[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
great story
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Thanks so much for reading.
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
that was a little weird
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2011 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
HAHAHAHA
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. I am always so happy to see your reviews.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2011 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
awkward at first really means nothing
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2011 10:29 PM Title: Prologue
first time for me they do say opposites attract
Date: 13 Oct 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
thanks for the story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading.
Date: 13 Oct 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
oh that really sucks i feel so sorry for Ed.... how could anyone want that?
Date: 13 Oct 2011 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 12
poor ed again i love Jane!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL, yes I liked writing this Jane, glad you like her too.
Date: 13 Oct 2011 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
i love you jane!!! good punch bells!
Date: 13 Oct 2011 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
poor ed and yuk bella i am sooo mad at you!!!!
Date: 13 Oct 2011 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
yeah bella that is what you want and ed is the one getting raped how terrible is that. poor poor ed
Date: 13 Oct 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
bella... i don't know what to say. ed you are in for a heap of trouble run!!!
Date: 13 Oct 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
bella you are really one F-ed up girl!!!
Date: 13 Oct 2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
bella you are one messed up chick!! you don't know yourself and going that danger stuff isn't going to make you understand yourself any better..
Date: 13 Oct 2011 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh boy you too... it sucks when you don't like the others friends..
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for all the reviews. Bella does have some issues for sure.
Date: 12 Oct 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
oh they are soo complicated!!! argh!!!
Date: 12 Oct 2011 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
damn the two of them are pieces of work!! they are soo insecure and bella has no clue about herself.. i can't wait to see where all this goes.
Date: 12 Oct 2011 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh boy so it begins! where is it going to end. I hope she finds herself instead of defining herself!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad that you are enjoying, or am I just frustrating you? LOL
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
yeah! come on guys!!!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:42 PM Title: Prologue
oh come on you too you are soo emo!!! hook up guys!!
Author's Response:
LOL, thanks for reading another one!
Date: 19 May 2011 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wait. So let me get this straight. She won't have sex without love, but she fantasizes about being raped? Time for a psych eval, Bella. Yeesh. If I were Edward, I'd be running for the hills. Just sayin'. lol
Author's Response:
Yes and she knows it.
Thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2010 6:03 PM Title: Prologue
I like it so far and the banner is amazing. Do you think you can help me with one? I know how but I wanna make it better than the one's I have made.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. I didn't make my banner, it was made by decode banners, they are on Twitter. : )
Date: 31 Dec 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wonderful ...wonderful story.. You did a great job.. I am so glad to hear about Lauren being caught. That was a huge bonus.
thank you so much for your creative ideas...and for sharing them with us.
I look forward to many more stories from you.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I really appreciate you taking the time to read my stories, as I am a fan of yours as well.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
Aww, I'm sad the fic is over. I really did enjoy every chapter of this and I'm definitely going to miss reading about this Edward and Bella. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the delay on responding, I thought I already had. LOL
Date: 31 Dec 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
ohh so sad it ended but I'm glad it ended that way. The tattoo was sweet. thanks again so much and I will definitely be reading that Fandom Against Domestic Violence thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I am working on that Fans peice right now.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
Overall, an excellent story. Fresh new ideas, characters you could care about , and most importantly I loved the way you brought up Lauren on charges. People like that should be a in jail or a looney bin.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 15
What was he going to answer when she said I love you? Couldn't you have let him answer and then let her continue talking in her sleep? LoL. Great chapter. I like that they are making progress as a couple, but it was sad to see Bella have a relapse.
Elli :)
Date: 20 Dec 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 15
Awe - is she in love? I hope he loves her back if she is. I am sad to see her go and do that. I do feel hopefull for them as people - they are working through there issues. In order for them to truly be happy they must be whole first.
I love the story and the way you present them working on themselves first and then gradually coming together as a couple. That is best way to ensure a long happy relationship - is to enter it as two happy well-grounded individuals.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
Edward is too cute. I love the line about his skinny ass. lol and then he gets better and Bella has a relapse. :( really sad. keep up the great work though. thanks again bye
Date: 19 Dec 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
It's sad that she had a relapse, but honestly, the road to recovery will have moments like that. The plus is that she knows it's wrong and is working on it. And now that Edward is accepting and willing to work with her on her recovery, it should help.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
aww they both in a way got what they wanted. Edward got his kiss and not being touched while Bella got her kiss and being restrained. I love this story. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you so much
Date: 02 Dec 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
Poor Bella. Poor Edward. I am loving this story, so different to any other out there. Keep us the amazing work. Cannot wait for the next chapeter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I love to hear that.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
Awee - I am torn a part of me the logical part thinks they should wait. But another side says the is Edward Bella they should be together and work through issues in therapy together.
Edward, Edward , Edward layoff the drugs.
Author's Response:
Ha ha. I know he will at some point.
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2010 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter. I guess they just need to take things slow, one day at a time and see how things go from there.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Things are moving now.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 26 Nov 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am so happy to see that he is going to try with Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 26 Nov 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 25 Nov 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
ohh poor Edward. that guy is a nervous wreck but around Bella (as long as she doesn't touch him) he's calm. I love this story and I really hope they get back together soon. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks so much.
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm so glad they talked, even if it was only for a little bit. I felt so bad when he thought about hugging her but didn't know if he could. I wonder if they would benefit from a therapy session together? Can't wait to see what happens next.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
I'm trying to figure that same thing out. LOL
Date: 25 Nov 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
Ouch Edward stalking as a human. I am glad he is getting help. Then he can get over his misplaced affection for her. They are not ready and frankly, they are not a good pair.
Author's Response:
Don't think of it as stalking, think of it as checking up on her. LOL
Date: 21 Nov 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
I really hope that they can work throught this.
Author's Response:
Me too. LOL
Thanks for reading.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
On no whaat is Jane going to do? I can see a big law suit occuring and Edward becoming a rich man...
Author's Response:
No, she doesn't have that kind of clout yet, she's still just a law student, but she has her ways.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
I hope that Edward is going to be okay.
Author's Response:
I can't say but thanks for reading. LOL
Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
I wonder if Edward is going to feel the same way about Bella after this. Maybe now that Bella saw it with her own eyes she will be able to controlor get help for her feelings.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the reveiw.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
I wonder if there is really a party or if Lauren just wants to get Edward alone....
I'm also glad that both Edward and Bella opened up to someone else.
Author's Response:
ha ha, that would have been a twist. But as you see Lauren has something much nastier up her sleeve.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad that she told Edward. A hard as it was it was for the best. I'm really glad that Edward was not okay with it. I'm glad he is taking the time to figure it out.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I try to always have my characters react realistically no matter what situations I throw at them.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh Shit! Bella is a adrenaline junkie. I like it nice twist.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
I feel so bad for them, neither one of them know their own worth. They are both amazing people that belong together.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I agree.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well I am so glad that they finally put all the cards on the table.
Author's Response:
Ah yes, the calm before the storm. Thanks for reviewing,
Date: 21 Nov 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
I thought Edward was color blind?
Author's Response:
He is color blind. Being color blind does not mean a person only sees in black or white. They more get colors confused, like can't tell the difference between blue and green or red and pink.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
OMG! They finally talk. They were so cute. I love the sexual tension that is flowing between these two.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm a big fan of sexual tension
Date: 21 Nov 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh they work together.... I like Edward's kind of fun... But maybe without the pot....
Author's Response:
LOL, yes Edward and his pot.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 3:07 AM Title: Prologue
Very promising!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 15 Nov 2010 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
well at least he's still interested in her and he has given up completely. thats great news. I also love that Bella seems to be over her obsession but I think in my opinion she just has some BDSM tendencies that's all. its not the thought of being RAPED its the thought of being controlled and she's just not seeing the difference. :) keep up the great work. I hope they reunite soon. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
While Bella may have BDSM tendencies, it's not the sexual act she is after it is the aftermath...or it was before. She could channel them into BDSM possibly but it is unlikely that Edward would be able to do that for her at this stage...you'll just have to wait and see.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm so glad that Edward and Bella are both getting help. It's good that they both have friends they can speak with, but they definitely need the professional help. I really like your Jasper. I know you don't mention him a lot, but I like seeing the close bond that him and Bella seem to have. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thanks. I like Jasper too, I feel bad that I'm not able to use him all that much but he is important for sure.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 12
I am glad they are both getting help. They need it. I hope he works on the dope. Every chap, I always think these kids are such lovely people but in such desperate need of help.
I admit, it is E/B afterall when they have started to make progress on their issues it would be nice to see them try to date again.
They are in no position to handle a date. They need to get a grip on themselves first.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much.
Date: 05 Nov 2010 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
ooh intriguing! :D I love it. I hate both Lauren (for being a bitch) and Gianna (for being an incosiderate Bitch) lol. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! LOL
Date: 05 Nov 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
I really hate that bitch Lauren. I don't want her to get away with it. If she's not going to jail, I'm not opposed to violence. She deserves more than a punch to the face. Poor Edward. It's so sad that male victims don't get the same understanding that female victims get. Things like that really piss me off in RL. I can't wait for the next chapter since it looks like Jane is planning something.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Yeah I know, but such is life. Sometimes the bad guys get away with it. And yes male victims rarely get the same treatment as female victims.
Thanks for reading.
Date: 05 Nov 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
Giana should be fired. Edward should find a better job and layoff the drugs. I love the story. They are likeable characters. Most E/B are to perfect, but these are flawed and warm for hte lack of a better word. ITs the middle of the night and I wish I could sleep.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. Yes, these two are flawed and I'm glad everyone is enjoying this without feeling like they need to be together...right now, you know?
Date: 01 Nov 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Edward. It makes me want to cry. I suspected that this was going to affect how he felt about Bella and her fantasies. I'm assuming this was the wake up call that Bella needed. Amazing writing like always. Can't wait for the next update.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Your reviews always make me smile.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
*tear* that's horrible. poor Edward but also poor Bella. she was with him that whole time and then he sends her away. hopefully that poor Couple tries to work something out, whether it be just friendly aquaintances or friends or more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. The horrible is over but the angst is sticking around for a while.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
Innovative approach - never heard about male victims. I love your writing - but this Bella is sooo disturbed it breaks my heart. Edward is no slouch either.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I like to tackle topics I haven't seen done. I'm glad you appreciate it.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
i'm totally loving this story... can't wait to read the updates!
Author's Response:
Thanks so mucn!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 11:56 AM Title: Prologue
Oh no Oh no Oh no... what will she do.. I want her to save him.. Poor Edward. That is so horrible. Hopefully, Bella will see the tears.. and throw the bitch out the window. ... BUT knowing Bella.. she will be insecure about herself, knowing that he is better off with Lauren, run out of the house... only to be hit by a bus.
The TRAGIC life and times of Bella Swan.. lol
This is such a fantastic story. Thanks so much.
Author's Response:
Ha ha! Naw, I had Bella run over by a bus in one of my other fics....so I won't do that again. Thanks for reading.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
Please update soon, I want to know what happens next to him.
Author's Response:
Next chapter should be here next Sunday. Thanks for reading.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
well i hope bella see thru it all ! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading. See you next week!
Date: 17 Oct 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow is she assuming wrong........
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 9
Holy shit! How could you leave it like that? That's just evil. LoL. I definitely did not see that coming. Is that really happening to him? All that keeps running through my head is, if this happens to him how is that going to affect how he feels about her and her weird fantasies. Is Bella going to notice that something is wrong? I won't even get into what I'm thinking about Lauren right now because I don't have enough words to describe these thoughts. Can't wait for the next update to see what happens. I'm definitely curious to see how this is going to play out.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Ha ha. Yeah, I am a little evil. Thanks so much for reading.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
yeah you better run! lol no I'm kidding but what karma! the one thing Bella wished would happen to her was happening to Edward and he couldn't even say anything. how horrifying. Oh I can't wait for Bella to find out. she's going to kick her ass. lol thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 8
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh wow is she scary. Edward is such a sweet guy.
Author's Response:
LOL, thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
I thought we were supposed to get you gifts, not the other way around. LoL. Thanks for the update. Hope you're having a great day.
I thought this chapter was great. I think Bella took a step in the right direction by confiding in Jasper. Jane surprised me. She actually gave decent advice to Edward considering how she feels about Bella. At first I thought, how could he tell Jane, but then I realized I was being a hypocrite. I tell my best friend everything and he is the person I go to when I need advice or when I have a problem. Then again, we have been best friends since we were little kids so our relationship is a little different than what Jane and Edward have. I don't remember if you mentioned how long Edward and Jane have been friends. I think Edward is being great by researching and trying to find a way to help Bella. It really shows how much he cares for her. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more and seeing how this plays out. Can't wait.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thanks lady. And I'm surprised more people weren't upset at him telling Jane. Cause yeah, we all tell our best friends everything. it's a natural thing to do!
Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
aww poor Edward! Bella does need help but then again maybe she just is looking for a little BDSM relationship. someone to be rough with her. Roleplay :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks, but Bella's desires couldn't be curbed with BDSM. Her fantasies are caused by lack of self esteem and not necassarily from a penchant for rough sex. However if she got her mind healthy, there is no telling if that would float her boat. LOL
Date: 04 Oct 2010 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
well I think that edward did the best thing and took a couple of days to figure things out because if he had tried to process it that night it might have ended worse.
Author's Response:
That's for sure. Emotions were running high and things could have been said.
Thanks for the review.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
I wonder what Edward is going to say about why Bella is out there because I really don't think that he is just going to let it go.
Author's Response:
You'd be right.
Thanks again for all the reviews, I really appreciate it!
Date: 04 Oct 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
I do not blame him - I would be hurt too. But he will be back when he is ready. She needs his friendship more than she need him as a boyfriend. There times for love.
Author's Response:
They are kind of in an awkward stage though, becuase they were never really friends before so I'm not sure he could just slip into that role. But stay tuned to find out! Thanks for the review.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
So the other elephant in the room has been addressed now too! I am glad that they are talking to each other because they need to do that!
Author's Response:
Yup, lots of talking needed here.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
Thank god that one of them finally made a move and I think that their friends are going to think the same thing.
Author's Response:
Thanks again, and yeah I imagine Emmett will be thrilled. LOL
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am thinking that Edward never dreamed that he would be sitting in her room talking to her and he is feeling pretty lucky right now.
Author's Response:
Ha ha, not as lucky as he'd like to be feeling.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yea Edward. I am glad that he finally got up the nerve to talk to her because I don't think that she would have mad the first move to try to get to know him better.
Author's Response:
No, Bella as outgoing as she appears is actually fairly shy.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
And so they meet somewhere that he probally never thought that he would have.
Author's Response:
Yup, ahhh fate.
Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
That was definitely an intense conversation. I guess it's to be expected that Edward would need time to think about this. Can't wait to see what he decides.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Yes, more intensity to come! Hold on tight. LOL
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:31 AM Title: Prologue
How sad is it that they have watched each other for two years and have never talked to each other. Oh the things that could have been....
Author's Response:
So true, but haven't we all looked outside out social group at one point just for the view. Neither of them thought that it would be more than just attraction.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 7
aww Edward is sooo lost and so is dear Bella. :( I hope those days shoot by but I have no idea how Edward is going to handle her news. can't wait to find out though. :D thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review.
Date: 27 Sep 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
what the heck is her problem? to quote Jessica, do you have a death wish? usually Bella would seek the thrill when Edward wasn't there but why she's doing it now with him there? keep up the great work. can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2010 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
It's clear the girl has problems if she is willing to put herself in those type of situations. Can't wait to see what she tells Edward. I'm sure that will be an interesting conversation. Definitely looking forward to reading more soon.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading.
Date: 27 Sep 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
She has issues..... She needs to see someone before something terrible happens.
Author's Response:
Yes, she has issues. Thanks for reading.
Date: 18 Sep 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 5
i'm loving where this is going! =]
Author's Response:
Thank you, I hope it stays that way. LOL
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it. I always get so excited when I see you updated.
Poor Edward having to deal with the loud friends, but since Bella has hung out with his friends I guess it's only fair. I have to say it was funny to read that the oversharing with her friends might give him performance anxiety.
Jane really is bitchy with Bella. I have no idea how E&B can make this work with E having a friend like that. What about Garrett? The one time he speaks to her is to tell her most relationships don't work? I can see how that can make her feel insecure. At least Bella's friends weren't rude to Edward.
I definitely like that Bella was able to express how she feels to Edward. I guess it does seem quick to feel that way so fast, but the two years of staring have to count for something, right?
Can't wait to read more.
Elli :)
Author's Response:
Thanks. I don't think that Edward's friends even realized that they were attacking Bella, It's just the way they are.