Date: 17 Apr 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
i really enjoyed this fict until you made edward out to have lost the plot
thought he sounded really hot and sexy as a assassin and after so long to have gotten bella back ......
Date: 30 Mar 2011 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Mother-effin'-eff?! Who knew that Eddie can snap? This is so... EFF!!! Though I may not agree with what you did, it sure is amazing! It's bone-chilling, if you know what I mean. Hahahaha. Nice story! Keep it up! ;)
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2011 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am totally stumped. I really don't know where Edward's mind has gone to. Would he really kill Bella? Is he that far gone?
I have so many unanswered questions.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow....not sure how i feel about this one, but definitely want to read the expanded version you're working on. don't know that i'm so much looking forward to it as intrigued by its possibilities.
nicely written piece though. cheers and koodos!
Date: 16 Jul 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
omg! this is soooooooo good1 i cant wait 2 read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMFUCKING_G huryy up and fucking up date loveing this story
Date: 15 Jun 2010 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
i loved your story i just wish she had killed him in the end. Your bella is really strong, and has survived for 100 years runing from people, i think she would be the one to kill him. It would be an act of love on her part when she see's that edward has gone crazy
Date: 22 Apr 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god... he's gone mad, really... I liked this story though, because it once again shows the controlling Edward who always thinks he knows better...
Date: 19 Mar 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
that was really good cant believe how dark he is
Date: 12 Mar 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Totally unexpected and completely wicked! I was so blindsided. Great material and a great story to expand on! It totally rocked!!! I felt her fear at the end, awesome story!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow!! so great!! can't wait to see more :)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
He killed Jake? WOW
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh my GOD!! he killed Jake and now HER!!! god he really has lost his marbles. that gave me chills man that was great and scary as hell. great great job.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
WOW! :)
Author's Response:
thank you soo much for the review! I hope to have more chapters posted this week! xoxo-- FunkyD!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story
Author's Response:
thank you soo much for the review! I have an outline to expand the story in works right now!