Date: 22 Aug 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 30
AWESOME!!! story ;) i thoughly enjoyed reading this a second time around ;) thanks for posting it on here ;D
Date: 26 Feb 2013 8:59 PM Title: 2. Empty
I liked this story, but it was too much like Pride and Prejudice, so I kept picturing Keira Knightly instead of Bella in my head.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 5:16 AM Title: Prologue
I just discovered this story today, and read it from the Prologue through the Epilogue. I was enchanted. What a wonderful story with intrigue, suspense, action, romance...
I am so glad that it worked out for Edward and Emmett. I hope that Jasper and Alice will have their HEA too!
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story!
Date: 24 Jun 2011 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 30
That was wonderful I loved it I was hoping for a baby.
Date: 24 Jun 2011 9:28 AM Title: 29: The Joining of Two Hearts
They are so sweet and loving. I love Bella druging her mom lol
Date: 23 Jun 2011 8:34 AM Title: 28: We Are All Fools In Love
I love it
Date: 23 Jun 2011 7:57 AM Title: 27. Aftermath
good for him the old bat needed to be told off for years.
Date: 23 Jun 2011 7:27 AM Title: 26. Comeuppance
Could not of happened to a better man but please tell me Edward is not hurt.
Date: 23 Jun 2011 6:08 AM Title: 25. Between the Devil and the Deep Blue Sea
Thank goodness they found him to bad they are not going to have him hanged.
Date: 23 Jun 2011 3:54 AM Title: 24. A Cowards Revenge
I love that he didnt just walk away and do what he needed to do at least she knows that he still wants her.
Date: 22 Jun 2011 9:36 AM Title: 23. All I Need
I loved that Alice is such a sneeky little thing :)
Date: 22 Jun 2011 8:56 AM Title: 22. Whispers of Hope
He needs to send Tanya home or to hell not sure where lol
Date: 22 Jun 2011 8:29 AM Title: 21. Discovery
Tanya is going to be so pissed cant wait lol.
Date: 22 Jun 2011 7:49 AM Title: 20. Healing
Im so excited what is going to happen :)
Date: 22 Jun 2011 7:12 AM Title: 19. Broken
Wow he is lost and cant find his way back to himself help him
Date: 22 Jun 2011 6:52 AM Title: 18. The Letter
Poor Edward his heart is broken but so is Bella's
Date: 22 Jun 2011 6:08 AM Title: 17. Easter Part II
Wow so close yet so far away. They cant deni the pasion they have for each other. Now Edward needs to get Emmett back to Rose.
Date: 21 Jun 2011 10:17 AM Title: 16. Easter Part I
The shit has hit the fan and it is blowing in Edwards direction poor guy:(
Date: 21 Jun 2011 9:42 AM Title: 15. Captivated
That went very well good make out time
Date: 21 Jun 2011 9:08 AM Title: 14. The Old Bat
Boy the old bat is just that she needs a swift kick in the ass
Date: 21 Jun 2011 7:48 AM Title: 13. Kent
He almost passed out I bet she felt the same.
Date: 21 Jun 2011 7:05 AM Title: 12. London
I cant wait to see what happens when he finds out that the new Mrs. Newton is Jessica Stanley his heart will sore.
Date: 21 Jun 2011 6:44 AM Title: 11. Tittle-Tattle
Edward is going to freak out right and go back to her?????
Date: 20 Jun 2011 9:29 PM Title: 10. The Ball
He needs his ass kicked
Date: 20 Jun 2011 8:53 PM Title: 9. Injustice
James does not deserve the air he breaths.
Date: 20 Jun 2011 7:26 PM Title: 8. The Clergyman and the Foe
What did he do to Alice????
Date: 20 Jun 2011 5:56 PM Title: 7. Uninvited Guests
Poor man so confused by his station in life he cant see past it.
Date: 20 Jun 2011 10:25 AM Title: 6. Impressions
Loved the way she told Tanya off Edward is a chicken
Date: 20 Jun 2011 9:55 AM Title: 5. Invitations
I hate the part when they leave all because of his siter the harpy
Date: 20 Jun 2011 9:28 AM Title: 4. The Assembly
Someone needs to kick his ass and I think Bella just may do it LOL
Date: 20 Jun 2011 9:04 AM Title: 3. Beginnings
Wow I loved that first meeting. What happened to Alice was she attacted by James????
Date: 20 Jun 2011 8:38 AM Title: 2. Empty
I so love pride and prejudice my fav movie and my 2 year olds also she is always picking it out to watch. Emmett is perfect as a bingly,.
Date: 05 Jun 2011 3:50 AM Title: Prologue
can't wait to read more
Date: 03 Mar 2011 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 30
What a wonderful, wonderful story! I enjoyed every word.
I loved how almost everything was from Edward's point of view, as the original story is all from Elizabeth's. And I really liked the little changes you made, what with Edward killing James and Victoria getting a better husband. It was a much better fate for Victoria than Lydia got in Pride and Prejudice.
Bravo!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 30
WONDERFUL story!!!!
I sooo appreciated it, especially the chapters from the wedding to the end.
You've done a fantastic job!
Date: 06 Dec 2010 10:59 PM Title: 26. Comeuppance
Thank God!!
Date: 06 Dec 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 30
All I can say is YAY! Great story...now I need to go read P&P again :)
Date: 06 Dec 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 30
that was good what happened with jasper though and i like to see what happen with the others also
Date: 05 Dec 2010 8:48 PM Title: 15. Captivated
I apologize for not reviewing before now. I've really enjoyed reading this story from "Mr. Darcy's" POV (per se). I love this book and movie and have enjoyed his POV immensely!!
You've done a great job and I will continue reading. I also appreciate the little tidbits of "desire" (kissing and whatnot) into it. I'm a smut queen...nough said.
Have a great Sunday!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 30
I loved it very much and so happy for them thanks for sharing and sad it over have a great weekend....
Date: 03 Dec 2010 9:51 PM Title: 29: The Joining of Two Hearts
Gotta wanna smack her mom
Date: 03 Dec 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 30
Woo Hoo A new baby
Date: 03 Dec 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 30
Beautiful ending! I really enjoyed your story and am going to miss it. I love period pieces and you did a wonderful job of creating the perfect backdrop for this story. Thank you for sharing!
Date: 22 Nov 2010 4:59 AM Title: 29: The Joining of Two Hearts
awww so sweet! I love this story, Pride and Prejudice is one of my favorite books and I really like the story you wrote. Keep up the good work! :D
hearts!
Author's Response:
Thank you! That was very kind of you to say.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 10:38 PM Title: 29: The Joining of Two Hearts
Absolutely lovely!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:14 PM Title: 29: The Joining of Two Hearts
please consider Jane Austins other books Persuasion is my favorit :)
Thanks for a grat story.
Author's Response:
You are welcome! I will consider it, although its been a long road for this story.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:09 PM Title: 28: We Are All Fools In Love
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 21 Nov 2010 6:25 PM Title: 29: The Joining of Two Hearts
No baby for them loved it very much and thanks for sharing and update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
Thank you! The Epilogue will be posted soon.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 7:30 AM Title: 27. Aftermath
I certainly like the ending you gave Victoria.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I appreciated your reviews and the typo's you caught. I always felt despite how stupid Lydia had been she could have been so much more with proper guidence.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 2:44 AM Title: 17. Easter Part II
I stopped suddenly, hearing a barley/barely distinguishable sound.
Very nice job by the way.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 2:29 AM Title: 15. Captivated
I think you've got a typo.
At breakfast, Lady Irena announced she would be busy discussing matters with her parson and other tenants in need of assistance. Jasper was occupied with answering letters from the Major general. Luck was defiantly/definitely on my side
Date: 17 Nov 2010 5:16 AM Title: 6. Impressions
Nicely written. I'm really enjoying your fic. Thanks.
Date: 17 Nov 2010 5:04 AM Title: 5. Invitations
I like your choices for Edward's reflections and thoughts.
Date: 17 Nov 2010 4:55 AM Title: 4. The Assembly
Very nicely written.
Date: 17 Nov 2010 2:26 AM Title: 2. Empty
Yea!!! I couldn't really tell from the first page or summary but I'm so excited about your P&P/Twilight fic! Perhaps you could do another jane austen twilight crossover. My other favorites are persuasion and sense & sensibility.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 12:15 AM Title: 28: We Are All Fools In Love
Loved it very much and thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can.....
Author's Response:
Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed and that you are patient with me.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 9:16 PM Title: 28: We Are All Fools In Love
Loved it! Great chapter!!!! Sad it's almost over : (
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and your review. I am so glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:28 AM Title: 27. Aftermath
Nice progression!
Author's Response:
After pouring himself a glass of brandy he politely offered and I declined.
“I believe we need to have a serious discussion.” His stern gaze made me more uncomfortable than when my own father had chastised me long ago.
“Yes Sir, I believe we do.”
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:34 PM Title: 27. Aftermath
:)
Author's Response:
After pouring himself a glass of brandy he politely offered and I declined.
“I believe we need to have a serious discussion.” His stern gaze made me more uncomfortable than when my own father had chastised me long ago.
“Yes Sir, I believe we do.”
Date: 10 Oct 2010 1:25 PM Title: 27. Aftermath
You've done a great job with your story.
Author's Response:
After pouring himself a glass of brandy he politely offered and I declined.
“I believe we need to have a serious discussion.” His stern gaze made me more uncomfortable than when my own father had chastised me long ago.
“Yes Sir, I believe we do.”
Date: 05 Sep 2010 6:39 PM Title: 26. Comeuppance
This story is something I have watched in a movie, long ago. It may not be exactly the same but it is very close.
Date: 04 Sep 2010 10:50 PM Title: 26. Comeuppance
good story
Date: 04 Sep 2010 8:42 PM Title: 26. Comeuppance
more please
Date: 04 Sep 2010 10:23 AM Title: 26. Comeuppance
:) ohhh please update soon.... :)
Date: 03 Aug 2010 9:05 PM Title: 25. Between the Devil and the Deep Blue Sea
:) thanks fore a grate storry.....i really love all of Jane Austens books.... but this one is my faworit.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am so glad you liked it.
Here is a teaser for Chapter 26:
“You have compromised a gentleman’s daughter, one whom is not wholly unconnected. I’m afraid I cannot allow you to walk away.”
“Really? You think you can force me?”
“Well, debtors prison is a nasty place, James, but I would be more concerned with your neck.”
Date: 03 Aug 2010 7:41 PM Title: 24. A Cowards Revenge
:)
Date: 03 Aug 2010 11:19 AM Title: 22. Whispers of Hope
:)
Date: 03 Aug 2010 1:16 AM Title: 25. Between the Devil and the Deep Blue Sea
:)
Date: 02 Aug 2010 4:09 PM Title: 8. The Clergyman and the Foe
:)
Date: 02 Aug 2010 1:15 PM Title: 25. Between the Devil and the Deep Blue Sea
Of course we know the story, but it feels original and fun to read. Your writing is great and I'm enjoying the characters and story development.
Author's Response:
Thank you! That was a very nice compliment. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Date: 02 Aug 2010 8:37 AM Title: 3. Beginnings
Hi I've read straight to here, loved the epilogue 10/10. Can see how everyone fits - is Ben going to be the obnoxious Vicar. Kissing her - would never happen, too soon. Looking forward to your changes from Twilight and P&P to D&D.
Author's Response:
Thank you! The vicar will be another obnoxious fellow :) Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Date: 01 Aug 2010 4:16 PM Title: Prologue
Oops, that last sentence hooked me! Good start!
Date: 01 Aug 2010 6:16 AM Title: Prologue
Sounds very promising! You should enter it in the Classics Never Die Challenge. I would love to see how it does in it. Keep up the great work!
Date: 01 Aug 2010 4:48 AM Title: Prologue
Sound like I would like to read more.