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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 2:17 AM Title: Epilogue

You did a great job with this finale! Having Bella and Drew witness Victoria's death brings it all full circle. Sounds like everyone is living a happy life despite what they all went through!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 16

I hope Victoria chooses hanging, so she can slowly strangle! The wedding was quite lovely and a tribute to Alice's planning skills!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 15

She beat Edward pretty bad, I'm just glad he got her down and tied her up! That could have been a really bad scene!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 14

Okay, what the hell are you going to do to them now?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 13

So she's the one who knows technology and is still spying on everyone! Knowing that about Victoria may help find her! The fact she answered Tommy's phone can't be a goodthing!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 12

I can't help but wonder why Edward keeps seeing Victoria kill his mother and his Bella? Maybe Dr. Young will give him a push in the right direction! At least the group is all moved in to their new digs and school is about to start again. It may even be time to pick a wedding date!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 11

Kind of depressing that Victoria is crazier even than James! Thank heaven Bayleigh is helping the good guys now! Great, too, that Dr. Young is helping Edward so much!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 10

Well, well, Drew isn't Drew, but at least she's not Victoria! She has had a bad time of it, under James and Victoria's thumb! Love seems to have redeemed her, luckily for Tommy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 9

Good that Bella has her wrist cast off, bad that PT is needed. Bad also that Tyler has a surprise about Drew!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 8

It's toomuch of a coincidence that those flowers and card were delivered to their room just as they arrived! It has to have something to do with Drew. If she isn't Victoria she at least knows who is! Some New Years this will be with all this hanging over their heads!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 7

These weird things happening are starting to freak me out! How is Victoria leaving this stuff and yet no trace of her exists? Drew is acting different, too so that's even more confusing!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 6

No wonder so many readers are convinced of Drew's true identity, this is nearly proof! Too bad it ended Christmas, because it had been a great day otherwise, except for Emmett teasing Tommy. Reading the journals and telling Bella about the accident that took his parents was probably pretty hard for Edward, though!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 10:30 AM Title: Begging for Forgiveness - Outtake

Wow! I'm impressed by Emmett's apology skills!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 5

I'm willing to bet money that Drew and Victoria are one and the same! They just can't seem to catch a break!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:46 AM Title: Oral Lessons - Ch 4 Outtake

You're right, that was just too damn funny! Trust Emmett to eavesdrop on that little session!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh be so very careful what say, Edward or you may find out what life can throw your way! The proposal picnic was just lovely and I'm glad everyone is happy about it. Ther's still that odd feeling about Drew, though!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 3

I really wish they both would listen to their bad feelings about Drew, I think there's something not quite right about her also! What if she's the woman James told Bella, who was watcing Tommy and Charlie in Forks?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 2

Smart of him to get help with his lack of sleep and see a therapist about the nightmares!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2015 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds like Edward has a case of ptsd and should see a therapist about it!  Thoe two are insaitsable, making love with both her injuries, yet!

Reviewer: Schemering Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 10:04 AM Title: Epilogue

Wow. I remember reading My Sacrifice sometime last year on FF and my plans to finish reading this story but complication arose and i lost the info on the story. I was pleasantly surprised to rediscover your story on a new site and i absolutely love it. You did a wonderful job.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2010 6:50 AM Title: Oral Lessons - Ch 4 Outtake

cute

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 5:33 PM Title: Epilogue

The wicked witch is dead (or should I say psycho witch?)!! I'm so glad they all got their happy ever after. What a great story!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  It means so much that read and reviewed every chapter.  I'm glad you liked it.  These 2 stories were my babies and will always hold a special place in my heart.  I guess that's why a bad review will ruin my day and great ones like you left me always put a big smile on my face.  Thanks again for reading and all of your wonderful reviews!

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 16

That was absolutely phenomenal! I loved it! I'm so happy for them ;-)

Author's Response:

*blush* Thanks so much!  I loved writing that chapter.  I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 15

Thank goodness! Edward saved the day! I knew you wouldn't let anything really bad happen although I must say Victoria gave him quite the beating - I want to kick her behind!

Author's Response:

Nothing can ever be easy for Edward.  Besides, he needed to be in pretty bad shape so nurse Bella could take care of him ;)  Hmm, might have to do another outtake.

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 14

No, Edward! Not you, too! Oh my. Now Victoria's got our sweetie! She. Must. Die. Now.

Author's Response:

Victoria is one evil little witch and will get what she deserves.  Unfortunately she has to cause a bit of destruction before she is stopped.

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 13

Oh crap! Where is Tommy? I need to get up and get ready for work ... But now I have to read the next chapter! Gotta hurry ...

Author's Response:

LOL!  I hate that you are delaying going to work but loving that you don't want to stop reading :)

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 12

Well I didn't see that coming. Victoria's targeting Edward now...hmmm...how is he going to stop her?

Author's Response:

Glad I could surprise you like that.  I try to keep you guys on your toes.

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 11

Emmett is a trip! But I hope Rose gives him hell for pestering Bella *snickers*. Poor Edward really needs sleep and I hope he gets it soon! And wedding planning will begin soon - yay!

Author's Response:

I love Emmett.  Especially writing him like this.  He i so much fun to play around with.  I promise, Edward will get his sleep soon.

I hope you like the wedding.  I had a blast planning it and "shopping" for it.

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 10

Glad to know who Drew really is, well Bayleigh I mean. And the real Drew - poor girl. How absolutely horrible ... Victoria needs to go. Wait, isn't Bayleigh a bit old for Tommy?

Author's Response:

Yeah, both Drew and Bayleigh got dealt a bad hand.  I always thought in the books that Victoria was bit more scary and sadistic than James so I tried my best to do the same here.

You are the first person to mention the age difference between Tommy and Drew.  Nothing hotter than dating an older woman...just ask Emmett ;)  He seemed pretty proud of Edward in New Moon for that.

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm anxious to find out what Tyler found out so I'll see you at the end of the next chapter! Gotta go read!

Author's Response:

LOL, that cliffie was one of the ones that drove people crazy.  Luckily you didn't have to wait for me to write it.

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 8

Geez - can't Edward and Bella get a break? And while I understand Tommy has feelings for Drew, he seems to have changed since knowing her. If he knew she could be connected to Victoria, i'd think he'd want to know. I mean James killed his mother,too.

Author's Response:

I know.  I was so cruel to Edward and Bella through out this story.  I couldn't help it ;)  It's funny how love can change you.  Don't be too hard on Tommy.  He really loves Drew and wants to believe the best of her, not the worst.

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 7

Holy crap! If Drew isn't Victoria you've done a good job throwing us all off the path but even if she is, how the hell does she do this crap without anyone noticing? She needs to die!

Author's Response:

LOL!  I'm evil like that ;)  Drew has learned to be sneaky over the years.  It was a necessary survival skill for her.

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wow! I didn't realize how destitute and alone Bella felt. I can't even imagine how terrifying James must have been when she was younger and for the nightmare to continue on past his death is too much. Well I decided a chapter or 2 ago that either Drew is Victoria or they know each other. Let's see if either is true ... Hmmm

Author's Response:

Yeah, James really got to Bella.  There's nothing worse than fearing someone that can't possible hurt you anymore.  Unfortunately that fear is hard to get rid of.

Ah, the big Drew controversy.  Many a reviewers debated that same concept of Drew being Victoria.

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 11:29 AM Title: Begging for Forgiveness - Outtake

Oh my! Emmett certainly knows how to apologize! I'm impressed and now for a cool shower *snickers*!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed Emmett's apology.  Yeah, he tends to be cool shower inducing.

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 5

I'm feeling somehow Drew is involved. Somehow she's mixed up with Victoria. Poor Bella was finally happy and the crap starts again. Will Edward never get sleep?

Author's Response:

Poor Edward has quite a way to go before he can achieve good sleep and poor Bella has to always suffer.  Isn't that the unwritten rule of fanfic?  LOL.  Yeah, Drew is quite shifty, isn't she ;)

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:35 AM Title: Oral Lessons - Ch 4 Outtake

Emmett is just too funny! I won't look at vegies the same again *snickers*

Author's Response:

LOL!  That was so much fun to write.  I'm glad you got a kick out of it :)

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 4

Omg! That was fabulous!! So romantic! I loved it! They're getting married! I'm so excited (can you tell?).

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I love that you are so excited they are getting married and that you loved the proposal.  God, I loved writing Edward's POV in the sequel :)

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 3

Holy crow! Who is this Drew? I don't like her one single solitary bit. I don't trust her. I sure hope Edward's dream wasn't a premonition or anything like that. I'll just have to hurry up and read!

Author's Response:

LOL, no one liked Drew when they read this chapter.  Yes, go read and see what you think ;)

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 2

I feel Edward's frustration. It's miserable not sleeping and having to relie on artificial aids to sleep. Stress and nightmares or the inability to sleep really sucks. Anyway I'm glad he's getting help and being honest with Bella. That's very important.

Author's Response:

Oh yeah.  A few years ago I had troubles sleeping and it's so not fun or healthy.  I think I lost 15 pounds during that time.

Edward doesn't want Bella to feel the way he did when he realized she was keeping secrets about meeting James so he's being as honest as he can with her.

Thanks so much for continuing on this journey with Bella and Edward and leaving reviews :)

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was so sweet but poor Edward and his nightmares. Bella's okay - I wish he could relax. I hate to see our poor boy suffering.

Author's Response:

Yeah, Belaa's doing pretty good in this one.  She a whole lot less angsty.  Now we get to deal with Edward's demons and his past.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 1:42 AM Title: Epilogue

WOW!  awesome story that you wrote here.  I am fully plannign to read a few of your other stories now too.  I have so many on my favorites list I need to catch up on a few of them before I start more though.  I think I have over 30 active stories going and my brain is starting to go to mush!  LOL  Anyway I think that oyu are a very talented writer and I am very glad I found and read this.  Thank you again for sharing!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it.  My only other multi-chapter stories are Lips of an Angel and Murder at Cullen Manor.  Everything else are one shots.  You wouldn't believe the number of active stories I have.  Way too many.  Thanks so much for your kinds words.  Knowing that people enjoy what I write makes me want to write more.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)

~Jenn

Reviewer: Vampfan4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2010 1:35 AM Title: Epilogue

Oops, in the first story you stated that Charlie brought Renee back to Forks so that the kids could bury her close to home and be able to visit...Charlie wouldn't have needed to go to Arizona to visit her grave.

That being said...I LOVED both stories!!!  Thanks for sharing your talents with us!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reminding me about that.  One other person noticed that as well.  I've fixed that error.

 

I'm glad you loved both stories.  People like you make me so happy to write and post my stories.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Vampfan4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2010 9:38 PM Title: Begging for Forgiveness - Outtake

I love the visuals!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad we are able to add them to the stories here.  I like it better than having to add a note in the author's note to check out my profile for links.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am glad you put all your stories over here........ I love this story.......

 

mwah xxx

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