Date: 07 Dec 2014 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 50
Great reading about the busy, happy life they all deserve! Loved what Bella told Lauren, the skank, and of course all the preperations for getting pregnant! As all your stories that I've read so far, this was wonderful! Now, Off the Beaten Path!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 46
Really good chapter, with all they accomplished. Bella was so brave to lay the ghost of her father the way she did! I'll bet they never expected Jake to show up and be as contrite as he was! Running into Victoria was a gift and Bella handled it just right!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 45
The apple doesn't fall far from the tree, I guess. Jane's mother must have had a problem, taking her own life that way, and passed on the unstable mind to her child. That was one sick puppy, thinking it was okay for James to abuse her that way, and thinking her father forgot her for Bella! It almost makes me sorry for her, but not really!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 44
Figured it was about time for Lauren to rear her ugly head again. Maybe we'll find out what she really was up to, showing her skanky face after all this time. Probably money. As for Jane, lock her up and throw away the key! I'm looking forward to the wedding, and think Thanksgiving is the perfect time!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 41
Okay, this is the limit, now this crazy son-of-a-bitch wants to kill Edward, to leave Bella alone? They won't be looking for that angle and won't be prepared for it! The misery caused by this just flows all over this story and really pisses me off! Maybe I need Father O'Conner to calm me down!
Date: 05 Dec 2014 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 39
I see now why the police are finally being involved, that was a definite threat! No damn wonder Edward had a meltdown, anyone would have! I hope to God this sicko never gets his filthy hands on Bella or the twins, Edward will kill whoever it is!
Date: 05 Dec 2014 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 38
It's horrid that Edward punched his own brother, but I can't help a sneaking sympathy for the guy, hell, for all of them! Whomever is doing this to them needs to be strung up and tortured for the misery they deliberately caused! Sure puts a damper on the trip to California!
Date: 04 Dec 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 33
I still don't trust Jane, either, she could easily be the stalker! It was awful when Masen got hurt, and Bella, of course. It sure made her and Emmett feel guilty, though it really wasn't her fault! The smoothed out the bad publicity pretty we, too. Now maybe they can all have a nice July fourth weekend!
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 32
I would accuse Kate of being the stalker, but working at the clinic with the doctors Cullen, when would she have the time? Whoever it is, seems to hate everyone involved. What a horrible thing to have happened to Masen, poor Em and Bella are just guilt-riddled! I have bad feelings about the stalker's future plans, they bode well for no one!
Date: 03 Dec 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 30
This was a great chapter but for two things, Lauren showing up and manhandling Masen, and that delivery on Father's Day! The scrapbook and portraits were just the right gifts. Making over the kids rooms and adding Edward's things to their room were inspired!
Date: 03 Dec 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 28
Jake is a creep, making Bella uncomfortable, Jane is a bitch with an agenda and Kate hates Edward being in love with Bella. These things I know, plus there may indeed be some crazed stalker out there who will try to hurt Bella. That being said, the security team damn well better keep her safe!
Date: 02 Dec 2014 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 27
While I sympathize with Edward, I also want to kick his ass! Strange, I know but he is acting like a damn jerk! Bella is just as miserable as he is over being apart all week, but it's not making her an idiot! I hope they can come to some kind of understanding over this problem.
Date: 02 Dec 2014 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 26
So sweet when Carlisle talked to Bella on the deck! Now the family is grown by four more! It was kind of sad for them to close up the house and go back to real life! Peobably not the best place to have the conversation they did, but I'm glad they talked it out!
Date: 02 Dec 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 24
Too bad all this family togetherness must come to a halt soon. Of course, the news of the increased hatemail is much worse. Good thing there is a security firm in the family! Bella and the twins was awesome, as was that connection between Bella, Jasper, Seth and Rosalie!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 23
Isense what you are goping to do to them and I wish you wouldn't. Hasn't that poor woman been through enough misery, danger and heartache for the next ten people? No fair making bad things happen to her , and possibly Edward! It was gut-wrenching enough to listen to what Jasper told them! Thank God for the support of all these wonderful people!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 22
Waiting for all the past to be revealed has been similar to peeling an onion, and has caused many more tears! This gathering at Bella's place must be the final step in the healing process for her and for Jasper, Rose and Seth. The blending of the families is perfect!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 20
I just knew that letter would tear up Bella and Seth and still be healing! Thank God Edward was able to send her strength, electronically if not in person. I eager for them to be alone for a while, but look forward to everyone being there forthe weekend! It ought to really be fun!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 19
Ben and Angela are one thing, but talk about a small world! What are the odds of Carlisle and Esme knowing Bella, Seth, Jasper and Rose before Edward ever met them? To hear Charlie is dead is very sad but I'm guessing that won't be the worst of it. No doubt Renee the bitch from Hell will have something to do with it, too!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
This was just a really great chapter! It's beyond wonderful that Bella is getting on so well with Tanya and Alice, and so cute that the girls seem smitten with Seth and Jasper, respectively! I hope Alice takes Aro and Jane to court if they try anything with Bella's contract!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
He's right, this should have been their first date experience. However, things happen the way they're supposed to happen and not much we can do about it! The two weks Bella must spend in California are going to be hard on both of them, not to mention Maddie and Masen!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 13
A lot better morning thn it might have been had Seth not set Edward straight and sent him back to Bella. I think that a night holding each other was just what they both needed. Now we'll see what Jasper has to say about all this!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
They are learning so much about each other, but she still hasn't told him the big item. I don't think it will bother him too much, but you never know! Now all her friends know about him and all his know about her. This should just keep getting better!
Date: 12 Oct 2014 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 50
Another perfect chapter. I am so glad that Edward and Bella had their say with Lauren. I just kind of wished that Bella had gotten to slap Lauren for some reason. Lol.
This was a truly great story. Thank you for sharing it with us. I am off to read the outtakes now.
Date: 12 Oct 2014 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 48
I finally went to your blog today. I did not want to know who the stalker was until I read it. I was afraid that if I went to the blog before that I would ruin it. I realized today tgat I could go. Love it by the way.
I also realized today that you also wrote THE BREAKERS. I LOVE that story. You did an awesome job with it. This story here is another GREAT story. You are an amazing writer. Thank you for sharing all your wonderful stories with us.
Live all the gifts that they gave each other. This was another perfect chapter.
Date: 08 Oct 2014 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 41
I hate that they are having to send the kids away. Love how protective little Masen is of Bella. Whoever it is is really sick. I have not been to your blog yet because I was afraid of spoilers. I will check it out after I get through reading.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 33
Loved hearing from Masen. Too cute!!!!!! Can't wait to see what their plan is.
Bella really let Jacob have it.
Jane sure changed her tone real quick.
I am wondering if Ian is the stalker. If he still has feelings for Bella.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 31
Glad Emmett is going everywhere Bella will go. I am thinking it is Jacob. He knows her schedule. What really scares me is that he knows the security of her building. I don't think it is Lauren. She just wants money I think. Can't wait to read more.
Loved the whole birthday weekend. Perfect! !!!
Date: 01 Oct 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 27
Edward is definitely acting like a spoiled brat. He would not like Masen or Madden acting like he was acting. I am a little suspicious of Kate. I am wondering if she is the one who wrote the letters. I am so glad that I do not have to wait for an update. I am so off to read the next chapter!!!!!!!
Date: 30 Sep 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks for giving us Bella's side of things. Thanks for explaining how she got into modeling. I hate Charlie died. Can't say the same for Renee. I was afraid that you were going to tell us that Renee hired James to hurt Bella so she could not play soccer. Glad James can't hurt her now.
Date: 29 Sep 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
I figured Charlie was dead. But what about Renee? ? Still can't wait to see what made Bella get into modeling. How did Bella or her crew not make the figure out that Edward was Dr. C ' s son or some type of relation since they had the same last name.
Date: 29 Sep 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
Ok I meant to mention that Carlisle sure did act funny when talking to Edward about Bella and her friends. Does he know them??
All the friends are starting to come together. Now we just need Emmett and Rose to get together.
Loving this story.