Date: 24 Apr 2010 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 13 EPOV
And so we are now going to find out what Jacob is doing. I would have thought with the treaty and all Sam would have rained Jake in already.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 12 EPOV
Those two are really pushing their boundaries aren't they!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 11 EPOV
Emmett sure knows how to push Edward's buttons doesn't he! I am crackin up at all of his thoughts on Bella's hicky!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 10 BPOV
Wow Jacob just doesn't give up does he. Does he even care what his presence is doing to Bella?
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 9 BPOV
Poor Bella now she has a broken hand.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 8 BPOV continued
That is so sad that Jacob would think that Bella would just forgive everything that he has done. He tried to kill the boys and that was the final nail in his coffin of friendship with Bella.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 7 BPOV
They are so sweet together! I hope that Jacob doesn't do anything stupid.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV
Wow who would have thought that her sleep talking would allow him to move forward in their relationship.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV
Wow who would have thought that her sleep talking would allow him to move forward in their relationship.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 4 EPOV
I can't believe that Jacob thought that he could take all three Cullen boys on. He could have been in serious trouble for attacking them across the line into their territory.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 BPOV
Poor, Poor frustrated Bella!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 43 BPOV
Ding Dong the bitch is dead. go Bella and Rose. But yeah get back to the men pronto girls!!
Can't wait for June 30th!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 43 BPOV
That was AWESOME!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 42 BPOV
Has any one told her about Seth being dead? he was everyone's friend, they should have a memorial of some sort for him.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 42 BPOV
I just found this sory a couple of days ago and have been reading madly, soory I didn't leave a review for every chapter but I couldn't stop myself and just kept going except for when RL interupted.
Anyway great original plot and sorry to any dog lovers but I loved Jake biting the dust!! I really liked how you made Bella a stronger charactr and Edward less brooding and more willing to talk, it was really refreshing!!
Loved it!!
Author's Response:
Hey,
I understand completely, I know what it's like when you find a fic that you just get totally wound up in... you don't have time to review on every chapter!
But thank you so much for letting me know that you are reading and enjoying the story. It means a lot.
Thank you, Mel
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 BPOV
It was nice seeing Edward and Bella so happy. Emmett and Jasper definitely provided some humor when they caught Edward and Bella during their intimate moment.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 15 BPOV
Bella and Edward in danger I can handle, them doubting each others love is painful. Go Alice and make this right!!
Since it was painful for you to write I will forgive you, but your so damn talented I honestly felt their pain.
Author's Response:
I've loved getting all of your reviews today ... they made my day :)
Thank you so much, Writing Edward and Bella's arguement was really hard, it took me ages to actually write it! I'm glad you liked it
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 14 EPOV
I can see why Edward would be angry and I agree Bella as to come to terms with her feelings but pushing her away and running away never solved anything.
Edward get your ass back there and man up!! Bella stop for a minute and think of the man you love Edward not the dog and let go!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 13 EPOV
Man I hate the dog, aleways have always will!!! Got get him Edward and put him in his place.
Nice party from the sound of it, Mike cracks me up though!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 12 EPOV
WOW!!! This chapter had everything but the finish still has me panting, GO EDWARD and BELLA...talk about erotic!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey sweet!
I just worked out how to reply to reviews on here ... slow huh!
Thank you so much for all your reviews! I lvoe them.
I'm glad you're liking the story... sorry for all the post today! It's all up to date with ff.net and fffw now tho .. so one update a week!
I have recently found an awesome beta, and she is going back through the other chapters to fix them all up a bit.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 11 EPOV
Loved it!!! But with you posting so many chapters today I think my family will be makingtheir own dinner!!
Love this story and thatn god Bella told Edward about talking to the dog, this is getting very interesting!
Date: 19 Mar 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 10 BPOV
i look forward to over the top jake!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 10 BPOV
I am really enjoying this story! But I think you need to pay a little more attention to your final edit in your chapters, there have been spelling mistakes, and grammar errors, none that detract from the story but I thought I'd let you know.
The enjoyment Edward and Bella have finally found in their relationship is incredible and heart warming and vindicating. You have done such a great job with the Cullens, my favourite vampir clan. I can't wait for additional chapters!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV
Bite me??? Are you kidding isn't that like a toddler playing with fire?
Could solid chapter though, and of course an engagement is always great! I love the Cullen family they always stand together so loyal an loving!
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 4 EPOV
Very well done, action, passion and a fight scene...sorry just kidding.
It really was well written and your attention to details is commendable, like the buttons on Edward shirt, it's often these sublte littel things that make a story unique and interesting.
I loved this chapter but then Edward is my favourite character, and I really have never like Jacob Black human or werewolf.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 10 BPOV
Please, please, please don't leave it there!! I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Brill story!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 10 BPOV
Jacob the idiot.
Enjoying your story so far.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1 BPOV
Interesting story line, can't wait to read the rest. My one reservation is Jacob (can't stand the dog).
Love Edward and Bella and the Cullen brothers, very good first chapter!