[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 32
So sweet they are so loving...
Why would someone shoot Madame? How terrible!
And so cute Charlie did that for Bella, he was such a good father. :)
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[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 32
omg that is so sad will they both be okay and will he propose before the recital keep it coming i am so excited for edward and bella and knowing they will have their hea is great i wait the next chapter you are a great writer
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Date: 12 Sep 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 32
Oh my goodness!!!!!! WHAT?!
Wow, what a cliffie! *sobs uncontrollably*
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Me too!
Date: 12 Sep 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 32
Aw so sad, I hope that she is alright.
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Date: 11 Sep 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 32
WHAT??? okay that's way out in right field. lol I can't wait to find out how THAT happened. thanks again bye
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Date: 11 Sep 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 31
They are the hottest couple. They better get their act together so they can pracise for the audition. They have plenty of time for sex after dance.
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Date: 11 Sep 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 31
lol they are too cute. and hot as hell. :D I loved all the teasing going on. but more than that, I loved the hot possessive stuff then they went right to making love. how cute is that? I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Thank you :) THey are cute:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 31
LOL, indeed they are! *hee hee*
But what did she mean by 'at least we were only having sex with each other'? You have some orgie outtakes you've written or something? LOL! ;)
I would've worried about someone seeing them since they were in a classroom! Naughty naughty voyeur! LOL! ;)
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No orgies in this one:) I save all of that for My Awakenings stories. SHe just means that they aren't sleeping around with other people.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 30
Wow okay first off How did I miss this chapter? I got an email letting me know chapter 31 was ready but not 30 so I read this one and WOW. that was hot. I'm right there with Edward, possessive Bella is hot. lol thanks again bye
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Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
Edward is going to be very uncomfortable dancing with a hard on.
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[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 30
Um, didn't we just go through this with Tanya? LOL! Bitches never learn!
Bella's right, a little, our dancing boy does have a problem with pushy egotistical women...or girls in Lauren's case, lol!
hee hee hee ;)
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Yeah, but Lauren is a little smarter than Tanya:)
Date: 09 Sep 2010 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 29
For a dance school, they don't do much dancing. I guess they decided to bungee jump to prove they are still alive.
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[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 29
Wow, the things we do in the name of love! LOL!!
Totally cute and fun!
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Date: 09 Sep 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 29
lol Edward totally felt her up while bungee jumping. too cute. I loved it. thanks again bye
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Date: 08 Sep 2010 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 28
I am so glad that they bought that garter set. I am surprized they didn't get caught.
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Would you want to interrupt them???
Date: 08 Sep 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 28
well I thought they were getting some loving later when she came home? not just in the dressing room? :( that's sad. oh well. lol thanks again. that chapter was just what we needed. thanks again bye
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[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 28
LOL, now that's what I call shopping! *sigh* ;)
That was too funny with Bella and Rose, too! ROFL
Loved it, fun chapter! :)
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Date: 07 Sep 2010 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 27
Edward will be fine. He has wonderful memories of his parents and a wonderful new family.
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Date: 07 Sep 2010 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter :)
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Date: 07 Sep 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 27
Wow okay so Edward has some stamina to make love twice in like 20 minutes. lol and Bella is a horndog. lol no I'm kidding but that chapter was sweet. down memory lane without the tears. thanks again bye
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They are total sex addicts!! Plus they are only eighteen. Oh, to be young again:)
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 27
you are a fabulous writer this was a beautiful chapter i can not wait till the show and so on keep it coming i await the next chapter
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[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 27
very nice ;)
*sigh*
That's about all I can say. :)
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Date: 06 Sep 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 26
I am glad that they have happy memories where they spread their ashes. They are lucky they own the house and can return whenever for more happy times.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 26
omg that was a beautiful chapter throwing the ashes in the ocean next rehersing for the show hard work and hard lovin for my couple this was very heart felt keep it coming
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Date: 06 Sep 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 26
oh you're going to make me cry like a baby. lol I loved it. thanks again bye
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Date: 06 Sep 2010 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like this chapter. Can't wait to read the rest of the story. =)
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[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 26
I had to catch up on this story, so I had several chapters to read. I missed alot, so I decided to wait and write just this one review. Hope you don't mind, ButterflyBetty. :)
I couldn't believe how tacky Tanya was getting and then FINALLY Carlisle had enough and threw her out, that was great! LOL! Surely there are bylaws and a Code of Conduct and such since the Academy is a school, so Tanya probably doesn't have a leg to stand on with her threats does she? Even if she got a high-profile lawyer? She comes off as a bitch that would try to come in and take the Academy away if she could. If she's such a bad dancer, how did she get in in the first place?? LOL!
I think it's beautiful that Bella was there when Edward Sr and Elizabeth passed. These past few chapters I have cried alot, they're so beautifully written. My tears are also from my personal life, too, so I really am crying along with the story not just because of the story. So on that note, I grieve and cope the best I can just like these characters are.
I look forward to seeing how this turns out. Do Bella and Edward nail the audition and get to work with Marcus? Of course I see them married years from now with lots of babies, just like Edward said, lol. But I'm curious...Carlisle is ten years older and he and Esme have been married since they were 18, but have no kids?
Thanks for writing another beautiful story, ButterflyBetty! :D
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 25
omg that was so sad i can not wait till the next chapter keep it coming you are a great writer i can not wait till the next chapter i can not wait till they do their piece for the show and get engaged get married and perform in a ballet company then have chilldren keep it coming
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Date: 05 Sep 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm glad Tanya is gone gone now.
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Date: 05 Sep 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 25
Tanya is one really big bitch!! im happy she got kicked out...
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Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
Poor Edward. that bitch is insane. after that comment what made her think that he would want her to touch him? shudders. lol I love it. keep it up and hopefully we get back to happier times. thanks again bye
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Date: 04 Sep 2010 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 24
oh you made me cry. lol that was sweet and so heartbreaking. :( thanks again bye
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Date: 04 Sep 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter.
Aw very sad seeing everyone say goodbye.
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Date: 03 Sep 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 23
aww that is sad...i wish they got better
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Date: 03 Sep 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
aww talk about a tearjerker. :) Poor guys. I hope they get back to a happy place soon. poor things need a happy time. :) thanks again bye
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Date: 03 Sep 2010 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 23
That was the sweetest chapter. It had me crying.
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Date: 02 Sep 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 22
So sad, I'm glad Bella is there for him.
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Date: 02 Sep 2010 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 22
I understand how Edward live in a state of denial. It is a great coping mechanism. I did it after my dad died. I didn't deal with his death for about a year. I was away at school so he was not part of my daily life. Then it het you like a ton of bricks. I am glad that Bella is able to be there for Edward. She understands death of a parent.
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Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 22
ohh poor guy. what about his mom? is she going too or just his dad? I'm sorry to see them soo upset but I can't wait till they get back to their old selves. thanks again bye
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Date: 01 Sep 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 21
They are going to have to run earlier if they are going to make out after running everyday. Carlisle is so funny.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
lol someone is always finding them!!
Date: 01 Sep 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 21
Getting caught making out on the field again, these two are adorable.
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awww! So nice everyone's there to welcome her home!!
Nice chapter, hun!
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[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
Ohhhh....so sweet...
I liked how his defiance won :)
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[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my!
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Date: 01 Sep 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 21
lol my thoughts on Romeo and Juliet EXACTLY!!! lol I love how that chapter ended. keep up the great work. thanks again
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[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 20
I have loving this cute little story on Edward and Bella.
All of your charachters are vibrent and fun.
Thank you for the quick updates as well, Loving that the most.
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Date: 31 Aug 2010 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
im happy they made it!!! tanya is a bitch!
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Date: 31 Aug 2010 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 20
I love that Tanya got her just dues. I feel sorry for Seth having to put up with her. He is such a nice kid. I hope Carlisle heard her threat.
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Date: 31 Aug 2010 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter!
I'm glad everythings fixed now, I've been waiting to read this chapter.
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Date: 31 Aug 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow what a way to end a chapter. lol thanks again for fixing those and it probably wasnt you, it was probably TWCS but whatever. lol thanks again bye
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Thank you. THey were messed up because of the site but I had to go back and reload them.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'm going to start calling you the cliffhanger queen. lol thanks again bye
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Date: 29 Aug 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
aww you cock blocker, we came back to the room and made love before we fell asleep in each others arms, how mean. Its been a while for us too your know. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Hehe, Sorry:)
Date: 28 Aug 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 17
well I would have LOVED it if Bella gave them the smack down but ANGELA of all people setting her in her place, well now that's just awesome. lol keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
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Date: 27 Aug 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
I can't believe those 2 idoit girls are going to bully her at a ballet school. They are so jealous and need to go home.
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Date: 27 Aug 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh no, what is Tanya going to say now?
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Date: 26 Aug 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
oh you kind of suck. lol I can't wait to see what Tanya has to say to miss Bella swan that hopefully makes her want to kick Tanya's ass. lol thanks again. bye
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Date: 26 Aug 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
she is so going to get preganant. birth control with other antibiotics doesnt workk at all....oooh la la.
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Date: 26 Aug 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
Madame Christine does not like that Bella has found love or is she upset that she was hurt? Edward and Bella are so cute in this story.
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Date: 26 Aug 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter, Madame Christine is there, but why is she mad?
Can't wait for more. :)
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Date: 25 Aug 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
why isn't madame christine happy?
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Date: 25 Aug 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 15
Ouch what's wrong with Madame Christine? is it Edward being with her? oh I can't wait to find out. thanks again bye
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Date: 25 Aug 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
wow that doctor is a bit of a prick isn't he? lol I liked it. thanks again bye
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Date: 25 Aug 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
I am glad that everything worked out. Paul needed to be arrested.
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Date: 25 Aug 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter.
I'm glad Bella is doing good, she really has thing with elevators.
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Date: 25 Aug 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
why doesnt bella like going on elevators?
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I explain, I promise.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 13
I hope Bella is alright, its nice to see that she has all these people who care about her now.
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Date: 24 Aug 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
aww i hope she will be fine!
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Date: 23 Aug 2010 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 13
wow what a jerk. that guy should be held responsible for what happened to her. I liked that chapter, it was full of romance, bromance and angst. lol thanks again bye
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Date: 23 Aug 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 12
I hope Edward kills him. He should have not have touched her.
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Date: 23 Aug 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 12
cant wait till the next one
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Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
Erh, uh, um... Okaaaaay. That's kinda like porno fast. Ew?
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Yes, it was very quick.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
The father/daughter stuff literally made me cry! Good job there!
Just a smallish thing---I actually had to go back a couple of chapters to see if I missed one. Bella and Edward went from awkward introduction to pretty friendly very fast. The transition was so quick, I just felt like I missed a conversation or something.
Hugs,
Gwen
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Thank you:) It's one of those things where once they took down their walls, they were able to talk.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 12
wow jealous Edward to the rescue and whos the douche? lol that guy has a lot of balls. keep it up can't wait for more. thanks again bye
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Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
why is bella always suck a lil weakling its annoying
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Date: 22 Aug 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
i just thougt would tell you u said 14 last time rose askede about the car
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[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
Ha ha ha ha, I love it!! Possesive Bella ROCKS! LOL! That was so AWESOME the way she told Tanya off, LOL!! I was surprised that Tanya and her gang hadn't heard about E&B leaving the cafeteria the way they did the previous night.
And Bella's car might be a good way to break the ice about Charlie. :) It's nice how quickly Edward's friends became her friends too.
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Date: 22 Aug 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
WOW Bella is territorial isn't she? lol that was hot. keep more of that up but from Edward's side. lol thanks again bye
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lol, trust me, it's coming ;)
Date: 21 Aug 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
I just started reading your story, it's great. :)
Looking forward to more.
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[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
uh oh.... LOL!!!
*sigh*
Love it!!
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[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
Ha ha, sweeeet!! LOL!
So Bella can sing, too??!! Coolness!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
Amazing chapter!
When it rains, it pours, and Bella finally poured her guts out!
:)
Date: 21 Aug 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
im loving this!
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Date: 20 Aug 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
Cant wait 4 mre
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Date: 20 Aug 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
good I wasn't the only who who thought that then. lol keep up the great work. i can't wait to read more. thanks again bye
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Date: 20 Aug 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loving it, please update soon!
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Date: 20 Aug 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
I assume the last sentence is from Carlisle. This was a good chapter.
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Date: 20 Aug 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
That was so hot!
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Date: 19 Aug 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
lol oh my god!!!! i did not see that comeing!!
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Date: 19 Aug 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 9
COCKBLOCKER!!!! lol that chapter was nice but we didn't get a lemon. :( oh well. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Patients. The lemons are a coming (HEHE), I promise!
Date: 19 Aug 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bella will do better now that she realizes that she is not alone. Esme and Carlisle will take her under their wing.
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Date: 19 Aug 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
OMG Im loving it!! Just like McDonalds LOL XD I can't wait for the next chapter, you made me cry ok, I mean it's not that hard 'cause a sentimental but I hadn't cried with a story in a long time so yeah I really liked it. Keep updating and I'll keep reading.
Thanks
M
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Date: 19 Aug 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
i hope she finds it!!!
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Date: 19 Aug 2010 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
aww poor Bella. she sees that video and now has a break down. :( poor thing. I love where you're taking this though. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Date: 18 Aug 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am absoultely loving this story......I think I have read the last few stories you have written, I am drawn to them.
You are an awsome writer. Keep it up, this is my mommy time and you make it worth it
B
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Thank you:) Mommy time is very important!
Date: 18 Aug 2010 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bella has got to open up or she is not going to make it. Edward has got to realize that Bella needs him to be her friend as well as parner.
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Date: 18 Aug 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
oh don't leave it there! UPDATE please! :D this is going really good. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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I promise a new chapter tomorrow!
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 7
awww poor bella...what did carlisle say to her???
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Thank you:) It's explained in the next chappie:)
Date: 17 Aug 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well, well, well things are hotting up ;)
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Date: 17 Aug 2010 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
loved it
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