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Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 11:31 PM Title: Quaver

aww drunk eddie almost made himself known to bella. and sober bella is a smart girl for not allowing anything to happen while he was drunk. heehee can't wait to see eddie in the morning!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 10:37 PM Title: Barline

He was a hit! The plan worked flawlessly! And bella has definately realized how far she has fallen but how will ed react to her running out and freaking out?!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 10:05 PM Title: Sharp

So rose wants em huh? I wonder if em wants rose too? Heehee maybe a few double dates are in the cards? That would be awkward! And bella is well on her way to getting ed a gig! He is gonna be stoked!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 4:24 PM Title: Octave Clef

Heehee too funny that they are both wanting the same thing- to be together and they both feel that to get it they need different things - finish with the song for ed and keep the song going for bella

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 12:43 PM Title: Alla Breve

that was a shit way to find out about riley and vic. and angela is right she needs closure.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 12:17 PM Title: Stave

ooooo who is jess dating? she is hiding something...

bella and eddie are still fighting it i wonder who will crack first and how long till they do?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 5:04 AM Title: Brace

so that is the riley story. what an asshole!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 10:16 PM Title: Crotchet

Wow talk about both being on the very same but very different trains of thought! Still wondering about the alice thing. Did she tell ed he would meet his ausie soulmate in forks?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 3:26 PM Title: Minim

Aww so cute ! I wonder what else happened between bella and riley? A touch obsessive or what? And what did alice see that everyone knows about? A mysterious woman in eddie's future...?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 12:22 PM Title: Breve

oh these 2 are cute. heehee wow even cigar smoker came in to clap for the song! must be a doozie

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 11:21 AM Title: Semiquaver

oh eddie sometimes it is fun to work with your honey. besides it is not like you will be working with her 9-5 everyday....

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 5:05 AM Title: Verismo

i missed the fact that you'd updated this. great chapter. interesting twist with riley...i wonder if there'll be any more contact from him? this climax is certainly slow in coming (no pun intended), but i'm sure it'll be good when it arrives.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 12:23 PM Title: Treble-clef

that wouls be amazing to just hear the music and write the words. can't wait to see what eddie thinks!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 2:53 PM Title: Tablature

If our Bella is as screwed up as she always is, we'll probably celebrate by her seeing or hearing something, taking it out of character, running away, and deciding that she can't have what she truly wants. Hopefully this time Edward can and will chase after her and change her views!! lol

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 12:29 PM Title: Tablature

I wish they would really talk to each other. They are both being cryptic. They need to talk and listen to each other. I hope it happens after the signing. They both love each other very much. They just haven't let the other know it yet.

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2011 3:37 PM Title: Verismo

Well, we have condoms….and the letters are going back unopened…hopefully. Come on, it's a crap shoot…always with these two. ha ha

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2011 11:11 AM Title: Verismo

Loving this story - thanks!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 2:01 PM Title: Verismo

Geesh all we need now is for Rosalie to "happen" to be at the same restaurant or even at the bar. I hope Bella actually mailed the letters so she can't change her mind and open them after all!!



Author's Response:

Um, no, she most definietley mailed the letters! Sending back the letters will be a huge positive step. Now Bella needs to communicate with Edward and more importantly, he needs to listen to her.

Thank you so much for always taking the time to leave me a review. It means a lot :)

Luv BBxx

 

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 9:53 AM Title: Verismo

I so hope Edward can pull his plan off cause if they don't get to have sex soon i am gonna get grumpy :(



Author's Response:

Really M? Grumpy? No, Never!!! I can't say!... lol

BBxx

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2011 5:31 PM Title: Andante

still here and still loving the story. i'm glad you had a good time in NYC. i hope real life is treating you well. as for me...well, same old same old....another good chapter that i didn't want to end.

Reviewer: unicorn_bliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 8:21 AM Title: Andante

It would have been really good have Edward told Rose that Emmett atleast respects Eward's girlfriend. Cuz' he sure as hell doesn't respect Rose anymore.

 

Oh well, hopfully this whole mess will get figured out soon.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 2:04 AM Title: Andante

welcom back hopefully you will get back into the routine now, looking forward to a lemon soon

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 12:25 AM Title: Andante

Yay i've missed these two. glad to hear you had a good trip. Can't wait for them to finally do it

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 3:17 PM Title: Scale

hope you are having/had a good time in new york!

this story has me wrapped around its little finger. i can hardly wait for you to finish it. each chapter leaves me wanting more.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 7:43 PM Title: Scale

I hope Bella finally had Riley out of her system. She needed her girl talk time. I hope she will be honest, but loving with Edward. He doesn't deserve to have his heart broken either.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 11:56 PM Title: Scale

looking forward to your post, but enjoy New York

Be careful the one and only time I was there I got robbed, would never go back

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2011 10:30 AM Title: Coda

They need to stop hiding things and communicate. They are driving me crazy. Bella needs to be in therapy and probably on some meds. She has some reals mental issues. Her parents should have dealt with these years ago.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 8:45 AM Title: Coda

When Bella is with Edwad she believes him, but as soon as she is alone she begins to doubt his intensions again. She should start to believe him and stop second guessing him. I mean it is understandable that he wants to keep their relationship quiet/secret for now. I is a famous actor with no real private live. Doesn't she understands this, that he also wants to protect her????

I just hope that the confrontation between Edward and Rosalie will be good and that he also tells his publicists what he wants and not be a puppet in their game.

I am curious, which friend Bella will visit. Hopefully this one will make her see reason. I mean she doubts Edward constantly. He doesn't want to have sex (because there is no condom) and she doubt his intentions, when he is just responsible. I would say it would not be good if Bella gets pregnant. She is not really ready for this step. Although Edward would be there for her.

When they meet in the restaurant, they definetly need to talk more without making out.

Till the next chapter.

Reviewer: twimom0974 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2011 11:22 PM Title: Coda

oh no! I can't wait for this ExR confrontation.  I really need Bella to understand that Edward is for real!  I think I'm going insane with this story.  ...and I love it.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2011 10:43 PM Title: Coda

yes it seemed like a long wait but I am enxiously waiting for more'

Good job, These two need to talk and get everything out in the open soon

Reviewer: Julz04 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 12:41 AM Title: Semiquaver

Slooooow burn it is then.

Reviewer: Julz04 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 12:01 AM Title: Treble-clef

Cliffie on your first chapter?  How could you?  At least there's 32 more so I don't have to suffer long ;D

Reviewer: nellie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 11:45 AM Title: Rhythm

Hi, I have had this story book marked for a while but real life kept getting in the way!! The boss told me tho other day that I could bring in my laptop and read or paly on face book as there was nothing to do but she just needed somebody at the shop. So in 2 days, I read right thruogh to here. Your stoey is simply amazing. It is so refreshing to find a story with quaint "Aussie" quotes. I love story with angst, so keep it coming. I have told a few of my girlfriends about your story and they are really excited to read a story by an aussie chick. Thank you for putting your story out there and I can't wait for updates and more funny aussie saying to come out of Bella s mouth. Your story is simply amazing.

Shonelle.

P.S. My girlfriends and I live in Queensland.



Author's Response:

Hi Shonelle,

I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. I love writing it and getting people's feedback! Yay to my readers all over Australia! I live in Sydney...love Queensland!

I hope you keep reading and reviewing...working on the next chapter now, but kind of not ready for them to leave the cabin, if you know what I mean :)

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 6:43 AM Title: Rhythm

i think bella's starting to believe him. on one hand, it's too bad edward doesn't have any condoms. but on the other, it's better that they have this time to talk things through without having full-blown sex because bella needs more processing time. i'm glad they had this time at the cabin. who know what'll happen when real life intrudes?

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 2:33 AM Title: Rhythm

Happy to see they finally got that cleared up. Nice to see Bella start to trust in Edward's love for her. Excellent job. ;)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2011 4:35 PM Title: Rhythm

I am so glad that Edward finally told Bella about the condom issue. It was silly that he was keeping it a secret. She was thinking horrible things for no reason. They just need to be open and honest wiht each other.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2011 4:08 PM Title: Rhythm

finallly both on the same page together

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2011 12:28 PM Title: Rhythm

Aww beautiful can't wait til they get back to the hotel though.

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 12:33 AM Title: Interlude

I don't understand why Bella doesn't get that he's not going to make love to her because she told him she wasn't protected. Excellent job, can't wait to see what happens next. ;)

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 30

Sorry I'm behind...again. Great job, does this mean that Bella is finally accepting his feelings towards her and not second guessing them? Can't wait to find out. ;)

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 5:03 PM Title: Interlude

Oh, you're killing me!!! Poor Bella is so out or tune with Edward; she has no idea what he's thinking. At least, she can't believe what he tells her he's thinking and feeling. This is going to be painful, isn't it? Edward has no idea what kind of baggage he's taken on and what it'll take to get through to Bella. Meanwhile, he's busy spazzing about whether or not their relationship can survive the glitz and glamour of his job. What a mess...

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 8:30 PM Title: Interlude

Bella needs to get those other people out of her head. He act like he is happy and that is all that matters. Edward needs to be honest with her about his fear of the paps hurting her. He also needs to tell her why he won't make love to her. She will feel rejected again if he doesn't.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 11:31 AM Title: Interlude

lots of angst going on

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 30

Of course I'm still here. This is an awesome story, and I never know what you're going to do next. I'm glad Bella believed him, but I know she still has a long way to go to get past what Riley did to her self-esteem. Edward will be really good for her, but the pressure of being in the spotlight could really suck. Here's hoping (fingers crossed)!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 30

I am so glad they talked. Edward better get to the drug store and Bella better get to the doctor. They are going to drive each other crazy. Edward needs to tell her why he won't have have intercourse with her. Bella is a little crazy and over thinks everything. Bella really needs therapy to get over Riley. It has been 3 years. She is very damaged. She needs help, so she can learn to trust people again. Riley is still running her life.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 30

great chapter

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 5:14 PM Title: Transposition

Ok, now we're getting somewhere. Bella has a lot of issues, though. What will it take for her to believe that Edward loves her? I hope he catches on before this whole thing blows up in his face. Bella can't accept that someone would really want her. That's so sad. I'm glad Edward's standing up and making decisions to allow him and Bella some time to discuss things. Yay, Edward!!

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 7:56 PM Title: Motif

What the heck is going on here? Riley really did a number on Bella. She's so out of it, she can't tell that Edward's truly in love with her. I mean, I get it. Really, I do. Who would believe that Mr. Hot and Awesome wanted Miss Wallflower, so to speak? But it's awful to see how much Bella needs to be loved, how much Edward feels for her, and how impossible it is for her to accept it.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2011 1:40 PM Title: Transposition

Bella has got to stop dwelling on Riley. Edward is not Riley. It is not fair to Edward. Edward needs to be honest to Bella as soon as Emmett leaves about the pictures. Show her the emails. If he has to get Rosalie on the phone. Do what ever he has to, to get Bella to believe him. She has to while they are at the cabin and it is harder to run.

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 2:58 PM Title: Transposition

Can't wait to see how Edward explains to her about the pictures. Another good one. ;)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 1:16 PM Title: Transposition

hurry back

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 3:14 AM Title: Transposition

Please tell me he's not gonna wait till she sees the pictures for herself before he prepares her!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 5:37 PM Title: Motif

I have read this whole story and after every chapter I get so angry I want to slap Bella for being so stupid. Edward is not Riley. She needs to stop giving Riley the power over her life. She is an embaressment to the female sex. She needs to stop and listen to Edward. Not what her delutional brain is saying, but what he is acually saying. She should know that tabloid lie. She should listen to Angela and Ben. They know him. She could have asked Emmett questions.

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2011 5:48 PM Title: Motif

I feel really bad for Bella, she's so insecure to actually believe how real Edward's feelings are for her. Riley really messed her up. Excellent job. ;)

Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2011 12:46 AM Title: Motif

I get it Riley did a number on her, she's insecure. Belive me I know, I'm insecure and my self esteem is none existante, but this, she can not be that dense... now I just think she need psychological help. Maybe even medication. *le sigh*

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 11:32 AM Title: Motif

yummy

Reviewer: GethrenNZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 7:36 AM Title: Motif

I hope things start picking up soon

Reviewer: mellow974 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 10:56 AM Title: Overture

sweet jesus!I love it! I just want to shake bella!! great plot! I want more!! thks!

Reviewer: mellow974 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2011 1:23 PM Title: Semiquaver

SO FAR SO GOOD! can't wait to read more!! see u in chapter 3!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2011 3:18 AM Title: Overture

I have to hand it to you, this Bella is one of the most stubborn ones I've come across. I really hope she sees the light soon. Great chapter. ;)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2011 3:57 AM Title: Exposition

finally lemons and they are together, now I have to wait for updates, hope to see you soon



Author's Response: It's been wonderful receiving your reviews as you read through each chapter. They have made me smile! Posting quickly, next chapter coming in a few days! Thanks for reading Luv BBxx

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2011 2:58 AM Title: Asterisk

ut oh there g Bellas insecuritiies again

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 10:47 PM Title: Hyphen

great again

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 9:19 PM Title: Demisemiquaver

just a great story deserves more reviews!!!!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 8:59 PM Title: Bracket

he is so cute,  bet e would be a lot like this is real life

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 7:41 PM Title: Quaver

I would have taken advantage of Drunkward ;)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 6:48 PM Title: Sharp

a shout for you

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 6:16 PM Title: Octave Clef

can these two move any slower, I know once bitten twice shy,

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 4:24 PM Title: Alla Breve

great story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 1:54 PM Title: Brace

great

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Date: 09 Feb 2011 1:33 PM Title: Crotchet

awesome

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 1:28 AM Title: Treble-clef

great so far

Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 10:18 PM Title: Exposition

For fucks sake... you just can't let him be happy can ya... she wont fucking believe him. *le sigh*

Reviewer: vampirenites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 3:07 PM Title: Exposition

omg fix this she has to know he loves her and she has to tell him she loves him don't let her ruin this this is the defining moment let her see and feel and know that he loves her truly i awaitmthe next  chapter please make this happen don't let her be so stupid to think he is with someone else

Reviewer: ratchet Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 3:00 PM Title: Exposition

oh god ,about time.....

great chapter

xxxxx

Reviewer: Lasharp15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 6:41 AM Title: Exposition

Thank you so much for the quick update. I really love your story!

Lisa

Reviewer: macca_99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 5:45 AM Title: Exposition

why do i have a bad feeling this isnt going to end how I want it to...

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 5:20 AM Title: Exposition

You were right, I do want to slap Bella again! Lol, somehow I don't think this is gonna turn out how Edward planned. Again, excellent job. I'm dying to find out how this goes. ;)

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 4:10 AM Title: Exposition

I'm not impatient or anything, but I feel like their "situation" has dragged on for a long time. I'm not trying to be rude in any way (please don't take offense, it's just an opinion). For me, as a reader, I sort of lost interest in them getting together. Maybe it hasn't been that many chapters where this miscommunication has gone on- but it just feels like it has been.

Reviewer: aswinfor Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 2:15 AM Title: Caret

OK, truly, I am just annoyed at trying to get to the point here.  Clearly they are going to end up together and now it's just getting frustrating to see them go back and forth and back and forth each chapter.  Just get them together already.  I don't see how this much of a delay can possibly benifit the story in any way.  The first 3/4 of this story so far has been amazing.  The time they spent together in the beginning.  Now it just feels like you don't know what you are going to do with them once they come together so you are prolonging it.  I don't normally criticise like at all and I read a ton of fanfiction, but with most stories I don't like I just stop reading.  But, that is the problem here, I really LOVE this story and the writing has been very good, but I think you've gone off task here.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry you're not enjoying it anymore... believe me, I have a solid plot, do not think I am writing on the fly. This story will go the way I want it to, and what has happened up until this point is deliberate and essential to my plot. I don't want you to be annoyed, but I do want you to feel frustrated, so at least know I have been successful in writing that. It is inevitable in this story that things won't go smoothly at first, there will be more angst, there will be citrus and lemons and all the other things, but I'm not sacrificing my plot to jump into that. It's a journey that will get them to where they need to be and if you decide this fic is not for you, then I completely understand if you flounce. Like you said, there are so many wonderful fic's out there. and my little story is what I need to write...and of course it won't please everyone. I haven't gone off task. If you trust me enough to let me tell the story, then that is fantastic, if not, well, no hard feelings and thank you so much for reading this far... 

There is a music tease to Chapter 26 on my blog, if you're still interested... boydblog.tumblr.com

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: jboogieiceman Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 11:21 PM Title: Caret

first of all emmett is hardly a friend....he's a constant cockblock and his attitude would definetly have him fired...and about not being paid overtime? its not like edward cant pay him....and really bella needs to stop being such an unbelieveable bitch....she has no spine whatsoever.....i know shes got balls its time to show them and for her to bitch edward for his behavior if anything...but the constant running away? Where's the spunk dont make her a wimp



Author's Response:

Bella suffers from very low Self-esteem (no thanks to Riley Biers)... she's blocking Edward because she just doesn't think it can go anywhere... she is comparing herself to Rosalie, she thinks Edward, is out of her league. She's obviously not in the right headspace to accept that Edward could really want her and she reverts back to old ways when she feels weak, she runs...she ran from Riley, she will run until he gets through to her. I believe in HEA's, but there is some more angst to come... I hope you stick with it and experience the journey, no matter hard it is, from both their perspectives... I'm glad these characters illicit such emotional response in you. That is my intension...

 

If you want to continue on that is fantastic... if I don;t hear from you again I'll assume you've flunced, and if so, thank you so much for reading this far...

 

There is a musicaly tease to the next Chapter on my blog : boydblog.tumblr.com

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 5:35 PM Title: Caret

Ugh, sometimes I just want to slap Bella! I seriously cannot wait till the next chapter. Great job as always.



Author's Response:

Thanks sweetie... yes, I want to slap her too, sorry to say, she'll probably still illicit that from you in future chapters :) For a music tease to Chapter 26, take  a look: boydblog.tumblr.com

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: unicorn_bliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 2:54 PM Title: Caret

You know the fact that she refuses to even listen to Edward makes me wonder why Edward is even trying. Like Emmett said he only knew her for three weeks and she took off without even hearing him out.

He comes back just to get her to listen and she still refuses.

Maybe he should leave the chasing after someone to Bella. She certaily knows how to run away. That's for sure.

If those pictures of Rose gets out before he can explain. Tough shit. I can't feel bad for someone who won't let anyone talk to her.

Edward should leave and wait for Bella to come to him when she wants to hear him out. Leave his phone number and address and just go with a note stating he had come there to clear a misunderstanding and if she refuses to even hear him out there was/is no point of even coming here. He has work afterall.



Author's Response:

Edward knows she is the one...he knows she has no idea about Alice's 'gift', he's not going to give up, no matter how reluctant she is to let him speak...maybe that is the trouble, she can block him, his words, but maybe not if he plays his music to her... 

 

chapter 26 tease on boydblog.tumblr.com

 

Thanks so much for reading and suffering through their painful miscommunication :)

Reviewer: guest1977 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 11:37 AM Title: Caret

I am a little confused. I thought the timing was around Thanksgiving. If so, wouldn't it be a little cooler - not warmer? Maybe I am just mixed up.

Author's Response:

It's early August... but Bella wants to go with Angela and Ben to spend Thanksgiving in Forks with Charlie...she's planing ahead. :)

Reviewer: macca_99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 10:36 AM Title: Caret

ok i am remaining calm but to be completely honest if chapter 26 isn't as brilliant as i'm expecing I probably won't stay thaat way...if Edward doesnt just spit it out already...



Author's Response:

I understand, thanks for reading for this long. I hope chapter 26 is as brilliant as you hope :)

 

Love BBxx

Reviewer: keola Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 9:00 AM Title: Caret

I really like htis story and admire you for writing it...but the big reveal is really dragging on and on so it's getting a little boring



Author's Response:

Oh, boring? You didn't like the dream, or the slow rubbing in of sunblock? I think you will love next chapter! Thanks for sticking with it...

 

BBxx

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 4:17 AM Title: Em Dash

Finally! They're back in the same...area. I can't wait to see what Emmett has to say and if Edward will finally tell Bella how he feels and if she'll actually listen. Great job. ;)

Reviewer: hedazzlesme09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 4:44 AM Title: Em Dash

AHHH Please update soon!!!!

Reviewer: jboogieiceman Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 4:41 AM Title: Em Dash

nothing ever happens in this story....seriously its been 6 or 7 chapters of the exact same thing only this time theyre doing it face to face...nobody internalizes as much as this

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 9:03 PM Title: Underscore

You're getting warmer; they're almost ready for a confrontation. At last! I'm so glad you updated. It was a pleasant surprise. This is one of my favorite stories, not because it's listed as a favorite but because your style of writing really appeals to me. I'll be waiting on pins and needles (much like Edward) until the smoke clears.

Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 6:20 PM Title: Underscore

I'm so impatient, I just want this running around in circles to end.

And also I recced your slashy O/S on my blog... http://twistedinslash.blogspot.com/2011/01/one-shot-monday.html it'd be fun to know if you actually got more traffic from it.

Reviewer: LissLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 11:59 AM Title: Underscore

It was yesterday or something, I actually wondered when you were going to update again! I´ll have to do that more often =)

I can't wait for the next chapter! Please with a little less delay if that's possible O:)

xxxLiss



Author's Response:

That's eerie! lol, are you channeling Alice? I promise, next chapter is almost finished, so will post asap..thanks so much for continuing to read! Luv BBxx

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 11:33 AM Title: Underscore

Anothr great chapter, you know I cant get enough.

And thanks from my brother in advance for your fundraising efforts...he lost his home when the township of Emerald was flooded

 



Author's Response:

OMG, I feel for your brother! My rello's in Queensland were so very fortunate not to have any damage. I can't seem to comprehend how devastating it is...

 

Thanks for continuing to read, and review. It means a lot...

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: pribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 12:17 AM Title: Asterisk

i hope you are continuing this story and update soon.

i love this fic but i just hate the rosalie in this story guts. she is like some people i know and to me this kind of attitude is disgusting.

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2010 1:19 AM Title: Asterisk

Sorry for the fail in reviewing, I can honestly say I felt bad for Rosalie throughout this fic but now, all of that out the window. I just hope that Edward will be able to explain to Bella and that she'll actually listen to him. Great job. ;)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 1:28 AM Title: Asterisk

Well. BYE BYE Bella she will never believe him now.

 

We shall see what you do with this.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 1:16 AM Title: Apostrophe

Hanging in there, I don't care for Edward's ways. His I may say it I may not. Too indecisive.  He knows she is not Tanya she is after all just a young writer that is insecure, he can spot that. 

 

She needs to track up to the cabin and write and let his ass find her. Make him work for it. OR not whatever you are writing this.  Some people think they should just fall into place, life is not like that.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 12:41 AM Title: Rest

Ok Edward, you snooze you loose. PERIOD

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 9:49 PM Title: Quaver

Well Edward .. ok he let his guard down.

 

Bella I am worried about.  She did a wonderful thing for him. Bless your heart MS author.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 9:23 PM Title: Barline

Sweet Bella, I hope she does not get hurt.

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