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Reviewer: Brittany89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 15 BPOV

She had it coming!

Reviewer: Brittany89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 14 EPOV

So glad Edward chewed her ass out!! She deserves it!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 2:59 PM Title: Epilogue

awesome story thanks for sharing ;) but i was confused when bella etc said she was 17 ? and at the wedding irina was there what happend to laurant? i thought everything was canon from the first two books? and who was the blond vamp? anyway thanks again for sharing this very enjoyable story with us ;D 

Reviewer: jajappdr1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 14 EPOV

Even though It was hard to write for you, it needed to be written.  I always hated how Bella continuously hurt Edward with her denial of her love for Jacob and her continued friendship with him even though she knew he loved her.  I also hated how Edward never told her any of his feelings.  I always wished Edward would be a little truthful with Bella and not this farytale crap of never getting angry.  Would of saved them alot of heartache.

Beautifully written!

Reviewer: CFG Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 12:13 AM Title: Epilogue

I had read this story a while back and really liked it, but I couldn´t find it again; fortunately here it is. It is one of my favorites. Thank you!!!

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 23 'The Quileutes’ Narrators POV

Jacob is way over his head.First he lost his mind,is this what he think love is some game  what stupid boy. I don't believe any one can get into his mind or talk him out of it. I think jacob is long gone.

Reviewer: ttcub Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 14 EPOV

I so much agree with what Edward did. I mean time after time she went to Jake without Edward knowing, she could have been killed or even got Alice killed. Bella needs to get her mind on Edward and not lie no more, she still loves Jake and want Jake to be around her this is all of Bella fault, I wish they would have killed Jake.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 9:23 PM Title: Epilogue

AWw for Charlie getting married.  Wonder if he'll be let in on the secret now?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 44 BPOV

Sucks that Seth had to be the wolf who died.   Glad B got to say goodbye to him and to talk to Billy.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 43 BPOV

Go Bella and Rose!!!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 42 BPOV

Yummy b/e time.    Glad she got Em.  hee hee.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 40 EPOV

Glad E made jasper feel a bit better.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 41 BPOV

OOOh vampy Bella wants revenge on Skankya.....Can't wait!!!  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 39 EPOV

Jake didnt deserve forgiveness.  Bella is too nice.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 38 JPOV

Poor Bella   Glad they tracked her before Jake could hurt her worse.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 36 BPOV

Bella is going to blame herself forever for this.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 35 EPOV

Wow  How they gonna explain everyone leaving to the humans in the house?  ugh

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 34 JPOV

Ugh  Psycho Biatch and Idiot boy.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 33 BPOV

Alice is too funny.   Gotta love her though.  Yey for marriage.  Ugh for Tanya.  Never liked her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 32 JPOV

OMG  I want that boy to die!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 31 EPOV

Glad B had a nice time at the party minus the J talk.   Seth is too cute.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 30 BPOV

Ugh  of course Jake had to partially ruin the day for her.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 29 EPOV

Cant blame b for being a little mad, but B is too caring sometimes.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 28 BPOV

Bella cares too much.  Jake is an arse.  Glad Seth came to tell them

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 27 BPOV

loved her getting her revenge.  That was mean of E.   I loved her talk with charlie though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 26 EPOV

oooh yumminess.  Forgot the lemon dance for your first lemon so here ya go

dl

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 25 EPOV

Gotta love Alice!!! He is a tease

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 23 'The Quileutes’ Narrators POV

Oh boy.  Sam needs to warn Bella.  Jake is going to do something really stupid now.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing this story! I wrote it so along ago that I am sure there are lots of mistakes. I'd almost forgotten about it until I got these notifications, so thank you! 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 22 EPOV

Glad she told E about the call.

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Date: 11 Mar 2013 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 20 BPOV

LOL for the girls grilling her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 19 EPOV

You'd think Jazz would be used to it with Em and Rose around.  Hmmm the Charlie talk.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 18 EPOV

Go E!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 17 BPOV

oh Wow.....What a make up

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 16 EPOV

Oh E.   You had to know she would do something drastic after the last time.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 15 BPOV

Poor b.  E is really overreacting.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 14 EPOV

Ugh.  Did she stop you from hurting Jake?  Did she cry out for him?   Oh E  what are you doing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 13 EPOV

lol  Love Em.   Glad e is relaxing with b some

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 12 EPOV

Carslisle is such a cool Dad figure

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 11 EPOV

Em is such a funny guy

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 9 BPOV

Glad E is being more openly affectionate with her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 8 BPOV continued

Poor B.  At least Jake only kissed her.  He could have kidnapped her or did something worse.   Ugh

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 7 BPOV

Glad she told E about visiting J.   I love jasper

Reviewer: bellaroxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 7:40 AM Title: Epilogue

chapter 46 not showing....and chapter 3 double posted.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 6 - EPOV

Alice is so funny

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 5 - EPOV

Glad Jazz is ok  I think Jake is going to be a problem too.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 3 - BPOV

OOOh breaking a few rules!!! go E!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 4 EPOV

Poor Jasper.    Silly Edward 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2013 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 2 BPOV

Think Jake is going to be a real issue

Reviewer: kimono12356 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 31 EPOV

um when they said seth likes him they meant as a friend, rite? or did they mean seth is like gay?



Author's Response:

No, Seth's not gay. He just looks up to Edward. He sees Edward as the 'cool' older guy, with the hot girlfriend, awesome family, confidence and happiness - all things that Seth would like to achieve. The others are just making fun of Edward about Seths 'man crush'.

 

~Mel x x x

Reviewer: kimono12356 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 28 BPOV

this is a really good story. I officially like seth



Author's Response:

Seth Rocks!!! I love Seth! lol.

Thank you so much for reading this and reviewing. You rock!!

 

~Mel. x x x

Reviewer: Melinda the Proud Bookworm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 9:30 PM Title: Epilogue

“I’m Mayor Jasper Whitlock-Hale.’

You mean Major?

Author's Response:

Yes! I do mean Major!

Thank you for pointing that out!

You rock!!!

~Mel x x x

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:13 PM Title: Epilogue

that was a great story!!! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

It means a lot to me that you enjoyed it and shared your thoughts with me. :D

~Mel x x x

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 4:46 AM Title: Epilogue

Good ending.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 4:46 AM Title: Epilogue

Good ending.



Author's Response:

Thanks :D

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!

~Mel x x x

Reviewer: TwiRPLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 7:52 PM Title: Epilogue

awwww! I love this story! thank you so much for sharing! I will be rec this ff on my new blog! ;0)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

You're gonna rec it? Wow, That's awesome, thank you so much!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 5:08 PM Title: Epilogue

Good chapter, but sad in a way Bella has obviously moved on and unfortunately that included Charlie who she really loved, so even though he would have Sue I'm sure he felt the loss as well!!

But on a very good note Bella and Edward have forever with a love that is epic and you most assuredly have done that love justice. Can't wait for your next fanfiction!!



Author's Response:

Hey bwen,

Thank you so much for all of your reviews, it's really meant a lot to me, to get your reviews on every chapter. You rock!

Yeah, I think that Bella leaving Charlie behind is sad as well. I just thought that in the book they always said that it was hard to remember your human life, and I thought I'd play up to that instead of having Bella remember almost everything, sadly, Charlie came with that.

I hope I did manage to portray their love properly, it is just so epic and I hope I was able to do it justice.

Thank you again!

~Mel x x x

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 5:02 PM Title: Epilogue

Absolutely have to christen every room in the house!



Author's Response:

Haha!

How could they not christen every room??

If I was Bella, I'd do the house... every surface and then pull Edward into the forest to christen that as well!;)

~Mel x x x

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 45 - BPOV

Very cute!

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 45 - BPOV

At least she got to see Charlie one more time.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 45 - BPOV

LMAO over the coffee!! This wasa very endearing chapter of closure, Bella's libidio is Edward's greatest allie and enemy, their realtionship is so passioante and lighthearted !

Well written tempering Bella's passion with love for Edward and love for her father. There ia an amazing evolution of these characters under your direction.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 37 BPOV

that f'ing bitch Tanya.....Like Rose isnt going to tell what happened and then kill Tanya herself?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 24 JPOV

ok  talk about a psychotic break

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 21 BPOV

???  She already is 18???

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 21 BPOV

???  She already is 18???

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 44 BPOV

Good chapter.

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 44 BPOV

I loved his wolf spirit visiting!!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 44 BPOV

I cried my eyes out reading this chapter as much as it was filled with unbelieveable pain there was hope and love at the centre of it all, I found Esme and Jasper to be truly amazing in the little things they did with just small gestures and of course Edward is the epitome of the ultimate mate, friend and lover!!!

Beautifully done especially with the reincarnation reference.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much sweet :)

I thought I should have some Esme in it ... she hasn't really been in the story all that much, and I love her in the books.

I'm glad you liked the reincarnation reference - I wasn't really that sure about it when I was writing it, but I liked it when it was all done.

I hope you like the last two chapters...

Mel x x x

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2010 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 BPOV

enjoyed the fluff and comments ... the final laughter was a really good touch



Author's Response:

Hello there new reader :)

You rock my world reading and reviewing this ...

The fluff wont last for long ... you'll be moving onto the angst soon :P

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 43 BPOV

Wow they really killed Tanya!! I hope that the rest of her family doesn't start a fight with the Cullen's over it.



Author's Response:

Hey,

Thank you so much for all of your reviews, I love to see what you think of the story, it makes me wanna keep writing.

I think Bella had to kill to Tanya ... to show that she could protect her family now, after them having done everything for her before - she can now protect them.

Love, Mel. x x x

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 42 BPOV

Now they get to do something to Tanya for her disreguard for members of her family.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 41 BPOV

Well she took to that well didn't she?

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 40 EPOV

I am glad that he was the one to change her. She wouldn't have made it if he had waited for someone else to come and do it and then she would have been gone forever.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 39 EPOV

Just bite her already!!! I can't believe that he is fighting this question right now!! She is dying.

 

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 38 JPOV

I can't believe that he is really that stupid not to know that he has seriously hurt her so bad.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 37 BPOV

Well that bitch Tanya! I can't believe that he did that to Bella and her family!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 36 BPOV

Awww. This is sad that she is having to leave before she knows that they are all going to be ok.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 35 EPOV

That is so selfless of her and it is a good thing that they are going to leave and take the fight away from the rest of the party.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 34 JPOV

Well he was too late for the wedding but not the after affects of it.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 33 BPOV

What are they going to do with all the humans there to celebrate with Edward and Bella!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 32 JPOV

Oh this is going to be bad because now Alice won't be able to see what is coming.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 32 JPOV

Oh this is going to be bad because now Alice won't be able to see what is coming.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 32 JPOV

Oh this is going to be bad because now Alice won't be able to see what is coming.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 31 EPOV

Poor Edward! He is never going to live this down.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 30 BPOV

Poor Bella this is suspose to be a happy time for her and now Jake has ruined this yet again.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 29 EPOV

I am glad that Edward came right back to her because if he didn't I think that the whole family would have had it out with him.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 28 BPOV

It is nice that all the Cullen girls are getting along finally! It is terrible that Bella is blaming Jake running away on herself when the truth of it is that he is the one that couldn't let go.



Author's Response:

Hello!

(Great name BTW!;))

I had to have Bella get along with Rose as well as Alice. I love Rosalie, she's one of my favorite characters, she's a main character in all of my stories.

I know, writing Bella's thoughts about Jake was sad, but I think it's how she would have felt. I can understand how she thought that as well, but it is sad.

Thank you for reading this and taking the time to share your thoughts with me.

~Mel x x x

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 27 BPOV

That wasn't really nice of Edward to get her all worked up and then leave like that!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 26 EPOV

I think that I have to be with Edward I really hope that his family especially Emmett were far away from the house.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 25 EPOV

Now who is teasing who???

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 24 JPOV

Jacob needs to be stopped he is insane!!!

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 23 'The Quileutes’ Narrators POV

That is terrible that he honestly thinks that  Bella wants to be with him. Jake needs help and he won't listen to anyone and that is a bad situation. This situation is going to get really bad and somehow I think that Jake is the one that is going to lose because the pack will protect the treaty and the Cullen's will protect Bella with their lives.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 22 EPOV

Charlie is a very amazing man. He is letting his little girl go because he knows that is what she wants.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 21 BPOV

Well Charlie took all of that alot better than I thought that he would have. He was mad at Jake not Edward!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 20 BPOV

So I wonder how Charlie is going to take this news.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 19 EPOV

Just who is Charlie that mad at?

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 18 EPOV

I really don't think that she needs to worry about him leaving her again..

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 17 BPOV

Wow I didn't think that he would ever give in and do that but I guess when you think that you have lost your reason for living you will do anything when you find out that they are still there.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 16 EPOV

I didn't think that Edward was going to make it back in time. It is terrible that she was thinking about killing herself.



Author's Response:

Hello!

Thank you for all your reviews :) I'm glad you are liking the story

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 15 BPOV

I hope that Alice gets to Edward fast because Bella is going to fall apart without him!

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 14 EPOV

Holy shit!! I didn't think that he would kick her out because of all of this. I hope that he comes back to her and this isn't like when he left her in the woods.

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