Date: 31 Mar 2011 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved every word.... you know what I liked the most ??
It was that YOU actually had your Edward tell women he was so not interested - in other stories, writers have him just 'ignore' it even when Bella notices or they are being blatantly being rude to her, I find that pisses me off. : )
Thank you for sharing what you like the most and for continuing to read. I am not much into having a lot of angst with my stories and I also dislike when they make him into a total azz. I also do not like when they make Bella into a totally insecure and fragile female. I really didn't see her that way in the series. A little insecure, yes, but aren't we all to some extent? 8o)
Date: 03 Jan 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
I loved this story and crazy dynamics of the family. You could definately do a sequel with 2 newly married couples and many babies to be had. You also have grandparents moving in closer to be with said grandchildren. It could be a very fun journey.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
I liked it & enjoyed reading their love story.
But.....the end seemed rushed. After the cliffie with tanya, the rest seemed like a Cliff Notes version. It's a wonderful story but I think you sold yourself short. Maybe you got tired, bored or just wanted it over. Don't get me wrong, I really have enjoyed it but felt the end wasn't developed or detailed enough.
Good luck with any more stories you may write.
Happy New Year!
I left the ending open on purpose. I may come back to revisit the story and write a sequel. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 3-Southern Comfort Followed by some Jack Daniels
Can't wait to see what happens when they realize that Alice is Edward's sister! Why isn't Bella calling herself "Bella"? Why are Jasper and Alice calling Edward "Masen" or "Ward"? Does Edward use Cullen as his last name?
Looking forward to cooking dinner at Bella's house! Hope there is more than cooking going on!
Date: 20 Dec 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 17- Closure
Ok....you can't just leave us hanging! I know Edward briefly explained his past with Tanya but where does she get off making these assumptions regarding him? It's been how many months with no contact & she expects instant reunion? What in the world does Edward have to apologize for?
Please...as a Christmas gift?? A little more insight & secrets revealed?
BTW - loved how you switched pov's within the chapter so we know what's going on with both of them at the same time without waiting!
Date: 20 Dec 2010 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 17- Closure
I am dying to know what makes the situation not o.k. Did Aro lie when he said that he did not know Tanya would be there? Was it all a big act?
Thank you for the update. I am on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter.
Tanya is kinda crazy....right?
Date: 02 Dec 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 14- Meet the Parents
“He loves you Bells. This is what a man does for a woman he loves. She asks for the Earth and he also brings her the Sun and Moon.” Charlie explains. --I was in tears, really touching scene;D) & my wish came true. I knew the chapter was already written but I couldn't help but wish they would tie the knot. ;D)
Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 13-As a Lawyer I Must State My Case
Yes, I've enjoyed it:D) But, I want them to get Joe & get back on that plane for a quick trip to Vegas & get married then back to Tahoe to honeymoon! Tahoe is where my hubby & I honeymooned.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 15- Elation and the Aftermath
Jacob has some nerve to say anything. He screw anything with a vagina and he is mad that Bella got married. Bella just needs to fire him if he does not remember that he is just an employee. Bella is his boss and a grown woman who can do what she wants. Jacob is lucky to have the job. He has only been really working for a few weeks.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 15- Elation and the Aftermath
Jake needs to grow up. Bella & Edwards marriage has nothing to do with him. One sided love affair.....oh well...snooze you lose...not to mention the fact that Bella never encouraged Jacob, etc.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 15- Elation and the Aftermath
Ohhh I think Jacob is going to get into to trouble!!!
Acutally seeing as he is not a busines partner int he legal sence, what business is it to Jacob if Bella go married. I dont understand why he is so angry.
Love the chapter
Date: 08 Nov 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 14- Meet the Parents
I loved it.I don't think i can say that enought when i read this story.That was the best i cried edward was so sweet to bring everyone and the moment with charlie and bella so heart warming .
Thank you so much. I am glad the chapter was that touching to you. It has taken me quite some time to write these last few chapters as I really am trying to keep them "in character." In this story, I feel that both Edward and Bella have fallen hard for each other. Call me a romantic but I do think this can happen in real life, although not that often. Thank you for reading. I will post the next chapter soon. 8o)
Date: 08 Nov 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 1-Reconnecting with Old Friends
a little confusing when in Jaspers POV and then all of a sudden both his and bella's pov is being written
Sorry about that. This was my first story. I haven't decided yet whether to post others. I do appreciate the critique. Thank you for reading.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 12-Leaving on a Jet Plane
Now think about the firemen getting naked. (Kimmrz moans when the firemen took the stage in Las Vegas are right up there with Bella's...Just sayin:)
First beer is on me tomorrow.
Love ya sis,
Thank you for the great story! You are my best friend and sister forever!!!
Date: 28 Oct 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 12-Leaving on a Jet Plane
aww, that's so mean to leave it like that! I hope you can update soon. :)
I will update it soon. I promise I won't leave you hanging for long. Thank you for continuing to read. 8o)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 10- A Stark Reminder of the Past
I just want to say that I think it is great that you put Tony Stark in the story. One of my best friends is a huge Ironman fan and even got me to go to the midnight show of Ironman 2 with him. Its also nice to see a Bella who is not totally insecure and freaking out all the time. I know she can handle Tony!
Thank you for the review. I absolutely can't stand when Bella is painted as a whiney and insecure girl or woman. As far as putting Tony into the story, I have always been a big fan but I find he reminds me a lot of what I think Edward's character would be like as an older man in the way he is mostly portrayed by many authors. He has a very, cocky, and somewhat arrogant attitude at times.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 10- A Stark Reminder of the Past
I cant believe you put Tony Stark in the story, that was awesome. At first I thought it was Tanya calling and fucking everything up. Im glad it wasnt.
What can I say? I am a HUGE fan of Robert Downey Jr. With his personality, I think he fits in quite well with the story. I hope you ejnoyed it.
Date: 17 Sep 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 5-Explanations and Wagers
I think that if you want to switch between EPOV and BPOV you should break it up. It's very confusing to read Bella talking and then all of sudden Edward.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 5-Explanations and Wagers
Please say you'll be able to update soon???? I'm so anxious to see their little prank play out!
I will be posting an update very soon. I already have the next chapter written. Trust me when I say you will love it. Thank you for reading.