Date: 12 Jul 2014 6:09 PM Title: GOODBYE OLD, HELLO NEW
awesomely cool story!!!! a few points that were a bit confuseing though? what happened to her metal rod in her back? and i thought he was going to inject her heart with his venom first? ;D
vampire venom heals all, but she still has it but it has no effect on her now and he was going to but things happened too quick for him to do that.
Date: 02 Dec 2012 5:07 PM Title: GOODBYE OLD, HELLO NEW
I think you did a great job. I think maybe tie up loose ends with outtake of amy and what bella gave her and reaction to it. I also think maybe let bella peak in amy life when she has a daughter and names her bella. I would maybe do a few outtakes but not a sequel. You have done a great job with it but outtakes I suggest them.
Thank you, i didn't think about outtakes but i most definetly will now! I was so worried about the time delay between this chapter and the last one but Real Life just got so busy and all over the place that i just couldn't si down to write anything for ages. I think i'll start on those out takes so keep your eyes open for them! thank you again!
Date: 16 Nov 2012 2:18 AM Title: GOODBYE OLD, HELLO NEW
i am so happy that u updated.....i loved the chapter..hope u will get a sequel....how is ur 2 month old?
thank you for reviewing, i am not going to make any promises but when / if i do a sequel you and any other who have liked this story will be the first to know if you have added me to your fave author list! and my almost 3 month old now is doing great and growing evey day!.
Date: 23 Jun 2011 5:23 PM Title: A Wedding and A Goodbye
so glad they included amy and let them say goodbye and have closure.
thank you for your review...i always like getting good ones! i didn't want to leave things with Amy up in the air, I didn't want people to write in to me asking me what the hell will happen to her as she was there for Bella before the Cullens were so i had to do something...this was the part that took the most out of me and the longest to write!
thank you again for your review.
Date: 23 Jun 2011 9:48 AM Title: A Wedding and A Goodbye
O.M.G., I've cried so much on this chapter. I think this was my favorite one. Awesome job!
Thank you so very much, i worked really hard to get this one out and i was so worried it wasn't up to scratch but i am relieved to find that my worries were for nothing! i am writing the next chapter but i don't know when it will be up as i dont what to jinx myself and then have a longt wait again and i really dont want that! thanks again
Date: 10 Aug 2010 1:56 PM Title: Edward's Point Of View
poor bella. liked EPOV.
thank you...I wasn't going to do any POV changes but writer's block hit me and when i thought about doing this change of POV my mind went into a flurry of activity that I just had to get out of my head.
Date: 12 Jun 2010 11:30 PM Title: My Hell
Hey - R-E-L-A-X!! I was just clarifying your situation. Be stupid if I left it for 6 chapters then demanded to know where the baby was?!
it's all good, I just don't want anyone to be left confused in any way.
Date: 12 Jun 2010 6:33 PM Title: Charlie's Demise and a Fateful shock
It seems that she is so fragil and it is almost sad that she still has to endure the prospect of not being able to enjoy her wedding and honeymoon. That poor child has gone through so much! At lease let her have a good experencie being human one last time. The story is awesome!!!!
her body is the only thing that is fragil, i assure you. there is only good experiences ahead for her because i believe in 'happily ever after' endings so stay tuned. there isn't that many more chapters to go now.
just to let you know that this was losely based on my own life experiences and so i am in a good spot right now so i don't want to hurt bella anymore either.
thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 12 Jun 2010 3:57 PM Title: Charlie's Demise and a Fateful shock
Ah no - DAMNIT!! I guess you weren't planning on a baby in this story 'cause with this news I doubt they'll be able to have one before the big B-I-T-E!! B+.
so sorry to disappoint on the baby front...i was going to go that way in the very beginning of the story when i started writing the story but then i stopped and thought well it wouldn't really fit and it just seemed to far fetched in my own head to go from not being able to after what jacob did to her and that this seemed better bacause it explains why her mum died too.
it's still early days for one of my other stories but it's all human and there may be a child in that one...but i don't know. thank you for the review and i hope you still keep reading.
Date: 14 May 2010 2:13 AM Title: The Big Reveal
The meadow and new bedroom description is to die for!!! Love it, can't wait for the wedding and ????? blood test
thank you and I am trying to write the chapter just before the wedding, and i have to research some medical conditions that have her symptoms to tell you what she has but i know what i want her to have!!
Date: 13 May 2010 10:08 PM Title: The Big Reveal
I am so glad I found this story!!! But now I'm adicted and need more!!!
thank you so very much i hope the ending was good and did the story well. thank you for reading and enjoying my story i didn't think that any one would read it!
Date: 13 May 2010 1:59 AM Title: Living Nightmare
OMG, WOW. What can I say. This was hard to read and I know it had to be hard to write. I guess we have nuts out there that does this kind of thing in real life. Great job!
It was a lot harder to write for me due to the fact that something like this really happened to me. this fic is sort of like a biography of my life within the context of a story. I needed to get it out there without it getting out there; does that even make sense? any way thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 01 May 2010 8:57 AM Title: Fateful Day
OMG how much pain can one person go through. The Cullens will help her????
a lot, trust me I know...this story is sort of based on my real life.
yes the Cullen's will help her, but you have to read more to find out how.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 5:35 PM Title: Getting Home and Jacob
hmmm now what is in the backpack I wonder.
thank you for your review...the chapter is with my beta at the moment because i got a bit stuck. it should be ready in a couple of days. thank you for reading