Date: 31 Dec 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 31
awww sweet chapter. cant wait for the next
Date: 31 Dec 2010 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 31
Aww, he's so sweet and sappy. Emmett should definitely pull his man card, but it's adorable.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 31 Dec 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 29
i went to Forks this summer and it was unbelievable...words can not describe the beauty of the national part, lapush, hurricane ridge....Forks is such an awesome town, cant convince my hubby to move tho...lol
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 31
I loved this chapter. Although lemons are fine, sometimes they get to be too much when it's in just about every chapter. This was perfect! And I can't wait for the next one.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 31
im glad that hes proposing! i hope she says yes! keep the chapters comming
Date: 20 Dec 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
that was powerful......my daughter, emily, was born at 27wks, 1# 7 oz, 13 inches long. she passed after 19 days and would be 9 now...
thank you
Date: 19 Dec 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 30
Now I want to have sex in a hot spring. Nice job!
Date: 19 Dec 2010 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 30
awww.... plz update soon
Date: 19 Dec 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 30
hes such a sweet guy ! cant wait to see what he has up his sleeve!
Date: 19 Dec 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 30
He's so very sweet and sexy.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 30
OMG How romantic!
Date: 19 Dec 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 30
awww sweet chapter
Date: 18 Dec 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 29
Great job, thanks for writing.
Date: 04 Dec 2010 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 29
awww, Edward is so sweet and romantic, can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter...
Date: 04 Dec 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 29
Aw, sweet. But I am curious as to what was on his computer. I'm hoping it was the reservations or something having to do with the resort.
Or a ring.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 29
oh.... edward is such a sweetheart... i wish my boyfriend was like him...
plz update soon... i cant wait to read more about this trip:)
Date: 03 Dec 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 29
aww he is so sweet.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 29
aawww, naughty Cullen!!
I wonder what is in the garment bags?? *giggles*
Love this!!
Date: 03 Dec 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
hahahahaha....i do the same exact thing! I comment and then say Dammit that was too forward..llmaoo then im stuck between leaving it and deleting it...soo i can definitely relate to her!! lol
Date: 03 Dec 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 29
ooooooh edward is so sweet. you see Robert is wrong we all want an Edward...though a Robert would be nice too ;) awesome chappy as allways i love reading your story
Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 28
awww.. plz update soon
Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 28
Love the story. Can't wait for the next chapter. So what is missing? Something sinister or more cyclical in nature?
Date: 27 Nov 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 28
Is overly emotional Bella preggers? Will Edward propose on their date he has planned for her?
Date: 27 Nov 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 28
Good chapter. I liked the teasing. I need to remember that.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wow, Edward, knight in shing armor or bad ass?
Date: 26 Nov 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 16
OMG... Is that James at the reunion? Certainly Lauren did not take him back, did she?
Date: 26 Nov 2010 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
So, how long before he asks her to move in I wonder?
Date: 26 Nov 2010 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
Ahhh.. Edward dreamt about being married to Bella and having kids.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 13
Edward took that rather well.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 12
After reading about Sophie and what happened I hope Edward goes easy on her.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 11
Emmett and his big mouth.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 10
I wonder... did Bella have a baby to James? Sophie?
Date: 26 Nov 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 9
Poor Bella. She even thought of James while having sex with Edward. I hope his memory doesn't haunt her forever. Besides, I don't think whether you're male or female, you'd like the idea of the person you were with thinking of somebody from their past while having sex with you. I can't even believe she had coherent thoughts at the time.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 28
He is too perfect for words. I want one.
Happy Turkey Day!
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 26 Nov 2010 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
Is Esme going to book the church and rent the hall or what? Her enthusiasm I think, made Edward even happier.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 7
Is it hot in here? Wow. They keep saying they should move slower but I don't think their bodies got that memo.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow, what an asshole. May he get an STD that causes his male bits to shrivel and fall off.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love how the universe is just pushing them together. However unplanned it was... they're having a first date sleep over.
James sounds like quite a catch... not.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, things are progressing very quickly between them. I know they're not moving so quickly on purpose it just seemed to occur that way. I know I said it already in my earlier review but they really are stinkin' cute together.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Looks like Edward isn't quite as shy as he used to be. They were just too stinkin' cute together in this chapter. I hope she let's him pick her up.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, you'd have thought after all that time Jake would have gotten the message. He's really persistant. Well atleast he's not a quitter. He must have a plan that includes the term wear-her-down.
I'm really excited about the almost date that Bella and Edward are planning.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was looking for something new to read when I came across your story. I loved this first chapter! I totally relate to Bella, the whole forced into facebook. Friend or not to friend... pokes, event requests, updating your status, being tagged in photos, and the worst ... the games. If I wanted to farm I would have become a farmer. lol I am a horrible facebook friend and feel as though to be a good one would be like having another full time job.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 12
I have only recently "found" your story. Thank you for dealing with the subject of pregnancy/infant loss so delicately. I myself have had 5 miscarriages. The pain is something that never goes away. People who have not suffered such a loss often don't understand that it is losing a child, even though you never got to meet them.
I am enjoying this story and can't wait to continue to read.
CM
Date: 26 Nov 2010 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 28
aww such a sweet man
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 28
lol awesome :)
Date: 25 Nov 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 28
oh my goodness i am gonna have the people at caribou think i am insane laughing like this DrSnuggleward that is freaking cute :) loved the chappy you rock....i can feel for you I wrote an entire fan fic for Inuyasha never got to post it and mu lap top when kablooey... two years later my brilliant IT friend said "i think i can extract it from the hard drive so if i do get it even if you hate anime i will let u know i posted it.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm confused about the timeline of this story. Two years ago Bella would have been 26. Why would she still be in college and student teaching? Did she not go to college right away after high school graduation?
Author's Response: Bella studied other subjects before she went into teaching, and to grad school, so went into her working life later than others, also some more significant things happened to her (which if you keep reading, you will discover) which would have delayed her career slightly :)
Date: 10 Nov 2010 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 27
GODDDDDD HE IS PERFECT!!! Can i order one like him???? HMMMM I wish!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 27
plz update soon
Date: 10 Nov 2010 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 27
well i hope he dose it soon! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 10 Nov 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 27
Snuggleward, I like that. :)
Good chappie!
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 27
Wow. Nice Lemonade dear!!!
Loved it, that was HAWT!
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 09 Nov 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 27
Ooh... Nice!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 27
yummy lemony goodness
Date: 08 Nov 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 26
I am loving this story.
Date: 08 Nov 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 26
omg.. what the helll... you cant leave it like that..lol
plz update soon... like really really soon
Date: 08 Nov 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 26
I love the story. Can't wait until the next chapter and see what Bella's reaction is to Edward saying that he told her father that he wanted to marry her.
Also a small information tibit. Vitamin R is actually Rainier Beer. It is mostly found and sold in the Pacific Northwest. I do understand that you are the writer and it is in your right to have creative influences for the story. I am not putting you down as an author or anything. I grew up around Vitamin R and getting it for my dad growing up as a kid. A lot of people don't understand the reference of Vitamin R in the Twilight Saga unless people are from the Pacific Northwest. It is just a small pet peeve of mine. Again I do wish to put you down or your work. I love this story and can't wait until its updated again.
Date: 07 Nov 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 26
well cant wait to see what happens between these 2 ! keep the chapters comming
Date: 07 Nov 2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
great chapter. Dunno that's how I would have told her though.
Date: 07 Nov 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 26
Now, THAT was a cliffhanger! I can't wait to see how this goes.
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 26
Awww, Eddie is a shoe in!!! Go Chief!
Loved it!!
Date: 06 Nov 2010 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 25
Good chapter. Edward needs to slow down, though. His talk about marriage would freak me out!
Waiting for the update....
Date: 06 Nov 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 25
Okie Dokie smokie. Charlie.. he has to see she is HAPPY. She has told him no Jake. Jake wants to be the MAN. She says fine but not HER MAN.
Edward is good for her, in a thousand ways. They have the same vision and the same wants. That is big in this life, along with love. respect and PASSION.
CAN"T ASK FOR MORE.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 24
Things are not complicated when you handle them as they happen, not putting them off. She has let this all "fester". Really not much like a cop's daughter.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 23
Tanya... the devil's mistress personafied.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
A man with a Plan! I guess they think these things, but I venture it is less that 30% that do. Most are too worried about junk.
Work, Sex, Sports, Sex, Money.
Date: 05 Nov 2010 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 25
:)
I think a wonderful outtake would be some of the letters that Edward wrote to Bella in highschool, or perhaps what Emmett thought when he found them!
Date: 05 Nov 2010 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
Isn’t it obvious that I’m a cat person?
Best line!
Date: 05 Nov 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 25
woohoo time to meet chalrie
Date: 05 Nov 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 25
omg... edwards going to meet charlie...:)
i cant wait:)
plz update soon
Date: 04 Nov 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 25
well i hope for her sake that charlie like him! keep the chatpers comming
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wow baby talk!! Awesome, little Eddies and Bellies!!
Loved it!
Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
Lol love the Part about screaming like a Robert Pattinson fan-girl
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
maybe jake will get the message now. prob not. will prob go tattle to charlie.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
ok this line has me worried: "It would help Lauren!" how would eddie being out of the way help lauren? cause B would be hurt? cause james wants to hurt her more? ugh
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 21
cant wair for the showdown..... maybe caremn can smack slutya since eddie really cant
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 20
ugh slutya is an idiot. like he wouldnt find out? like that would make him stay.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
whoopsie..... kate really has the wrong idea there.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 18
ugh now why would kate be calling after all this time.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 17
laurne is an idiot
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
gotta be james of course.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 15
lady garden. dont think ive heard that one b4
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 13
awwww he is too sweet.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 12
poor thing. Em should have hit him more.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
hmmmsophie huh...
Date: 25 Oct 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 9
awwww sweet lemon.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
awww for mama esme
Date: 24 Oct 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 23
Good chapter!
Date: 23 Oct 2010 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
hmmm i wanna wake up next to an eddie
Date: 23 Oct 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
some men are scum
Date: 23 Oct 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 24
Interesting that Tanya is friends with Lauren. Such a small world. Jake is very annoying. Enjoyed the reunion with Bella and Edward.
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 24
LOL, I love it. *turns on intercom* Will someone please help Mr. Black pick his jaw up of the floor? Thank you.
*giggles*
Love it.