Date: 09 Nov 2010 9:30 PM Title: Friends
Yeah way to man up and help out Bella, break the poor guys heat that little bit more..
I have an idea while you are at it, why dont you grab a knife and stab him in the back as well.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 9:22 PM Title: Drastic Measures
He let Bella off to easy. He is a sucker, and you cant even call him a sucker in love because he does not remember.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 9:13 PM Title: Remember Me
I have to say that I have enjoyed reading your story up until this chapter.
Bella is rude, selfish and down right a pain in the ass in this chapter. If I was Edward and her friends I would have told her to stop acting like a child and grow the hell up.
Memory does not come back because she want him to remember, patients and comfort help, not yelling and accusing him that he does not want to remember.
If I was Edward I would have told her to fly a kite, it all seems to be Poor Bella, but I am sorry, she was not the only one effect by the accident and at least she has her memories to look back on, Edward only has confusion.
Bella is conceited, disrespectful and deserves to be alone for what she pulled in this chapter.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 8:33 PM Title: Author's Note (Sequel Name in Note!!!!)
that was awsome, i am so goig to the sequel to catch up then i will be checking everyday to see a new chapter. omg i just cant wait.
Date: 27 Aug 2010 2:18 AM Title: Epilogue: The Resolution
I'm still sad they are apart, but maybe this is what they needed. He is going to New York...there is always hope! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 27 Aug 2010 2:10 AM Title: A New Beginning
This makes me sad...
Date: 24 Aug 2010 4:04 AM Title: You Don't Remember Last Night Edward?
Date: 24 Aug 2010 2:17 AM Title: Author's Note (Sequel Name in Note!!!!)
im going to read the sequel!!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:36 PM Title: Epilogue: The Resolution
People and life change, and we don't always like those changes, but we learn to move on and see what every day brings. In this case who.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:33 PM Title: A New Beginning
As Carlisle said, it was both their choice. They have to deal and move on, but to what? That, no one knows yet.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 1:49 AM Title: Epilogue: The Resolution
I saw this ending coming, but thank goodness you decided to write a sequel. I think this was the best way to write this story, however, I didn't think amnesia would last that long. It seems as if they just fell out of love with each other. I am very happy that he moved to NY. Can't wait for more.
Date: 21 Aug 2010 11:16 PM Title: Author's Note (Sequel Name in Note!!!!)
I really enjoyed this story, but kind of disappointed that it is ending like this. Very anti-clamatic. I will read the sequel I guess, and see what happens.
Date: 21 Aug 2010 7:24 PM Title: A New Beginning
very good chapter, but I hate that they can't seem to get on the same page. Poor guys, this must be hard for them!
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 7:08 PM Title: A New Beginning
Well it looks as if you are going to leave this story with Bella going away to a different college away from all of the Cullens and having a new boyfriend. Please post what the name of your new story will be so that I follow the sequel. And of course, I am hoping that she still ends up with Edward. SOUNDS GREAT!
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 6:58 PM Title: Friends
Definitely a hit! I think Bella has been too hard on him and he will remember when he is ready. However, in the meantime I see things getting quite dicey. Hmmmmm.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 2:55 PM Title: Friends
As right as Bella's decision might be, for some, it came at the wrong moment. But Edward agreed with her, too easily and too quickly. Does that mean he think it's best to pull away from each other?
And I thought there was going to be plenty of talking in this chapter...
Date: 20 Aug 2010 2:49 PM Title: Drastic Measures
Poor Edward now a broken nose, he deserves plenty of points for that move. Charlie was surprised but I guess kind of glad Edward would go so far, just to be able to talk to Bella. And Bella? She had to have seen how much she means to Edward, even if he can't remember everything, if he went as far as he did.
Still lots of talking to do, but that can wait till the sun comes up.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 1:19 AM Title: Friends
So sad... I feel so bad for these two. I can't wait for more. Great job...thanks!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 1:09 AM Title: Drastic Measures
Poor Edward...nothing is going right for him right now. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2010 8:39 PM Title: Friends
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They were making progress! No space! No time! They just need each other! You're killing me, but great story, great twist. Can't wait for more!
Date: 19 Aug 2010 8:34 PM Title: Drastic Measures
What a cute chapter! I loved him trying to climb in her window!
Date: 19 Aug 2010 6:13 PM Title: Drastic Measures
Oh poor Edward. I really think that Bella was really too hard on him. After all he doesn't remember and she needs to have a little more patience.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 5:44 PM Title: Friends
noooo!!! i really hope he he remembers soon...if my friend fell out of a tree like edward did i would never let him live that down....
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2010 4:11 AM Title: Remember Me
Oh my, well he better start remembering soon because he just may lose her to someone in the meantime. Love your story.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 10:56 PM Title: Remember Me
This isn't easy for any one. And now it seems so bad, one step forward, but two steps back. Who is right and who is wrong? Who should compromise more or less?
The sad part is, how much more can they take?
Date: 18 Aug 2010 10:49 PM Title: Light at the end of the Tunnel
One step at a time. When things start going well, we want to make them go faster, that isn't always the best idea. Both need to remember this, along with so much more.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 7:12 PM Title: Remember Me
i hope he can remember...
Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:46 PM Title: Remember Me
Don't give up Edward! It is going to take a little while...
I can't wait for more...great job...thanks!!!
Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:19 PM Title: Remember Me
Awww, poor Edward. I know this is hard on Bella, but he's doing so good, she needs to cut him a little slack!
Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:14 PM Title: Light at the end of the Tunnel
Great chapter, glad he's finally starting to come around!
Date: 18 Aug 2010 5:44 PM Title: Light at the end of the Tunnel
Awwww.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chivalry In Retirement
Oh your story is so good. I cannot get enough. Can't wait for more. Thank you.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chivalry In Retirement
He is coming back!!! That's amazing. I thought they would be going to the beach, but this is okay too. We'll see tomorrow how it goes.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 10:40 PM Title: A Praise Chorus
It seems things are finally starting to look bright for Bella and Edward. He is being nice, almost back as to who he was, and his family is being completely supportive. Lets hope Bella's plan works!!!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chivalry In Retirement
aww i hope he remembers everything...
Date: 16 Aug 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chivalry In Retirement
I love it! I hope this trip down memory lane helps him remember more! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chivalry In Retirement
Good, good, good! More!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 4:02 AM Title: That's Worth Fighting For
Edward might not be completely sure, but he is making an effort, and that should count for something. Of course. Bella has to be hurt, upset, angry, her entire world crumbled right in front of her, and there was nothing she could do about it. That has to be so difficult and painful.
Thankfully, Edward wants to find out what he doesn't remember, that's a big step.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:34 AM Title: That's Worth Fighting For
I feel so bad for them. I am glad that Edward wants to know what he is missing. I hope his memory come back when he does see these things. It seems like he is right onthe edge of remembering anyway. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:33 PM Title: How Much You Mean To Me
Oh no...they have to be okay!
They were so sweet telling each other they love each other! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:17 PM Title: Why are you here?
I was right you did want to make us cry more. It's awful for everyone... parents, brothers, friends, the girl in his life.... To see him there but not there. But no one lost patience, they were sad and worried but still there. More than anyone Bella.
But now... I guess the angst continues in the next chapter.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:10 PM Title: Giving in to the Darkness
He is alive and so is Bella, he is in terrible shape, but I am sure you are just wanting to see us cry more....
Date: 15 Aug 2010 6:07 PM Title: That's Worth Fighting For
welll still made that he doesnt remember but i like how he wants to remember....i hope he does
Date: 15 Aug 2010 6:06 PM Title: That's Worth Fighting For
Yeah! He's gonna love her again! I can feel it in my bones! Emmett is so funny. Another great chapter!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 6:00 PM Title: The World Came Crashing Down
Poor Bella, hope he remembers soon! Great Job!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:40 AM Title: Why are you here?
OMG NOOOOOOO please dont have him forget their love.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:27 AM Title: Why are you here?
OH MY GOD!!!! NO!! HE CANT FORGET!!! I really hate that edward forgets but i like how you keep putting stuff in the story to test their love for eachother...
Date: 14 Aug 2010 11:43 PM Title: Why are you here?
i love this story.. i am so hooked! your a great author! keep up the great work! and i love your everyday updates :)
Date: 14 Aug 2010 3:48 AM Title: Halo Tournament Next to Adonis
It is terrible that you always seem to fall for the one person that seems to annoy you the most.
Date: 14 Aug 2010 3:43 AM Title: You Don't Remember Last Night Edward?
I am thinking that they are having too much fun with toying with Edward.
Date: 14 Aug 2010 3:35 AM Title: Bella's Preggers
Oh man! That might not have been a good thing to say!
Date: 14 Aug 2010 1:11 AM Title: How Much You Mean To Me
oh my god!! what the hell!! i hope no one dead!!
Date: 14 Aug 2010 12:05 AM Title: How Much You Mean To Me
When everything seemed to be perfect!!!! But that's life.
It was sweet, up to the ending, of course.
The guys being silly and guys was nice.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 11:50 PM Title: You Killed Fred And George
It was funny, Emmett is well, Emmett, he has the most unique comments and ideas.
Bella and Edward together are so sweet.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 2:46 AM Title: Emmett's Invention
i love your story is so sweet and meloow.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 1:17 AM Title: Emmett's Invention
im so happy for them!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2010 7:35 PM Title: Emmett's Invention
Too cute! Emmett is something else!!! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2010 7:34 PM Title: Emmett's Invention
Emmett and his unique ideas. What would he put on his drinks? I wouldn't want to be the one to try them out.
I can imagine how Edward and Charlie's chat went last night. It had to be funny. I guess Charlie wanted to scare him, and that he wasn't too angry.
The note was sweet and the day seems to be turning really nice.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2010 7:27 PM Title: Dancing In The pouring Rain
Sorry I have to say this, an Edward who doesn't freak out about his car!!!! Both of them were soaked and he didn't care!!! That's love, happiness, and I don't know what else but it was good.
So they both said it to each other, and heard from each other what they wanted to hear. They also, finally, got their first kiss, even though it was raining it was very romantic.
Date: 12 Aug 2010 6:55 PM Title: Dancing In The pouring Rain
That was the sweetest thing to say to Bella. I can't help but smile for these two. I can't wait to see what happens next! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2010 2:49 AM Title: Forgetfullness and Snowball Fights
awww this is comeing along great!! i love it!!!
Date: 11 Aug 2010 10:21 PM Title: Forgetfullness and Snowball Fights
Snow ball fight was really funny.
Date: 11 Aug 2010 10:02 PM Title: Forgetfullness and Snowball Fights
Poor Edward and Bella, they can't seem to catch a break and have some time for themselves, real alone time...
But that's what Saturday will be for I guess...
Date: 11 Aug 2010 9:23 PM Title: Take Care Of My Love
It was a good Monday, and there aren't plenty of those in high-school. Edward is determined to be close to Bella, and she seems to agree and enjoy his company. What will the afternoon bring?
Date: 11 Aug 2010 5:47 PM Title: Forgetfullness and Snowball Fights
Poor Edward...how could Bella do that to him??? Pouring watere on him when it is cold outside.... Although it was pretty funny that he forgot his brothers! Love it, thanks!!!
Date: 11 Aug 2010 5:36 PM Title: Take Care Of My Love
What a day!!! Love it...thanks!
Date: 11 Aug 2010 12:00 AM Title: You Turned Me Into Strawberry Shortcake!
Funniest story I have read in a long time. I love it.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 8:01 PM Title: You Turned Me Into Strawberry Shortcake!
I'm sorry but Emmett did deserve that! Way to go Bella and Edward! I can't help but smile when I am reading this. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 10 Aug 2010 7:37 PM Title: You Turned Me Into Strawberry Shortcake!
Bella acted fast, and had a great idea!!! Leveling things in that way!!! And then Esme finding it funny too, it was really good. Especially after such an interruption. Will we ever know if Edward was planing on kissing Bella? Will he try again? And soon???
Date: 10 Aug 2010 7:28 PM Title: Get Up, Get Dressed, Fall on Your Butt
A nice peaceful Sunday with friends and games... and listening to music.
It seems both Bella and Edward are shy but trying to get pass that phase.... and going to his room!!!!
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:52 PM Title: You Turned Me Into Strawberry Shortcake!
Hahahahahaaaaa, I just can't stop laughing! XD
Sooooo freakin good, I wish, that I could see that in da real life! XP
Anyway, keep writin and postin Darlin' and I keep lovin you. :D
Date: 10 Aug 2010 4:42 PM Title: Get Up, Get Dressed, Fall on Your Butt
These two are so cute! I can't wait for more!!! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 10 Aug 2010 2:41 AM Title: Grow an Icicle Eddie
Edward is a nice guy!!! He hadn't noticed Bella too much before but now... he is feeling like getting closer to her... and he isn't worrying his brothers might notice...!!!!
Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:43 PM Title: How To Drive Safely
What's going on??? Why is Bella refussing to accept she is feeling something? And what about Edward?
Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:35 PM Title: Lingerie for Esme
So... not the place you want to run into a guy, especially Edward. Then, he goes and tells you he's getting his mom lingerie, priceless.
Edward is up to something, from what Bella said in previous chapters he has never been this nice to her, so why now?
Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:26 PM Title: Pillow Fights and More Confusion
So everyone is noticing Bella's changing attitude, while Bella keeps in denial about it.
She was glad Alice went to help her get ready, even if it was to see Edward just for a minute... Why? Is there some kind of plan Bella hasn't realized yet?
Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:19 PM Title: Halo Tournament Next to Adonis
Well... it is said there's only one step separating love and hate. I guess in Bella's case, it's turning out to be a very, very small step.
What's with Edward though? He seemed not to like her and now he was nice and kind? What is he planning?
Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:13 PM Title: You Don't Remember Last Night Edward?
So Bella and Alice are kind of mean and enjoy making fun of Edward, and they have his brothers approval... not the nicest thing. We'll have to see what Edward will do.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:04 PM Title: Bella's Preggers
Bella doesn't like her life. Her best friend is Alice, who seems to not want to focus on Bella's take on life. She is also friends with Emmett, who is a joker. A big joker who just decided to announce Bella and his brother, who doesn't get along with Bella are what??? having a baby?? way to start the gossip mill!!!
Date: 09 Aug 2010 6:04 PM Title: Grow an Icicle Eddie
Of course he is falling for Bella. Now if they will just really talk to each other. I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Great job...thanks!
Date: 09 Aug 2010 5:55 PM Title: How To Drive Safely
Cute...I like it! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 09 Aug 2010 1:56 AM Title: Lingerie for Esme
ooooooooooooo
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:36 PM Title: Lingerie for Esme
How can Bella get so freaked out she doesn't remember to call Alice to find out where they are??? Too funny...I would have had Edward's reaction to that one. I am glad they ran into each other though. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:33 PM Title: Pillow Fights and More Confusion
I love that the girls know Bella likes Edward. Alice trying to wake Bella up was too funny! Love it...thanks!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 3:38 AM Title: Lingerie for Esme
this is good!!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:38 PM Title: Lingerie for Esme
I love Edward and the lingerie comment....:)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 12:09 AM Title: Halo Tournament Next to Adonis
I think love is in the air for E & B!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 12:06 AM Title: You Don't Remember Last Night Edward?
Wondering why Alice hates Edward? Who could hate him? Looking forward to more!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 12:03 AM Title: Bella's Preggers
Interesting first chapter!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 10:03 PM Title: You Don't Remember Last Night Edward?
I love the sassy Alice, Bella combo.....:)
Date: 06 Aug 2010 10:02 PM Title: Bella's Preggers
Gotta love some good gossip........ GO ALICE!!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 10:01 PM Title: Halo Tournament Next to Adonis
I love cooperhead!! What a great nick name!! Can't wait for more.....:)
Date: 06 Aug 2010 8:07 PM Title: Halo Tournament Next to Adonis
I like this first chapters very much and can't wait for more. Also, love the ideia of double daily updates !
Date: 06 Aug 2010 6:55 PM Title: Halo Tournament Next to Adonis
i can´t wait for tomorrow...
and by the way i like it...
Date: 06 Aug 2010 6:29 PM Title: Halo Tournament Next to Adonis
This was cute! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 6:20 PM Title: You Don't Remember Last Night Edward?
I'm sad that the girls don't like Edward and they don't even know why. I feel bad for Edward!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 6:14 PM Title: Bella's Preggers
Very interesting. Great job...thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2010 3:01 PM Title: Bella's Preggers
Hey honey! you know i would've beta this for you if you wanted!! but you know i love this story and since a nice lady made my banner when i got on her , i'm making yours. i hope you like it!
