Date: 20 Sep 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 32
aww that was a little sweet but more saucy. I loved it. the whole phone sex thing was hot! I can't wait for them to reunite. this is going to be good. thanks again bye
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Date: 19 Sep 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 32
well soon enough they will be back together ! cant wati till the next chapter
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Date: 19 Sep 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 31
It is so hard to say goodbye to those you love even if you know you will see them soon it is never soon enough. Edward sould just go back quit and move faster than two weeks he needs to get back to Bella quick.
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Date: 19 Sep 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 31
oh GOOOD so its not the end. I'm so excited for more. that last chapter had me teary eyed. lol thanks again so much. bye
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Date: 19 Sep 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 31
well that was a sad chatper but the sooner they leave the faster hell be in sf! cant wati till the next chapter
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[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 31
get them past the few weeks fast please,i cried at all the goodbyes,i'm full of the cold to, it's more tissues gone from my reserve,lol.
great story,up-date soon plz,thanks,bye.c.
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[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 30
Well played indeed! LOL! That was priceless! *evil laugh*
That was totally HOT at the beginning of the chapter, btw! Whew! *fans herself*
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 28
Awww, that's so sweet!!! Of course Alice is going to say Yes! :D
Right?
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 27
ROFL, yeah, that was awesome of Bella! :D
Date: 18 Sep 2010 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 30
Saying goodbye is going to be to hard to do.
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Date: 18 Sep 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 30
great chapter....
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Date: 18 Sep 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 30
well im happy they finally decided where they are goign and i cant wati to see the out come of it all ! keep the chapters comming
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Date: 18 Sep 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 30
PLEASE TELL ME THERE'S A SEQUEL!! I can't have them leaving and going to San Fran without a wedding on all three accounts. keep up the amazing work. thanks again bye
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THere is no sequel...yet at least. But there are still like 8 chappies to go:)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 30
I agree with Carlisle. Nice prank
Author's Response:
They all had it coming:)
Date: 17 Sep 2010 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 29
Great Chapter! Edward is so romantic. I am glad they finally got their prom. They even got the drama. Tanya is loony. She could not handle the pressure of music business. I am so happy that Bella has friends that she can count on now.
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Date: 17 Sep 2010 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 29
Cool chapter all the love and crying. Tanya a flipin loon lol
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Date: 17 Sep 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 29
great chapter
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Date: 17 Sep 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 29
i have a feeling that they will go down to vegas or the court house and get married! cant wati till the next chatper
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Date: 17 Sep 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 29
Tanya really is a loony. I think Jacob deserves to have her as a stalker. Lol.
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*snort* That's a great idea!!
Date: 17 Sep 2010 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 29
wow Tanya is wacko! lol I loved it. Edward was a gentlemen while being firm. good guy. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
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Date: 16 Sep 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 28
It is about time Jasper. All right Alice!
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[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 28
woo hoo ,way to go jasper,i think alice will say yes,wonder how the rest of the group will react to bella and edwards news too,take it em is moving to san fran to be with rose and vic and leah will to?
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Date: 16 Sep 2010 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 28
knowing alice from the book and movies she will prob tell him it took him long enough ;) ahhh loved the chappy thank you for makeing my 16 hour shift much more pleasant :)
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You're welcome ;) glad I could help and thank you for the review:)
Date: 16 Sep 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 28
Alice first to be asked and she better say yes. I am so glad Edward is moving all his dreams will come true.
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Date: 16 Sep 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 28
aww how cute! im happy for the both of them! cant wait till the next chapter
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Date: 16 Sep 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 28
um DUH!!! she'll say yes because she's ALICE! lol I loved that chapter. it was sweet and very sentimental with Charlie and Bella. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Date: 16 Sep 2010 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 28
great chapter.....
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Date: 15 Sep 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 27
Edward doesn't seem happy with his job. He could free lance or record his own beautiful music. Bella can take pitures anywhere. They just need to be together. Everything else will work out.
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Date: 15 Sep 2010 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 27
That is priceless they are both willing to give up everything they have where they live to be with each other. I think the vidio from James phone needs to go utube that would fix Jacob piece of shit Black.
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Date: 15 Sep 2010 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 27
awesome chappy i am a team Edward so i will say go bells (SPOILER ALERT) but i am also a team nessie so i will go awww jake is such a dumbass. btw if you can laugh at a parody knowing that the twicast has probably already seen and laughed at it vampires suck is worth the see.
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Thank you:) My hubby and boys went to see Vampires Suck. THey said it was pretty funny. I can't wait to see it. I think it looks awesome. I think some people take the books, and movies, way too seriously.
Date: 15 Sep 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 27
great chapter.....
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Date: 15 Sep 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 27
lol well who's going where if they're both moving. lol I loved it especially the part about beating on Jake. Usually I LOVE Jacob as a character but if hes not going to listen there will be consequences. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Date: 15 Sep 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 27
i admit that i really enjoyed the nut busting too.lol. im curious to see how this will pan out. i would personally like to see Edward in San Fran. for some reason i couldn't read the previous chapter about the bonfire. it did't load.
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IT should be back now. The site messed up and eased all my chapters. but they are back now.
Date: 14 Sep 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 27
I am not seeing this chapter or any other chapter in the series. Just the Chapter Notes Followed by the end notes.
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I know. I think the system is glitching again. Thank you for letting me know. I am sending something in right now about it.
Date: 14 Sep 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 27
Again, no content in the chapter.
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Ok, going to fix this one too. I know there was content here earlier:( grrr....
Date: 14 Sep 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter. Love how you ended this one. Keep up the wonderful writing and keep the chapters coming.
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Date: 14 Sep 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 27
well at least they are on the same page! now whos moving where? cant wait till the next chatper
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Date: 14 Sep 2010 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 26
Edward should be able to do music anywhere and travel as needed.
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Very true:)
Date: 14 Sep 2010 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 26
I love the way Bella put Jacob in his place priceless.
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[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 26
I bet the mist turns into pouring rain, LOL!
Why couldn't the Jacob in the saga be more like your Jacob? LOL! Such a diva, love to hate him!! :D Come on out of the closet while you're at it, Jacob! LOL!
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lol, thank you;)
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 25
Yay, Mikey's a jailbird! :)
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He's going to be getting some jail love now:)
Date: 14 Sep 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 26
well poop that was a bit dissappointing on the Edward gets jealous part. :( and now that he saw that Bella and him don't get along he won't be acting jealous in the morning. oh well. I love how they made fun of poor Jake though with extra small underwear. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Are you sure about that? Jake is kind of deem. He may not have gotten the hint ;)
Date: 14 Sep 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 26
its about time she thinks about the distance! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming
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Date: 13 Sep 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 25
I had a feeling that Bella was talking about herself when she was telling Rose's dad he did not know her that was very sad. The fucking piece of shit Mike I am so glad he got caught in the act they should of let James bet his ass.
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Date: 13 Sep 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'm glad they helped Jessica. I can't wait to see what happens next chapter. You've written Jacob to be a real big ass, so I can only imagine how interesting the next chapter is gonna be. Lol
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Date: 13 Sep 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 25
I am so glad that Bella and Rose saw what was happening and put a stop to it. It was also convenient for the chief of police and a doctor to be there for documentation. I hope Mike gets some help for the sake of his girls.
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Date: 13 Sep 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 25
Yahoo bring on Jake! I have a feeling jealous Edward will be making an appearance. :D I can't wait for more thanks again bye
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Date: 13 Sep 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 25
great chapter
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[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
Cliffie!!!! NO!!!!!!! LOL!!
OMG what??????!!!!!!!!! Urgh!!
LOL!!
(Swing batter batter! S w i n g!) ;)
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A little dramatic, don't you think???
Date: 12 Sep 2010 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 24
Charlie is priceless
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Date: 12 Sep 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 24
great chapter
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Date: 11 Sep 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 24
what? That must be Alice saying Oh my God. only she would freak out over saying I love you. especially those two. lol thanks again bye
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Date: 11 Sep 2010 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 23
That was so sweet of Esme. Bella really needs a woman in her life. I hope she puts Esme on speed dial.
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Date: 11 Sep 2010 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 23
WOW what a way to wake up I love it. Love Esme and her mothering she is amazing.
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[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 23
Awww....
Good thing I have a box of kleenex handy!!! :) That was a beautiful chapter, hun! :) The love is just radiating off my screen!
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Thank you, hon:) I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
awww those guys have been through enough. Abandonment on both sides now. lol thanks again for the update. I loved it. thanks bye
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Date: 11 Sep 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 23
aww im liking the sweet and innocent side to the both of them but whats brewing on the horizon?
Author's Response:
What makes you think I have anything brewing? Oh, who am I kidding. There isn't much, I promise:)
Date: 10 Sep 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great Chapter.
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Date: 10 Sep 2010 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 22
I realy love this story and cant wait for more. Update soon.
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Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 22
Bella needs to seek therapy to finally get over the last of her fears. She has done great on her own, but to get over the rest I think she needs help. She deserves true happiness.
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Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow that is great I am so glad he went to her.
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Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
well im glad they talked it out cant wati till the next chapter
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[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 22
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! I'm so happy!!!!!! :D
They really do bring out the best in each other. ;)
And of course, James always has the right things to say, too. :)
And you know, the whole sneaking in the window thing is so adorably Dawson's Creek! LOL!
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Date: 09 Sep 2010 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 21
I love the chapter. This is how I see Jacob. He is such a cocky bastard. I hate him even in the real story. I think you did a great job.
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Date: 09 Sep 2010 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 21
Yes Jacob is a asshat that thinks his shit dont stink. What took her so long to crawl through that window WOW I mean WOW.
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Date: 09 Sep 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
I wouldn't mind taking a bat to Jacob. Was that too violent? Maybe just spike a volleyball in his face. Lol.
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Nah, not too violent at all:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 21
OME OME OME OME
They made love!! Wow, that so hot, too!! Whew! I can't wait for next chapter! Does she ILY back or is she shocked??? Gah!!! And does she slip out and leave him or do Carlisle and Esme accidentally walk in on them asleep in bed the next morning?! Gah!!!
Nah, def not a Jacob fan here, LOL! Can Bella PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE punch him during the photoshoot??!! That would be soooo funny!
Glad you love this story, too, butterflybetty!! It is lighter, and that's awesome! :D It's all about balance, right? ;) You can chalk me up as being one of your biggest fans! I'll read anything you write!! :D LOL!
Author's Response:
Oh, I promise the next chapter is a big one!! As for JAcob, just wait. Trust me. It's worth it:) With all the angst I write, I need a lighthearted one like this.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 21
personally, I can't wait till the photoshoot. I hope he goes through with the whole being naked deal. Edward will kick his ass. I love it. keep up the great work. I do have a question though? didn't they already sleep together? at their place by the lake or wherever it is they go and meet still from back in school? I was just wondering. if not whatever and if so oh well, can NEVER get enough of lemons! :D thanks again bye
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lol, thanks:) No, they didn't sleep together before now. At the river, Edward just got her off using his fingerS:)
Date: 08 Sep 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 21
AWESOME chapter.
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Date: 08 Sep 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 21
great chapter....
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Date: 08 Sep 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 21
well im not lilking jacob but im very happy the finally did the deed ! im just wondering how they are going to deal with a long distance relationship ? cant wait till the next chapter
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[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great chatper...can't wait for the next one....
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Date: 08 Sep 2010 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 20
The jealous starts, but Edward has nothing to worry about. He is so much better than Jacob Black. Edward is the total package.
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Date: 08 Sep 2010 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved the game thinking of Edward, Emmett, and Jasper with no shirts on was great but the best was Mike get what he so deserved. Mike needs to be stoped. Edward doesnt know about the playboy shot yet he is going to flip out.
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Date: 08 Sep 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 20
great chapter....
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Date: 08 Sep 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 20
well cant wait till the next chatper thanks for the cliffee!
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You're welcome! Thanks for the review:)
Date: 08 Sep 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 20
lol uh oh Jake's here. :) and Edward's jealous! oh i can't wait till he shows his testerone. (squeals loudly) keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 20
ROFL!! 'What the hell did Jacob Black want with my Bella?' Well, Cavemanward...ROFL! Or shall we say Possessiveward? Hmmm...lol!
Fun chappie, sounds like the Mike/Jessica thing is going to keep happenin'. If he's abusing her verbally, he may be abusing her physically, too. If so, she and kids need to get away from him ASAP!!
Congrats again, Rosie!! :D
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Yes, he is both cavemanward and possessiveward:) I promise the Mike and Jessica situation will be handled.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
Rosalie's life just changed. Bella and Edward need to wake up and realize that this is love.
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Date: 07 Sep 2010 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 19
How exciting for Rose. I love how Edward opened the door like he had not seen her in days that has to make a girl feel good:)
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Date: 07 Sep 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
AWW I'm so happy for Rosalie. she really deserves it. I can't wait for more. keep it up. thanks bye
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Date: 07 Sep 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
Lol, I love that Carlisle is now a little afraid of Bella
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[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yay, Rosalie!!! ;)
And of course Bella has always loved Edward! Leah hit that right on the money!!
Can't wait for them to play the game, it's going to be hilarious when they kick Mike's ass! ROFL!
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Date: 07 Sep 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 19
great chapter....
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Date: 06 Sep 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
im so happy for rose! cant wait till the next chapter
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Date: 06 Sep 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 18
Tanya is such a jerk to come to their class reunion to try to get Edward or a music contract. She should know not to make him mad because he could not recommend her. I love Bella and Edward together. They are so much stronger when they are together.
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Date: 06 Sep 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
This was such a funny chapter. I can see James and his fem ways. Edward must not have been paying attention until the kiss.
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[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 18
Another story I had to play catch up on, but I loved EVERY minute of it!! Chapter 4 was the last time I had read and reviewed, and wow alot of things happened!
So glad that James and Laurent came to Forks! I love how Bella is more at ease and is getting along with everyone now. I loved the chapter where she and Charlie had the long overdue heart to heart.
And the *ahem* action ;) in this chapter leaves me wanting more! The last two sentences say it all!! ;)
So...um...the upcoming photoshoot for Playgirl with Jacob Black...surely it won't cause too much trouble for new couple E&B, right? Maybe Jacob will fall in love with Alice or Rosalie, lol!
Love this story, ButterflyBetty! :D
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Without giving away too much, trust me when I say that it will be...eventful. As for the action between Bella and Edward, it's only beginning:)
Date: 06 Sep 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
great chapter
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Date: 06 Sep 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 18
YAHOO!! now we're talking. lol that was hot. I can't believe he didn't let her reciprocate. poor guy. keep up the great work. i can't wait for more. thanks again bye
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Thank you:) He gets his soon enough:)
Date: 06 Sep 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
What is wrong with Jessica is Mike abusing her??? What a way to end the evening with her having an O and just think she didnt want to come LOL. Tanya she is going to try and cause some shit.
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Thank you:) The Mike and Jessica think will be explained, I promise:)
Date: 06 Sep 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love the story, and Tanya is a skank. But I know she'll be a thorn in Edward and Bella's side right? Just don't let her break them up.
I have loved all of your stories so far. You are an awesome writer. keep up the great work..
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Thank you:) Tanya won't be the problem that you think she will but she will be an issue:)
Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 17
whew now that THATs out of the way, lets get going to the fun and yes just like you said, lemony action. lol keep up the great work. i can't wait for more. thanks again bye
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Date: 05 Sep 2010 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 17
great chapter.....
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Date: 05 Sep 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
That is all because of Renee that dirty rotten bitch
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Date: 05 Sep 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
Good chapter. I'm glad their conversation went so smoothly.
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Date: 04 Sep 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great story.....
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[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2010 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 16
love this story,i was laughing so hard when she told the guys about steve,bella being confident is refreshing it strange seeing rose so vunrable(sorry for my spelling, but you get it).looking forward to the photo shoot with jake, can't help the feeling that he is going to be the obnoxious type/ladies man or maybe even gay seeing as hes such a sex symbol,maybe bella will lay down more attitude, looking forward to next update. cheryl
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Date: 04 Sep 2010 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
uh oh lets go from being laughing and joking to Charlie being pissed. Ouch. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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