Date: 05 Aug 2015 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 19
loved the story not really the ending though
Date: 29 Jul 2015 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 5-Explanations and Wagers
awesome
Date: 28 Jul 2015 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 1-Reconnecting with Old Friends
great start
Date: 05 Jan 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 9-True Confessions
Great story. Deserves more reviews!
Date: 31 Mar 2011 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved every word.... you know what I liked the most ??
It was that YOU actually had your Edward tell women he was so not interested - in other stories, writers have him just 'ignore' it even when Bella notices or they are being blatantly being rude to her, I find that pisses me off. : )
Author's Response:
Thank you for sharing what you like the most and for continuing to read. I am not much into having a lot of angst with my stories and I also dislike when they make him into a total azz. I also do not like when they make Bella into a totally insecure and fragile female. I really didn't see her that way in the series. A little insecure, yes, but aren't we all to some extent? 8o)
Date: 01 Mar 2011 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 16-Explanations and Expos
awww.. so cute..
Date: 01 Mar 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 15- Elation and the Aftermath
What in the Hell is with Jake..
Date: 01 Mar 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 14- Meet the Parents
lol.. i love Em..
Date: 01 Mar 2011 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 12-Leaving on a Jet Plane
hell yes.... Esme is going to kill him if they get married with no one around..lol
Date: 28 Feb 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 9-True Confessions
aww. he said home again..
Date: 27 Feb 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 5-Explanations and Wagers
I hope he is the hood ornament...
Date: 27 Feb 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 4-Plum Crazy and Coincidental
oh no...
Date: 27 Feb 2011 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 3-Southern Comfort Followed by some Jack Daniels
i wonder whats up with Edward...
Date: 27 Feb 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 2-Another Change in Plans
lol...
Date: 27 Feb 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 1-Reconnecting with Old Friends
lol.. so love Jasper
Date: 04 Jan 2011 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 19
I loved reading this story. That last part at the end was hilarious. Perfect way to end the story!
Date: 03 Jan 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
I loved this story and crazy dynamics of the family. You could definately do a sequel with 2 newly married couples and many babies to be had. You also have grandparents moving in closer to be with said grandchildren. It could be a very fun journey.
Date: 03 Jan 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 1-Reconnecting with Old Friends
Loved it!!!! I would love it more if you did a sequel :)
Date: 03 Jan 2011 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it! Read it straight through and enjoyed every word. Thanks for a geat HEA story...Marcy
Date: 02 Jan 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for the wonderful story. I will keep my eyes open for future stories from you.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
I liked it & enjoyed reading their love story.
But.....the end seemed rushed. After the cliffie with tanya, the rest seemed like a Cliff Notes version. It's a wonderful story but I think you sold yourself short. Maybe you got tired, bored or just wanted it over. Don't get me wrong, I really have enjoyed it but felt the end wasn't developed or detailed enough.
Good luck with any more stories you may write.
Happy New Year!
Author's Response:
I left the ending open on purpose. I may come back to revisit the story and write a sequel. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
ohh sad to see it end!
Date: 02 Jan 2011 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 19
Love the story.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 18-New Beginnings
Loved it! So....they're pregnant! Yay!!
Will we to hear the Tanya story?
Date: 02 Jan 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 4-Plum Crazy and Coincidental
Damn, I knew that she would say that! Maybe she can have Jake take over so that she and Edward can date? She wouldn't actually get rid of the account altogether would she?
Date: 02 Jan 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 3-Southern Comfort Followed by some Jack Daniels
Can't wait to see what happens when they realize that Alice is Edward's sister! Why isn't Bella calling herself "Bella"? Why are Jasper and Alice calling Edward "Masen" or "Ward"? Does Edward use Cullen as his last name?
Looking forward to cooking dinner at Bella's house! Hope there is more than cooking going on!
Date: 02 Jan 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yes, me liked. It was adorable
Thanks for writing this story & for finishing it, I love it when authors finish their stories.
THanks
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Date: 02 Jan 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 18-New Beginnings
Awe, sweet chapter, thanks for the update;D)
Date: 22 Dec 2010 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 17- Closure
Cliff hanger;~o)
Thanks for the update & hope your holidays are happy;D)
Date: 20 Dec 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 17- Closure
Ok....you can't just leave us hanging! I know Edward briefly explained his past with Tanya but where does she get off making these assumptions regarding him? It's been how many months with no contact & she expects instant reunion? What in the world does Edward have to apologize for?
Please...as a Christmas gift?? A little more insight & secrets revealed?
BTW - loved how you switched pov's within the chapter so we know what's going on with both of them at the same time without waiting!
Date: 20 Dec 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 17- Closure
I can't wait to find out what Edward wants to tell Bella. I am so glad that Bella and Edward stood up to Tanya and Aro. I hope it continues.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 17- Closure
I am dying to know what makes the situation not o.k. Did Aro lie when he said that he did not know Tanya would be there? Was it all a big act?
Hmmmmmmmmm.......
Thank you for the update. I am on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter.
Tanya is kinda crazy....right?
Date: 20 Dec 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 17- Closure
Great Chapter.....
Date: 20 Dec 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 17- Closure
I loved this chapter! Can't wait to see what Edward meant by his comments at the end. Happy Holidays!
Date: 20 Dec 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 17- Closure
well i hope he tells her whats going on ! keep the chapters comming
Date: 20 Dec 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 17- Closure
I loved how Bella and Edward put Tanya in her place.But I bet Aro set that all up evil troll and I can't wait to hear what Edward has to explain to her now .I love this story
Date: 02 Dec 2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 16-Explanations and Expos
Thanks for writing. I like that this is not a torturous affair of a story, it's sweet and they are very pleasant, hot duo.;D)
Date: 02 Dec 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 14- Meet the Parents
“He loves you Bells. This is what a man does for a woman he loves. She asks for the Earth and he also brings her the Sun and Moon.” Charlie explains. --I was in tears, really touching scene;D) & my wish came true. I knew the chapter was already written but I couldn't help but wish they would tie the knot. ;D)
Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 13-As a Lawyer I Must State My Case
Yes, I've enjoyed it:D) But, I want them to get Joe & get back on that plane for a quick trip to Vegas & get married then back to Tahoe to honeymoon! Tahoe is where my hubby & I honeymooned.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 10- A Stark Reminder of the Past
Yes, what is it with the Roberts? humma humma
Date: 30 Nov 2010 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 1-Reconnecting with Old Friends
Awe, adorable meet cute;D)
Date: 30 Nov 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 16-Explanations and Expos
Short but sweet chapter, straight to the point, I like it.
You have done wonderful.
Date: 29 Nov 2010 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 16-Explanations and Expos
I loved how Edward and Bella put Jacob in his place. Bella was so coy and cute about the whole baby issue.
Date: 29 Nov 2010 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 16-Explanations and Expos
I loved it .I really can't wait till they add a little baby to their happy family .Tony kills me I love that cad
Date: 29 Nov 2010 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 16-Explanations and Expos
Loved it!! I love the innuendo & teasing!
Date: 29 Nov 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 16-Explanations and Expos
Great Chapter......
Date: 29 Nov 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 16-Explanations and Expos
well i hope she is preggo! it would make for a happy edward!
Date: 23 Nov 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 15- Elation and the Aftermath
Jacob has some nerve to say anything. He screw anything with a vagina and he is mad that Bella got married. Bella just needs to fire him if he does not remember that he is just an employee. Bella is his boss and a grown woman who can do what she wants. Jacob is lucky to have the job. He has only been really working for a few weeks.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 15- Elation and the Aftermath
Great chapter!! Can't wait to see what happens next. Loved the stuff with Tony. Always funny. Lol
Date: 23 Nov 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 15- Elation and the Aftermath
Jake needs to grow up. Bella & Edwards marriage has nothing to do with him. One sided love affair.....oh well...snooze you lose...not to mention the fact that Bella never encouraged Jacob, etc.
Good chapter!
Date: 23 Nov 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 15- Elation and the Aftermath
well i hope she kicks jakes ass! keep the chapters comming
Date: 23 Nov 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 15- Elation and the Aftermath
Ohhh I think Jacob is going to get into to trouble!!!
Acutally seeing as he is not a busines partner int he legal sence, what business is it to Jacob if Bella go married. I dont understand why he is so angry.
Love the chapter
Fiorella
Date: 23 Nov 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 15- Elation and the Aftermath
great chapter
Date: 13 Nov 2010 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 4-Plum Crazy and Coincidental
Just started this & sorry I haven't reviewed every chapter.
Honestly, it's just that good!!
Hope you get more readers.....it's exciting!
Date: 10 Nov 2010 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 14- Meet the Parents
I just knew he was sending for the family. Edward would do anything to make Bella happy. I wish real men were like Edward.
Date: 08 Nov 2010 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 14- Meet the Parents
Wonderful chapter, cant wait for the next one.
Date: 08 Nov 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 14- Meet the Parents
Great Chapter......
Date: 08 Nov 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 14- Meet the Parents
well im glad that he pulled out all the stops for her! the icing on the cake was bringing dad for bella!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 14- Meet the Parents
I loved it.I don't think i can say that enought when i read this story.That was the best i cried edward was so sweet to bring everyone and the moment with charlie and bella so heart warming .
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I am glad the chapter was that touching to you. It has taken me quite some time to write these last few chapters as I really am trying to keep them "in character." In this story, I feel that both Edward and Bella have fallen hard for each other. Call me a romantic but I do think this can happen in real life, although not that often. Thank you for reading. I will post the next chapter soon. 8o)
Date: 08 Nov 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 14- Meet the Parents
Great chapter! I love how their relationship has progresses. It just works for them. :)
Date: 08 Nov 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 1-Reconnecting with Old Friends
a little confusing when in Jaspers POV and then all of a sudden both his and bella's pov is being written
Author's Response:
Sorry about that. This was my first story. I haven't decided yet whether to post others. I do appreciate the critique. Thank you for reading.
Date: 07 Nov 2010 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 13-As a Lawyer I Must State My Case
great chapter
Date: 07 Nov 2010 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 12-Leaving on a Jet Plane
great chapter
Date: 07 Nov 2010 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 11-Caveward Makes An Appearance
great chapter
Date: 07 Nov 2010 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 10- A Stark Reminder of the Past
great chapter
Date: 07 Nov 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 9-True Confessions
great chapter
Date: 07 Nov 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 8-Paying off Bets and "First" Dates
great chapter
Date: 06 Nov 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 7-Winning Wagers and Surprise Encounters
great chapter
Date: 06 Nov 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 6-Working Out and the Arrival of the Cullen Clan
great chapter
Date: 06 Nov 2010 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 5-Explanations and Wagers
great chapter
Date: 06 Nov 2010 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 4-Plum Crazy and Coincidental
great chapter
Date: 06 Nov 2010 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 3-Southern Comfort Followed by some Jack Daniels
great chapter
Date: 06 Nov 2010 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 2-Another Change in Plans
great chapter
Date: 06 Nov 2010 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 1-Reconnecting with Old Friends
great chapter
Date: 30 Oct 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 13-As a Lawyer I Must State My Case
well i like that they are going to elope! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 30 Oct 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 13-As a Lawyer I Must State My Case
I'm so glad she said yes! Thanks for updating so quickly after last chapters little cliffhanger. Hope to read more soon. :)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 12-Leaving on a Jet Plane
Thank you for the great story! You are my best friend and sister forever!!!
Date: 28 Oct 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 12-Leaving on a Jet Plane
aww, that's so mean to leave it like that! I hope you can update soon. :)
Author's Response:
I will update it soon. I promise I won't leave you hanging for long. Thank you for continuing to read. 8o)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 10- A Stark Reminder of the Past
I just want to say that I think it is great that you put Tony Stark in the story. One of my best friends is a huge Ironman fan and even got me to go to the midnight show of Ironman 2 with him. Its also nice to see a Bella who is not totally insecure and freaking out all the time. I know she can handle Tony!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I absolutely can't stand when Bella is painted as a whiney and insecure girl or woman. As far as putting Tony into the story, I have always been a big fan but I find he reminds me a lot of what I think Edward's character would be like as an older man in the way he is mostly portrayed by many authors. He has a very, cocky, and somewhat arrogant attitude at times.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 9-True Confessions
:)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 8-Paying off Bets and "First" Dates
:)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 7-Winning Wagers and Surprise Encounters
Loved the chapter!
Date: 17 Oct 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 6-Working Out and the Arrival of the Cullen Clan
Great chapter!
Date: 17 Oct 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 5-Explanations and Wagers
I love them together! Can't wait for the black tie dinner!
Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 4-Plum Crazy and Coincidental
Shit! That's not good!!!
Date: 17 Oct 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 3-Southern Comfort Followed by some Jack Daniels
I can't wait till Alice finds out! :)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 2-Another Change in Plans
:)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1-Reconnecting with Old Friends
Great start!
Date: 17 Oct 2010 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 11-Caveward Makes An Appearance
i can't wait to see where they are going it will be so good for them to get away from work and ppl .this is a great story i love it
Date: 17 Oct 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 10- A Stark Reminder of the Past
I cant believe you put Tony Stark in the story, that was awesome. At first I thought it was Tanya calling and fucking everything up. Im glad it wasnt.
Author's Response:
What can I say? I am a HUGE fan of Robert Downey Jr. With his personality, I think he fits in quite well with the story. I hope you ejnoyed it.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 9-True Confessions
if they are goign to vegas i think it would be funny to have a drunkin night and get married cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 22 Sep 2010 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 8-Paying off Bets and "First" Dates
Looking forward to the next update!!!
Date: 17 Sep 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 5-Explanations and Wagers
I think that if you want to switch between EPOV and BPOV you should break it up. It's very confusing to read Bella talking and then all of sudden Edward.
Date: 17 Sep 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 8-Paying off Bets and "First" Dates
i would totally have marathon sex with this edward cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 09 Sep 2010 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 1-Reconnecting with Old Friends
I truely love this story so far.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoy it. Thank you for reading.
Date: 03 Sep 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 6-Working Out and the Arrival of the Cullen Clan
Lol, I love the whole lesbian part you added to their prank. It's gonna be great.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 5-Explanations and Wagers
Like the story, waiting for update:)
Date: 01 Sep 2010 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 5-Explanations and Wagers
well loving this story cant wait to see what happens at the dinner ! keep the chapters comming
Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 5-Explanations and Wagers
Please say you'll be able to update soon???? I'm so anxious to see their little prank play out!
Author's Response:
I will be posting an update very soon. I already have the next chapter written. Trust me when I say you will love it. Thank you for reading.