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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 30

AWESOME!!! story ;) i thoughly enjoyed reading this a second time around ;) thanks for posting it on here ;D

Reviewer: kaycross1184 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2013 8:59 PM Title: 2. Empty

I liked this story, but it was too much like Pride and Prejudice, so I kept picturing Keira Knightly instead of Bella in my head.

Reviewer: acwale Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 5:16 AM Title: Prologue

I just discovered this story today, and read it from the Prologue through the Epilogue.  I was enchanted.  What a wonderful story with intrigue, suspense, action, romance... 

I am so glad that it worked out for Edward and Emmett.  I hope that Jasper and Alice will have their HEA too!

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2011 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 30

That was wonderful I loved it  I was hoping for a baby.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2011 9:28 AM Title: 29: The Joining of Two Hearts

They are so sweet and loving.  I love Bella druging her mom lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 8:34 AM Title: 28: We Are All Fools In Love

I love it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 7:57 AM Title: 27. Aftermath

good for him the old bat needed to be told off for years.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 7:27 AM Title: 26. Comeuppance

Could not of happened to a better man but please tell me Edward is not hurt.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 6:08 AM Title: 25. Between the Devil and the Deep Blue Sea

Thank goodness they found him to bad they are not going to have him hanged.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 3:54 AM Title: 24. A Cowards Revenge

I love that he didnt just walk away and do what he needed to do at least she knows that he still wants her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2011 9:36 AM Title: 23. All I Need

I loved that Alice is such a sneeky little thing :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2011 8:56 AM Title: 22. Whispers of Hope

He needs to send Tanya home or to hell not sure where lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2011 8:29 AM Title: 21. Discovery

Tanya is going to be so pissed cant wait lol.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2011 7:49 AM Title: 20. Healing

Im so excited what is going to happen :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2011 7:12 AM Title: 19. Broken

Wow he is lost and cant find his way back to himself help him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2011 6:52 AM Title: 18. The Letter

Poor Edward his heart is broken but so is Bella's

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2011 6:08 AM Title: 17. Easter Part II

Wow so close yet so far away.  They cant deni the pasion they have for each other.  Now Edward needs to get Emmett back to Rose.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 10:17 AM Title: 16. Easter Part I

The shit has hit the fan and it is blowing in Edwards direction poor guy:(

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 9:42 AM Title: 15. Captivated

That went very well good make out time

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 9:08 AM Title: 14. The Old Bat

Boy the old bat is just that she needs a swift kick in the ass

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 7:48 AM Title: 13. Kent

He almost passed out I bet she felt the same.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 7:05 AM Title: 12. London

I cant wait to see what happens when he finds out that the new Mrs. Newton is Jessica Stanley his heart will sore.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 6:44 AM Title: 11. Tittle-Tattle

Edward is going to freak out right and go back to her?????

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 9:29 PM Title: 10. The Ball

He needs his ass kicked

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 8:53 PM Title: 9. Injustice

James does not deserve the air he breaths.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 7:26 PM Title: 8. The Clergyman and the Foe

What did he do to Alice????

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 5:56 PM Title: 7. Uninvited Guests

Poor man so confused by his station in life he cant see past it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 10:25 AM Title: 6. Impressions

Loved the way she told Tanya off Edward is a chicken

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 9:55 AM Title: 5. Invitations

I hate the part when they leave all because of his siter the harpy

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 9:28 AM Title: 4. The Assembly

Someone needs to kick his ass and I think Bella just may do it LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 9:04 AM Title: 3. Beginnings

Wow I loved that first meeting.  What happened to Alice was she attacted by James????

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 8:38 AM Title: 2. Empty

I so love pride and prejudice my fav movie and my 2 year olds also she is always picking it out to watch.  Emmett is perfect as a bingly,.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 3:50 AM Title: Prologue

can't wait to read more

Reviewer: sevanderslice Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 30

What a wonderful, wonderful story!  I enjoyed every word.

 I loved how almost everything was from Edward's point of view, as the original story is all from Elizabeth's.  And I really liked the little changes you made, what with Edward killing James and Victoria getting a better husband.  It was a much better fate for Victoria than Lydia got in Pride and Prejudice.

Bravo!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 30

WONDERFUL story!!!!

I sooo appreciated it, especially the chapters from the wedding to the end. 

You've done a fantastic job!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 10:59 PM Title: 26. Comeuppance

Thank God!!

Reviewer: NHSheridan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 30

All I can say is YAY!  Great story...now I need to go read P&P again :)

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 30

that was good   what happened with jasper though  and i like to see what happen with the others also

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 8:48 PM Title: 15. Captivated

I apologize for not reviewing before now.  I've really enjoyed reading this story from "Mr. Darcy's" POV (per se).  I love this book and movie and have enjoyed his POV immensely!!

You've done a great job and I will continue reading.  I also appreciate the little tidbits of "desire" (kissing and whatnot) into it.  I'm a smut queen...nough said.

Have a great Sunday!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 30

I loved it very much and so happy for them thanks for sharing and sad it over have a great weekend....

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 30

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 9:51 PM Title: 29: The Joining of Two Hearts

Gotta wanna smack her mom

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 30

Woo Hoo  A new baby

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 30

Beautiful ending!  I really enjoyed your story and am going to miss it.  I love period pieces and you did a wonderful job of creating the perfect backdrop for this story.  Thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: LittleMiss1104 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 4:59 AM Title: 29: The Joining of Two Hearts

awww so sweet! I love this story, Pride and Prejudice is one of my favorite books and I really like the story you wrote. Keep up the good work! :D

hearts!



Author's Response:

Thank you! That was very kind of you to say.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 10:38 PM Title: 29: The Joining of Two Hearts

Absolutely lovely!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I am so glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:14 PM Title: 29: The Joining of Two Hearts

please consider Jane Austins other books Persuasion is my favorit :)

Thanks for a grat story.



Author's Response:

You are welcome! I will consider it, although its been a long road for this story.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:09 PM Title: 28: We Are All Fools In Love

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 6:25 PM Title: 29: The Joining of Two Hearts

No baby for them loved it very much and thanks for sharing and update when you can thanks....



Author's Response:

Thank you! The Epilogue will be posted soon.

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 7:30 AM Title: 27. Aftermath

I certainly like the ending you gave Victoria.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I appreciated your reviews and the typo's you caught. I always felt despite how stupid Lydia had been she could have been so much more with proper guidence.

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 2:44 AM Title: 17. Easter Part II

I stopped suddenly, hearing a barley/barely distinguishable sound.

 

Very nice job by the way.

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 2:29 AM Title: 15. Captivated

I think you've got a typo. 

 

At breakfast, Lady Irena announced she would be busy discussing matters with her parson and other tenants in need of assistance. Jasper was occupied with answering letters from the Major general. Luck was defiantly/definitely on my side

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 5:16 AM Title: 6. Impressions

Nicely written.  I'm really enjoying your fic.  Thanks.

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 5:04 AM Title: 5. Invitations

I like your choices for Edward's reflections and thoughts.

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 4:55 AM Title: 4. The Assembly

 

Very nicely written.

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 2:26 AM Title: 2. Empty

Yea!!!  I couldn't really tell from the first page or summary but I'm so excited about your P&P/Twilight fic!   Perhaps you could do another jane austen twilight crossover.  My other favorites are persuasion and sense & sensibility.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 12:15 AM Title: 28: We Are All Fools In Love

Loved it very much and thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can.....



Author's Response:

Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed and that you are patient with me.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 9:16 PM Title: 28: We Are All Fools In Love

Loved it!  Great chapter!!!!  Sad it's almost over : (



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and your review. I am so glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: frances Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:28 AM Title: 27. Aftermath

Nice progression!



Author's Response:
Thank you! I have found a new level of respect for authors. Timing is everything.
 
Here is a teaser for Chapter 28:
 
“Please, have a seat, Mr. Masen.” He motioned to a seat near the fireplace.

After pouring himself a glass of brandy he politely offered and I declined.

“I believe we need to have a serious discussion.” His stern gaze made me more uncomfortable than when my own father had chastised me long ago.

“Yes Sir, I believe we do.”

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:34 PM Title: 27. Aftermath

:)

Author's Response:

Thank you!
 
Here is a teaser for Chapter 28:
 
“Please, have a seat, Mr. Masen.” He motioned to a seat near the fireplace.

After pouring himself a glass of brandy he politely offered and I declined.

“I believe we need to have a serious discussion.” His stern gaze made me more uncomfortable than when my own father had chastised me long ago.

“Yes Sir, I believe we do.”

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 1:25 PM Title: 27. Aftermath

You've done a great job with your story.



Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
 
Here is a teaser for Chapter 28:
 
“Please, have a seat, Mr. Masen.” He motioned to a seat near the fireplace.

After pouring himself a glass of brandy he politely offered and I declined.

“I believe we need to have a serious discussion.” His stern gaze made me more uncomfortable than when my own father had chastised me long ago.

“Yes Sir, I believe we do.”

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 6:39 PM Title: 26. Comeuppance

This story is something I have watched in a movie, long ago.  It may not be exactly the same but it is very close.

 

 

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 10:50 PM Title: 26. Comeuppance

good story

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 8:42 PM Title: 26. Comeuppance

more please

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 10:23 AM Title: 26. Comeuppance

:) ohhh please update soon.... :)

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 1:34 AM Title: 26. Comeuppance

Yeah!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 9:05 PM Title: 25. Between the Devil and the Deep Blue Sea

:) thanks fore a grate storry.....i really love all of Jane Austens books.... but this one is my faworit. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am so glad you liked it.

Here is a teaser for Chapter 26:
 
“You have compromised a gentleman’s daughter, one whom is not wholly unconnected. I’m afraid I cannot allow you to walk away.”

“Really? You think you can force me?”

“Well, debtors prison is a nasty place, James, but I would be more concerned with your neck.”

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 7:41 PM Title: 24. A Cowards Revenge

:)

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Date: 03 Aug 2010 3:58 PM Title: 23. All I Need

:)

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Date: 03 Aug 2010 11:19 AM Title: 22. Whispers of Hope

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Date: 03 Aug 2010 1:16 AM Title: 25. Between the Devil and the Deep Blue Sea

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 9:51 PM Title: 21. Discovery

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 9:29 PM Title: 20. Healing

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 9:06 PM Title: 19. Broken

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 8:48 PM Title: 18. The Letter

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 8:25 PM Title: 17. Easter Part II

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 7:21 PM Title: 16. Easter Part I

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 6:51 PM Title: 15. Captivated

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 6:27 PM Title: 14. The Old Bat

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 6:05 PM Title: 13. Kent

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 5:33 PM Title: 12. London

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 5:17 PM Title: 11. Tittle-Tattle

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 4:57 PM Title: 10. The Ball

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 4:31 PM Title: 9. Injustice

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 4:09 PM Title: 8. The Clergyman and the Foe

:)

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 1:52 PM Title: 7. Uninvited Guests

:)

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 1:23 PM Title: 6. Impressions

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Reviewer: frances Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 1:15 PM Title: 25. Between the Devil and the Deep Blue Sea

Of course we know the story, but it feels original and fun to read. Your writing is great and I'm enjoying the characters and story development.



Author's Response:

Thank you! That was a very nice compliment. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 10:19 AM Title: 5. Invitations

:)

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 9:59 AM Title: 4. The Assembly

:)

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 8:37 AM Title: 3. Beginnings

Hi I've read straight to here, loved the epilogue 10/10.  Can see how everyone fits - is Ben going to be the obnoxious Vicar.  Kissing her - would never happen, too soon.  Looking forward to your changes from Twilight and P&P to D&D.



Author's Response:

Thank you! The vicar will be another obnoxious fellow :) Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 8:57 PM Title: 3. Beginnings

:)

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Date: 01 Aug 2010 8:43 PM Title: 2. Empty

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 8:26 PM Title: Prologue

:)

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 4:16 PM Title: Prologue

Oops, that last sentence hooked me! Good start!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 3:08 PM Title: Prologue

post soon!!

Reviewer: MeLoDicPiaNo-Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 6:16 AM Title: Prologue

Sounds very promising! You should enter it in the Classics Never Die Challenge. I would love to see how it does in it. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 4:48 AM Title: Prologue

Sound like I would like to read more.

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