Date: 30 Sep 2012 3:47 PM Title: Simple
Please, please, please tell me you're going to continue this story. I love it! Can't wait to find out what happens. Beautiful work! :-)
I suck at updating on here. The story is actually finished. You can find it on FF under the same penname
Date: 19 Jun 2012 11:01 PM Title: Wanted
I was a bit confused at all the chapter 4's posted but only one being accessible. I'm sure its a simple posting issue.
Was this story originally on FFN.net? I think I have read further out than this current chapter but don't want to spoil it for your fans.
I do like this story very much. A young Bella that has already experienced so much loss and a determined Edward just coming into his own.
Alice is also very determined to land her man.
Date: 24 May 2011 9:17 AM Title: Worth It?
Again, another story that is unique and different from the normal story and plot. I'm so glad I found you from the Tsunami compilation. I'm really interested to see how Edward and Bella eventually bridge the gap and get together. Something tells me he probably has noticed her but isn't sure how to go about it or is in denial of his feelings. It's nice that Bella has a good friend to confide in who is in the same predicament she's in. Can't wait for more! :)
Date: 06 Nov 2010 7:57 PM Title: Worth It?
"Did someone run over Mr. Jack?" I asked concerned. Mr. Jack was Alice's little pug dog that meant the world to her. In my opinion he was the ugliest, annoying little thing ever. He didn't like any one accept for Alice and he put up with me because Alice liked me, but I swear every time I come over he gives me evil looks.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 1:04 PM Title: Worth It?
First of all, WTF was Maria and Jasper thinking kissing like that in front of a student. Does Maria see the way Alice looks at Jasper and wanted to flaunt in her face that he is hers? It sucks to be so young and so in love with someone like they are. At least Bella doesn't look at the situation with stars in her eyes like it will work out. She's a bit more realistic that Edward might only have sister/daughter feelings for her. At least she knows she wants to be happy and in love in five years.
Not bad for an unbeta'd chapter. I didn't notice too many errors. I could never post an unbeta'd chapter. Mine are always too much of a mess.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 10:58 AM Title: Drifting
I am intrigued, this story sounds like it can be very intense when you finally get it going. I really would love to know when you update and I don't think TWCS has authors alert. I think it was wonderful that Edward took Bella in, she has been pushed around and tossed around and this was her only real family. I hope things work out for her, you have to admit its a bit racy, isn't he her step brother? I wonder what is going through his mind? Will you be doing any EPOV's? I would love for them to be together, they aren't actually blood related but she would have to be an adult first. That means he needs to wait until she is over 18 considering he is 9 years older than her, that makes a huge impact on them and where their lives are headed.
My E- Mail is JRAlderton72@aol.com, please let me know if you decide to update this story. I don't want to miss out because I really want to know how this story turns out.
Date: 22 Sep 2010 12:15 PM Title: Simple
It's intersting and witty. It's funny how she got caught daydreaming- it's happened to all of us. You know teachers asking you a question to put you on the spot because you're not focused. Don't kid yourself they notice when their students are not paying attention.
Date: 22 Sep 2010 12:12 PM Title: Drifting
I didn't get that last bit after the 'my sleep would be peaceful now'. Did she go into another dream sequence? Are you going to write this in Edward's POV as well. Reason I ask is because her explanation of Edward's dating life seems as if he already might harbor some unexplored feelings for her. He obviously loves her, but he just doesn't realize the type of love he has for her? One more question how will you be updating will it be on a schedule or random? No pressure intended just a mere inquiry. I really like the premise of your story line. I look forward to reading more.
Date: 03 Sep 2010 5:25 PM Title: Simple
OOOH so far soo good. I love Edward so is Edward like away at school that's why he doesn't spend time with Bella or does he live at home too? just wondering because if she's raised as his sister wouldn't she not feel for him as a sister would? Yep I have questions and you have the answers so I am here for the remainder. lol keep up the great work. i love it so far. thanks again bye