Date: 22 Oct 2010 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
I can only imagine what Edward's reaction is going to be....I hope you have the chance to update again soon.
Date: 22 Oct 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm really tired of Jake, he is so stupid can't he just take the hint that Bella is just not intrested in him. You would think he would get it when she is always turning him down and trying to avoid him.
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 21
Nothing about this chapter is a fail! I think it's a very important chapter, and it just emphasizes how seriously damaged Bella's psyche was by James, and she has every right to be particularly vulnerable considering the reunion fiasco. The betrayal of the man she loved is fresh on her mind, so who would blame her for believing (even a little bit) the woman who answered her boyfriend's phone? Thanks for sharing.
Date: 22 Oct 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 24
Good chapter; waiting for the update....
Date: 22 Oct 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 24
omg... i cant wait til next chapter... wow.. i didnt evwen realize that charlie hasnt met edward yet
plz update soon
Date: 21 Oct 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 24
well i would of told jake off earlier ! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming
Date: 21 Oct 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 24
I am really sick of Jacob.....
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 24
Amethysts are purple. ;)
Otherwise, great chapter!
Date: 21 Oct 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 24
was a good chappie, but i saw that you said his eyes are amethyst.. that's purple, also, my birthstone. Emerald is the word you were looking for there. otherwise, a good chapter. really like this story and can't wait to read the next chappie.
angel
Date: 21 Oct 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 23
well im glad hes back home with bella! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming
Date: 21 Oct 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 23
omg.. hes home.... yeah!!!!
plz update soon
Date: 20 Oct 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
awwww you''d think he'd sleep on the couch at first though. Thanks for the inital James insight.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
hmmm this james story has me intrigued.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
Say yes you idiot!!!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
ugh poor b with thte puppy thing
Date: 20 Oct 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
aww story looks cute
Date: 20 Oct 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm so glad he's finally home and w/ Bella. Great Chapter.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 22
I can't believe Tanya could actually be like that. Then to add to it that she knew all a long about some of the Lauren, James and Bella issue just makes it that much worse.
Great Chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 23
OMG I love it!! I was so happy that he got home sooner rather than later.
I loved it, I cant wait to read what happens next :)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 22
omg.. i am soooo excited for next chapter
plz update soon
Date: 18 Oct 2010 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow, Tanya is PSYCHO. Why do I get the feeling we haven't seen the last of her?
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 22
Tanya is a bitch and deserves more
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
Can't wait to see what happens.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
Awesome, loved how Emmett and Edward were there for her. It would have been perfect if Rosalie had gotten some punches in too. :)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 14
Nice dream.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 22
Damn Tanya is freaking crazy and I am pretty sure we haven't seen the last of her. Hopefully she will pop up when Bella is around and Bella can kick her ass!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 12
Yikes, intense.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
Okay...so born, not unborn.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 10
Sophie...unborn child?
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 9
Uh-oh, hope she doesn't freak at his words.
Nice job on the lemon!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ah, good. Worries set to rest.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
Hmmm...something seems off. I really hope that James didn't put him up to this.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
I hope she tells Edward; I'd love to read about him kicking James' ass!
Date: 17 Oct 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wouldn't she have him sleep on the couch? Or is that passe now?
Date: 17 Oct 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hmmm...don't want to guess. I'll wait and see. :)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
Lol, love the RPattz reference.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait for the E/B reunion. :)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Liking so far...I'm guessing that the ugly duckling is turning into the beautiful swan...what a coincidence. :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it!!! Tanya should be at 'jump off a cliff' level right now for what she has done.
I really hate Lauren, Tanya and James, they all need to talk a long walk off a short pier.
:)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow Tanya's a real bitch in this story too lol. I doubt this is the end of Tanya?
Date: 17 Oct 2010 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
well i hope that him talking to her about it all dosent come to bit him in the ass in forks with bella! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 17 Oct 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 22
I'm glad that Edward aired it all out in front of Carmen and Kate.
I hope this is the end of Tanya. I would really like to see Lauren suffer for the pain she continues to cause Bella. She is no innocent victim. She is very vindictive. She had my sympathy but after the reunion and now this...no more!!
Best Part:
"Just a quick one really," I wave my hand between us, as though it's something silly and I want to blow it off. "Just wanted to know what possessed you to tell my girlfriend that Katie and I were sleeping together?" I make sure that I smile, my nose crinkling up as I look at Tanya.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
very sweet, loving. he is so tender with her you cant help but get pulled in. my only thought on this is no mention of protection. im just saying.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 21
Good Chapter. Glad Bella did not do anything stupid and was able to hear Edward out. Looking forward to Edward telling Tanya off.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
he probaly forced himself on her, asshole. poor bella. go edward, do your thing; Baby.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
this so feels like my life. love love, love, can i have an Edward? lol great plot line, cant wait to see where this goes..
Date: 16 Oct 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMG... she was gonna leave
holy crap.. plz update soon... i cant wait til the showdown
Date: 16 Oct 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
Tanya's a bitch. And we all know it. So i hope that one daay, Tanya flies to forks and tries to flirt with edward and I REALLY want to see bella snap :)
Great job though!
Date: 16 Oct 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 21
well i think that she has every right to be inscure! cant wait till the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 21
This chapter was NOT an utter fail! I wanted to know what was going on in Bella's head, and I am sure others wanted to as well :)
I am looking forward to the Tanya tongue lashuing though! *giggles*
Date: 16 Oct 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 21
I really hope that Edward lets Tanya have it. That little stunt Tanya pulled is definitely not something Bella should have had to deal w/.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 21
Very disappointed the the Tanya/Edward showdown didn't happen...
Correction needed:
“Oh, no sorry Hun, he and Tanya are sleeping. It’s been a long night. I would rather not disturb them.” – The voice lowered to a whisper. “If you know what I mean.”
Author's Response:
Thank you! Well spotted xx
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 20
LOL I can't wait to see Edward hand Tanya her ass!!! He is a good friend for going especially since Carmen and Eleazer helped support him when he was in school. I hope that Bella likes the stone that Edward had made for Sophie.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
so i don't know what its like to lose a child but I lost my baby cousin he would be 13, i think I'm a little fuzzy of hat year he was born, next month i miss him terribly I just remember it happening right after my birthday.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
with the exception of the time ( it would have been 10:30 in FL when the plane took off) i love this story.
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 20
omg.... seriously what the hell
edward is sooooo sweet .... i want him for myself
plz plz plz update soon... i wonder how bella reacted when she talked to tanya???? i wonder how the convo edward and tanya will go???
Date: 11 Oct 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
hope edward bitches her out good
Date: 11 Oct 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 20
Tanya is a disgusting individual to play with Edward's life like that. He dropped everything in his life to make time for his Ex girlfriend and her family when most men would have told them to go straight to hell. He spent his time arranging her father's funeral and she tries to sabbotage his relationship with the love of his life?! He should cut all ties with the Denali women. They are nothing but trouble. Both she and Kate were trying to use their father's death to manipulate him?! Disgusting! He should leave straight away!
Best Part:
I pay a quick visit to a florist and memorial store as there is something I would very much like to do for Bella. She has nothing to remind her of Sophie apart from her photographs and tiny hand and footprints she was given after her birth. I want to buy a memorial plaque with her name on it, so that Bella can lie it somewhere special. Perhaps down at La Push where she scattered her tiny daughters ashes. Somewhere where she can maybe sit and talk to her, and lay flowers.
I find the perfect item. It’s a small oval marble flat stone. You can get words and names carved. Its eight inches wide, by six inches high. Just the thing I am looking for. I really think Bella is going to love it.
I speak to the shop owner and explain what I would like.
Sophie Charlie Swan
Born too soon
Gone, but never forgotten.
Flying with the Angels.
The text is going to be in a bold script and in pink. It’s going to take a week or so, so I ask for her to have it shipped to Forks, in Bella’s name.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 20
loved the chappy can't wait for the next one. tanya is being a dumbass but then again when isn't she.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 20
Not bad. I was expecting texts from his phone saying its over and he and K are back together.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
Good story! Glad Bella believed Edward over Tanya.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 20
Whew~!!! Well, we knew Tanya would be up to something. At least E and B are very open with each other and there are no assumptions.
Great update, I look forward to the next :) I hope Tanya gets ripped! lol
Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
I hope Edward really lets into Tanya....Did Kate know anything about Tanya's little game? I really hope not.
Is Bella okay? Or is she just missing Edward? I hope nothing has happened or that she believed Tanya.
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 20
hope edward puts tanya in her place,think kate's got something to do with it too,hope he can get home to bella when he said,i think the sister's are going to try and stop him,,,,, they are nothing but trouble.
excellent ch. looking forward to next up date.c.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 20
Definitely can't wait for the next chapter!I can't wait to read about Edward confronting Tanya! I hope you update again soon!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
oh no.... tanya's in trouble.....
loved it great chapter
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh great...I have a feeling that we are on our way to a very trying triangle. I just hope Edward stays true to his relationship w/ Bella. I would hate for her to get hurt, again.
I really like your story.:)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
well i hope that hes sets her straight! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 11 Oct 2010 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 16
Uh James! I knew he would be there!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
WTF is kate doing at the end?
Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 19
Umm b*tch better back up and step away from BELLA'S man!!!! I hope that Edward lets Kate and Tanya both know that he has moved on and that he has found the love of his life. Please update soon since you we're very mean and left another cliffhanger!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
*plots Kate's demise*
Loved the update, absolutely livid of the contents. *growls uncontrollably*
Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 18
Is Kate going to cause problems? Is Emmett going to be okay? Is James gone now or will he be back to torment? Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh well, this is just great, his family seem to prefer Kate, Bella is going to feel so insecure and how the Hell is Edward going o get out of this? "You've come back to me"...I hate this.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
well i hope he sets her straight ! i cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
These Denali women are ridiculous! Edward should have stayed away but since he didn't he had better set them all straight right away about Bella or he doesn't deserve her.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 19
I don't think Edward should have gone to Florida. He's not Kate's boyfriend anymore, and I don't think he should have taken off of work. I think it's very irresponsible to take off of work that he havn't even started yet, just for girl who he used to date. Tanya and her mom could have helped her if she wasn't letting them help her they could have sent her to a hosital. It's not Edward's responsiblity to help Kate. He should tell Kate that he has a girlfriend.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
yeah, he better put that girl straight or he's gonna have some problems. Can't wait to see how he handles this :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 18
awesome chapter! Aside from the fact that James was in it... lol
I really dont like him. -_-
Love it, cant wait to read more :)
Date: 09 Oct 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
well i hope its nothing bad! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 09 Oct 2010 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 17
glad shes sticking up for her self!
Date: 09 Oct 2010 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 18
What does Kate want?!
Date: 09 Oct 2010 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 17
Lauren is truly pathetic!
Date: 29 Sep 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love your story so far.Please update soon im dieingto know whats gong to go down.
Date: 26 Sep 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
I want to know are Carlisle and Esme are Edward biological parent or they his adopt parent? I want to know before I start read this story. I only like to read story when they are his biological parent. i hate story when they are Emmett or Alice biological parent. emmett. It was weird if you make emmett and alice their biological parent.
Author's Response: I'm sorry but I don't quite understand your review... Don't always judge a story by the character relationships because they might surprise you... Edward is CxE adopted son. Emmett is his Brother by adoption but IS CxE biological child. Rosalie is egged to Emmett and Alice and Jasper are married. If you had read the first chapter you would see that this is all covered. This is a Bella/Edward story when it comes to the crunch and I hope you give it a try despite your "opinion" of it being "weird.". Thanks.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
My guess would be James, but I'm sure I'm wrong...
Date: 25 Sep 2010 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 16
JAMES???????
Date: 25 Sep 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
OMG Who is he? Hurry with the update!!!!
Date: 25 Sep 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
its james it has to be ! cant wait till the next chapter i hope its soon !
Date: 23 Sep 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
well im glad that they are working everything out and having lots and lots of sex! cant wiat till the next chpater
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
Very sweet ending to the chapter!
About updates: you have NOTHING to apologize for! My goodness, two updates a week would be awesome! Even one update a week would be impressive. There are a lot of stories that I'm reading that don't get updated but once or twice a MONTH. You're doing GREAT!
Date: 20 Sep 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
great story write more!
Date: 20 Sep 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
Really enjoying this story, cant wait to read more.