usual from you!!!

Thanks for always sharing your talent with us, you are a very good writer and I always enjoy your stories.

Good luck w/ your Creation series!!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 24

well that was a great ending! they never did anything the parents wanted! it was all for them

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2011 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 24

Not as happy ending but happy enough. :-)

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 23

Wow a great ending, I can't wait for the epi, I will truly miss these characters.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 23

I'll miss this story.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 23

Things are coming together for them I am happy that Esme and Carlisle are helping them out because they would of did it there way.  I cant wait to read the epi.

Reviewer: Stellarrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 23

Whoo-hoo!!  Columbia and a decent job that doesn't include the phrase "Would you like fries with that"....

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it!! Thank you!! I can't believe it!! I can't wait for the epi even though I am a little sad it will be over!

xoxo

Marianne

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 23

WOW!! Beautiful chapter, it was so nice to see how hard they worked for their dreams but I am super glad it worked out. Smart thinking on Bella's for the leg in the door for both places. ty for updating!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 23

Glad that Esme and Carlisle finally realized they were fighting a battle they couldn't win. And they were willing to help them out financially if needed.

Bella and Edward were so determined to make this happen that nothing was going to stop them. Good for them. They had a plan and made it work.

Can't wait for the epi but I will be sad to say goodbye.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 23

I'm so sad this story is almost over i am going to miss these two.

Thanks for a wonderful inspiring ride.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 23

wow so much in that chapter, glad all things all lining up for them, she had quite the presentation ready for the parents -- smart, funny, and classy

Reviewer: johnnydeppsosexy Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 23

clap...clap...clap...sniffle...sniffle

I love a happy ending

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 23

good! i knew they'd make it work!!!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 23

Sweet!  Good job for standing their ground!  Can't wait for the epilogue. 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 23

Thies two will be fine. They are just Edward and Bella here. Two young people trying to work and going to school in the big city. It will be tough, but they have each other. They just have to remember to take time for each other and enjoy the little things which are free.

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 23

Wow. They are behaving like the grown ups they are trying to be. Kudos for them both. Very impressed with their positive presentations to their parents; equally impressed with the parents respecting their choices.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 23

well happy that everything finally worked out for them!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 19

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 18

:)

Reviewer: BellaMarie4 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 22

Oh dear!  Are the parents gonna talk her into staying?  I can see their point though- free ride and all.  Maybe Edward and Bella would do well with a little distance (not that I want them too though!)  Looking forward to your next update.  Love this story!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 22

The parents just need to realize that either they go to New York together or they stay in Washington together. Bella and Edward have to show them that they are committed to this relationship. It isn't a faze. They are old enough they can get married, if they can't get family support for their decision. They can also get grants and loans if needed. They just have to show them that they are a package deal.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 22

great chapter

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 22

They wont try to stop her from going with him???  I am glad Emmett has came around to accept them as a couple.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 22

Oh, you are a little devil leaving that cliffhanger.

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 22

a lot has transpired during one school year.  Wonder about the 'sleeping' arrangements when they return home. I think the parental units have voiced their opinion in the past about what is allowed and what is not.. Hoping the acceptence process works out well for Edward and Bella in re: to New York... thanks much for the post...covered quite a bit in this update.. Pam B.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 22

it would kill them to be apart, but let's see how the discussion goes......

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 22

well that went better than expected!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 22

Sweet!  Edward getting accepted to Julliard.  Esme and Carlisle raised good kids.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 21

Young people. They don't see the whole picture. Everything cant usually be worked out if you try hard enough. You can't turn down Julliard. Bella can try several schools. NYU is another amazing school if she can't get into Columbia on such short notice. There are lucky that money really is not a big problem and Bella is a smart girl. They will make it in New York just fine. If Edward want a career in music, Julliard is where you want to go if you get the chance.

Reviewer: BellaMarie4 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 21

Yippee!  Love these two!  Can't wait to see them "on their own"!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 21

How wonderful for them sometime even bitches are useful if it was not for the two bitches raging about Bella she would not know what was going on so Thanks Bitches lol.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 21

I am so glad that Bella overheard. There is no way that Edward should give up a oppertunity like that. And if they are meant to be then it won't matter how far apart they are.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter, so sad that this story is almost done, because I really like it.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 21

amazing opportunity, i'm glad she had a positive spin on it and sold him on the idea

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 21

OHHHHH I love this story, TY for updating!!!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 21

Edward is sweet!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 21

well im happy shes making him take it! cant wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

glad they ot one sweet romantic night alone together before they have to face the world. wonderful chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 18

glad they are all starting to move on and repair relationships. I can't wait to see what happens now that they are all away from the parents.

Reviewer: the writer biter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 19

love it! i wanna read more of it! i love it!! cant wait for more!!!!! there were a few mistakes but nothing to worry about :)

lots of love!! xxx

Reviewer: SeaShells421 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 19

They didn't use a comdom!

Reviewer: Twilightfan85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 19

pls continue this story!!! pls i really hope u continue this story!!! i love it!! so pls continue soon!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 19

i want to be Juliet !!!!!!!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved the lemon!!

And I got my brother to get me the book in hardcover fro my b-day today!! I can't wait 'till it gets here!!!!

I am so fucking excited!!

xx

Marianne

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 19

congrats on your publication... glad to know you can keep the YA readers happy and the lemon lovers happy all at the same time.. such a versatile woman.. glad B and E were able to get a short stent of time to themselves before facing the real world again.... thanks muchly for the post.. Pam B.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 19

That was just fuck hot they need to do this from time to time because real life is not going to be as plesent I think.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 18

I hope things can settle down for them now. They deserve to be happy together. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: SherriB Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 19

Thanks for that.  Bella and Edward definitely needed their alone time together and who would have thought that this Edward was frugle by hiding all of his money in the floor.  I very much enjoyed reading their steamy love scene.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING.  Sher

Reviewer: clair61213 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 19

so romantic. perfect that you are showing how strong their bond is right before they go face the rest of the world. love this story

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 19

Nice to see them get away for one night as a normal happy couple...and that was one nice long lemon to enjoy!  Thanks!

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 19

That was so romantic.  I am so anxious to see what is going to happen next.

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 19

Very Sweet and loving chapter.  But I get a sad "gut" feeling something is about to maybe 'hit the fan'????  Well I have every confidence in our two young sweethearts!!!

CONGRATULATIONS on your new publication!!  I saw it advertised up on the banner.  Am planning to buy it for eBooks (have a Kindle!!).  Good luck!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 19

first off congrats! Im happy about your book. Second of all I'm so happy that you updated this story and WHO cares that its one big lemon, I know I don't. lol thanks again soo much and hopefully now more chapters will come out more often now that you got your book done. :D I can hope. lol thanks again bye

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 19

How cute that they had a list of extravagent ways to spend the cash stash. Since they survived the trial by fire in Forks I think they can pretty much withstand anything that comes their way.

He is just so sweet and romantic!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 19

They needed a night of just the 2 of them.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 19

well i hope for her sake that it gets better keep the chapters comming

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 19

money worth spending....lol Em...just don't even question where they were

Reviewer: lindseyfair Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 19

Stupid popping bubbles. I guess it might get boring living in one after a while, right? What am I saying, if Edward was there, I would never be bored. Great bubble chapter.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 19

wow that was hot but ver sweet and romantic, an di loved the whole romeo and juliet reference!

Reviewer: loveofjasper Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 19

a lovely get away

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 19

Sweet!  I love the Romeo and Juliet thing. :-)

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