I liked that talk between AJ and EJ, well done.  If I were AJ, I would stay the fuck away from Alex . . . those boys that are so nice to him right now, will squash him like a bug if he acts out and touches her.  Perhaps, when they are seniors, AJ and Alex can find each other again . . . who knows.  Everyone of the kids took the news well . . . although they have had a bt of practice . . . LOL. Why am I worried about the fact that Debbie tried so hard to get EJ into bed?  And, not only that, she handed him the condom . . . did she poke a hole in it to trap him?  She had the comment of 'a lot can change in three to six months'.  Seems a little odd to me.  Glad to hear the baby is okay and the tests have been coming back clear.  Poor Al really has no clue about AJ. The parent pulling the ostrich route is never a good thing.  Kids have sex . . . and it is early now.  Just because he didn't have it until he was eighteen, doesn't mean his kid will wait that long.

The market scene with Edward and CC had me giggling so hard when they got to the anal sex stuff . . . that was funny!  Thanks for the frozen idea for headaches.  The husband gets them and they start off small, but can get really bad sometimes.  He came home tonight with one, I handed him the frozen peas . . . and it faded down to manageable . . . we both thank you for that tip!  EJ's POV for this chapter was fun.  He had both Roni and Cecilia approach him . . . I still think that EJ and Cecelia should be together, but I digress.  At least Roni and EJ are back to friendly . . . sarcastic too!  Fun!  The adults nearly coming blows was hilarious . . . the kinda are all correct in saying that they are all Kinds of crazy in the Cullen family . . . but fun, that's for sure!  They all explode on impact, but settle later and everything is fine.  Love it!

CC was out of his darn mind at the beginning of the chapter.  Typical teenager though.  Not wanting to go without the girfriend is very normal.  However, thinking Natalie was going to cheat . . . that's just odd . . . he has absolutely no reason to even think this.  I am glad that EJ jumped in before CC could make a bafoon out of himself.  The whole furry-sex at the end . . . weird.  At least he knew it was weird as it was happening and he didn't want to, but still wanted to have sex . . . too funny.

I think it was really cool that Emmett sat there and truly listened to his long time friend Al, telling his whole story.  I loved that Emmett slowly went from wanting to kill Al to wanting to, and almost literally, killing Gabe.  Gabe is a douche . . . just like you've mentioned here and there through this story.  Open relationship . . . pfft.  Dick.  Rose was more upset that Emily didn't come to her when all this was happening, than the possibility of Al and Emily getting together.  That was oddly interesting to me.  The play seemed like it went really well.  Bella cracked me up with her tears, shouts and clapping.  Great mom that one.  She made me smile.  Edward shouldn't have smoked earlier, as he was worthless and kept falling asleep.  Bad daddy!  The hint during the play from Natalie about Roni getting hurt by John and then Michael seeing it . . . I'm glad EJ and 'Michael Cullen' came to the rescue.  Michael was so funny in parts of that . . . love that kid!!!  Then Gabe picking up Roni the same night Emily broke up with him . . . the nerve of him even showing up there in the first place . . . ugh!  I'm glad that EJ was there to get her away from Gabe.  What are you going to do with those two?  EJxR?

Poor Al never got the chance to talk to Rose and Emmett first, before Emily outed them.  Eek!!!  This will be a hard sell to the parentals.  Edward may freak out too, not that that should have any bearing in AxE's relationship.  Satan will attack Al though.  LOL.  I was quite happy that Emily had her first orgasm with a man.  It was funny when she had to get back up off him half way down, to adjust to fit him . . . but hilarious when Al realized that not only was Gabe small, but a minute man at that.  I laughed.  I like how AJ is taking all of this . . . he's a cool kid.

You are probably sick of hearing this from me, but that chapter was great.  I loved that Bella wasn't mad about the car, just the spending without discussing . . . I agree.  Even though he's the one that brings the money home, he still should have discussed the amount . . . quarter of a mil . . . on a car . . . hehehe. Loved that CC finally drove.  That he finally was done waiting for Natalie to come to him and made that giant romantic gesture in the middle of the cafeteria . . . he has amazing friends.  Yay . . . they finally do it!!!  Woo~Hoo!!!  I loved that she stripped and said this is me . . . being his POV and him just thinking how beautiful she is . . . just made me all warm and fuzzy inside . . . he truly loves her and she him.  This was just a great chapter.  Who knows what's up with EJ . . . the only thing that I can possibly think is that he treating Roni so disrespectful and he NEVER treats girls that way . . . he's feeling really awful about it.

Yay!!!  CC got his license . . . whoot-whoot!!!  I wonder if the gossip Bella heard was what Edward seemed to walk in on in the doctor's lounge . . . Al and what's-her-name?  Anyway, I wonder if they've been caught doing something they shouldn't.  I'm sure you will fill the readers in at some point.  Seemd juicy though.  Edward was fantastic in this chapter . . . you call it boring, but I really like when you get the characters like this.  He took care of the younger kids . . . took care of Bella . . . got dinner cooked and fed everyone.  The CC and Edward moment was pretty cool also.  Then the bed time with all four of them was funny . . . and adorable!!!

That was fun with the way CC wanted to know how his dad was in high school.  Then he cockblocked his parents to find out about how Jake and Bell met.  Again, fun.  The bit with EJ playing he was Michael's father backfiring, but not until the last second was brilliant.  Well played. Michael really misses Roni . . . EJ and her don't need to get back together, but she needs to still be friends with the family, Bella misses her, Michael misses her . . . and she was good for EJ.  You can have friends of the opposite sex, I always did.  Yeah, they should be friends.

I actually really liked the conversation between Roni and Jake . . . they are bonding and that is really quite cool.  I like that she likes the idea of switching schools and moving into Jake's house.  Loved when she went out and Shelly was on her knees and she thought, dad's getting his groove back . . . too funny!  EJ was a man-whore and that was way overboard . . . super funny though.  Him thinking CC told Natalie and Natalie told Roni . . . that too was funny.  When it was EJ bragging and the two girls he was with we're probably bragging . . . too many people knew . . . she was bound to find out anyway . . . it just sad that it hurt her.  I feel sorry for Roni.  Grandpa Carlisle still cracks me up . . . he would have had a threesome . . . hehehehehe . . . now that was funny conversation.  I hope that Bella keeps a friendship with Roni for the little time she may stay in Port Jarvis.  Edward and Bella were funny there at the end . . . she went from not in the mood to straight up attacking him.  Fun!

You had me all over the map with that one.  First, I was glad to hear that Jake was remorseful, as it gave me hope that he would not fuck with BxE.  Then, we find out, what I already figured out, that he is Roni's father and really wants to know her.  I liked Shelly and how she treated Jake . . . trepidation at first, then you could literally feel her falling for him again . . . after all these years . . . they just seemed to fall into a rhythm, even though they were only together for a couple of months . . . you got the feeling that if he wasn't so fucked up at the time, he and Shelly may have had a good go at it.  Then, we were wondering why Roni was ignoring EJ . . . I had the feeling that she found out and did not know how to tell him, and yep, that's what it was.  It was a little odd that EJ only saw Jacob Black's daughter and not Roni . . . who knows . . . maybe they can meet up again at NYU and that time it's love at first sight?  Hopeless romantic, party of one . . . yeah that's me.  

My goodness that was a long one!  The beginning with NxCC acting and singing and falling out of character was just too adorable.  I'm glad they finally got to kissing with tongue there, but it was funny that it was in a diner, overstimulated from feeding ech other . . . too funny.  Yay, EJ got into Columbia!!!  I had no doubt he would, as that was his first choice, and he already got into the other's, but still very happy he did.  Scary that Jake is out, but nice touch with him missing a leg . . . but will that really hinder him if he wants to come by . . . most likely to apologize in person, but still scary.  No thank you.  

I was so proud of Bella sticking up for Roni . . . that was wonderful.  Roni's mom IS doing the best she can and kids are mean . . . but you don't expect full grown adults to be like that . . . so immature.  Yay, Bella!  The kids fighting and working her last nerve was funny . . . her driving away at the end . . . absolutely hysterical!  The whole CC POV was interesting.  His friends are great and quite quirky.  I love that CC is Mark's pass . . . that was so cute.  Oh, and loved that CC was so cool when he kissed him a couple years back.  Awesome.  Most guys would have decked the poor kid . . . CC actually kissed him back and then let him down easy.  Loved that you wrote it that way.  Yay, you!

I loved this!  Bella at the beginning with herself, and the with CC and the good conversation they had . . . Edward lurking and then adding his two cents was just all very well done.  AxJ being upset that their daughter was married and pregnant . . . I'm glad you fixed it later and they seemed more supportive . . . whew.  Phil seemed a little controlling . . . just the comments here and there . . . I didn't get a warm feeling about him.  I liked that Samantha outed herself to CC . . . it was really cool of her.  I liked that you made it so Sheila and CC would remain friends and they broke up.  I like that you had Natalie there as well.  Funny when she walked in on BxE in the kitchen . . . those two are insatiable . . . it's a miracle they ever get to finish with always getting walked in on.  Too funny.  I like how Natalie is pulling out the real CC and letting home be himself.  This is really a fun story.

CC had me laughing through his whole POV.  Grandpa had some really valid points and eventually got them across to CC.  I have a feeling tha CC can be extremely strong.  He seems to be very intelligent with a huge capacity of empathy.  I think he'll make a fine doctor . . . he seems to want to be a surgeon.  Carlisle also had a great point about EJ and going into politics . . .  he may want to pursue that . . . or not, politicians are so smarmy . . . ick.  BxE seemed to be having a lot of fun in Italy.  It's about time they made it there. They've been speaking about it since befor EJ was born.  I'm glad they went!  

Stupid, stupid, stupid woman!  Ugh! I don't care how desperate the situation is or was . . . I could NEVER do anything like that to my husband . . . ever.  Even Alice tried to talk her out of it.  At least Alice was smart enough to suggest recording it, just in case.  Oh and look, Randall got what he wanted . . . Edward away from Bella . . . big surprise there.  Argh!

Michael afraid of curch at first, then wanting to go to church on Sunday.  That Sister Anne really made an impact.  Then he was bored at church . . . I don't blame him, I always am.  LOL.  That is unfortunate that Bella will have to deal with Randall in her own home . . . she needs to speak up . . . too bad she never mentioned it prior to this, but she was protecting Edward somehow, I guess.  Shivers.  I love that Seth is still around after all these years . . . I hope he has found a man for himself and that you mention it in a later chapter.  Why do I have a bad feeling about something horribly wrong happening to Sheila from her own mother's hands?  Shivers, again.  I forgot all about Michael playing with EJ's "balloons" . . . you cracked me up there . . . when Michael said EJ was being selfish and that he know he likes balloons.  LMAO.  Loved that ExB dropped the kids and left for schmexy times.  The fact that it pissed off pop-pop was even funnier.  Poor Carlilse . . . what's he gonna do now, if Esme won't touch him.  In her defense, he did scare the crap out of her the last time.  Bummer.  I like that CC seems to be getting back to normalcy.  It is nice to knowthey didn't make him go to the ward after all as well.  Medication should work with the journaling.  I like the route you went.  Onwards . . .

Holy crap that was exhausting!  I was sad, scared and melancholy at the same time . . . . you had me so worried that whole chapter.  I could tell something was wrong with CC and he had checked out.  I just thought he would just sleep and run away when he felt better. I had no idea he would go that drastic of a route.  You freaked this reader out!  So glad that he will be okay, at least physically. Mentally, he's got a long road.  Poor Sheila.  What an evil mom she has . . . and so judgmental . . . people in glass houses and all.  I hope BxE take her in, or at least get her over to AxJ or Renee even. Perhaps, her own dad?  Don't scare me like that again . . . wow.

I rather enjoyed that chapter.  Well, once we found out Carlisle would be fine.  Then it was absolutely funny and fun throughout.  Poor EJ being all mopey around the house.  Finding out that Debbie was mopey all day as well.  They are two peas in a pod those two.  CC and Sheila are trying out their friends with benefits and I gotta say I like that.  I had a fwb and I met my husband when out with the fwb and I love telling that story . . . i digress.  You may have thought this chapter ridiculous, but I love those kinds of chapters.  The bantor and the characters talking.  Onwards . . . 

Really liked the part at the beginning, with Alice and Bella, and Alice needing the money.  I'm so glad that BxE are in a position to help.  Was interesting to learn that Edward was making over a million a year . . . and he started out wealthy . . . wonder where they are now . . . must be a huge bank account. Loved the bit with EJ being so very happy that he was dancing with his mom . . . too sweet.  Then Alex huffing and puffing . . . over the fact that AJ did not want to match costumes . . . oh to be a thirteen year old girl again . . . where it's all a little overboard . . . so cute.  Then Bella going up and speaking frankly with her son and actually reaching him for a change . . . yay . . . the whole exchange with Bella, CC and Sheila was wonderful . . . you really have such a gift in your writing.  I hope Carlisle is okay . . . that would be so sad to lose him . . . even though he hasn't been in this sequel much.  Still loving this.  

I just loved the reactions of Edward in this chapter as each teen came to the house, or came downstairs . . . it was just wonderful. I think I got a little weepy when he danced with Alex.  So funny that she thought the boys may tease her, but they were dancing together. Holy crap, I laughed so hard at the end of the chapter when they were betting on whose kid will get laid!  So flipping funny.  You are rocking awesome with bantor. They should give you an award for that shit!  xo

I wouldn't have gotten away with calling my dad an asshole either.  CC was completely wrong and very disrepectful.  I think he realized just how awful he was after the fact.  I hope he apologizes to Bella as well.  Speaking of, I love that she heard the entire thing and slapped that kid.  He deserved it.  She must've been impressed that Edward kept his head and did not throttle the kid . . . with the disrepect flying out of his mouth, I was surprised.  I really liked the date between EJ and Debbie.  They were sweet and did not trash talk each other the whole time.  It actually seemed as though they had fun as well.  I liked that he referred to their hot ass kisses as porn kisses.  Funny.  I think EJ surprised himself on that date . . . he was himself and she liked him.  I did like the talkd that CC had with EJ later and that EJ punched him in the nose . . . that was perfect.  Also, really liked that CC went down and apologized to Edward.  I think the kids are old enough to learn what happened with Bella, before they were born.  At least EJ and CC can learn it.  Keep Alex and Michael out of the loop for a few more years.  I did like that Edward said it would be Bella's story to tell.  It would.  How do you explain a woman went crazy for their father and shot to kill her and nearly succeeded?  Eek!!!

It was pretty funny when EJ was trying his hardest to cockblock CC, because he was bored.  Then poor Alex and her appendix.  At least she's surrounded by people that are in the hospital business. She's also quite the lucky young lady with all the love from the whole extended family.  AJ was so upset, I hope he gets to come over and see her soon.  Loved the flashback of Edward teaching Alex how to ride a bike.  It showed she was one tough cookie from a very young age . . . and then again when she came home from the hospital and said, "I had surgery, minor surgery at that", before making her own way upstairs.  I think I caught onto the very subtle hint you gave about Seth, that he's gay?  Just guessing . . . with the flower comment from Bella . . . and there was another that I just can't remember right now.  Poor EJ, that kid is super confused.  CC at the hospital loving that his dad made the doctor cry was hilarious.  Then his comment at the end about trying to sleep, but wanted to know what mom did to make him squel like a bith.  I love that kid!

I am so confused here.  I don't see what Edward said or did wrong?  I even re-read that exchange.  Yes, he said some things, but he spoke his mind.  Is he not allowed to speak how he is feeling in the moment.  He apologized so many times.  Bella blew what he said so far out of the water, that it made my head spin.  That was when I went back and re-read.  Nope, still saw the same words.  She just heard what she wanted to hear, not what he was saying.  I guess you are trying to portray that all they have together is their children.  That the love they had in the beginning is no longer there?  I don't see it.  I this sequel's first chapter, it was all Bella and she seemed wonderfully happy with marriage and the kids.  The beginning of this chapter they seemed the same.  Yet, now there is this snag.  It was just very odd.  

I adored the two boys POV's.  This was another supr long chapter.  I loved the whole thing.  The beginning with EJ and his granny nay-nay all the way through to him taking care of Michael being upset over shattered pickles.  He's a bit of a man-whore, but I kind of dig him.  CC though?  I love that kid.  His POV was spectacular.  He has grabbed this reader and sucked her in.  Loved how his was a normal teenager in love with his girl.  She got away, but he was going to try his hardest to get her back.  Bella and Rose being hammered was so funny.  Loved every bit of this with the kids and the parents both. You truly have an amazing gift to put us right there in the thick of things, with making us feel like we are right there with them.  I can viwsualize it all.  Loving this sequel!  Thank you for continuing it.  

WHY? WHY did Bella have to interrupt them? This was a nice chapter, but man you should have let us read about CC's sex scene with Sheila.

God I really love all your stories but I really don't like how you try to make the boys into victims. Like all of their exes turn crazy after the breakup (the dick can't be THAT good can it?). Sheila being a bitchy whore was a stretch for me but Debbie was straight on. Roni was being a heart broken kid so no I can't say that I blame her.EJ used her (KNOWING how she felt) for selfish reasons. She was his little project so how can he be mad now that the shoe is on the other foot? I'm still Team Roni but for her with someone else because EJ doesn't deserve her. Honestly he deserves no one until he grows up. He whines and complains about being used for sex but he does the same thing and deludes himself into thinking there's always MORE if he hits it more than once. Cecilia? No. Her character leaves a really bad taste in my mouth. What he did to Roni was crappy. Period. Screw Cecilia. 

Oh my please keep writting stories,you have a great sense of hummer and can write it really well i loved this story, it was well written and I laughted so much at some of the things the family got into. The way you wrote grandpa Cullen was priceless😃, I loved it.

Hello, 

Thank you, this story was amazing! I wish it could never end....

Thats definitely one of my favorite fanfic stories! 

Where can I find the other outtakes?

Thank you for your answer.

Love,

Sarra, Paris, France.

WOW!!! The Cullens, they really think highly of themselves, I bet its okay for them to be violent, but not other people. Well, everybody deserve second chance, even they don't have money or name.

Loved it!

Yay for CC and Bethany, EJ and Cecilia, and for Alex quitting the boyfriend/boss ofhers! I know I'll love the outtakes, just like the rest of this story!!!

I agree with that: "sometimes what happens in real life is better than making up some wild scenario."  And, we're all sex freaks...in one way or another!!!

Even after having reread that story more times than I can count I still adore it. I usually really dislike multiple POVs but you manage to give each character its own voice. I wish there were more outtakes to this story since I just can't get enough of your characters. Its real, its gritty at times but everybody who has grown up in a big family can identify with parts of it.

Carlisle is incorrigible, he passed his womanizing ways on to his grandsons, just like Robin got the evil from her daddy what a douche.

Robin is really something else: first CC, then Edward Sr., then she tries to see Debbie's boobs .... good for CC to ditch her and try to get with Sheila again.

The limo saw a lot of action that night.

I don't like violence but CC needessome sense smacked into his thick emo skull.

Aww, how sweet, Edward's trying so hard to give Bella everything she wants.

Seth is gay, hitting on Edward - do Rose and Alice know ;D

I'm glad Bella and Edward are good again, your explanation why she couldn't get to normal immediately after forgiving him makes sense. Didn't like Rose and especially Alice's relationship advice, they took it too far. Maybe going to the dojo isn't such a bad idea after all, those two can work off some frustrations - theway they reacted to Seth was so embarrassing. Leave it to EJ to score a date with Grace in the wink of an eye. Feel sorry for him, he didn't deserve being beaten up. What if Emmett had called the police? Sal is such a dumb punk.

Debbie seems a lot different than the other girls who are throwing themselves at EJ. Despite all Dina said I think we didn't see the last of her, she was thrilled that EJ was interested in spending time with her and he showed her how great sex can be. Sal can go fluff himself, I hate double standards so the beating was well deserved.

The Cullen house is a mad-house - all the hormonal teenagers. EJ is such a mommie-boy, great idea to take off the door. She and Edward have their hands full with their offspring.

I love this story. I hope you do a trilogy :)

Aww I feel for Alex!! I hope things go good with Dr. Dan!!

She needs some good in her life!  Loved it! Looking forward

to CC's outtake!!

Omg!!! That speech was awesome!!! Loved it all!!!

Lol!! Loved it!! My cousins husband was fixed after his first marriage, and now she is on baby # 3!!!! 

Lol loved it!!!

ROLMFAO!! I loved the end of this!! Badass Bella rocks!!!

Loved it! Oh I read Quiet Storm, Weather the Storm, and now

The third one! ( I forgot what u named it!!) lol 

Loved it!!

Loved it! Gabe is an asshole, and Emily needs to dump his

sorry ass, and then have Emmett Sr and Jr kick it!!!! Lol

Damn! Poor EJ. Roni is a jealous beotch!!! 

Loved it!!!

I loved that I can't believe CC and Natalie in a diner at that. Food fetish love it xx