Date: 18 Sep 2010 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love these two, great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 17 Sep 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love hte way loving and logical way they are approaching their fledgling relationship. Great start.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, so glad you are enjoying.
Date: 17 Sep 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
lol both of them blushing is cute as hell. I love it. Its not so Emo-y any more so that's a great thing but its still good. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
No,you get a couple chapters of almost fluff and then the emo comes back. LOL
Thanks for reading.
Date: 12 Sep 2010 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 4
i like where this is going =]
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Thanks!
Date: 10 Sep 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter.
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Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved the chapter. Finally I know what the tattoo means! I like it, especially since I had no clue as to what it meant. It's kinda sweet that he thinks she's worth waiting for. I was a little worried after his conversation with Jane since he was questioning himself. Makes me wonder what kind of influence she has over him.
I could not stop laughing when Edward was thinking about Jane's boyfriend. The mental picture was hilarious. Jane must be even weirder than I thought.
I can't wait to see what happens now that Edward and Bella are together. Looking forward to reading more soon.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. Rocky roads are ahead but they can take it, right?
Date: 09 Sep 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Totally unexpected but awesome.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
aww they're together now! i love it. that was sweet and is that really what that means? because if so I seriously think I found what I want to get for MY tattoo. i hope you can update again really soon. this is great. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Yes, that is what that means. I used google translate for it though, so you might want to confer with someone who knows the language first...just in case. But if you do put that on, please send me a photo, cause that'd be really cool.
Thanks for your review.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm so happy they finally got together. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 28 Aug 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter. So the outing was definitely awkward for both of them. Their one on one time seems to be going better, atleast they are talking to each other. What's the deal with Jane? Does she not like Bella or is it that she is a little territorial when it comes to Edward? Or is it that she's really just a bitch? Definitely looking forward to reading more. Can't wait. BTW, I will definitely be voting for your story. It's the best.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Jane is well, Jane. She kind of likes her status quo. She doesn't think that Bella would be a good match for Edward and personally she doesn't really get along with the type of girl Bella is. She's not trying to be a bitch but it's just kind of who she is.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter.
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Thank you !
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wake up Edward, you've been hanging around with Jane too long..
Author's Response:
Ha ha, yes Jane does have a sphere of influence, that is for sure.
Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
ooooooh i wanna know what happens after that!!!!!
Author's Response:
Soon, soon.
Thanks for reading.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
So what's Edward 'waiting for'....cause he sure and heck is 'waiting for something'. Perhaps he just found it?
Author's Response:
Well he is waiting for something, that's for sure. LOL
Thanks for the review.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
Sheesh, I want to hug him - he is soo self-loathing. She seems disappointed he has been with another - but so has she. I suspect she has more experience - maybe not alot. She has plenty of people around her and dates. I suspect he does not have alot of experience.
Author's Response:
Interesting thought. Edward does have more expirence than Bella, but not by a lot.
Thanks for reading.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
ive been looking for a story with some originality and i finally found one. i love it!! update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Those are the words I love to hear everytime I start a new story. I try very hard to have original ideas.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
Aw Cute...
They should try being friends first and then maybe ease into. Those tend to have the strongest outcomes longterm.
Author's Response:
They won't be jumping into anything, they are both too unsure.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading.
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2010 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter. Loved the interaction between them. Can't wait to see what happens when they go out with his friends. When do we get to find out the meaning of his tattoo? I'm actually cursing myself right now for only knowing English and Spanish. LoL. I was going to look it up, but then I decided I rather wait for the explanation in the story. Awesome writing like always. Looking forward to the next update.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
LOL, I've had two people google it so far and two people say they are waiting. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter but I have no idea what chapter the tattoo talk will come out in...but I think it will be fairly soon.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 18 Aug 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh, I love this story. I hope they get the chance to really pursue something together. Not let labels or outward appearances or 'friends' get in the way!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing. Only time will tell with these two.
Date: 11 Aug 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
this is a good start! i look forward to reading more =]
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the chapter. Can't wait to see what happens now that they have seen each other at work. Looking forward to the next.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thanks. I appreciate the review.
Date: 11 Aug 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 11 Aug 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow that could be interesting. this edward is sweet and akward. love him. though bella thinks she is too good for edward. I hope he dates someone else and she sees how wrong she is
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. But Bella does not think she is better than Edward, she thinks that she would be boring to him. She knows that she is shallow because of her life expirences where he is deep. She just can't see it working.
Date: 04 Aug 2010 9:48 PM Title: Prologue
Looking forward for the updates.... great so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 04 Aug 2010 6:06 AM Title: Prologue
Great prologue, can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2010 5:14 AM Title: Prologue
Great start. Loved it. No surprise there since I always love your stories. Definitely looking forward to reading more.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thanks. I always love your reviews so we are a great team!
Date: 03 Aug 2010 10:26 PM Title: Prologue
Great first chapter ....looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Date: 03 Aug 2010 7:52 PM Title: Prologue
luv it
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Thank you
Date: 03 Aug 2010 6:53 PM Title: Prologue
love this
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2010 4:43 PM Title: Prologue
Great begining!
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Thank you!
Date: 03 Aug 2010 4:20 PM Title: Prologue
Liking it so far can't wait for more
B
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 03 Aug 2010 3:25 PM Title: Prologue
I loved it - as I love your other stories.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.