[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2012 5:34 PM Title: The Hills Have Thighs
I tried to watch the video, but it says it doesn't exist! If u could send it to me
that would great!!!! Loved the chap!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2012 4:05 PM Title: Back in the day
Loved it!!! Oh and u make me feel old!! I graduated in 95!! Lol
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2012 1:54 AM Title: Stupid Cupid
Poor EJ!!!! Lol loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2012 11:15 PM Title: Mr. LoverMan
I wonder what Roni said EJ? Loved it!!
Date: 03 Sep 2012 4:18 PM Title: BIG girl panties
I hat this how can Edward leave Bella. She through herself in front of a bullet to save him I think he is really been silly
Date: 03 Sep 2012 3:10 PM Title: Thump, thump, thump
Go CC love the boy. I think that Bella should just tell Edward what was said.
This sounds like Christmas when I was a teenager Love it xx
Date: 03 Sep 2012 12:23 PM Title: At a loss
I cried like a baby at 5 am not been to sleep. Poor CC xx
Date: 03 Sep 2012 12:20 PM Title: DNA
Bella should tell Edward about Randall. There will be tears before bedtime xx
Date: 02 Sep 2012 1:28 PM Title: Big Poppa
I really don't understand US education system *Shrug pull hair*
Is EJ really intellegent we don't have GPS
But Iloved this but I'm not sure about Seth liking Edward. I hope he doesn't try it on.
Date: 02 Sep 2012 5:05 AM Title: Road to redemption
I knew it was Roni that was Jakes daughter!!! Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2012 1:44 AM Title: Rescue Me
Absolutely loved it!!!
Date: 01 Sep 2012 9:34 PM Title: Choices
I don't like Edward and Bella arguing. I like a happy Edward and Bella. I hope things get back to normal soon. I don't want to think about a seperation or a divorce
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2012 8:54 AM Title: Long Day
Lol. Loved it!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2012 10:03 AM Title: Flanked by your side
Lol. Loved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2012 8:35 AM Title: Back to basics
Lmao!!! She drove off!!!! Lol loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2012 6:42 AM Title: Baby Got Back
I love Natalie!! She is perfect for CC! And CC is adorable drunk!!
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2012 3:06 AM Title: Holidaze part two
I loved the ending!!!! Lmao!! Hilarious!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2012 12:21 AM Title: Holidaze part one
Lol Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 8:52 PM Title: Flowers in the Attic
Loved it!!! Lol
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 7:58 PM Title: Gray Matter
Loved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 11:25 AM Title: BIG girl panties
Oh damn! That was intense.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 10:34 AM Title: Thump, thump, thump
ROLMFAO!!!! That was epic!!!! Loved it!! Oh and GO Carlisle!!! Get some old man!!!! Lol
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 9:43 AM Title: DNA
Lmao!!! Poor Carlisle!! No sex! Loved the chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 7:48 AM Title: Saint Corduroy
I feel so sorry for EJ and CC! Michael keeps getting them in
trouble and no one seems to notice!!! Lol. Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 5:46 AM Title: At a loss
Damn!! Poor CC! And I feel so bad for Shelia! Way to go Bella
for sticking up for her! Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 4:46 AM Title: So cold
I feel so sorry for CC! Edward should have listened to him.
And asked Michael. Bella is going to either kick Edward out till CC
comes home or she is going to go search for him, then kick Edward
out!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 8:24 PM Title: Wild Thing
OMG!!! Lol. I love horny flirty Carlisle!! Lol Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 6:36 PM Title: Half moon
CC better fix what he did!!! Poor EJ and Debbie!! I hope Carlisle will
be alright. Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 9:22 AM Title: Smells like Teen Spirit Part Two
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 8:25 AM Title: Smells like Teen Spirit Part One
LMAO!! That was hilarious!! Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 7:46 AM Title: Kill Bill
Holy shit!!!! Damn those boys are violent! But I loved that Bella sOaked them
with the hose!! Awesome!!! Loved it all!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2012 2:27 AM Title: Thump, thump, thump
I FUCKING LOVE THIS FAMILY!!!! I have laughed so hard that I am crying and my husband is wondering what the hell I am laughing at. Bless you and thankyou for this wonderful story. I don't want it to ever end. Keep it up!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2012 11:45 PM Title: Asshole
Damn CC has got a pair of brass balls to talk to Edward Sr like that!
Great chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2012 9:10 PM Title: Big Poppa
NO Seth cant be gay!!! Lol it IS always the georgous ones!! Lol
Awww EJ is finally seeing the light!!! Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2012 9:08 PM Title: Peanut
Sexy Olderward has still got it!!! Lol
Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2012 5:11 AM Title: Unchained Melody
Omg!! If I was Bella I would go over to Sal's and open a can of woop-ass on them all!!
Lol loved it! I'm happy that they are working on their relationship!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2012 1:36 AM Title: Choices
Oh Edward! You really put your whole leg in your mouth this time!!
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2012 1:33 AM Title: That's Amore
Loved it!!! I like Debbie. She is gonna make EJ nuts!! Lol
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2012 7:31 PM Title: Party like a Rock star
Damn!! Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2012 7:29 AM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
Loved it!! I love the kids! EJ and CC are hilarious! On the last chapter of SoU it
wouldnt let me review! Stupid technology. So I loved the epi
And thank you for sharing your stories with us! I absolutely
love your writing! You are da BOMB! Lol
Date: 22 Aug 2012 7:17 PM Title: Unchained Melody
another spot on chapter. this feels like real stuff. i think that's one mark of exceptional writing. your characters always feel real, not just on the page, but 3 dimentional. thanks for this story. i am reading 1 chapter a day. hopefully....
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:00 AM Title: Choices
This chapter ended up being scary and sad. I guess marriages are not perfect, I wouldn't know because mine was spent trying to keep a cheating husband with me. How Edward told Michael about sex was so precious....
Date: 14 Aug 2012 11:47 PM Title: That's Amore
I really liked this chapter! EJ seemed different, or maybe you showed us more of his internal dialogue. I did catch the Twilight references. You made cute use of them. EJ seemed to fall for the one that didn't fall all over him.....Love CC and Sheila too! They're so cute when the puppy love all over the story! LOL! This is thoroughly enjoyable so far!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 5:22 AM Title: Party like a Rock star
OMG I'm so glad that I finished raising my kids already because I don't think I could cope with how soon the get into sex these days!! Great story! EJ is such a guy like the ones I knew when I was young in that he has sex with anyone who want to....CC is more like a one person at a time kind of guy. He plays music and is smart and different. Just like the ones I would have liked then. I love that the boys' friends called Bella a milf.....so cute!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 9:44 PM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
its been a while since I finished The Story Of Us, so it took me a while to remember just what the details of each character were. It's about time to start this and I will read slowly and savor each chapter....I love EJ and CC and how each are so different, you share similar traits. If I were a teenage girl, I would be attracted more to CC. These are well defined and solid characters and the story is always good. It's also really great to see E and B's passion is as hot as always! Love that the boys are both grateful that their parents still love each other and are uncomfortable with their PDA's. Just fucking hilarious!!
Date: 07 Aug 2012 6:22 AM Title: That's Amore
Heck yeah should! Nice resembelence to Bella BTW!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 7:46 PM Title: BIG girl panties
This situation has made me so torn! I was furious with Bella but she's a mom and thought she was protecting her child. And I don't condone domestic violence at all, but she deserved to be slapped! Ah! You have created so many emotions in me!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 6:35 PM Title: Thump, thump, thump
Knowing what is coming between Bella and Randall has me on edge! I'm such a dork! ;)
Date: 21 Jul 2012 7:36 PM Title: Choices
Aw poor Edward! I just wanna hug him and squeeze him so tight!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 6:07 PM Title: That's Amore
I love how EJ is a cocky little shit, so full of himself but that he has a good heart and is a total mama's boy!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 5:14 PM Title: Party like a Rock star
EJ and CC are too damn much! They crack me up
Date: 21 Jul 2012 3:47 PM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
I love these two as parents! They are insane!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2012 7:48 PM Title: Alex Outtake
heeeey@ i just re-read your story agian i was reading on ffnet and then you pulled it down :D ill go back and re read it again i love this story so much i hope you do post that CC outtake!!!
Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:30 PM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
I really hope you write more about Alex and CC. You are a great writer ... had me either laughing or mad throughout the story.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:58 PM Title: Thump, thump, thump
Lmfaooo, I kinda love CC. You gotta admit that was bad ass with the shovel.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:32 AM Title: Alex Outtake
I F-ing lovr this family, specially love me some CC!
Can't wait for more outtakes and offcourse the sequel.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:12 AM Title: Alex Outtake
I just reread both the Story of Us and Instructions Not Included. I think I even liked them better another round through. At the end of the epilogue you said that you had a CC outtake. I noticed that your story is finished is there anywhere we can read CC outtake? I would love to see what developes for CC. Thanks!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:52 PM Title: Alex Outtake
You can continue to write about this family and I will always read them. I love them. I was so excited to see another chapter. I don't understand how Alex got the short end of the selfesteem in the family. She is the only girls and was doted on by just about everyone. The boys sure did not lack in any confidence or self image issues. Alex looks like Bella, who everyone thinks is gorgeous. Alex is complaning about being a size ten. Bella and Edward need to get her into therapy if her self image is that bad. I hope this Dan works out to be the one, but Alex has to love herself first.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 9:52 AM Title: So cold
I truly love this story. It's one of the few that mentions bodely functions!
Feel sad about CC though.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:12 AM Title: The Best Years
where is the epilogue?!?!?!?
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2012 6:18 PM Title: Alex Outtake
so wonderful as always !!!!
Date: 18 Apr 2012 9:01 PM Title: Epilogue
Good story but how you left it, I feel put out. You had a continuation and just stopped why?
Date: 14 Apr 2012 8:46 PM Title: Saint Corduroy
I hate that Bella puts her marriage second, it just ends badly
Date: 11 Apr 2012 6:22 AM Title: Epilogue
I can't wait for the CC outtake. Too bad about him & Natalie but their break up rang true to the story.
I loved this story, thank you so much for writing it;-))
Date: 11 Apr 2012 2:51 AM Title: The Best Years
I'm bawling my eyes out here. Thank you so much for writing this, I can't believe I put off reading this for as long as I did! Can't wait to go read the outtakes!
Date: 11 Apr 2012 1:51 AM Title: Thor, Loki, and the gang
This story (ok, all your stories) are like fan fic crack for me. Can't get enough. I was crying my eyes out with that 'You are my Sunshine' song. Adorable;-))
Date: 10 Apr 2012 11:35 PM Title: Testing Testing
Love that she's pregnant & I totally see an offspring sequel in the works, just in case you weren't aware;-D))
Date: 10 Apr 2012 7:06 PM Title: Spring is in the air part two
Another great chapter, loved the Woody & Bud dooking it out,haha. So I really thought EJ would be hooking up with E&B's old classmate friends Daughter.
This is sad, that I'm getting close to ending this story. I can really see a sequel with all these characters the kids as the theme, js, planting a seed, so to speak;-))
Date: 10 Apr 2012 2:18 PM Title: Spring is in the air pt one
Hilarious sex scene, these two crack me up. Love this Edward.
Date: 10 Apr 2012 3:38 AM Title: Happiest Place on Earth
That was some crazy Disney love there, haha.
And I love G'pa's baddass self.
Date: 10 Apr 2012 1:50 AM Title: Imagine that
Loved it, kickin wing badass Bella, haha. Gotta love me some Biolove
Date: 09 Apr 2012 1:26 PM Title: Romeo and Juliet
Loved this chapter, I'm so glad you gave Al his true love. I like the Leo reference too, always been a huge fan of his/Al's;-))
So I can't wait for the play, I hope no heads roll.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 7:04 AM Title: love taps
Awesome chapter, loved the Em & Al relationship, that was very hawt. I want them together;-/
Date: 09 Apr 2012 4:58 AM Title: SOngs from the heart
Yay CC is right, no 2 pump chump for him, Hollah
Date: 09 Apr 2012 1:22 AM Title: Shut up and Drive part two
Wow, I think he went to far with it, because there's a reason for that old adage that two wrongs don't make a right, they don't. And he maybe just fueled the hate of a person who's blood line is that of a person that goes psycho when relationships go bad. I also think it would probably hurt Cecelia;-(
Cant wait to read more, I love these kids story lines as much as B & E's.
Date: 08 Apr 2012 7:55 PM Title: Shut up and Drive part one
Great chapter & not boring at all. But I'm wondering what Al is up to and what the juicy gossip is?
Date: 08 Apr 2012 11:58 AM Title: The Hills Have Thighs
Love that top gun scene, best meg Ryan ever.
Love this story
Date: 07 Apr 2012 11:55 PM Title: Stupid Cupid
Can't wait to read more!:-))
Date: 07 Apr 2012 3:08 PM Title: Mr. LoverMan
Great chapter, but EJ is a slut & a whore
Date: 07 Apr 2012 5:12 AM Title: Road to redemption
Haha, have you been blackmailed by 'Team Jacob' fans to turn him into a good guy?
JK, great chapter;-))
Date: 06 Apr 2012 8:54 PM Title: Rescue Me
Great chapter.. I gotta feeling we're going to find out who Roni's Dad is & it's going to be freakin Jake, hhaha
I love the kid drama:-))
Date: 06 Apr 2012 2:38 PM Title: Long Day
Loved it, that diving over the table at each other was hilarious and the motor boating to boot, haha.
Date: 06 Apr 2012 5:06 AM Title: Flanked by your side
Thanks for the Edward fix, loved it.
Date: 06 Apr 2012 3:29 AM Title: Back to basics
You go Bella! Haha. I wish CC would just attack Natalie already, I think she'd attack him back:-))
Date: 06 Apr 2012 12:39 AM Title: Baby Got Back
Fun chapter & yes, I'm a big fan of Natalie and her knowledge of musicals & old classics:-))
Funny about Edward trying to get Bella cursing mad,haha, cleaver man.
Date: 05 Apr 2012 7:22 PM Title: Holidaze part two
I am glad they broke up, nothing against Sheila, part of me wonders about her that she could be so into such a depressed emo though,ha but he did have a lot going on before with bands, his group & the plays. I like this Natalie girl for him.
Date: 05 Apr 2012 1:19 PM Title: Flowers in the Attic
That was funny, "cal me Daddy," Carlisle is a bit of an evil f£ck, haha with a great wicked sense of humor.
Date: 04 Apr 2012 10:31 PM Title: BIG girl panties
Okay that is physically sickening it's so disturbing, damn Randall! Great chapt by the way. Lord, but it's like what would I do if I was in that position, all I could think was immediately do the undercover thing, I'm glad Ali thought of that, I also like her meet him at the hotel to let them all kill his arse & bury him idea, haha.
Date: 04 Apr 2012 8:00 PM Title: Thump, thump, thump
Hilarious!!
Date: 04 Apr 2012 7:09 PM Title: DNA
Definitely in the DNA, haha
Date: 04 Apr 2012 2:25 PM Title: Saint Corduroy
Michael & his getting into mischief brought a lot of stuff to a head:-))
Date: 04 Apr 2012 6:01 AM Title: At a loss
Wow, intense. A river of crocodile tears shed over that chapter:-))
Date: 04 Apr 2012 4:26 AM Title: So cold
Yeah, I feel bad for CC, but I feel bad for all of them. He can't confide anything in his Dad which only exacerbates Edwards distrust of CC. Loose,loose situation:-(
Date: 04 Apr 2012 12:15 AM Title: Wild Thing
Great chapter. I know what you mean about real life being better than anything you can make up. My husband keeps saying, "alright that's going in book '2' , book '3'" and really there is enough for a few books. I love weird, it's right up my alley,yk:-))
Date: 03 Apr 2012 2:31 PM Title: Half moon
Haha, what a funny chapt, I can't believe Bella did the Cyrano De Bergerac stuff with CC, I was sure they were going to get caught.
Date: 03 Apr 2012 6:22 AM Title: Smells like Teen Spirit Part Two
Great chapter, total surprise with the Debbie deflowering:-))
Date: 03 Apr 2012 5:04 AM Title: Smells like Teen Spirit Part One
This has been another great chapter. I'm so glad CC found a new girl.:-))
Very funny adult bickering. Rose was funny too, she gets right to the heart of the matter.
Date: 03 Apr 2012 12:41 AM Title: Kill Bill
I have to laugh at CC wanting to help Dad bury Bill, haha I got this visual of the end of "Hall Pass" where the Brit has had a hall pass with Stephen Merchant he ends up killing his date, her husband, grandma and the kids who were watching & going to jail it's funny too you should google it. Anyway, the end of that chapter seemed just like what the Cullen's could get up to, haha
Date: 02 Apr 2012 10:07 PM Title: Asshole
I'm so glad you don't like cliffys, they get me really anxious, I like reading them but I don't like having to leave it unresolved, that's distressing.
Thanks for writing;-))