Date: 09 Nov 2010 9:13 PM Title: Remember Me
I have to say that I have enjoyed reading your story up until this chapter.
Bella is rude, selfish and down right a pain in the ass in this chapter. If I was Edward and her friends I would have told her to stop acting like a child and grow the hell up.
Memory does not come back because she want him to remember, patients and comfort help, not yelling and accusing him that he does not want to remember.
If I was Edward I would have told her to fly a kite, it all seems to be Poor Bella, but I am sorry, she was not the only one effect by the accident and at least she has her memories to look back on, Edward only has confusion.
Bella is conceited, disrespectful and deserves to be alone for what she pulled in this chapter.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 1:49 AM Title: Epilogue: The Resolution
I saw this ending coming, but thank goodness you decided to write a sequel. I think this was the best way to write this story, however, I didn't think amnesia would last that long. It seems as if they just fell out of love with each other. I am very happy that he moved to NY. Can't wait for more.
Date: 21 Aug 2010 7:08 PM Title: A New Beginning
Well it looks as if you are going to leave this story with Bella going away to a different college away from all of the Cullens and having a new boyfriend. Please post what the name of your new story will be so that I follow the sequel. And of course, I am hoping that she still ends up with Edward. SOUNDS GREAT!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 2:55 PM Title: Friends
As right as Bella's decision might be, for some, it came at the wrong moment. But Edward agreed with her, too easily and too quickly. Does that mean he think it's best to pull away from each other?
And I thought there was going to be plenty of talking in this chapter...
Date: 20 Aug 2010 2:49 PM Title: Drastic Measures
Poor Edward now a broken nose, he deserves plenty of points for that move. Charlie was surprised but I guess kind of glad Edward would go so far, just to be able to talk to Bella. And Bella? She had to have seen how much she means to Edward, even if he can't remember everything, if he went as far as he did.
Still lots of talking to do, but that can wait till the sun comes up.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 4:02 AM Title: That's Worth Fighting For
Edward might not be completely sure, but he is making an effort, and that should count for something. Of course. Bella has to be hurt, upset, angry, her entire world crumbled right in front of her, and there was nothing she could do about it. That has to be so difficult and painful.
Thankfully, Edward wants to find out what he doesn't remember, that's a big step.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:34 AM Title: That's Worth Fighting For
I feel so bad for them. I am glad that Edward wants to know what he is missing. I hope his memory come back when he does see these things. It seems like he is right onthe edge of remembering anyway. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:17 PM Title: Why are you here?
I was right you did want to make us cry more. It's awful for everyone... parents, brothers, friends, the girl in his life.... To see him there but not there. But no one lost patience, they were sad and worried but still there. More than anyone Bella.
But now... I guess the angst continues in the next chapter.
Date: 12 Aug 2010 7:34 PM Title: Emmett's Invention
Emmett and his unique ideas. What would he put on his drinks? I wouldn't want to be the one to try them out.
I can imagine how Edward and Charlie's chat went last night. It had to be funny. I guess Charlie wanted to scare him, and that he wasn't too angry.
The note was sweet and the day seems to be turning really nice.
Date: 12 Aug 2010 7:27 PM Title: Dancing In The pouring Rain
Sorry I have to say this, an Edward who doesn't freak out about his car!!!! Both of them were soaked and he didn't care!!! That's love, happiness, and I don't know what else but it was good.
So they both said it to each other, and heard from each other what they wanted to hear. They also, finally, got their first kiss, even though it was raining it was very romantic.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 7:37 PM Title: You Turned Me Into Strawberry Shortcake!
Bella acted fast, and had a great idea!!! Leveling things in that way!!! And then Esme finding it funny too, it was really good. Especially after such an interruption. Will we ever know if Edward was planing on kissing Bella? Will he try again? And soon???
Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:35 PM Title: Lingerie for Esme
So... not the place you want to run into a guy, especially Edward. Then, he goes and tells you he's getting his mom lingerie, priceless.
Edward is up to something, from what Bella said in previous chapters he has never been this nice to her, so why now?
Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:26 PM Title: Pillow Fights and More Confusion
So everyone is noticing Bella's changing attitude, while Bella keeps in denial about it.
She was glad Alice went to help her get ready, even if it was to see Edward just for a minute... Why? Is there some kind of plan Bella hasn't realized yet?
Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:19 PM Title: Halo Tournament Next to Adonis
Well... it is said there's only one step separating love and hate. I guess in Bella's case, it's turning out to be a very, very small step.
What's with Edward though? He seemed not to like her and now he was nice and kind? What is he planning?
Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:04 PM Title: Bella's Preggers
Bella doesn't like her life. Her best friend is Alice, who seems to not want to focus on Bella's take on life. She is also friends with Emmett, who is a joker. A big joker who just decided to announce Bella and his brother, who doesn't get along with Bella are what??? having a baby?? way to start the gossip mill!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:36 PM Title: Lingerie for Esme
How can Bella get so freaked out she doesn't remember to call Alice to find out where they are??? Too funny...I would have had Edward's reaction to that one. I am glad they ran into each other though. Great job...thanks!!!