Date: 24 Jun 2016 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 24
I look forward to the next update. Thank you for writing and sharing your story!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2016 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 22
Knew there was going to be more grief.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2016 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
I hope your RL is holding up. Be strong.
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2016 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 17
It's getting boring that time doesn't past faster, and the only thing they do Es have sex, and she is sooo immature that I don't know why I keep reading
Date: 27 May 2016 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 15
This thing if bella in her bloody mess was dragged way to long honestly
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2016 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
You are terribly cute!
And Im not thinking right now...."you've f***ed my brains out!"
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2016 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
I dont know weather to be turn on or grossed out.
However, I could use some help with my monthly since i just started today!!
Date: 16 Apr 2016 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 24
so very awesome
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2016 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 24
I really hope you will come back to this story soon. I've been enjoying reading what you have posted so far. xox Mina
Date: 14 Mar 2016 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 5
I am realy geting into this story now. Your doing an awsome job. Thank you
Date: 13 Mar 2016 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 24
Hi! I'm sorry that you lost your grandmother, my sincerest condolences to you and your family.
I'm glad you are finishing this story, which I've enjoyed tremendously, I can't wait until it's finished so I can read it all in one go, lol.
Thank you for the brief recap on chapter 22 because it did help a lot in order to get back into the flow of the story.
I think Bella and Edward are dealing with that unjust ruling surprisingly well, although it's clear they are struggling with what's happening. I'm really curious to read the next chapter, to see how Edward really is doing down in that cave.
Oh! And that Lauren has to be lying about the pregnancy, because that would be just too much for Angela and Ben to face.
Take care!
Date: 13 Mar 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow that was qiuck. I was hoping for a few chapters before Bella bowed at there feet. A vampire kiiled her parents and right off the bat Charlie say's some nice words and Bella belives them.
Date: 24 Feb 2016 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
Hello,
when comes the next chapter????
I´m soooooooooooo exited.
Greatings from Germany
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2016 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 24
I've been reading this story since you posted it on the ORIGINAL Twilight Saga website! But then you stopped posting on there for ages and everyone kinda drifted off the site. So when I found it on here, you don't understand the joy I felt lol. This is probably the best story I have ever read with these characters (besides the actual twilight stories) and in some ways I prefer it over the actual books 🙈. I FINALLY caught up with all the chapters (I wanted to re-read the whole story again when rediscovered it) and it was just as good as I remembered it was. Now I'm all up to date and I NEED more!!! Please don't wait to long to update again. I compeletly understand that this is something you probably do for fun and as a creative outlet ( I don't expect you to just drop your whole life to write a chapter lol), but I do hope it's soon 😊. I've been here with you since the first chapter and I'll be here until the very last d84;a039;.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2016 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh please tell me he will get out soon and Ben's psychotic father and friends get what they deserve!!! I so need more soon!!! LOVE IT!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2016 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
wow, au plaisir de lire le prochain chapitre
Date: 20 Dec 2015 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 24
Hiya....I just found this fic and have read through from the start....loving it!
Thank you so much for sharing your work with us all.
Keep up the great work!! T
Date: 19 Dec 2015 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great story and chapter please update soon!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2015 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 24
thanks for the update. this is one of my drop everything stories. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New year!
Date: 18 Dec 2015 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 24
I love this story, but it stresses me so much. They have to get Edward out and back to Bella. I can't wait until Bella is not under Ben anymore. She needs to be all Edward's.
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2015 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 24
YES!! Visitation, finally!!
And I want to smack the shit out of Lauren and Tanya! ugh!
Fantastic chapter!
Date: 15 Dec 2015 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love this story and your long chapters.
Date: 15 Dec 2015 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 24
Happy Holidays! Thank you for updating!
Date: 15 Dec 2015 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 24
Awesome Chapter!!! Poor Ben I hope Tanya and lauren were not telling the truth about the baby!!!
Date: 14 Dec 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh my god.. poor Ben! And Bella has no clue what is about to go down, does she?
Date: 14 Dec 2015 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 24
Poor Ben. Truely hope Whoren isn't really prego. Ben "father" really needs to die. What an arse.
The visit thing really is scary.
Date: 14 Dec 2015 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 24
i reallu hope lauren is lying. And that karma gets´s back at her and the bitch sisters and of course ben´s lame excuse for a dad.
Date: 14 Dec 2015 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 24
Yesssss, so happy she gets to see him
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2015 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 24
:) Happy Holidays to you too
Date: 14 Dec 2015 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 24
I am so happy you're updating again! Any plans for LAH??
Date: 14 Dec 2015 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
I am so excited for them to be together again and will the petitions work?? Little vamps are visious and so is Esme and Emmett when you mess with Bella got to love them all for how they are trying to protect Bella.
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2015 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 24
Happy to have them back together at least forca little while. Thanks for the early Christmas present!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 24
:-) thanks for the update
Date: 14 Dec 2015 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 24
Love it please update ASAFP.
Date: 14 Dec 2015 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh wow! Amazing chapter! Looking forward to the next one!
Date: 13 Dec 2015 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 24
Please tell me that Edward won't be stuck in jail too long!!
Date: 13 Dec 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
TY for update
awesome chapter
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2015 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you for a wonderful chapter / story
Date: 13 Dec 2015 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 23
Glad your back :-)
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2015 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 23
i hope he can stay permenatley and that they find away to get edward out of prison before he becomes to feral or to dangerous to be around bella if he gets out. keep up the good work.
Date: 20 Nov 2015 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 23
This time, update faster!! Its been two weeks and you haven't updated!! I need an update now!!!
Date: 15 Nov 2015 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 23
I have been spellbound since I read the first word of this story. I can't even begin to tell you how much I love it. I really hope you update again soon and that you get Edward out of that hellhole as fast as possible. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 08 Nov 2015 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 23
Well that is one man back where he is to be now we want Edward home. What is up with Riley and his family they are evil.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2015 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 23
Magnifique! J'adore, cette histoire est si passionnante.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2015 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 23
love this story happy to see you are back :)
Date: 04 Nov 2015 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 7
Bella going anywhere alone isn't safe, what with James and Tanya out there! Carlisle isn't very happy with the new pills, either, so I'm curious what they will do to Bella?
Date: 04 Nov 2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
Since these humans are their food source you would think the vampires in charge of "donations", would treat them a little better!
Date: 04 Nov 2015 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
I hope there are no really bad repercussions from Bella telling Charlie about Tanya's threats. It was good that Edward and his family heard what the jealous bitch said to Bella. The drive to the Cullen house revealed how Edward really felt about Bella and allowed her to tell him she felt the same!
Date: 04 Nov 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
Boy, that didn't take long! Bella already has feeling for Rdward, especially since he saved her from James. Now Tanya is making her life miserable threatening to harm Charlie and Renee!
Date: 04 Nov 2015 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
From the description, itsounds like Bella has just met James. He is usually that awful around her so it must be him. This first half day is going better than she feared, except for Tanya, Victoria, James and Mike! Emmett, Jasper and Alice seem pretty nice, for vampires!
Date: 04 Nov 2015 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
I can just imagine how frightened Bella must have been when she cut herself and bled all over, in front of two thirsty vampires. The thing she failed to note was they told her they were controlled, and they were! The doctor visit was really fast and relativly painless. Now she has to face a school where she'll be the only human.
Date: 04 Nov 2015 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting premise, that vampires pretty much rule the earth. It was bound to happen some day I suppose, since they are the apex predators. I kind oflike Carlie's attitude, though, so maybe Bella won't be so miserable with him and Renee.
Date: 03 Nov 2015 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 23
Awesome chapter! I wonder what Bella will find to get Edward back? Glad that she has the support she needs. Looks like Edward is holding his own really good! Ben is back, yay!
Date: 03 Nov 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 23
Can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 02 Nov 2015 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 23
Poor Bella. Glad she's got everyone there supporting her.
Date: 02 Nov 2015 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awesome & TY for update
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter and so HAPPY you're continuing this story! Thank you
Date: 02 Nov 2015 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 23
I hope Bella finds something to help Edward soon, very happy Ben's back.
Date: 01 Nov 2015 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awesome <3 hope edward will get out of prison soon 😉 So happy that you're updating this story again! d84;a039;
Date: 01 Nov 2015 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 23
i´m so freaking happy you updated^^.
Date: 01 Nov 2015 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 23
Eep! Holy crap, they threw Edward onto Survivor Island, where you really have to fight to survive! How long til he is rescued? I hope Bella is the one to save him... write fast, ok?
Date: 01 Nov 2015 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 23
Man I just can't get over Edward in prison now! He's got to get out and they definitely need their HEA! They have had enough problems so far. I can see more trouble brewing in the not so distant future with James or Riley I really hope that they find something soon to get Edward out so Bella can be protected again
Date: 01 Nov 2015 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 23
So excited to see you updating again!!
Date: 01 Nov 2015 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 23
Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2015 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 23
Yay, Ben is back! FINALLy! I was so afraid Angela was going to have to go on without him helping her.
Fantastic chapter, love it!
Date: 26 Oct 2015 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
Nice to see an update it's been awhile.
So sorry about your loss, I know there is nothing I can say to really help but you can always pm me if you need an ear.
cant wait for the next update.
Date: 13 Oct 2015 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
I'm so glad you are continuing with this story. It has always been one of my favorites. I just had to go back and reread all the other chapters first so I could familiarize myself with everything. Please don't leave us with the guilty verdict too long. Edward doesn't belong in prison. Thanks again for continuing.
Date: 03 Oct 2015 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
Hie,what is the status of "living amongst hell"??
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2015 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 22
wow, magnifique, j'adore! Quelle belle surprise que ce chapitre.
J'ai pu enfin lire le chapitre 22 au complet. La nouvelle version de Google Translate a pu le traduire.
J'attendrai le prochain chapitre avec impatience.
Date: 24 Sep 2015 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 22
You can't end it like this!! Update soon, I need to know what happens next
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2015 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 22
Ack the angst! So glad you are back and healing somewhat after your loss. That stinks, but I hope you find good memories to give you comfort. Thanks for updating....
I think the one growly judge is having a greased Palm or something. Poor E and B. Hope you fix the suffering for them quick like.
Annie B
Date: 24 Sep 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow heartbreak for Ben and Angela, now Bella and Edward. Vampires are snobbish cowards.... well most of them. Truth or dare was funny though.
Welcome back!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2015 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 22
Welcome back! I was so excited when i was notified of an update. I re-read your story from the beginning to refresh my memory. Thanks for coming back. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Hope RL is treating you better. GOD Bless!
Date: 18 Sep 2015 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 22
Omg no not the verdict we wanted xxxx keep the updates coming I'm addicted
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh dear God.....please tell me there is more on the way.... please don't leave me hanging like this....
Date: 17 Sep 2015 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 22
No!! I want to yell with Carlisle!
its great to see you back girlie! Does this mean we'll be seeing an update to LAH too?!?
One can dream! Hope you're feeling better! My heart just aches for you and robs hand monkey! Hope to hear an update... When you're ready!
Date: 15 Sep 2015 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 22
Yeey!!! We waited a long time for u to continue. I hope everything is well with you. Please continue the story its awesome!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2015 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 22
So glad to see you back...I also lost my dad this past March and it's getting less painful every day.. You love them and miss them, but know that they are in a much better place.
Poor Edward and the verdict...sounds like it's a setup and someone is out to get him..
Please update again real soon!
Date: 14 Sep 2015 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh I cant wait until the next chapter. I started reading this three days ago and have just enjoyed your story. Please tell me that there will be a light at the end of the tunnel for these two. Evrything that can go wrong has but its been absolutely entertaining. I also love that Angela was the pregnant one here, good twiat.
Love it love it! Soooo can't wait, please don't kepp me hanging long.
Date: 14 Sep 2015 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great to see you back and keep up the good work.
Take care.
Date: 14 Sep 2015 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 22
Nooooooo! You can't cliffy us! Or send Edward to evil vamp prison!
Btw, damned glad to see you back!
Date: 14 Sep 2015 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 22
I am so happy you are back I have missed you and this story I have looked for it thinking that I was just missing it. Thanks so much for the wonderful chapter OMG so much going on they cant find Edward guilty just say NOOOOOOOO. Cant wait for more
Date: 14 Sep 2015 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 22
Please update ASAFP.
Date: 13 Sep 2015 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bella is not too smart, is she?
Date: 13 Sep 2015 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 22
I am so pleased you have come back to writing this story, I really like it, in fact I have read it twice, and I recently read the last chapter again, and when I saw that you had updated it I was very happy.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2015 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 22
I was sitting at work minding my own business when an email notification popped up. Went to open it and lo and behold, it was to inform me the author has made an update. Did my eyes deceive me? I dared not to get my hopes up as I slowly clicked on the link, held me breath and wished for the best. In front of me was the long-awaited chapter. I couldn't belive my eyes as I was doing the butt wiggle dance in my chair while glancing around to make sure no one was looking my way thinking I was having a seizure. Your update made my day. I love this story!!
Date: 13 Sep 2015 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 22
im glad your back! ive missed this story and cannot wait to read more.....
Date: 13 Sep 2015 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 22
Someone is out to get rid of Edward.... I'm glad for the update! If I remember correctly Edward is like the Ultimate Vampire? Isn't there a Prophecy about being the vampire king or something?
Date: 13 Sep 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
i may have missed this regarding mates but
why cant bella be changed? especially since her mate
is a vampire and not just another human?
Date: 13 Sep 2015 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thank you for continuing with this. It is one of my favourites and I 're read regularly. I hope RL gives you a break.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2015 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 22
Even after all this time you still have me hanging on to that cliff edge by my fingernails. Please don't leave it so long this time.
Great writing
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2015 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
Welcome back. :)
I'm happy to hear you'll continue this quite unique story, but I can understand why you took some time-out. I'm so sorry for your loss.
Looks like Edward was found guilty... which means years and years of separation. Somehow I can't see that happening...
I'm looking forward to your next update. :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2015 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 22
:) loving this story
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh wow, what a come back! We knew they had it out for Edward, but this is war!
Welcome back!
Date: 12 Sep 2015 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 22
Yay TY for updating. I'm sorry to hear about your grandma.
NoNO........,Nothing can happen to my Edward. The angst ugh a separation No! (Hugs)
So glad ur back