Date: 27 Sep 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
I am so glad that Edward came back. I am thinking Seth got a hold of him and chewed him out. Lol. Can't wait to read Edward's POV.
Date: 27 Sep 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 11
Ok I am missing something. Why the he'll is Edward so mad
Date: 26 Sep 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 10
I hate that Rufus got sick.
Can't wait to find out the deal with James.
I laughed at Bella when she called Rose.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
Love reading about all the fun Edward has with his kids. Can't wait to find out why she can't talk. Poor Edward. She busted his bubble. Lol
Date: 26 Sep 2014 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 8
Love how they are with each other.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow Edward was really honest with Tanya. He tells her everything and Bella tells Seth everything. Maybe Seth and Tanya need to get together. Lol. I just knew that Edward would see Bella at the shelter.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
Boy Edward and Bella have it bad. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love reading all the interaction with the kids. Sooooo cute. Boy Edward has it bad already. Lol
Date: 26 Sep 2014 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
Thanks for giving us Edward's story.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
Mas en sounds really cute. I love stories with children in them. Why did Edward knock Bella down??
Date: 26 Sep 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
What was Renee ' s problem? ???? Can't wait to find out and read more.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
Can't wait to read more.
Date: 03 Sep 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 36
Great story so far. Love these long chapters. Also the longer stories. Love this.
Date: 13 Aug 2014 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 50
an absolutely AWESOME!!!!!! story although ive read it on ffn ;) im off to read the o/t f/t ;D
Date: 12 Apr 2014 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 50
i loved your story, their happily ever after was perfect.
Date: 28 Aug 2013 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 50
Good lord that was one long story, I think the soppiest edward and bells I have ever read!
I really liked bells/Seth relationship and the kids were lovely, I could trade my own for masen he was beyond adorable. Think the large family there at every turn would kill me, but a very sweet, lovable story. Thanks for sharing x x
Date: 06 Jun 2013 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
Dogs can not digest corn wheat or certain food s make them vomit both my dogs gave allergies
Date: 21 May 2013 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
i love all stories
Date: 14 Oct 2012 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 43
God, this story has just about ripped my heart out. I can't tell you how many klenex I have gone throew this chapter alone, haha! This story rates as one of the best...
Date: 04 Oct 2012 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 50
I have loved every minute it took to read this ...... Good Job....
Date: 15 Feb 2012 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 45
she is a crazy jane
Date: 13 Feb 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 43
I would have voted if I could have
Date: 13 Feb 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 42
who is the "our" that Jane referenced sounds like she was not working alone
Date: 10 Feb 2012 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 37
crying here
Date: 06 Feb 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 31
absolutely worth rewarding
Date: 05 Feb 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 28
list of suspects are getting longer
Date: 04 Feb 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 25
will I love it more than yours?
Date: 03 Feb 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
she will be the perfect mom
Date: 03 Feb 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
who cares about dates, this chapter was told great
Date: 03 Feb 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
I hope it was not Reneee that hurt her and ruined the chance for her to play but it really would not surprise me
Date: 03 Feb 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 21
great chapter you really write well
Date: 03 Feb 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 19
I had assumed he was otherwise Bella would have been close to him
this deserves more reviews
Date: 02 Feb 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love it so far
Date: 02 Feb 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
great progress can't wait for Friday night
Date: 02 Feb 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
over react much?
Date: 01 Feb 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
- check
- check
- check check
Date: 01 Feb 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
This Renee is a biatch
Date: 01 Feb 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
good start
Date: 21 Jul 2011 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 50
I finally got to finish this story, and OMG. This was a really great story, and you did a great job writing it. Hate to see this come to an end, but this is really like their start. Im going to go check out the out takes you have done. Cant wait to see what ur going to do next. Keep up the awesome work.
Date: 11 Jul 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 41
okay i would have to say my guess now is jacob. i do not think it is any of the girls. this person is way to smart and knows to much. jacob had access and has brains and talent. he feels betrayed by all of them and especially bella. maybe he feels his father loved bella more than him and he could never measure up. he has a grudge. now finally bella is finding happeiness and not with him he wants it all gone. she doesn't deserve to be happy. getting good. thanx
Date: 11 Jul 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 29
great chapter, jake is acting creepy and jane and Ian together??
Date: 10 Jul 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 50
I loved this story:) I plan to put you on my favorite author list. Thanks for one of the best stories. I was up late many nights reading. Now on to read the outtakes:)
Date: 05 Jul 2011 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 30
oh i so loved it all
lauren watch your back mama bear is in full mama mode and you are messing with her cubs.
love it
Date: 04 Jul 2011 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 28
you know i have this feeling that jake is the one taking pictures. maybe he is the one that has wanted her and is upset that edward has caught her eye. maybe he has been secretly waiting for his chance and was going to take it but now edward and the kids screwed up his plans. hmmmm i was hoping she would have told someone about not being comfortable around him. he gives me the hibbie jibbies. bella open your mouth
Date: 02 Jul 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
well ed that wasn't very grown up to act like that!
Date: 02 Jul 2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
the dog she could have told him that!
Date: 02 Jul 2011 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
hym what up with bells?
Date: 02 Jul 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
wow they have a connection. love jas!!
Date: 02 Jul 2011 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
thought you would have them run into each other.. oh well
Date: 02 Jul 2011 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
wow they are working fast
Date: 02 Jul 2011 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh boy wait till he finds out who she is. carlisle is a cancer doctor that doesn't sound good if he was bella's dr.
Date: 02 Jul 2011 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
interesting back story ed. at least you got the kids pretty easily
Date: 02 Jul 2011 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
cool!! bells seems cool i like her.. i wonder what ed's story is.
Date: 02 Jul 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
what a bitch! poor bells
Date: 02 Jul 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
okay thanks for that now i have to read more!
Date: 29 Jun 2011 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 39
Wow you are killing me here. I cant stop reading and I've got to get to sleep now. I'm still leaning towards Jacob. Dont they have video in her building??? Ah Alec makes an appearance.
Date: 29 Jun 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 38
Wow Lauren is a akank. I was beginning to learn toward it being Aro. I was thinking he wants bella scared so she stays. i;m thinking his company will go under without her.....but now this last thing.....back to thinking Jake again....unless Jane or Aro were hiding in the building when the locks were being changed. Video in the hall to see who left it????
Date: 29 Jun 2011 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 37
how sweet those two are..
Date: 29 Jun 2011 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 36
woo hoo for birthday present. sigh shame the cops have so many rules sometimes.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 35
sounds like they had the ideal weekend.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 34
great fun. carmen is so goofy. games sound great..
Date: 28 Jun 2011 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 33
wow jane acting like a human and coming up with a reasonable plan.
glad they had fun at the premiere. hmmmwonder if b's talk w jake will help.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 31
glad em is goingto hang around her more. yummy birthday.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 30
the rooms were a great idea as well as the photos. of course lauren just had to come back. hmmm why do iI think jane and or kate are involvrd in that.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 29
they need to change bella.s locks. janeis no coincidence i'msure.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
hmmm jake is getting a bit creepy. woo hoo for soccer. hmmm coaching in her future?
Date: 28 Jun 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 27
ah cmon. u know she is ginna ask to move in with them. ur not thatevil....ru?
Date: 28 Jun 2011 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
sounds like he knows everythingnow and is not running. woo hoo. hmmm i'm wondering if it isnt lauren behind the new hate mail. jealous of their happiness.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 25
so much wonderful family fun.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 24
wonderful family time. love the drums and soccer time. lol for ass print on the car.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wow too bad renee is dead so she cant be killed slowly and painfully.
Date: 27 Jun 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 22
great chap. not sure where to start. they are all so great together.
Date: 27 Jun 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 21
wonderfully sweet and perfecty yummy chapter
Date: 27 Jun 2011 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
omg poor bella. can I jump in the story and run over renee with a hummer? plz plz plz.
Date: 27 Jun 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 19
awwww dr c and mrs e......lolfor em fainting.
Date: 27 Jun 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 18
wow jane and aro have balls....get em pixie.
Date: 27 Jun 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
love the cool emails...and the doggie jealousy. hee hee.
Date: 27 Jun 2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
glad the wonder twins get to take care of rufus. great idea.
Date: 27 Jun 2011 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
doesnt it suck that people have to deal with stalkers. eddie is so sweet w her
Date: 27 Jun 2011 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
me thinks tanya recognizes her. wonderful chapter. skittles.lol
Date: 27 Jun 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 13
hmmm I love Jazz too. Yummy cowboy thing as I picture him.
glad they talked.
Date: 27 Jun 2011 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
hmmm wonder who knocked him upside the head? Seth or Tanya I'm thinkinig.
Date: 27 Jun 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh eddie.....you so screwed up already
Date: 27 Jun 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
hmmm more clues as to renee and james' fuckery. awwww poor rufus.
Date: 26 Jun 2011 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
kids do seem to grow like weeds. hmmm wonder why she begged off
Date: 26 Jun 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 8
they are too cute together.
Date: 26 Jun 2011 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
awww sweet chapter.....hmmmm seth for tanya maybe?
Date: 26 Jun 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
wonderful chapter. cant wait till they meet again.
Date: 26 Jun 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
seems these guys might have alot in common. they both have reasons for helping out. too bad edward missed seeing bella at the shelter. but like he said he felt her. the cookies she baked he loved not knowing she made them. tanya seems pretty cool.. i like seeing her as a friend instead of a skank going after him. love it
Date: 26 Jun 2011 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
ahhh i like how they meet and how their lunch went. she fits in so well. seems there is alot she has missed because of her career. 6 months left and it seems she is free to start living. i hope she does. love it
Date: 26 Jun 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh loving the story. this is a good one. i love your writing.
Date: 26 Jun 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
ahhhhhh i love the meeting
man lauren what an itch. she deserves to be lonely for the stunt she pulled. i sure hope karma bites her in the but