Loved it :)

Loved it :)

Loved it :)

Loved it :)

Loved it :)

Loved it :)

Loved it :)

poor bella and edward

I am so glad that Riley will not be a problem. I just hope Bella won't freak out over Alice's gift. Bella needs to remember that they had the connection with the song before Edward figured in Alice's dream. With or without the dream, they are meant to be together.

Finally they could sort their feelings out and nothing is standing between them due to miscommunication, misunderstanding and misinterpretation.

Well now only Edward has to thell her the story of alice and her gift and everything is going to be okay.

When Edward entered Bellas room and the luggage of charlie and Elaine was there. It would have been pretty funny, when these two were getting their freak on and Edward would have heard it. First making the wrong assumptions again, until Elaine moanded the name of Charlie. With wich Edward would be totally confused. Than Bella would enter the room, because she thought her dad and future step-mother would be else where. than the moaning continues and everything is just slightly surreal for Bella and Edward.

Than the "Meet the parents" would be pretty interesting. ;)

Anyway, I am glad, that Bella and Edward could get past their issues and can go forward now.

Poor Edward, Bella needs to hear the message she left, so she knows what Edward heard. She will understand his duress better. She should know better than to try to leave a message while in a parking garage. They need to verify the where abouts of Riley. I don't trust him. I can see him doing something to try and change Bella's mind about Edward. Edward needs to keep his girl close.

that went better than i'd expected. now that it's over (?), i'm glad bella had the chance to reflect on how much she doesn't need riley in her life. it's nice to know that he wasn't playing with her heart, but he lost his chance at happiness. riley needs to GO HOME! now, maybe we can get through the introductions with charlie and elaine without any mishap. and i'm more than ready for bella to meet other members of edward's family. i guess the most important thing, though, is that bella and edward need some time to reconnect.

Please update soon!!  I am anxious to see what happens next.  Please dont give up this story before it is completed.

I hope you update soon, because I can't wait for Edward to fly out of his trailer and  leave the set. He will run to his car with Emmett chasing after him trying to figure out what is going on with him. Edward slows down enough for Emmett to catch up and says I'll explain while you drive, but hurry up and get me to the hotel. Edward jumps out of the car the second he sees the car stops and runs to find Bella. On the way in he sees Mike, so he asks about Riley, who is in the lobby, Edward walks over to him taps him on the shoulder and punches him out, then proceeds to Bellas room. He is going to make sure Bella knows that she is his forever.

Boy, will Edward be surprized that he has the message wrong and Bella chose him and told off Riley. He also gets to meet Charlie tonight. Surprize!

great poor-reception message! it was certainly enough to create massive angst for dear edward. i can't wait to read the next chapter.

hmmm looks like Riley has made his appearance too little too late mister *wags finger in disapproving gesture*

Oh, what an evil cliffie you left us on!  Great chapter, I can't wait for Bella to meet the parents.  And I totally agree telling Jessica would NOT be a good idea, she wouldn't believe it until it is splashed on magazines anyways.  I assume Riley is in the hotel waiting on Bella.  I hope she doesn't fall for his story...even if he didn't mean to hurt her, he still did and she has her soul-mate in Edward so hopefully any feelings for Riley have faded.  I hope, they don't need anymore drama in their lives!

wow, i was nervous! i kept thinking riley would somehow show up and ruin things. is he really on his way to canada? (rhetorical question, no pressure to answer) i don't know if knowing how riley honestly feels about bella makes things better or worse.... but i'm so glad edward and bella finally had some time to themselves.

Edward loves Bella so much and he needs to tell her about the soulmate search. Bella gets skittish so easy. They don't need any more problems. They already have to deal with Riley when he shows up. I hope Bella is strong enough to tell him to fly back home that he is not wanted or needed.

Such a worse part for the cliff hanger.

Somehow now Riley seems not to be such a bad guy, but he broke Bellas heart for his own selfish reasons. Although his reasons are understandable, I hope Bella will stay with Edward and that he can convince her, that they should be together forever.

There will be probably a great turmoil, when Riley arrives in Canada and sees Bella with Edward. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

I am so happy for them. I think that Bella needs to get to the nearest doctor and get on birth control asap. The pull of each other's soul is stronger than their brain power and worrying about condoms. Bella should have been ashamed of herself for putting Edward in that position. She should have ran out of the shower and gotten them, if she wanted him that bad. They are not ready for children.

Nice chapter. Nearly all walls within Bella are down, now the happily ever after can happen. But I guess some more small obstacles are in their way.

So happy they are finally getting together!

it was a very good chapter but the wait was was too long

I was hoping you would update eventually and it was worth the wait. Keep up the good work.

Damn! I think firstly, B needs some serious therapy, secondly, E's going to inadvertently screw up. 

B goes from acting like a woman to a sniveling child so quickly, it makes my head spin.

Finally they talked before it got too heated between them. and now there is mostly everything said for these two about their fears and the rumors around them. Hopefully Bella will believe that Edward just wants to protect her from the media and let her in his family. The meeting of the families should also be interesting in the future.

Very heartwretching chapter.

AHHHHHHH the next chapter they better finally do it or might just have to twitter harass you until they do LOL.

Excellent none the less i am glad they talke dthrough their issues.

OMG, can these two ever catch a break, I say someone smack some sence into these two once and for all.  I would really like these two to talk it out...  It is about time they both jus laid it on the line and really talk.  By the time they are finished I would really like them to understand that neither one of them can go on with out thei other.

I would be nice for Bella to understand what Edwards life is really like and how the public perceive him.  Bella really need to ask these question and get it all out in the open.

Edward really needs to appoligise for not at least saying her to her or even just a quick glance and simle or wink hello.  Understand why he did not but he needs to say sorry for that and explain himself completely.

In the end make sure he does not forget the condoms, I dont think I could handle it... again!

Wonderful chapter but enough with the people fucking it up for them... I know that there will be more but its enough now, both of them need to grow thick skins if they are going to make it in Hollywood!  It is about time they did it together.

Fiorella

YAY!!!!!!!!

They talked and opened up.  I am so proud of them, I know the road head is going to be long and hard but I feel if they are honest with each other and talk they should be right.

I really would like to see Edward put Rose in her place for what she did.  She really needs to be brought down a peg or 20!

I am about to jump in the water and pick up that rock Bella was stading on and smack her in the head with it, that should knock some sence into her.

Can these tow not catch a friggen break... I am about to throw my laptop against the wall!!  I really want everyone to fuck off, and Edward to lock her in a fucking room and get this converstaion started othersies they are going to blink and they will be 50 and still not had the conversation!!!!

Still loving the story... just want to knock their blocks off!

yes great idea and great chapter, now just hurry back!

another tortured chapter. bella's driving me crazy, but i totally understand her need for reassurance. poor baby...

Yeah you will probably get a lot of yelling. lol.  I am getting a little bored with her insecurites.  I mean dont get me wrong she needs to stand up for herself and tell him she wont be his little secret.  Its just exhuasting to keep reading her self loathing. She needs to grow a back bone already.

I don't flounce and I try t be patient but it's amazing she can stand up let alone run without a backbone

OMG you brought tears to my eyes. I felt nearly every ounce of Bella's pain deep down inside. Edward is so fricking clueless he just keeps hurting her over and over i so wish he would just pull his head out of his ass.

Yes she's running away again but really what else is she supposed to do sit there and watch him break her heart by ignoring her or go back to the reastaurant and have it out with him yeah way to keep the realtionship under the radar.

Ah i'm really pissed at Edward right now. he bet have one hell of a grand gesture planned :(

poor bella by eddie trying to make things perfect and by going to 'shower' all of the time he is making her overthink things. these 2 need to sit and have a chat about everything!!!!

aww these two are so cute! good to see they are still trying to talk about things they will really need that. i wonder if rose will be even more sorry now that she knows bella is his girlfriend and not just a fangirl? maybe she will realize peoples real lives are being fucked with, and that shit is just not cool.

oh this is gonna be bad. still kinda wondering about em and rose, is there something going on there or does rose just wanna start it with him? i can only hope that when and if rose gets together with em he helps to ground her and bring her back towards reality and away from the tricks and schemes of holywood.

silly bella she should stop and think that he was all for going all the way until he asked her if she was proected and she said no. that was when he started pulling things back. glad she is taking the time to make out on the couch definately a great pastime at any age.

wow bella really is drawing a lot of similarities between her time with riley and her time with ed. i wonder if rose is gonna go hide away with em for the next 2 days? still not sure what's up with them. with her.

well at least eddie realized what was going on and stopped it. now he just has to find a way to prove that he loves her and wants her. then they can move forward.

oh this is just getting rediculous! bella is running away because she wants him and doesn't want to be hurt anymore, ed is running after her only to be shot down continuously, and em is not sure if ed is crazy and stalking her!

*palms face while shaking head*

the new movie is a definate. bella is oing away to the cabin, a perfect plsace to have the big talk. almost there boys and girls ... almost there...

eddie just can't get a break can he? it would be awesome if bella could play the girl in ed's new movie. maybe the director will meet her once ed and bell get their shit together, and director man will be all she's perfect! cause it sounds like she would be. lol

charlie and elaine are too cute!

well miss b looks like she is trying to grow and move forward, very insightful for a teenager. she is trying not to make the same mistake twice...

oh poor bella ed should have just spit it out when he had the chance instead of rambling on and on. and eddie!?! poor guy is losing his mind and that message is so not gonna help.

poor eddie! he just can not seem to get it out!

so we now have the story behind alice and what dream vision bella fit into. bella is trying to play things low key and eddie is gonna have to turn things up. i wonder who will crack first?