Date: 29 Jul 2017 7:13 AM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
Loved this story couldn't put my phone down thank you
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2014 11:31 PM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
some funny moments in this story i did enjoy it all but they both needed a good slap ;)
Date: 03 Feb 2013 1:47 PM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
Such an Amazing story!
Date: 25 Jul 2012 12:41 AM Title: Epilogue
thanks for share this story:)
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Date: 24 Jul 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
thanks to share:)
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Date: 05 Jul 2012 8:53 AM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
Yay! Best Story Ever! Lol, I love how you didn't end it with an old B and E, I HATE when authors do that and it totally makes me go straight for the vamp stories. Great Story! -Bella-
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2012 10:22 PM Title: Outtake 1: The Day Emmett Got Snipped
pmsl fab outtake poor emmett lol.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
wow that was hot!fab chapter.bless emmett lol
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
aww bless him.fab chapter.
Date: 15 Jan 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, the first chapter is promising....
Date: 15 May 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
famous last words! lol!
Date: 15 May 2011 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
Where is this obsession coming from? He doesn't even know her.
Date: 14 May 2011 3:59 PM Title: Prologue
that is an awesome prologue!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
Still Loving your story!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love this story!!!! Thank you
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2011 3:19 AM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
GOOD story! Cried through most of it.
Thanks for sharing.
Date: 02 Mar 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
to me edwards intentions are great but he's going about it all wrong, he's doing it all backwards and pushing bella in the deep end when he should have asked her on a date not finger fucked her five minutes after meeting her :) hope he realises that
Date: 15 Jan 2011 7:08 AM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
love it
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2010 6:44 PM Title: Epilogue
What a Fabulous Story!!! I love the way it went right into it and took no prisoners!!! I haven't reviewed any of the chapters as I have read this story in one hit!
Loved the chapter where Edward is collected by Bella from the airport, Fucking made laugh and hot!
How come Bella didn't know about Edward and that he worked for the company for quite a while?
I do love me a story that gets down to the 'nitty gritty' and says 'stuff' all of those time wasting descriptive passaged that to me are a total waste of time and not essential.
Now just gonna read a couple of out-takes and I am done, having thoroughly enjoyed it!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2010 7:04 AM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
Loved your story!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 6:35 PM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
awwwwww thats so romantic!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 6:21 PM Title: Outtake 1: The Day Emmett Got Snipped
lol!!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 6:16 PM Title: Epilogue
aw what a beautiful happy ending!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 13
lol thats funny!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
i wonder what hes gonna say
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
aw........omg i love it!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 9
omg!!!!!!!!!! omg omg!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
omg i love it as always!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
omg they did it!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
omg.......
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
omg! i love it!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
brillient!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
lol i love it!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
i love it!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
Overprotective, possessive, & grabby Edward is so hot!
I love your story. It's kept me up!, and smiling.
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow!I'm not really into stories about a young Edward and an older Bella,but I like this one.Because she's not to old for my likings.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 12:32 AM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
aw that was so sweet!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 12:18 AM Title: Epilogue
aw i loved this cute little story!!!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 13
loved it!!
Date: 31 May 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 12
yay they worked it out!!
Date: 31 May 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
one of my favorites!!!
Date: 31 May 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
wow that explained a lot, loved it!!!
Date: 31 May 2010 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
man edward is relentless!
Date: 31 May 2010 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow that was fast yet not wrong!!:)
Date: 31 May 2010 2:46 PM Title: Prologue
i am intrigued!
Date: 10 May 2010 3:15 AM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
so sweet! loved the story, thank you for writting!
Date: 10 May 2010 12:49 AM Title: Outtake 1: The Day Emmett Got Snipped
too funny that it was emmy bear that needed the snip snip! he is the perfect person for it!
Date: 10 May 2010 12:42 AM Title: Epilogue
glad to see em helped me with my does she know... question from last chapter.
Date: 10 May 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
see bella all is good when you stay and give him a chance. wonder if eddie ever told her he had a crush on her for years?
Date: 09 May 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
the the voodoo sex powers win on both sides!
Date: 09 May 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 11
yay it was a hallusination! they are gonna be able to move forward and find their happily ever after.
Date: 09 May 2010 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
so eddie can't have babies? that is easy enough to get around.
poor bella it always takes an emergency to see the truth of what's really important, some times it comes too late though...
Date: 09 May 2010 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
well i wonder what eddie's deal is with babies? and who the hell walked in on them?
Date: 09 May 2010 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
funny how you read so many stories with a character a certain way and it floors you when they are ooc. never saw that comming from angela. glad to see all is out in the open now, but it makes me wonder who saw them in the prologe?
Date: 09 May 2010 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
well that was fun.now they have to get through the family meeting, wonder what that's about? the fight? how are they gonna explain that? and poor angela what's gonna happen there?
Date: 09 May 2010 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
so cute how everyone was all over emmy to try to protect bella's honor. i wonder what eddie is gonna think of bella being a virgin?
Date: 09 May 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
they are going on a date! time for eddie to shine. alice and bella are bonding, rose and em had the baby, and the family is seeing that there is something there between bella and edward. life is good.
Date: 09 May 2010 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
awww. that's why everybody had that 'look' when they were dancing.
Date: 09 May 2010 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
that right bella listen to charlie, daddy knows best.
Date: 09 May 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 2
yeah bella, that'll show him! and make all of your problems go away.
Date: 08 May 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
well, that sure was an exciting, and interesting meeting. yummy
Date: 08 May 2010 5:45 PM Title: Prologue
well that was a hot little tease of things to come
Date: 28 Apr 2010 5:50 AM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
Want more no i need more out takes when they have the twins or find out
Date: 28 Apr 2010 5:24 AM Title: Outtake 1: The Day Emmett Got Snipped
Oh my fucken god that was so funny i think i peed myself more out takes would love more
Date: 28 Apr 2010 5:12 AM Title: Epilogue
Oh plz make out takes that would be perfect
Date: 28 Apr 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 13
That was the funniest shit that i have read in a long time great fucken chapter
Date: 28 Apr 2010 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 12
Now y all the drama good as always
Date: 28 Apr 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 11
So we finally get to hear y bout time
Date: 28 Apr 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
So confused but great chapter
Date: 28 Apr 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
Okay missing something why wont he have babies great chapter
Date: 28 Apr 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
That was great love it
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh wow great chapter yet again
Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
Lucky girl great fight
Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
As always great chapter
Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
That explained a lot great chapter
Date: 27 Apr 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great great story loving it
Date: 27 Apr 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
Very demanding edward is and i have this feeling that bella is fighting a loosing battle
Date: 27 Apr 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow that was omg that was hot
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2010 6:42 AM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
Also, I wasn't going to read this story (I've been staying away from the AH stories lately) but I do love me some Jensen and your banner...you can totally thank your half-naked Jensen for getting me to read this story. Damn that man is yummy! So yes, I blame your banner for getting me to read this, but I am so SO happy that I did because it was absolutely amazing! Loved every single bit of it.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2010 6:39 AM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
This story was AWESOME! I so TOTALLY loved it! It was just--like--ugh I have no words to describe how awesomely awesome this story was! It was funny and not as angsty as I expected (thank you for not overdoing on the angst). This was just plain amazing and I am totally checking you out tomorrow to see what else you've written. Or ya know, later today cause it's like 3am.
EXCELLENT Job! Loved it loved it LOVED it!
Date: 23 Mar 2010 10:41 PM Title: Epilogue
really enjoyed the story!!!...hope you do the sequel!!!
Date: 23 Mar 2010 5:33 PM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
Great story. It was exciting and thrilling. love that aggressive Edward. Bella was alittle to meek for me but I got her.
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Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:10 AM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
Ohh I loved this story thank you for sharing it with me!