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Reviewer: TiramiSue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 14 Never Say Never

Sooo....meeting the parents prt. 1 went really well!!^^ Charlie and Landon really were sweet ;D

Is it bad that I kinda want to give Bella a slap in the back of her head for not saying those three little words to Edward?!?!?!. Like in his face and not just his bedroom door!! Yeah, I know she had a lot to deal with and she has still a lot to struggle with....but give that man a break! Impatient much?! Why yes, I am, thank you very much ;D ;D ;D  There were at least three moments in this story I thought she would do it....but no! ^^ I know, it´s porbably going to happen really soon, but still!! ;D

Anyway, looking forward to Bella meeting Edward´s family and everything else! ^^

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 18 Lady in Red

well mike didnt do anything to look! i hope for her sake that they catch the helper soon ! keep the chatpers comming



Author's Response:

HI, I know it’s been a while since the last update, but the wait will soon come to an end. I hope you all had an awesome Christmas is you celebrated it. I know I had a great time with my family. So even though it’s a little late, here is a little gift from me in the form of a teaser form the next chapter of TLA. 

 

The next chapter will post on Friday morning and we will then get back to our regular routine.

 

I can’t begin to tell you how much your support and love of this story means to me and how much I appreciate your patience while I took this short break.

 

~Eternally Addicted~

 

Here’s your teaser.

 

“What are you up to, Cullen?”

 

“Just wanna help my girl relax before she goes to bed. I know this has been hard for you and I want to take care of you. Is that so bad?” he asked as he took my hand and pulled me up off the bed and held me tightly against him.

 

“Mmm, nothing wrong with it at all,” I said as I reached up and placed a soft kiss where his jaw and neck met. “I just have one request though.”

 

“And what would that be, Sweetness?”

 

“That you join me.”

 

“I think I can arrange that,” he said lowering his face and covering my lips with his. Without breaking the kiss, he picked me up and carried me to the bathroom.

 

Setting me back down on my feet, we began to undress each other, taking our time and savoring every moment as we kissed and touched until we were both bare. Edward had dimmed the light in the room, giving it a soft glow similar to that of candle light.

 

“No candles?” I teased, leaning my head back, allowing him better access to the spot on my neck where he was currently placing languid open mouthed kisses.

 

“Nope. Remember you are the only woman who has ever been here. So I am totally unprepared for setting up romantic moments. But you can be sure I will rectify that as soon as I can because I plan to have plenty of them here with you.”

 

“You’re gonna spoil me, Edward.”

 

“That’s the plan, Sweetness. Now let’s get you in the water before it gets cold.”

 

 

Reviewer: TiramiSue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 12 Used To

Holy Shit!!! Duuuuuuuuude!!!!Where the hell did you got the idea for the closet trap from?!?! That could have come straight from CSI (insert city name here ....^^) or something like that! Thumbs up for that one!!! ;D I still have no idea what to think of Jake....is he the accomplice or is he just a jerk?! Yeah, he got injured, but that could have been a sacrifice for the cause...but then he went to find out if Bella was ok....grrrrrrr....I´m getting frustrated over here ;D Oh well, I still love the story!!!

Edward was as sweet as honey as always!! ^^ And yeah, Bella made a step in the right direction by talking some stuff with Edward out...but goddamnit girl, grab that guy and give him a gig ass smoochie!!!

Reviewer: TiramiSue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 11 My Last Breath

*phew*...really good chapter!!! My emotions were all over the place! From gushing over Edwards sweetness to suspense when they entered the house to dread when Bella sank to the floor/ when Edward and Emmet shot at the door..(because of the gas- could have been inflammable)^^

Reviewer: TiramiSue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 10 False Pretense

Whew...you really weren´t lying when you said that there was quite a bit of info in this chapter! ;D I still have no real idea who the accomplice could be- there are so many possibilities/ suspects! You are really evil ;D

Poor Bella- she never stood a chance against the force of a doubled cullen- charme ^^ Especially not when the manipulative pixie was involved ;D  Nice to see that Bella made first contact with Edward´s family and that she FINALLY got to meet Jasper ;D I thought that would never happen ;D

Is it just me or was Edward´s reaction towards invitation to join her,Jasper and Chelsea and Marcus for dinner a wee bit...off?! Is there a little bit more to their story?! Hmmm....(I´ve read a quite stories recently which were a bit mysterious, meaning it took a while for all the dots to be connected...so yeah...I may be a bit paranoid by now and see things and get suspicious about them when there actually nothing about it...*eyeroll*...- just ignore my ramblings if it gets too much ;D  )

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 18 Lady in Red

I liked this chapter much better than the last.  Yes I watched the commentary with Rob and Kristen and I loved it.  I laughed so much at them and his accent too.  Its so dam cute.



Author's Response:

HI, I know it’s been a while since the last update, but the wait will soon come to an end. I hope you all had an awesome Christmas is you celebrated it. I know I had a great time with my family. So even though it’s a little late, here is a little gift from me in the form of a teaser form the next chapter of TLA. 

 

The next chapter will post on Friday morning and we will then get back to our regular routine.

 

I can’t begin to tell you how much your support and love of this story means to me and how much I appreciate your patience while I took this short break.

 

~Eternally Addicted~

 

Here’s your teaser.

 

“What are you up to, Cullen?”

 

“Just wanna help my girl relax before she goes to bed. I know this has been hard for you and I want to take care of you. Is that so bad?” he asked as he took my hand and pulled me up off the bed and held me tightly against him.

 

“Mmm, nothing wrong with it at all,” I said as I reached up and placed a soft kiss where his jaw and neck met. “I just have one request though.”

 

“And what would that be, Sweetness?”

 

“That you join me.”

 

“I think I can arrange that,” he said lowering his face and covering my lips with his. Without breaking the kiss, he picked me up and carried me to the bathroom.

 

Setting me back down on my feet, we began to undress each other, taking our time and savoring every moment as we kissed and touched until we were both bare. Edward had dimmed the light in the room, giving it a soft glow similar to that of candle light.

 

“No candles?” I teased, leaning my head back, allowing him better access to the spot on my neck where he was currently placing languid open mouthed kisses.

 

“Nope. Remember you are the only woman who has ever been here. So I am totally unprepared for setting up romantic moments. But you can be sure I will rectify that as soon as I can because I plan to have plenty of them here with you.”

 

“You’re gonna spoil me, Edward.”

 

“That’s the plan, Sweetness. Now let’s get you in the water before it gets cold.”

 

 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 18 Lady in Red

Damn, the apples are back, and on her bed no less....how very creepy to come home to that.

Another great chapter...that Chelsea is a piece of work, some people are so delusional and self-absorbed that they can't relate to anyone, so I feel sorry for her husband, but also giggled that Rose scared her off with Bella's threat of carrying a gun.



Author's Response:

HI, I know it’s been a while since the last update, but the wait will soon come to an end. I hope you all had an awesome Christmas is you celebrated it. I know I had a great time with my family. So even though it’s a little late, here is a little gift from me in the form of a teaser form the next chapter of TLA. 

 

The next chapter will post on Friday morning and we will then get back to our regular routine.

 

I can’t begin to tell you how much your support and love of this story means to me and how much I appreciate your patience while I took this short break.

 

~Eternally Addicted~

 

Here’s your teaser.

 

“What are you up to, Cullen?”

 

“Just wanna help my girl relax before she goes to bed. I know this has been hard for you and I want to take care of you. Is that so bad?” he asked as he took my hand and pulled me up off the bed and held me tightly against him.

 

“Mmm, nothing wrong with it at all,” I said as I reached up and placed a soft kiss where his jaw and neck met. “I just have one request though.”

 

“And what would that be, Sweetness?”

 

“That you join me.”

 

“I think I can arrange that,” he said lowering his face and covering my lips with his. Without breaking the kiss, he picked me up and carried me to the bathroom.

 

Setting me back down on my feet, we began to undress each other, taking our time and savoring every moment as we kissed and touched until we were both bare. Edward had dimmed the light in the room, giving it a soft glow similar to that of candle light.

 

“No candles?” I teased, leaning my head back, allowing him better access to the spot on my neck where he was currently placing languid open mouthed kisses.

 

“Nope. Remember you are the only woman who has ever been here. So I am totally unprepared for setting up romantic moments. But you can be sure I will rectify that as soon as I can because I plan to have plenty of them here with you.”

 

“You’re gonna spoil me, Edward.”

 

“That’s the plan, Sweetness. Now let’s get you in the water before it gets cold.”

 

 

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 17 The Only Exception

I am sorry but I didn't like the way this chapter was written.  The whole thing was written as if Bella was telling us a story instead of us reading it happening in the present.  I mean it was like "This happened and that happened and we did this and we did that."  I mean there wasn't much direct dialogue where they spoke to each other and told the story as themselves.   I dont think I am explaining good. I hope you understand what I mean.



Author's Response:

I am sorry to hear you felt that way. I don't know what else to say. I know you were promised a teaser for chapter 18 with this, but instead I have teh chapter done and ready to post and will be doing so in just a few minutes.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

EA~

Reviewer: TiramiSue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 8 Everybody's Fool

*Sigh* what can I say...I know it was unevitable that Bella would find out and the way she found probably importan in itsself since she wouldn´t have gotten to know certain things about Edward and the case...but still...-it´s just sooo frustrating!!!! I have though that they will come along...and soon!! ;D

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Frist let me say that I have tremendously enjoyed reading all of your reveiws over the last couple of days. Thank you so much for taking the time to leave them. Nope it wasn't good the way she found out. But I can promise you they will work it all out. I am a HEA kind of girl.

 

Thanks again for reading and for alll your awsome reviews. I can't wait to see what you think of the rest.

 

EA~

Reviewer: TiramiSue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 7 Secrets

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! And BAM- here we go!!! While reading the last bit of the chapter I was thinking that they all are going to be pissed at each other when they find out what the other haven been doing...especially Bella...but finding out like THAT?!?!? Holy fuckery!!!

Slowly, the bits are coming together!! So Bella looks like James ex-girlfriend...and all his other victims....Is it just me or does that sound bad?!?!? ;D ;D ^^  Maybe I was a little too hasty saying Jake was the mole- but the way he behaved in the elevator was a wee bit intence and suspicious!! Oh well...I´ll just have to sit and wait here patiently to out....;D

Reviewer: TiramiSue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 5 Black Holes and Revelations

And here we go.....I was dreading this moment.... *pout* ;D

I´m really curious about what is to come now!!! My guess is on Black being the mole....^^

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 17 The Only Exception

well its going to take a lot more than a jeaous bitch to break them up



Author's Response:

You are so right. The jealous bitch doesn't stand a chance. I know you were promised a teaser for chapter 18 with this, but instead I am going to give ya the whole chapter. I have it done and ready to post so it will be up in just a few miniutes.

 

Thanks so much for reading!!

Reviewer: TiramiSue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 Haunted

Really nice chapter/introduction!!! I really liked what I read so far!^^

 I absolutely love that you switched the position of Bella and Edward (as in Bella being the gifted one but not being able to read Edward)! Jake was creepy and soo deserved his kick in the nats ;D

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 16 Monsters

James is so creepy, and I am pretty sure he is going to feel betrayed by Bella now that he saw her with Edward...this does not look good for them.  Can't wait to see what happens next and who the mole is - Thanks



Author's Response:

Yes James is super creepy. Soon things with the case will begin to unravel and you will learn it all. Until then here is the teaser for chaper 17.

Thanks for reading, EA~

I went back downstairs and tried to occupy myself and not think about the fact that Bella was upstairs in my bathroom naked and wet. It wasn't an easy thing to do. Thoughts of her in my tub caused images of the day she had sprayed herself down after she'd washed her car to fill my mind. My head and my heart were telling me it was too soon to jump back into a physical relationship with her, that I had to take things at her pace, but my body was screaming just the opposite. Sleeping next to her every night and feeling her body pressed up against mine was bliss and torture all at the same time. I loved being there with her, having her in my arms all night long, but I was also yearning to touch her and make love to her again.

My thoughts shifted to the conversation we'd had the other day. I'd been sleeping in her room with her ever since the night we came back from her parent's house. After the first few days of me going back and forth between the two rooms to get what I needed, Bella said there was no way she was sleeping without me again so I should just move all of my stuff into her room. I was a little concerned that she was using me as a security blanket of sorts. I tried to not make a big deal about it but in the end I had to know if it was because she wanted me there for me or because of the bad dreams she'd been having, since it was the dreams that instigated my being there in the first place. Once we talked about it she assured me that while it may have started out because of the dreams, she loved having me in bed next to her and wanted me there because she loved me and didn't want to be away from me. Bella also told me that she'd only had one nightmare since we'd been out to the prison and it wasn't as intense as the others. Her explanation came as a relief to me. If she had been keeping me there because of the dreams, I would have stayed. But I would have also suggested that she talk to someone about her dreams, that they may be bothering her more than they should. It appeared that confronting Reynolds and seeing he was indeed still locked up gave her the result she had hoped it would.

Not wanting to be away from her any longer and thinking she'd be done with her bath soon, I made sure the loft was locked up, the alarm was set and then grabbed her bag, taking it upstairs to my room with me. I snickered to myself when it dawned on me that she'd been so excited to get in the tub, she'd forgotten to take her bag with her, meaning she wouldn't have anything to wear with her in the bathroom.

I got undressed and slipped into a pair of gym shorts and a t-shirt. Lounging across my bed I turned on the TV and caught up on all the local news while I waited for Bella to be finished with her bath. I was only slightly disappointed when she emerged from the bathroom, wearing one of my button-down shirts. And I say only slightly because even though I had hoped she'd be in nothing more than a towel, she was damn sexy wearing my clothes.

"Um… I hope you don't mind. It seems in my haste to try out your tub, I forgot my bag downstairs." She had a hint of pink on her cheeks as she pulled her bottom lip in between her teeth while she leaned against the doorway, waiting for my reply.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 16 Monsters

wow I was thinking that Jacob was James accomplis but he wasn't on the visiting log. So......... the only other person I am thinking now is Seth. He has access and can be the leak in the department also.



Author's Response:

Things aren't always as they appear to be. You might still be surprised. Soon it will all start to fall into place. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Here is your teaser for chaper 17, EA~

I went back downstairs and tried to occupy myself and not think about the fact that Bella was upstairs in my bathroom naked and wet. It wasn't an easy thing to do. Thoughts of her in my tub caused images of the day she had sprayed herself down after she'd washed her car to fill my mind. My head and my heart were telling me it was too soon to jump back into a physical relationship with her, that I had to take things at her pace, but my body was screaming just the opposite. Sleeping next to her every night and feeling her body pressed up against mine was bliss and torture all at the same time. I loved being there with her, having her in my arms all night long, but I was also yearning to touch her and make love to her again.

My thoughts shifted to the conversation we'd had the other day. I'd been sleeping in her room with her ever since the night we came back from her parent's house. After the first few days of me going back and forth between the two rooms to get what I needed, Bella said there was no way she was sleeping without me again so I should just move all of my stuff into her room. I was a little concerned that she was using me as a security blanket of sorts. I tried to not make a big deal about it but in the end I had to know if it was because she wanted me there for me or because of the bad dreams she'd been having, since it was the dreams that instigated my being there in the first place. Once we talked about it she assured me that while it may have started out because of the dreams, she loved having me in bed next to her and wanted me there because she loved me and didn't want to be away from me. Bella also told me that she'd only had one nightmare since we'd been out to the prison and it wasn't as intense as the others. Her explanation came as a relief to me. If she had been keeping me there because of the dreams, I would have stayed. But I would have also suggested that she talk to someone about her dreams, that they may be bothering her more than they should. It appeared that confronting Reynolds and seeing he was indeed still locked up gave her the result she had hoped it would.

Not wanting to be away from her any longer and thinking she'd be done with her bath soon, I made sure the loft was locked up, the alarm was set and then grabbed her bag, taking it upstairs to my room with me. I snickered to myself when it dawned on me that she'd been so excited to get in the tub, she'd forgotten to take her bag with her, meaning she wouldn't have anything to wear with her in the bathroom.

I got undressed and slipped into a pair of gym shorts and a t-shirt. Lounging across my bed I turned on the TV and caught up on all the local news while I waited for Bella to be finished with her bath. I was only slightly disappointed when she emerged from the bathroom, wearing one of my button-down shirts. And I say only slightly because even though I had hoped she'd be in nothing more than a towel, she was damn sexy wearing my clothes.

"Um… I hope you don't mind. It seems in my haste to try out your tub, I forgot my bag downstairs." She had a hint of pink on her cheeks as she pulled her bottom lip in between her teeth while she leaned against the doorway, waiting for my reply.

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 16 Monsters

Another great chapter! LOVE IT! Laissez les bon temps rouler! (let the good times roll. Not that  being stalked by proxy by a psycho serial killer is a good time, but I'm sure you catch my meaning! ;))




Author's Response:

I have a feeling you will love chapter 17 even more. Love the saying in French!! I think a French speaking Edward would be incredibly sexy. LOL  Thanks for reading, here is your teaser for chapter 17. EA~

 

I went back downstairs and tried to occupy myself and not think about the fact that Bella was upstairs in my bathroom naked and wet. It wasn't an easy thing to do. Thoughts of her in my tub caused images of the day she had sprayed herself down after she'd washed her car to fill my mind. My head and my heart were telling me it was too soon to jump back into a physical relationship with her, that I had to take things at her pace, but my body was screaming just the opposite. Sleeping next to her every night and feeling her body pressed up against mine was bliss and torture all at the same time. I loved being there with her, having her in my arms all night long, but I was also yearning to touch her and make love to her again.

My thoughts shifted to the conversation we'd had the other day. I'd been sleeping in her room with her ever since the night we came back from her parent's house. After the first few days of me going back and forth between the two rooms to get what I needed, Bella said there was no way she was sleeping without me again so I should just move all of my stuff into her room. I was a little concerned that she was using me as a security blanket of sorts. I tried to not make a big deal about it but in the end I had to know if it was because she wanted me there for me or because of the bad dreams she'd been having, since it was the dreams that instigated my being there in the first place. Once we talked about it she assured me that while it may have started out because of the dreams, she loved having me in bed next to her and wanted me there because she loved me and didn't want to be away from me. Bella also told me that she'd only had one nightmare since we'd been out to the prison and it wasn't as intense as the others. Her explanation came as a relief to me. If she had been keeping me there because of the dreams, I would have stayed. But I would have also suggested that she talk to someone about her dreams, that they may be bothering her more than they should. It appeared that confronting Reynolds and seeing he was indeed still locked up gave her the result she had hoped it would.

Not wanting to be away from her any longer and thinking she'd be done with her bath soon, I made sure the loft was locked up, the alarm was set and then grabbed her bag, taking it upstairs to my room with me. I snickered to myself when it dawned on me that she'd been so excited to get in the tub, she'd forgotten to take her bag with her, meaning she wouldn't have anything to wear with her in the bathroom.

I got undressed and slipped into a pair of gym shorts and a t-shirt. Lounging across my bed I turned on the TV and caught up on all the local news while I waited for Bella to be finished with her bath. I was only slightly disappointed when she emerged from the bathroom, wearing one of my button-down shirts. And I say only slightly because even though I had hoped she'd be in nothing more than a towel, she was damn sexy wearing my clothes.

"Um… I hope you don't mind. It seems in my haste to try out your tub, I forgot my bag downstairs." She had a hint of pink on her cheeks as she pulled her bottom lip in between her teeth while she leaned against the doorway, waiting for my reply.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 15 Love You Out Loud

Very revealing chapter, I was wondering what caused Bella's trust issues, so like Edward says, it all makes more sense now.  Can't wait for the next Chapter!



Author's Response:

So glad that you understand her hesitancy better now. I hope to have chapter 16 up on Sunday. Thanks so much for reading. Here is your teaser.

~*~

"I don't know, Bella," Emmett said as he debated whether or not to agree to my visiting Reynolds. I had spent the whole morning in my office contemplating what I would say to him in order to have the best shot at him agreeing. I knew if I couldn't convince Emmett, there was no way of convincing Edward. So I worked on my boss and good friend first, knowing he was completely aware of the number of times I had already come face to face with the monster who was locked up just two hours south of here.

"Look, Emmett, I haven't come face to face with him since all of this bullshit with the apples and the notes began. I need to see that he is still in that prison with my own eyes. I know it's a bit ridiculous and the rational side of my brain knows he is. But there's the other side that was scared shitless by what took place in that house and the nightmares I've been having since then that needs to do this. I need it for my own sanity. Besides I want the opportunity to confront him about the apples and letters and see if I can catch him off guard. Get a read on him and see if I can make him slip up and give us some information."

"You've been having nightmares?" Emmett asked, surprised by my admission.

"Yes, which only increases my desire to make sure he is still in that prison. And I've had enough training and experience dealing with Reynolds that I know I can go in there and keep my cool around him. I want to make him see he is not getting to me even if he has to some degree."

"I hear what you're saying, Bella. I get it, I really do. But do you really think you might be able to get him to admit something?" Emmett asked quizzically.

"I got him to confess to the crimes he was being accused of didn't I?" I retorted.

"Yes you did. But this is personal, Bella. Can you really go in there and not let him rattle you?"

"Emmett, what he is doing to me is nothing compared to what he did to those other women. I had to sit there and listen to him tell me about what he did. So yeah, I think I can. I didn't let the gruesome vulgarity of what he'd done to them get to me when I'd convinced Reynolds that I understood him and empathized with him in order to get a confession. I won't let it bother me now either. If it will make you happy, you and Edward can both come with me. I know that either you or Seth would have to go anyways, so why not take Edward too? He won't like it anymore than you, so I figure he'll insist on going. Might as well just avert the argument and set it up that way," I said as I continued to argue my case with him.

"You should have been a fucking attorney, Swan," Emmett huffed.

"Oh, but then I wouldn't have the pleasure of working with you," I added sarcastically before painting a fake pout on my face that had Emmett rolling with laughter the second he saw it.

"Fine, I'll call down to Stafford and let them know we'll be there tomorrow. In the mean time, you get to call lover boy and make sure he is available to go then.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 15 Love You Out Loud

well im happy she is finally letting him in her life completly! cant wait to see what happen next 



Author's Response:

Yes now that there are no more secrets between them, they can strengthen their repationship. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I should have chapter 16 up on Sunday. Here is your teaser.

EA~

 

 

"I don't know, Bella," Emmett said as he debated whether or not to agree to my visiting Reynolds. I had spent the whole morning in my office contemplating what I would say to him in order to have the best shot at him agreeing. I knew if I couldn't convince Emmett, there was no way of convincing Edward. So I worked on my boss and good friend first, knowing he was completely aware of the number of times I had already come face to face with the monster who was locked up just two hours south of here.

"Look, Emmett, I haven't come face to face with him since all of this bullshit with the apples and the notes began. I need to see that he is still in that prison with my own eyes. I know it's a bit ridiculous and the rational side of my brain knows he is. But there's the other side that was scared shitless by what took place in that house and the nightmares I've been having since then that needs to do this. I need it for my own sanity. Besides I want the opportunity to confront him about the apples and letters and see if I can catch him off guard. Get a read on him and see if I can make him slip up and give us some information."

"You've been having nightmares?" Emmett asked, surprised by my admission.

"Yes, which only increases my desire to make sure he is still in that prison. And I've had enough training and experience dealing with Reynolds that I know I can go in there and keep my cool around him. I want to make him see he is not getting to me even if he has to some degree."

"I hear what you're saying, Bella. I get it, I really do. But do you really think you might be able to get him to admit something?" Emmett asked quizzically.

"I got him to confess to the crimes he was being accused of didn't I?" I retorted.

"Yes you did. But this is personal, Bella. Can you really go in there and not let him rattle you?"

"Emmett, what he is doing to me is nothing compared to what he did to those other women. I had to sit there and listen to him tell me about what he did. So yeah, I think I can. I didn't let the gruesome vulgarity of what he'd done to them get to me when I'd convinced Reynolds that I understood him and empathized with him in order to get a confession. I won't let it bother me now either. If it will make you happy, you and Edward can both come with me. I know that either you or Seth would have to go anyways, so why not take Edward too? He won't like it anymore than you, so I figure he'll insist on going. Might as well just avert the argument and set it up that way," I said as I continued to argue my case with him.

"You should have been a fucking attorney, Swan," Emmett huffed.

"Oh, but then I wouldn't have the pleasure of working with you," I added sarcastically before painting a fake pout on my face that had Emmett rolling with laughter the second he saw it.

"Fine, I'll call down to Stafford and let them know we'll be there tomorrow. In the mean time, you get to call lover boy and make sure he is available to go then.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 15 Love You Out Loud

I had a feeling she was going to want to go see James in Prison. But it makes since. She might get some information from him or maybe find out that he is not really doing it. Maybe. As for Edward and Bella and I glad that they have cleared the air with more of their past and they are moving forward.



Author's Response:

Yes Bella is hoping to get something from James to help them crack this case. Now that there are no more secrets between Edward and Bella they can mover forward and strengthen their relationship. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.  Here is your teaser,

 

EA~

 

"I don't know, Bella," Emmett said as he debated whether or not to agree to my visiting Reynolds. I had spent the whole morning in my office contemplating what I would say to him in order to have the best shot at him agreeing. I knew if I couldn't convince Emmett, there was no way of convincing Edward. So I worked on my boss and good friend first, knowing he was completely aware of the number of times I had already come face to face with the monster who was locked up just two hours south of here.

"Look, Emmett, I haven't come face to face with him since all of this bullshit with the apples and the notes began. I need to see that he is still in that prison with my own eyes. I know it's a bit ridiculous and the rational side of my brain knows he is. But there's the other side that was scared shitless by what took place in that house and the nightmares I've been having since then that needs to do this. I need it for my own sanity. Besides I want the opportunity to confront him about the apples and letters and see if I can catch him off guard. Get a read on him and see if I can make him slip up and give us some information."

"You've been having nightmares?" Emmett asked, surprised by my admission.

"Yes, which only increases my desire to make sure he is still in that prison. And I've had enough training and experience dealing with Reynolds that I know I can go in there and keep my cool around him. I want to make him see he is not getting to me even if he has to some degree."

"I hear what you're saying, Bella. I get it, I really do. But do you really think you might be able to get him to admit something?" Emmett asked quizzically.

"I got him to confess to the crimes he was being accused of didn't I?" I retorted.

"Yes you did. But this is personal, Bella. Can you really go in there and not let him rattle you?"

"Emmett, what he is doing to me is nothing compared to what he did to those other women. I had to sit there and listen to him tell me about what he did. So yeah, I think I can. I didn't let the gruesome vulgarity of what he'd done to them get to me when I'd convinced Reynolds that I understood him and empathized with him in order to get a confession. I won't let it bother me now either. If it will make you happy, you and Edward can both come with me. I know that either you or Seth would have to go anyways, so why not take Edward too? He won't like it anymore than you, so I figure he'll insist on going. Might as well just avert the argument and set it up that way," I said as I continued to argue my case with him.

"You should have been a fucking attorney, Swan," Emmett huffed.

"Oh, but then I wouldn't have the pleasure of working with you," I added sarcastically before painting a fake pout on my face that had Emmett rolling with laughter the second he saw it.

"Fine, I'll call down to Stafford and let them know we'll be there tomorrow. In the mean time, you get to call lover boy and make sure he is available to go then.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 2 So Far Away

Wonderful story, I really like how these two are getting to know each other, I really do hope when she find out what is really happening that she will not be to angry with Edward.

I also hope that they realise that what they have is true.

Love the story, I am going to pimp you out his week on People Like Us if that is okay with you.

Fiorella



Author's Response:

Hi, Thanks so much for reading. I am so glad that you are enjoying the story. I am really having a great time writing it. I don't mind the pimping at all and thank you so much for thinking enough of this little fic to want to do that.

 

Thanks again and I can't wait to see what you think as you read on.

 

EA~Mary

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:07 PM Title: chapter4 All I Need

That was a nice first lemon.  I was worried though becuase he left his bag in he car and that is where his gun is. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. I have pictures and  so teasers on blog.

eternallyaddcited.blogspot.com

 

EA~

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 14 Never Say Never

Good to see that Edward suvived Charlie...can't wait to get back to the mystery, so keep up the good writing!

Author's Response:

We have just a couple more confessions from these two in the next chapter along with Bella getting to meet E's parents. But soon we will get back to the mystery.

As promised here is your teaser for chapter 15. I hope to post it this weekend. Thanks for reading, EA~

"Mmmm, why are you awake?" Edward rasped, while burying his face in the crook of my neck. "Did you have another bad dream?"

"No, you must have scared all the bad dreams away. I slept just fine once you were here," I admitted to him because it was the truth. It was the best I had slept in a long time.

"Is that so?"

"Yep. I guess you're like my personal dream catcher or something," I teased.

"Well I'll happily perform that duty anytime," he said placing a kiss just behind my ear.

I stretched before rolling over to face him. "I'm gonna hold you to that, ya know," I whispered as I scooted as close to him as I could get.

"I have no doubt you will, Sweetness. In fact, I'm looking forward it," he said softly as his arms tightened around me, holding me. "You sure you're ok?"

"Yeah I was just thinking," I answered after placing a kiss on the side of his neck.

"Penny for your thoughts," he offered.

"Just a little nervous about meeting your parents," I murmured against his neck.

"Don't be," he said.

"How can you be so sure they won't think I am messing up your life? Look at all you've had to give up because of me. I've just recently realized how much being here with me all the time has disrupted your normal life."

"Bella, first of all, it doesn't matter to me what they think. Or maybe I should say it's not going to change anything. Not how I feel or the fact I want to be here. What you are failing to see is that I haven't had to give up anything. I chose to do it and I have no regrets about it at all whatsoever. No one forced me to take on the task of keeping you safe. I volunteered. And given the choice again, I'd do it in a heartbeat."

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 14 Never Say Never

well im happy that she finally let him back in! keep the chatpers comming



Author's Response:

Yes she is letting go and giving into her feelings.  Glad you enjoyed the chapter, as promised here is your teaser for chapter 15. I hope to have it posted this weekend.  Thanks fro reading, EA~

 

"Mmmm, why are you awake?" Edward rasped, while burying his face in the crook of my neck. "Did you have another bad dream?"

"No, you must have scared all the bad dreams away. I slept just fine once you were here," I admitted to him because it was the truth. It was the best I had slept in a long time.

"Is that so?"

"Yep. I guess you're like my personal dream catcher or something," I teased.

"Well I'll happily perform that duty anytime," he said placing a kiss just behind my ear.

I stretched before rolling over to face him. "I'm gonna hold you to that, ya know," I whispered as I scooted as close to him as I could get.

"I have no doubt you will, Sweetness. In fact, I'm looking forward it," he said softly as his arms tightened around me, holding me. "You sure you're ok?"

"Yeah I was just thinking," I answered after placing a kiss on the side of his neck.

"Penny for your thoughts," he offered.

"Just a little nervous about meeting your parents," I murmured against his neck.

"Don't be," he said.

"How can you be so sure they won't think I am messing up your life? Look at all you've had to give up because of me. I've just recently realized how much being here with me all the time has disrupted your normal life."

"Bella, first of all, it doesn't matter to me what they think. Or maybe I should say it's not going to change anything. Not how I feel or the fact I want to be here. What you are failing to see is that I haven't had to give up anything. I chose to do it and I have no regrets about it at all whatsoever. No one forced me to take on the task of keeping you safe. I volunteered. And given the choice again, I'd do it in a heartbeat."

Reviewer: themrsmittens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 14 Never Say Never

Loved it! Thanks for the Edward Alec time. Also I am so glad you let Edward "fit" with the Swans. I totally agree with you that she needed to see it and I enjoyed it as well.



Author's Response:

Yes Bella is finally see how well he fits into her life and family and is giving in to her feelings for him. Now she just has to get brave enough to say those big three words to him.  As promised here is your teaser for chapter 15. Thanks for reading, EA~

"Mmmm, why are you awake?" Edward rasped, while burying his face in the crook of my neck. "Did you have another bad dream?"

"No, you must have scared all the bad dreams away. I slept just fine once you were here," I admitted to him because it was the truth. It was the best I had slept in a long time.

"Is that so?"

"Yep. I guess you're like my personal dream catcher or something," I teased.

"Well I'll happily perform that duty anytime," he said placing a kiss just behind my ear.

I stretched before rolling over to face him. "I'm gonna hold you to that, ya know," I whispered as I scooted as close to him as I could get.

"I have no doubt you will, Sweetness. In fact, I'm looking forward it," he said softly as his arms tightened around me, holding me. "You sure you're ok?"

"Yeah I was just thinking," I answered after placing a kiss on the side of his neck.

"Penny for your thoughts," he offered.

"Just a little nervous about meeting your parents," I murmured against his neck.

"Don't be," he said.

"How can you be so sure they won't think I am messing up your life? Look at all you've had to give up because of me. I've just recently realized how much being here with me all the time has disrupted your normal life."

"Bella, first of all, it doesn't matter to me what they think. Or maybe I should say it's not going to change anything. Not how I feel or the fact I want to be here. What you are failing to see is that I haven't had to give up anything. I chose to do it and I have no regrets about it at all whatsoever. No one forced me to take on the task of keeping you safe. I volunteered. And given the choice again, I'd do it in a heartbeat."

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 13 Come To Me

Ok this is moving along. Good story, need updates please at least every 2 weeks.

Need this mystery to keep going.

 

 



Author's Response:

Doing my best to update weekly. Thanks so much for reading, chapter 14 should go up on Sunday. In the mean time here is your treaser.

EA~

With my parents off to bed, I scooted closer to Edward on the couch and rested my head on his shoulder. He draped his arm around me and slowly rubbed his hand up and down my arm.

"You're tired," he said.

"Mmmhmm, how can you tell?"

"Mmm, how about the fact that you can hardly keep your eyes open?"

I giggled softly and mumbled, "You noticed that huh?"

"Yep. Come on, Sweetness. It's time to get some sleep." He stood and held his hand out to me to help me up from the couch.

"But I don't wanna get up," I whined from where I had let myself flop over on the couch once he had stood up.

"Ok, hop on and I'll carry ya up," he said, turning his back to me.

I grabbed onto the back pocket of his jeans and pulled myself back up into a sitting position and then stood on the couch so that I could climb onto his back. He held my right leg in place when I hitched it on his hip and held on to his shoulders to bring my left leg up onto his other hip. No sooner than I was in place, he bent over to pick up the TV remote to turn off the screen, leaving me thinking he was going to drop me and squealing like a baby pig.

"You better be quiet or your dad is going to be out here with his gun thinking I am doing inappropriate things to you," Edward chastised me playfully as he stood up straight, tightening his hold on my legs and heading for the stairs.

As Edward carried me up the stairs, I burrowed my head against his neck while resting it on his shoulder. I tried to inhale as deeply as I could and savor his natural scent without being obvious. The real thing smelt even better than his sheets had yesterday and I found myself torn between fighting the urge to kiss his neck and wanting to cling to him as I fell asleep.

Reaching my room much faster than I would have liked, Edward was laughing as he dumped me on my back onto my bed. He obviously thought the way he choose to put me down was funny.

"That was mean." I pouted and swatted him on the arm.

"Oh poor baby," he teased. Crawling up on the bed beside me, he grabbed both my arms and hiked his leg over me so he was straddling me. While pinning me to the bed, he let his head drop onto my shoulder and remained there, hovering over me without saying a word.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2010 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 13 Come To Me

well i hope he takes edward out into the back woods and gives him a good talking to! cant wait to see what happens next to these 2 



Author's Response:

They will talk and that is all I can say without giving it away.  Here is the teaser you were promised for reviewing. Thanks so much for reading!!

 

With my parents off to bed, I scooted closer to Edward on the couch and rested my head on his shoulder. He draped his arm around me and slowly rubbed his hand up and down my arm.

“You’re tired,” he said.

“Mmmhmm, how can you tell?”

“Mmm, how about the fact that you can hardly keep your eyes open?”

I giggled softly and mumbled, “You noticed that huh?”

“Yep. Come on, Sweetness. It’s time to get some sleep.” he stood and held his hand out to me to help me up from the couch.

“But I don’t wanna get up,” I whined from where I had let myself flop over on the couch once he had stood up.

“Ok, hop on and I’ll carry ya up,” he said, turning his back to me.

I grabbed onto the back pocket of his jeans and pulled myself back up into a sitting position and then stood on the couch so that I could climb onto his back. He held my right leg in place when I hitched it on his hip and held on to his shoulders to bring my left leg up onto his other hip. No sooner than I was in place, he bent over to pick up the TV remote to turn off the screen, leaving me thinking he was going to drop me and squealing like a baby pig.

“You better be quiet or your dad is going to be out here with his gun thinking I am doing inappropriate things to you,” Edward chastised me playfully as he stood up straight, tightening his hold on my legs and heading for the stairs.

As Edward carried me up the stairs, I burrowed my head against his neck while resting it on his shoulder. I tried to inhale as deeply as I could and savor his natural scent without being obvious.  The real thing smelt even better than his sheets had yesterday and I found myself torn between fighting the urge to kiss his neck and wanting to cling to him as I fell asleep.  

Reaching my room much faster than I would have liked, Edward was laughing as he dumped me on my back onto my bed. He obviously thought the way he choose to put me down was funny.

“That was mean.” I pouted and swatted him on the arm.                                                                                                         

“Oh poor baby,” he teased. Crawling up on the bed beside me, he grabbed both my arms and hiked his leg over me so he was straddling me. While pinning me to the bed, he let his head drop onto my shoulder and remained there, hovering over me without saying a word.

 

See ya next time, EA~

 

Reviewer: themrsmittens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 12 Used To

SO glad Bella is letting go.  Can't wait for Forks.  Do we get to see Bella's brother adn his family?  I'd like to see some of Edward and Bella's brother.



Author's Response:

Yes Bella is finally letting go and giving in to her feelings for him. Yes her brother and his family will be there too. The new chapter will be going up in just a bit.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, it is so greatly appreciated.

EA~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 12 Used To

im happy shes letting edward back in even though it took her almost dying but thats stubbared bella for you! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Yes it took her a while, but I think the acccident made her really think about what if she hadn't made it out of that closet. Next chapter will be up shortly.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I greatly appriciate it.

 

EA~

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 11 My Last Breath

update more often, such a good story line.



Author's Response:

So glad you like it. I am writing as fast as I can. I will be posting shapter 12 sometime tonight.  Thanks for reading.

EA~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 11 My Last Breath

well i hope that she realizes that life is too short for her problems! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

I think you will be happy with the change in Bella's behavior coming in chapter 12. I hope to get it up tonight.

 

Thanks for reading,

EA~

Reviewer: loveofjasper Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 10 False Pretense

oh she is under his spell



Author's Response:

Yes she is. I hope to have chapter 12 posted this evening. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

EA~

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 2 So Far Away

Nice!



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for reading, EA~

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 10 False Pretense

Well Finally Bella! 

 

Ahh. I bet money Black is a dirty cop. I dont know why, I just feel it.



Author's Response:

Everyone seems to want to point the finger at Jake. But wherther he is really the bad guy or just an obvious decoy remains to be seen.

I have a funny question. I posted two chapters at the same time, 9 and 10, but no one seems to be reponding to 9 and I am wondering it you all got an update alert for both chapters.

 

Thanks so much for reading, chapter 11 will be up around Friday.

EA~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 10 False Pretense

well i hope she jumps him soon that tension she is carrying is horrible. cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming



Author's Response:

Bella is carrying around a lot of tension. As I have promised before she will be giving in to her feelings for Edward very soon. There will be a bit of drama in chapter 11 which will post around Friday, but after that, I think our girl will begin to see what she is missing out on.

I have a bit of a funny question for you. I posted chapters 9 and 10 at the same time the other day, and no one seems to be responding to chapter 9. I am just curious if you got an alert for both chapters.

 

Thanks fo rreading,

EA~

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 8 Everybody's Fool

Love is there, but we have a strong story line.  We need to keep them both going. She is trained she knows what had to happen to keep her safe. She knows now he was hired and that relationship built from their time together. She is grown and a professional especially on matters of the mind.

 

Proceed.



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying the story so far. Up next we will get a little fun as well as the much awaited talk between Edward and Bella.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Check out my blog on Mondays, I always have a teaser for the next chapter. This week the one for chapter nine is aleady up.

 

EA~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 8 Everybody's Fool

well i think she handeled it well ! cant wait to see what ahppens next 



Author's Response:

It can't be easy to have learned all that she did.  I imagine its har dto be relieved that Edward is not the accomplice and be pissed at him at the same time.

Coming up in chapter nine our dear couple have a little fun as well as that much needed talk they need to have.There is a teaser on my blog now.

Thanks for reading.

EA~

 

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 8 Everybody's Fool

I can completely understand why Bella is so hesitant to trust Edward again.  You did a great job conveying Edward and Bella's conflicting emotions.  It's going to be very interesting now that they are living together. 

I can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

You will get to see a little of what happens as a result of them living together in the next chapter.  Plus they will have a nice long talk.

Thanks for reading, if you want to see a teaser for chapter nine it is posted on my blog.

EA~

 

 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 7 Secrets

Good chapter, really enjoying the story...hopefully they figure out all the secrets and miscommunications are bad and fess up to each other.  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying the story so much. Up next our favorite couple as a little but of fun as well as they finally have that long awaited talk they need to have.

Thanks for reading, there is a teaser for the chapter up on my blog now.

EA~

Reviewer: twilightme1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 7 Secrets

OMG. I wonder if she will forgive him? That is a lot for her to take on at one time. Update again soon

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 7 Secrets

well the boys an idiot ! cant wait tillthe next chapter 



Author's Response:

Yes the perverbial shit will be hitting the fan!!  Thanks for reading!! 

Reviewer: aricullen1134 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 Haunted

I love it!!! Awesome 1st chapter! Off to read more ;)



Author's Response:

So glad you like it. Thanks for reading!!

 

EA~

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 6 Decode

Enjoying the story



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it. Chapter seven will post later tonight. Thanks for reading!!

EA~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 6 Decode

well i think shes looking into it way to much and just needs to talk to emmett! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

She might be, but she is a bit paranoid and scared at the moment. Imagine how yo might feel if someone who is locked in solitary confinement, finds you halfway around the world.

 

Thanks for reading, chapter 7 will post later tonight.

EA~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 5 Black Holes and Revelations

well i see how she could think that hes not who he says he is! cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 2:27 PM Title: chapter4 All I Need

well if he was smart and didnt think with his manhood he should of told her the truth before he did the deed its going to be even harder when the times comes to tell her ! and shes going to be devistated! cant wait till the next chapter of this story 

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 3 Longshot

Awwwwww, lovely chapter

Reviewer: loveofjasper Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 2 So Far Away

a edward, a wet edward, yummy oh what a good thought.  I do love nana

Reviewer: loveofjasper Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 1 Haunted

laying it thick there edward!  i love that she is the one thtt can read people



Author's Response:

Oh but he's so sweet when he lays in one thick. LOL  Thanks for reading.

EA~

Reviewer: twilightme1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 2 So Far Away

I have a feeling when she finds out the truth she is gonna be pissed. She seems very closed off to him right now cause she can't "read" him but hopefully this dinner will bring her out. I like the story.



Author's Response:

I have a feeling you are absolutely right. She will not be happy. Give her some time to come around. They will learn a little more about each other in chapter 3.  For a teaser go to my blog at eternallyaddicted.blogspot.com 

 

Thanks so much for reading

EA~

Reviewer: yuri11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 1 Haunted

love it  amazing



Author's Response:

Glad you like it. Chapter 2 will post on Friday.

 

Thanks for reading,  you can find a teaser for chapter 2 on my blog.  The link is http://eternallyaddicted(dot)blogspot(dot)com  

 

 

 

Reviewer: voyanisen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 Haunted

This is very interesting, quite the mystery going on.  I like the twists you've made with their abilities.

I hope to read the next chapter soon!



Author's Response:

HI, Yeah I thought it might be interesting to have Bella expeience a bit of what vampire Edward went through not being able to read her mind.

The next chapter will post on Friday and you can find a teaser for it on my blog.  The link is    http://eternallyaddicted(dot)blogspot(dot)com 

Thanks for reading

EA

Reviewer: Aether Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 Haunted

Great first chapter. I can't wait to read your next one!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Chapter 2 will post on Friday. In the mean time you can check out a teaser on my blogsite. The link is,   http://eternallyaddicted(dot)blogspot(dot)com 

 

Thanks for reading,

EA

Reviewer: pnkats Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 1 Haunted

love it already. this story has so much potential. hope you keep it up and continue. hope update comes soon. i also reviewed on ff too

 




Author's Response:

Hi, I would tell you that chapter 2 will post on Friday, but you probaly already know that. Thanks for reviewing at both places for me!!!

 

EA

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