Date: 29 Jul 2018 6:14 AM Title: Frustrations and Prince Charming
Loved it!
Date: 29 Jul 2018 5:20 AM Title: Silence Isn't Always Golden
Loved it!
Date: 29 Jul 2018 4:53 AM Title: Doctor, Doctor, Give Me the News
Loved it!
Date: 29 Jul 2018 3:36 AM Title: Buried Memories Ain't No Walk in the Park
Poor Bella!
Date: 29 Jul 2018 3:01 AM Title: Branded
Edward is amazing!
Date: 29 Jul 2018 12:03 AM Title: Hindsight is 20/20 - Our Place
Loved it!
Date: 28 Jul 2018 11:44 PM Title: What the Hell Happened to Bella?
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 28 Jul 2018 11:25 PM Title: Secrets and Lies
Loved it!
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:42 AM Title: Death Becomes Her
Loved it!
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:04 AM Title: I Always Feel Like Somebody's Watching Me/Evil
Loved it! I hate James!
Date: 09 Mar 2017 10:39 AM Title: Everything's Coming Up Rosie
Loved it!
Date: 09 Mar 2017 9:14 AM Title: Frustrations and Prince Charming
Loved it!
Date: 09 Mar 2017 7:39 AM Title: Silence Isn't Always Golden
Loved it!
Date: 09 Mar 2017 6:16 AM Title: Doctor, Doctor, Give Me the News
Loved it!
Date: 08 Mar 2017 2:29 PM Title: Buried Memories Ain't No Walk in the Park
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 08 Mar 2017 11:43 AM Title: Hindsight is 20/20 - Our Place
Loved it!
Date: 08 Mar 2017 11:22 AM Title: What the Hell Happened to Bella?
Loved it!
Date: 08 Mar 2017 10:55 AM Title: Secrets and Lies
Loved it! I hate James!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2016 3:14 PM Title: Everything's Coming Up Rosie
CRAAAAPPP!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2016 2:55 PM Title: Adam
My favorite chapter so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 15 Jul 2016 5:50 PM Title: Outtakes!
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading!!
Date: 15 Jul 2016 12:00 PM Title: I Always Feel Like Somebody's Watching Me/Evil
Bash his head in!
Date: 15 Jul 2016 11:46 AM Title: Everything's Coming Up Rosie
He's gonna paaaaaaaaayyyyyy!
Date: 15 Jul 2016 5:18 AM Title: Doctor, Doctor, Give Me the News
:)
Date: 15 Jul 2016 5:05 AM Title: Whispers
Rode and.vic are great!
Date: 15 Jul 2016 4:54 AM Title: Buried Memories Ain't No Walk in the Park
I think Carlisle's actions were perfect for his situation! Hell, he's not in his doctor's office!
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2015 10:42 AM Title: Hindsight is 20/20 - Our Place
great
Date: 23 Aug 2015 1:56 PM Title: Hindsight is 20/20 - Our Place
Loved it!
Date: 23 Aug 2015 5:51 AM Title: What the Hell Happened to Bella?
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 23 Aug 2015 5:07 AM Title: Secrets and Lies
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2014 9:22 PM Title: Outtakes!
I loved this story. It was so heart breaking. I cried pretty much throughout the story. You truelly understand what's it like for a rape victim. Great job with the story.
Date: 01 Dec 2014 2:46 AM Title: Death Becomes Her
I really enjoyed reading this story. I'm still having chills for the ordeal that she went through.
Date: 24 Oct 2012 7:58 AM Title: Doctor, Doctor, Give Me the News
loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm happy you're enjoying it thus far.
Date: 24 Oct 2012 7:18 AM Title: Buried Memories Ain't No Walk in the Park
loved it!
Date: 24 Oct 2012 5:24 AM Title: Hindsight is 20/20 - Our Place
loved it!
Date: 24 Oct 2012 4:59 AM Title: What the Hell Happened to Bella?
loved it!
Date: 10 May 2011 12:54 AM Title: Outtakes!
Just read your story from beginning to end today. You made me cry several times and laugh occaisionally too! Fantastic writing. Hope the sequel is as well written.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, Jane! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope you'll enjoy Road Maps as much (and maybe better?) :)
Date: 07 Apr 2011 9:24 AM Title: Silence Isn't Always Golden
Oh yes. I agree. I totally agree with Bella (or rather you) when she said: "There's nothing remotely sexy about quadratic equations.". hahahahaha! It's so TRUE! Nice story! Keep it up! :D
Author's Response:
Sorry about the review fail on the last one. I was on my phone and I'm still not used to the touch screen. LOL!
And I still stand firmly behind the fact that there is nothing remotely sexy about quadratic equations or math-PERIOD!
Date: 06 Apr 2011 9:59 AM Title: Whispers
I LOVE ROSIE!!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks, vanilla-bella! I'm
Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:19 AM Title: Outtakes!
Awww darlin, you have a happy ending waiting for you. With a soul like yours, you have a match somewhere.
I LOVED hearing the outtakes and I am excited about reading the sequel. Regretfully work calls so I may not be able to read a chapter an hr.:)
See on the flip side.
Author's Response: You're going to make me cry, bb. Thanks so much, and I'll be here when you get around to reading the sequel. :)
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:47 AM Title: Death Becomes Her
Thank GOD he is dead. Now maybe Bella can fully heal. I am sad to see that this story is going to end soon, but I am happy to hear that there is a sequel.
I am sorry if my reviews were wordy, but I kind of go off on tangents at times.
I have more than enjoyed this story and absolutely love the way that you handled everything. RL, mixed with compassion and covered with love. For a fic that has dealt with such a deeply painful issue, you have made the journey more meaningful than painful. You have shown the silver lining of a dark and painful path. For that I once again thank you
Author's Response: And I can't thank you enough for reading and sharing. I hope you'll enjoy the sequel. :)
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:16 AM Title: I Always Feel Like Somebody's Watching Me/Evil
Evil, sadistic, evil James. I want to kill him more than ever. No more pitch fork, he gets the rat poison.
Poor Bella, but at least she is still holding it together. She is still progressing through her stages, she has not been set back as much as she thinks. I am still proud of her. I am just as proud of Edward, such a trooper.
Others can never fix us, they can only aid in the process. And even then we will never be perfect again, but no one is. Our scars make us unique, and just like the skin that covers those wounds, our past makes us stronger. And from that strength we live, we learn and we take our knowledge and try to help others. To hopefully make their lives better and prevent the pain that we endured.
Thank you again for sharing this wonderful story, as well as your personal strength. That says more about you than any past that may have occurred.
Author's Response: Thanks, sweets. I really appreciate it.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 5:06 PM Title: Everything's Coming Up Rosie
Oh well hell **grabs pitchfork and diesel fuel** Carlisle called, he said he needed added security. Lucky for him I run a redneck shotgun service, we will take car of James.
I am SOOOO glad that you gave Bella the reaction that you did. She is growing and healing and is stronger than she knows. Everyone wants her to be safe, but in order for her to truly heal, she has to face her fears. She has to stand up to her past and say that is not going to be it's prisoner anymore. And she did, and I am SOOO proud of her. I hope that everyone is able to see that she needs this before she tries to take matters in her own hands.
I have faith in you though.
And I am glad that you had an Edwardian man to help you. I did not, nor did I have the strong support system, so it is wonderful to see what could have been.
Author's Response:
My Edwardian man helped, but he didn't cure me. I don't know if I'll ever completely get over my past, but I try. Trust is something I don't hand over to very many men, and it's probably why I'm still alone at 38. Oh well. :) I can live vicariously through fanfic, right?
I'm glad you have faith in me, and I hope you continue to feel that way. :)
Date: 15 Aug 2010 12:31 PM Title: Adam
I am back, and first I must apologize for skipping some chapters with my reviews. I promise to go back and review, it is just I got so wrapped up in the story. Didn't make it to bed til 2am.
So, I am proud of their progress. Baby steps, and the fact that Edward is so patient is key. Bella is very lucky to find someone that understands and is willing to take it slow. More damage can be done by a person who doesn't get it, and wants to push a victim than they know.
I REALLY love Victoria, just saying.
The support of the whole family is amazing, and Bella is really lucky. They really are fixing her with love and compassion and it shows.
I am proud of Bella for donating her artwork, I bet she will be surprised at how much money they bring in. I also forsee that one of her paintings will be featured at the house.
I am glad that she is convincing Emmett to follow his dreams. She is right when she says if she lets him stay close for her sake, that one day he will resent her. He needs to fix himself in order for her to truly heal.
Bella taking this step with Edward was so brave, and you wrote it so well. It is easier for her to touch him than to have him touch her. She didn't experience touching her abuser, just him touching her. This can make her brave enough to explore.
You are remaining true to form and you have my greatest respect. keep up the fabulous work.
oh and I LOVE the names.
Author's Response:
My first boyfriend after I went through my own trauma was very "Edwardian" and the idea of Adam and Pandora kind of came from him. He wanted to take the fear out of it, so he used to do "puppet shows" to make me laugh and relax around him. Adam and Pandora is an extension of this. If you take the fear out of something, it's a lot easier to deal with.
Baby steps is key.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 5:03 AM Title: Doctor, Doctor, Give Me the News
I don't think that you need grief. As you said we know they will get together, and you can tell that time has progressed. You don't have to explain in detail that the pot of water is boiling, you can just say that you boiled a pot of water. Still happens the same way, and is a lot less mundane.
With that said, I LOVED this chapter. When Bella revealed that Edward was her first kiss I had a shit eating grin on my face. :) I let out an awww and everything. Thank you for giving her that.
Her first day of school went well, I am guessing that there will be trouble there eventually though.
Have I mentioned that I LOVE Victoria? Well I do. And I am SOO glad that she congratulated Bella for her break through, rather than focusing on her fear. I REALLY love the way that you are dealing with her pain and fears, THIS is the way that problems should be dealt with. This is also the way that RL would kick our asses with them.
Another wonderful read.
Author's Response:
Thanks, sweets.
Bella needed to have some sort of significant "first" with Edward, so why not her first real kiss? There's nothing more tender or long-lasting than your first kiss with someone you love.
Victoria is awesome. She surprised me chapter by chapter and I really wish there were more therapists out there like her.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 4:41 AM Title: Whispers
I REALLY like Victoria. THAT is how a psychologist should be. I have come across some that need to be fired on the spot.
Bella is getting there, she doesn't realize how much talking about it is helping her. she may hate showing her scars, but she is now not only willing to admit that they exist, she is willing to show them off. She doesn't break out into a panic attack and vomit, she grits her teeth and she goes on.
I am glad that is is okay with speaking with Vic on a regular basis, it will really help her.
I am also proud of her for taking the step and going to the exam, I hope that everything comes back clean.
I am glad that you didn't make Rose a bitch, I have always thought that she was misunderstood in the books. Bella now has a confidant to speak with. This will help her.
I am nervous about what her observation of Edward and Bella's relationship will do to Bella though. I hope that she is able to blow of this slip and move on with her recovery.
One more chapter and then I am going to have to force myself to go to sleep. :)
Author's Response:
I am so relieved to hear that you agree with me on Rose in the books. She and Leah Clearwater were two of THE most misunderstood characters in the series and I always felt like Rose got the short end of the stick, as did Leah. I tend to make my Rosalie's tough, but compassionate, because I think that's how she should have been.
Victoria was a product of her nature and I don't think she would have been quite as evil had James not been in the equation. I also have a girl-crush on Rachelle Lefevre. ;) She's a wonderful actress and I was so upset when Victoria was recast.
Anyway, I'm thrilled that you're still loving this story. Thanks so much!!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 4:19 AM Title: Buried Memories Ain't No Walk in the Park
Wow, I have to say that some of your reviewers really surprise me. Maybe it is bc this particular plot line hits really close to home, but you have been spot on a lot. So close to perfect that I have gotten goose bumps more than once.
The pure fear and brainwashing, people take everything from their victims. They steal their pride, their power and their souls. They take that dirty, evil side of themselves and infest it into their victims, tainting their life source and replacing hope with their own disease.
As painful as it is to hear Bella say that life is hard, I understand her pain. I can also understand her fear of people knowing. she has been told how dirty she is, and how if she didn't like it she would tell. Her mind is so warped that she no longer recognizes her own feelings, for anyone else to know this, she does not want them to look at her like James did. She no longer knows that she is worth loving.
Edward truly is wise beyond his years, and I am so glad that Bella is able to feel comforted by him. A weak soul can see a compassionate one from a mile away.
I wasn't surprised to hear that Edward was adopted and had a similar past. You can tell that Esme has experience with this situation, and that helps. I also hope that Bella would take the time to speak with Rose. If her background is anywhere close to cannon, I can imagine that the two of them would be able to understand each other. And sometimes you can talk to thousands of people, but until you are able to speak with someone your own age, whom you look up to, that has been in the same situation, you mind cannot accept it. But when you see someone that you think is damn near perfect has had the same thing happen to them, something clicks.
Fabulous again!! :)
Author's Response: Edward's backstory is really fleshed out in the sequel if you want to know more. It's really quite tragic. I think it really helps him understand and be more compassionate--well, that and growing up with the Cullens doesn't hurt either. Rose and Bella will talk at some point, and Rose's experience will prove invaluable. Thanks again for reading. :)
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:46 AM Title: Branded
wow, just when I didn't think it was possible to deepen the bond between Bella and Edward, you made it possible. I love that Edward was there to comfort Bella, and I love the fact even more that you didn't make it painful. There wasn't any yelling or false confusion in the morning. There weren't any professions of love or divulging of every last detail, it was just nice. There was healing and there was bonding, natural bonding.
One things that I really love about your story is that you use your characters to speak with your readers. You seem to take their concerns and address them within the story. Effectively giving them their answers, while developing your characters. This draws the readers in more and really personalizes the story for us all.
Poor Emmett, and Edward is right. The more he blames himself, the worse it is for Bella. She already has a complex that everything was her fault and everyone that is hurt from this experience makes her feel all that more guilty.
There is more that happened to Bella, James is a sick fucker. Forgive my french.
I want to wrap Bella up in a hug, though I think Edward's arms may be a bit nicer.
A wonderful chapter. Your words are filled with compassion yet convey a very important message. These relationships are out there, and they are not meant to be seen. Sometimes the only think that makes a difference is a watchful eye and a kind word.
Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading! I'm always curious to hear what people think of this story because it's a hard one to read, and everyone seems to take something different from it. So, thank you!!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 2:51 AM Title: Hindsight is 20/20 - Our Place
Hello again. I am falling in love with the Cullens all over again. I am so glad that Edward seems... normal. And Alice described as the toddler with a pixie stick, you made me snort! :)
I am glad that you added in this different perspective, it really gives us a broad picture and even more background. It also shows us Esme's heart, which is HUGE.
In response to your last reply review, the fact that people would blame Emmett floored me. The guilt that he already feels is enough. The guilt that a friend/family member feels when they were not able to notice the signs, I have seen it end lives. For someone to take it to that level, it pains me.
I am glad that you stayed strong and true to yourself and decided to dig deep and post your story your way. It takes a lot to put your personal feelings out there, and I commend you. I am really glad that you are taking the plot naturally.
Life doesn't always fix things, and sometimes time doesn't always fix things either.
I cannot wait to read more and see Bella heal. Thank you again for sharing, and I will protect Emmett from any pitchforks. No one gets to him on my watch.
Author's Response: Emmett and I BOTH thank you for the support and protection from the pitchforks. You really have no idea how much shit I took over him. The Cullens needed to be as warm, compassionate, and human as possible to make this story work. Sadly very few girls/women have this kind of support system when trying to recover from something like this. I thought it might be nice to see what would happen if she had this kind of incredible support system. :)
Date: 15 Aug 2010 1:29 AM Title: What the Hell Happened to Bella?
Wow, okay now THIS explained A LOT. Makes me want to kick Jame's ass even more. He was never my favorite character to begin with. I have seen this happen before. I have seen the bruises, the blood and witnessed the aftermath that is left behind. The damage is not always visible, but the scares are ever lasting.
The tear jerker warning is VERY much deserved. But the way that you describe everything, gives the story and her tale honor. We all know where the fault lies, we all feel her pain, and we are all holding our pitchforks waiting for address confirmation.
Gianna is a sweetheart and Bella has become my sweatpea as well. I want to wrap Em and Bella in a bear hug and fix both of them.
Thank you for sharing this and thank you again for recommending me read over here.
Fantastic chapter.
Author's Response:
When I originally wrote the story, I wasn't ready to write this chapter--it was too hard, to painful, and to be honest, I wasn't sure that anyone would want to read it. There is a lot in this story that touches close to home, and this was a very big, and often painful, labour of love.
You have NO idea how many people wanted to put together a brigade of people with pitchforks to go after EMMETT! So many readers blamed him for what happened and it floored me. How was he to know? How is he to blame? I was FLOORED and saddened. Some people chose not to continue reading the story because they were so disgusted with him. I just don't understand it. It broke my heart.
My intention in writing this was to present the story of a girl's healing with respect and care because I've read SO MANY fanfics where it's not, and it bothered me. Bella would get raped or abused and then everything would be fine--but life isn't like that, and I wanted to show a side of it that was maybe a little more realistic, and more importantly, respectful. I've had a lot of survivors come to me with their stories and the biggest compliment I received (aside from the girls who told me that they found a voice with this story) was that it was handled in a way that wasn't pandering or hurtful to the survivors.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 12:34 AM Title: Secrets and Lies
Okay, so take two. I can see the difference, minute so far. But it is incredible how much difference a minute detail can change things. Still a wonderful story. And I didn't say this before, but Emmett has stolen my heart. Such a good brother.
Onwards and upwards.
Author's Response:
I love Emmett and he seems to take over all of my stories without me even realizing it. He really steals the show in Encore.
I think the little details and the fact that the outtakes have been worked into the story will make it make more sense. The sequel is on here as well, and in much better shape than on FFN.
Neither story was beta'd so that's why they're both not quite up to par.
Date: 21 May 2010 10:52 PM Title: Death Becomes Her
Ooh thank gawd he's dead! That was intense!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you survived it. It was intense to write too.
Date: 21 May 2010 9:58 PM Title: I Always Feel Like Somebody's Watching Me/Evil
Man, he's a sick F%ck!
Author's Response:
Yes, he most certainly is.
Date: 21 May 2010 9:46 PM Title: Everything's Coming Up Rosie
Of course he is! Ugh.
Im glad she's trying to be strong.
Now, on to getting rid of him for good... ;)
Author's Response:
She's a tough cookie, our Bella. :)
Date: 21 May 2010 9:29 PM Title: Adam
OMG. I am SO glad I do not know anyone named Adam.
I fear for anyone named Adam that I meet.
I will crack up in his face!! lol
Whatever it takes to get over the fear. ;)
Author's Response:
I have had the unfortunate experience of having to deal face-to-face with a client at work whose name was Adam and he was a total dick and I laughed in his face. Dude had no idea what i was laughing about.
Date: 21 May 2010 4:36 AM Title: Frustrations and Prince Charming
Great chapter!
Glad Em is getting help.
I love it that E is so involved in B's therapy as well.
How incredibly sweet at the end, with E telling B the reasons he loves her.
*sigh*
Author's Response:
I think the only way that E&B could survive as a couple is if he became involved in her therapy, because not only does it help him understand where she is coming from, it helps him get stuff off his chest. He internalizes entirely too much, and having an outlet is important.
Date: 21 May 2010 4:11 AM Title: Silence Isn't Always Golden
Progress is definitely a good thing.
I hope Emmett gets help soon. He deserves to get over his guilt.
Edward taking care of his problem.. hehe
Author's Response:
Edward has needs too. *giggle*
Poor, sweet, sweet Emmett. He needs a lot of help, I fear.
Date: 20 May 2010 11:07 PM Title: Gorecki
What a great birthday. :)
I'll have to go check out that song now..
Love the lyrics!
Author's Response:
It's an incredible song and it deserves more recognition. :) I've always wanted to write it into a story, and this one seemed like the perfect one.
Bella deserved to have a good birthday after all she's been through.
Date: 20 May 2010 9:42 PM Title: Doctor, Doctor, Give Me the News
No grief from me. :)
I have been having issues getting to this story, I think the site was having issues. I'm back and glad that I can finish it now.
Her breakthrough was huge.
Edward is amazing. *sigh*
Author's Response:
I'm glad you were able to get in. :)
Edward is pretty damn amazing in this story. Too bad he's quasi-fictional.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 9:13 PM Title: Secrets and Lies
Happy. You're writing is emotional and powerful.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Es My Brand of Heroin. That means a lot. :)
Date: 28 Apr 2010 1:19 PM Title: Everything's Coming Up Rosie
I wasn't expecting that. I was expecting for Lauren and Jess to start something.
Author's Response:
A-ha, caught you off-guard.
I tend to do that sometimes.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 3:01 AM Title: Branded
I think there have been 3 ff's that made me cry. This is one of them.
Author's Response:
I don't know if I should apologize or be happy about this. ;)
Date: 31 Mar 2010 8:40 AM Title: Doctor, Doctor, Give Me the News
At first it was a little unsettling how fast they got together but seeing as how all the horror Bella has been thru prior, it seems she needed some love-light beamed on her.
Author's Response:
It was inevitable and I didn't want to drag the story on for too long as well. It was my first fic...I wasn't sure anyone would even want to read it when I first wrote and posted it on FF.
i like how you put it. :) I could use some love-light beamed on me too. :)
Date: 31 Mar 2010 6:24 AM Title: What the Hell Happened to Bella?
I so think that ya need to take some example from TheSpoiltOne & Footrosa on what should START James' punishment he's such a friggin sick bag o' douche!
Author's Response:
He is pretty sick, isn't he.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 5:05 PM Title: Outtakes!
Your story was excellent. And it was extremely "hopeful" that there is a better life if you work your way through any current and/or traumas. And I loved your comments about happy endings. I have been reading a story on ff.net that has Bella traumatized and unable to carry on with her life. I had to email the writer to make sure that I would not be hit with a miserable ending after fighting with Bella trying to get better. Some may wonder why just not read it, but like you, I look to hope and avoid those things that do not end well. Life is enough to deal with to find entertainment when there is no purpose other than to verify that there is a chance that life will end up sucking. I choose to think that with help, we can overcome much and so like it reinforced. Thank you for sharing. p
Author's Response:
Thank you, purefaith. Really. Thank you. It means a lot.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 4:08 AM Title: Doctor, Doctor, Give Me the News
I am liking Victoria better. She lets them talk and is not as direct, but still gets her point across. She is also encouraging them rather than lecturing them, while guiding them. So far Edward has not been at all threatening as he has been nurturing and accepting from the beginning AND she had only her big brother to comfort her for over a year. Plus unless you are going to write another Gone with the Wind, you need to have the story moving along relationship wise. This is an excellent story even if it is gut wrenchingly sad.
Author's Response:
I think Victoria will grow on you as the story progresses, and I'm glad that you are okay with the relationship progressing. I really didn't want to drag this story out to be of epic length, seeing as it was my first story and I wasn't sure anyone would want to read it. ;) Besides, we all know that B&E are going to end up together, it was just a matter of when.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 3:37 AM Title: Whispers
Well let's see, every time I read a story that has a very matter of fact therapist that sounds very clinical when rattling off the most traumatic episodes of a person's life, it seriously makes me flinch. A gentler approach is preferred by many, and her being a woman that speaks that way does not make it less intimidating. Then again, there are lots of people that respond to that kind of treatment. It is just strange to think of Bella as that type. I love your Rose.
Author's Response:
I always felt that Rose got the short end of the stick in the books. There was a reason why she acted the way she did, and sadly, we only found out late in the game, after everyone had decided that she was a bitch and that was that. I wanted to give her a chance to be helpful, to redeem herself.
As for the matter-of-fact therapy...I've never been in an initial session that didn't end up like that (and I've seen a few therapists in my day). It could be just me, though. ;)
Date: 23 Mar 2010 3:05 AM Title: Buried Memories Ain't No Walk in the Park
you don't need to apologize for repetition as you offer insight from different points of view each time. Unfortunately for me, I also cry harder each time. I think maybe they did not go back and do rape kits or pelvic exams later because they knew her too well and did not want to think that more happened. Embry alluded to them talking about there being something more, but her panic attack stopped that cold. too sad.
Author's Response:
Sorry to make you cry harder. I read a fic that made me cry for hours yesterday...in fact, I still get teary when I think about it.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 1:07 AM Title: What the Hell Happened to Bella?
I am wondering why the Cullens (at least one of them) did not come out to stay with Emmett when Bella was critical and both of them while she was recovering. That was a boat load for kids to deal with basically alone. Why didn't doctors check to see if Bella had been raped early on? I know at first it was a matter of emergency life saving but after that, they should have checked for evidence. Very emotional chapters and it was at least three kleenexes and actually I finally ended up with a paper towel.
Author's Response:
Those are all valid questions, and I am chalking it up to first-time fanfic boo-boos. If I ever go back and re-write this story to improve it, I will def. address those issues.
I think I should include coupons for Kleenex for some of my stories. ;)
Date: 22 Feb 2010 7:21 PM Title: Outtakes!
I loved your story. You did a great job...Kat
Author's Response:
I'm so happy that you loved it. It was a real labour of love and it means a lot that people loved it and related to the characters.
I hope you'll enjoy Road Maps as well. :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 5:47 PM Title: Everything's Coming Up Rosie
Wow! Kat
I do have a question, but I don't want to be indelicate. You do not have to answer this if it bothers you at all. Your descriptions of the paintings and the progress that Bella is making rings so true with me. Are you a therapist or a nurse? Either way, you are doing an incredible job with this story. Thank you so much!
Author's Response:
You're not being indelicate at all. I am not a therapist or a nurse--I work in a government office as an office manager. :) I'm just a regular person who may have a little more insight into some of the subject matter of this story than I should. I wrote this story to work through my own demons, and in the process, I've been told that I've helped some people along the way.
Thank you for reading it and reviewing. It really does mean a lot to me.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:23 PM Title: Adam
Great chapter. Things seem to be going smoothly but since the story isn't over that means that there are probably dark clouds on the horizon. I think that I like things the way they are now...lol Kat
Author's Response:
LOL! You like the peace and not the angst, eh?
Glad you're still enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:51 AM Title: Silence Isn't Always Golden
Math wouldn't keep me from thinking about what Edward was doing...lol
Author's Response:
No, I think anyone would be hard-pressed to think of anything other than what he was doing. ;)
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:31 AM Title: Gorecki
Beautiful...Kat
Author's Response:
Thanks!!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:47 AM Title: Whispers
Sweet sweet Edward. I'm glad Bella is becoming a little more comfortable. Good chapter. Kat
Author's Response:
Thanks, Kat. :)
Date: 21 Feb 2010 11:58 PM Title: Branded
Edward is such a doll! He is just what Bella needs to help her through this.
Author's Response:
We could all use a little Edward in our lives, couldn't we!? :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2010 11:16 PM Title: Hindsight is 20/20 - Our Place
You've gotta love Carlisle, Esme, Alice and Edward.
Author's Response:
Yes you do, and I would love to bottle them up and keep them with me for those moments when you need someone to be nice and comfort you. :) I'll have a shitty day, please, with a side order of Carlisle. ;)
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2010 9:42 PM Title: What the Hell Happened to Bella?
Nice job. The two of them have really been through a lot. .... Kat
Author's Response:
Thanks, Kat. They have, haven't they? I feel bad about putting them through so much.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 9:09 PM Title: Secrets and Lies
Poor Bella. Can't wait to see what happens to James when Emmett figures out what is going on....Kat
Author's Response:
James is lucky that Emmett can't get his hands on him. It wouldn't be pretty.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 2:45 PM Title: Outtakes!
This is a fantastic story! It's so realistic and very sad but still a brilliant look into the kind of things people go through when they experience such traumas like that. Thumbs up to you!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much vicki. I hope you'll enjoy the sequel. :)
Date: 20 Feb 2010 7:01 PM Title: What the Hell Happened to Bella?
finally someone who knows what they are talking about! i was SO tired of little teen brats spewing out crap they had no idea what it was about. the hospital scene felt real thanks to the appropriate medical terms.
Author's Response:
LOL! I haven't been a little teen brat in a gazillion years (although I'm sure my mother would disagree), and I'm glad that you felt that the hospital scene felt real. That was one of the reasons why I wasn't sure if I wanted to write the scene.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 9:49 PM Title: Everything's Coming Up Rosie
I just wanted to say I love this story so much!! It was one of my first ones, and threw 90% I was a sobbing mess!! But It really is beautiful story!! Thanks for bringing it here!! I do hope you bring the outtakes here as well.
Author's Response:
Thanks, santa muerte. It's nice to have a place to post this safely, without fear of being reported by the LU. :)
Most of the outtakes have been incorporated into the story, except for three, which are at the end. :) Enjoy!!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 7:20 AM Title: Everything's Coming Up Rosie
James is like a bad hemoroid.................he just keeps popping up.
Author's Response:
*snort* That's a first! That's an awesome way of thinking of him.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 5:53 AM Title: Doctor, Doctor, Give Me the News
I'm glad they're together :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're glad! I worried people would think it was moving too fast.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:50 AM Title: Gorecki
If I had a red beatle, I'd have to get black polka dots on it so I'd have a lady bug.
Author's Response:
That's freaking awesome, darkest-terror. I never thought about that. *snort* too funny!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:09 AM Title: What the Hell Happened to Bella?
What did James use to brand her? Not cigarettes, I hope :(
Author's Response:
Bella will explain later. But he did burn her with cigarettes.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 4:56 PM Title: Outtakes!
rose and emmett are good together, i like her immediate responses to his very hansome body and face, and she is a good support for him when he deals with bella
poor edward he was drowning and diddn't know what to do his family support is what will get him through at least he is sure of his love for bella and what about rose i like that she is a friendly & understanding girl (too often she is a bitch in ff) all in all im glad i stopped by the coffee shop yesterday, well done
dry humping thats a step in the right direction and they both got off on it there happy so lets hope they keep moving on i'm sure they will fantastic story a great read thanks
Author's Response:
You are so very welcome, and a HUGE thank you to you too for being such a great reader (and for boosting my reviews!)