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Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2023 5:10 AM Title: Alex Outtake

I am truly sad to see these stories end. I loved both of them and I feel like part of my life will be different without reading them every day! I'm going to read A Hard Day's Night next. Loved the STORM series too by the way. LOVE YOU! Reading on... 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2023 4:44 PM Title: Thor, Loki, and the gang

Again this is wonderful! 

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Date: 21 Sep 2023 8:02 AM Title: Testing Testing

I thought she was preggers! I know everything will work out. CC is definitely pure evil, but very cute doing it! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2023 7:10 AM Title: Imagine that

My goodness! That one was fun. He shoulda let Bella kick all their butts! She probably could have. Loved this chapter. I thought maybe Edward would invite Eric to check out Upstate and his practice to get away from Jersey. Just a thought. Reading on...

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2023 8:00 AM Title: Shut up and Drive part two

Wow! I don't necessarily think what EJ did to Roni was the correct way to handle the situation, but I get that he was really hurt and she manipulated Cecelia into hurting EJ for her own purposes. She did kinda deserve what she got - cruel and unusual punishment. He was correct in saying that he was always respectful with Roni and treated her really well-even tried and wanted to love her. You can't force that. You either love someone or you don't, it's that simple. Roni was very cruel to BOTH Cecelia and EJ and I have to say that I really don't blame him. Roni made him feel cheap which is something he never did to her. He is obviously tired of being "THE WHORE" around town. I think he really wants to find someone he can love, and Cecelia has that potential. I just hope Roni didn't ruin their chances. True colors can be UGLY. GREAT CHAPTER - very real. Some of your reviewers seem to think that the women are just victims and the men are heartless and whores. These girls are immature bitches.The act sweet and then show their true colors. Those boys have ALWAYS been on the level with the girls they are with - no deceit there, but with Roni, SHE was deceitful and cruel. These women (Sheila, Debbie, Roni) are NOT victims. They are just as much whores as those boys and they as JUST as responsible for their own behavior> I'm so sick of women taking the girls' side no matter what, just because they are women! Women can be horrible too- case and point- RONI!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2023 5:20 AM Title: Shut up and Drive part one

What are you talking about? That chapter wasn't boring at all. It was actually great perfect filler chapter. Even if it's a set up for the next ones still loving the story after all these chapters and looking forward to more.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2023 8:05 PM Title: Back in the day

In 1995 I was raising my first child and working on my second literally bun in the oven at the time. You did great as far as the references go and once again great chapter I'm glad the kids aren't being rude to Jake because they really have no reason to even if they know what they know about his past everyone deserves a second chance. 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2023 5:50 AM Title: Road to redemption

Wow! That was an unexpected twist. I have to admit I'm really surprised at EJ and his reaction. I truly thought he was in love with Roni and just didn't really know it. I hope Jake's change is genuine too. If he hurts them again that will not be cool, but then again he would go back to prison if he did. Very emotional chapter - I cried a lot reading it.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2023 5:55 AM Title: Long Day

LOVED IT!!! LOVE THIS STORY!!!

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Date: 13 Sep 2023 5:55 AM Title: Long Day

LOVED IT!!! LOVE THIS STORY!!!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2023 4:58 AM Title: Baby Got Back

Great Chapter, LOVE Natalie, LOVE drunk CC, GREAT song choices! Reading on...

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2023 7:22 AM Title: Thump, thump, thump

WOW! That was the BEST worst Thanksgiving I've ever heard of. I enjoyed that immensely. Can't wait to see what's next! Best line of the night-- "So where are we spending Christmas?" Gotta love CC!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2023 7:01 AM Title: At a loss

NO I did not enjoy that! What a silly question! I cried nearly the WHOLE chapter! Thank God that CC is ok. Bella is gonna be VERY upset when shen finds out that he woke up and she wasn't there for him. Still loving this story, just a bit traumatized right this second! VERY REAL!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2023 5:23 AM Title: So cold

I actually DO feel bad for CC, but as a parent I also understand Edward's frustration. But at the same time Edward didn't even bother to get any other persons side of the story. 

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Date: 06 Sep 2023 6:54 AM Title: Wild Thing

Nothing you write sucks! Don't ever say that or think it. Your work is so wonderful. It makes me laugh and cry and feel things I don't get to feel normally. I love the stories and I love this chapter. I love the characters.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2023 8:43 AM Title: Smells like Teen Spirit Part One

Now THAT was a great chapter. The parents betting on which kids get some! That was hilarious!! Can't wait to find out the results!! 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2023 6:03 AM Title: Asshole

You are right this chapter was not funny, but it was REAL. Real people having real reactions to real situations. Most importantly, a family acting like a family should be with each other. CC was definitely disrespectful, but it was handled like humans handle things, imperfectly, but with great care. Excellent chapter it felt very real. It was very well written, very well executed. 

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Date: 05 Sep 2023 4:20 AM Title: Big Poppa

So cute! GREAT CHAPTER! I was born in Brooklyn, (live on East 54th street) but was moved away at the age of 4! :( unfortunately I don't think I have much Brooklyn left in me. Maybe just attitude.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2023 6:57 AM Title: That's Amore

I thought this chapter was GREAT! Plenty funny and enlightening in regards to EJ. Also I LOVED the Twilight Saga references. And I LOVE Debbie even for EJ. Seems he was hit with the Italian Lightening Bolt!(Colpo di fulmine) I hope he doesn't blow it!

Reviewer: CayStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2020 9:32 PM Title: Epilogue

I'm sorry I haven't reviewed anything yet but I absolutely adore this family!! I can't even say I love the story- because you gave us a huge, beautiful family. Thank you so much for sharing them with us!! 

Reviewer: CayStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2020 9:31 PM Title: Epilogue

I'm sorry I haven't reviewed anything yet but I absolutely adore this family!! I can't even say I love the story- because you gave us a huge, beautiful family. Thank you so much for sharing them with us!! 

Reviewer: mf061978 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2019 4:06 AM Title: Alex Outtake

I absolutely love all of your stories!

Reviewer: mf061978 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2019 4:06 AM Title: Alex Outtake

I absolutely love all of your stories!

Reviewer: mf061978 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2019 4:05 AM Title: Alex Outtake

I absolutely love all of your stories!

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Date: 10 Sep 2019 4:05 AM Title: Alex Outtake

I absolutely love all of your stories!

Reviewer: mlbf1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2019 4:40 PM Title: The Best Years

They are horrible parents. The example they set has come back to bite them in the ass. So willy nilly with their sons having casual sex. Surprised a pregnancy hasn't happened before now. At least Edward was pissed off at CC and Natalie. Bella was like, ok whatever, let Natalie move in and I'll babysit. They didn't do their sons any favors by being so foolish about their sexcapdes.  Why would CC and Natalie want a baby now when neither have graduated high school or can support themselves? Guess they figured stupid Bella would be there with open arms and open door to take care of them and not hold them responsible for anything.

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Date: 13 Jun 2019 2:42 PM Title: Alex Outtake

I KNOW I FOR ONE WOULD LOVE FOR YOU TO TELL US ALL ABOUT HOW THEY ARE GETTING ON NOW THAT THEY ARE ALL GROWN UP. I LOVE RE-READING THIS STORY. READ YOU SOON!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2019 6:44 AM Title: Epilogue

This story was the BEST!  I haven’t laughed this much in a long time.  Thank you!  I enjoyed every chapter.

Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2019 9:36 AM Title: Alex Outtake

I so wish there would be more!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2019 6:22 PM Title: Alex Outtake

I just reread The Story of Us and Instructions Not Included. I loved this family just as much as I did the first time!  I’ve got my fingers crossed that you’ll one day add the CC outtake and maybe more.  I hate to see their story end.  

I love all of your stories and go back to reread them periodically.  Thank you so much for not pulling them.  I hope you’ll decide to write again going forward.  If you have anything published I’d love to know about it.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2019 4:09 PM Title: Epilogue

You I just reread “The Story of Us”, and then “Instructions Not Included” and I love their story.  I know there is a couple of chapters after this one, but I hate to see it end!  I love this family so much!  

I have loved your stories for years and appreciate that you haven’t pulled them. I would be super excited if you were to write something new.  If you’ve published anything, I’d definitely be interested in reading it. 

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2018 2:31 PM Title: Choices

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2018 12:50 PM Title: That's Amore

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2018 11:41 AM Title: Party like a Rock star

Loved it!

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Date: 25 May 2018 12:57 PM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen

Loved it!

Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2017 4:52 PM Title: Alex Outtake

I remember reading this years ago and stumbled upon it again...Never have I laughed so hard reading a story. Would love it if you continued with the out takes.

Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2017 4:51 PM Title: Alex Outtake

I remember reading this years ago and stumbled upon it again...Never have I laughed so hard reading a story. Would love it if you continued with the out takes.

Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2017 4:50 PM Title: Alex Outtake

I remember reading this years ago and stumbled upon it again...Never have I laughed so hard reading a story. Would love it if you continued with the out takes.

Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2017 4:48 PM Title: Alex Outtake

I remember reading this years ago and stumbled upon it again...Never have I laughed so hard reading a story. Would love it if you continued with the out takes.

Reviewer: Alpha22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2017 12:18 AM Title: That's Amore

This is the nth time I'm reading this story and I've always liked Debbie for EJ. 

Reviewer: Alpha22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2017 12:17 AM Title: That's Amore

This is the nth time I'm reading this story and I've always liked Debbie for EJ. 

Reviewer: Alpha22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2017 12:17 AM Title: That's Amore

This is the nth time I'm reading this story and I've always liked Debbie for EJ. 

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Date: 12 Apr 2017 5:36 PM Title: Alex Outtake

Thank you!!!! This is one of my comfort stories I like to read every now and then.

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Date: 12 Apr 2017 5:35 PM Title: Alex Outtake

Thank you!!!! This is one of my comfort stories I like to read every now and then.

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Date: 12 Apr 2017 5:35 PM Title: Alex Outtake

Thank you!!!! This is one of my comfort stories I like to read every now and then.

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Date: 12 Apr 2017 5:34 PM Title: Alex Outtake

Thank you!!!! This is one of my comfort stories I like to read every now and then.

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Date: 12 Apr 2017 5:33 PM Title: Alex Outtake

Thank you!!!! This is one of my comfort stories I like to read every now and then.

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Date: 12 Apr 2017 5:33 PM Title: Alex Outtake

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Date: 12 Apr 2017 5:32 PM Title: Alex Outtake

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Date: 12 Apr 2017 5:31 PM Title: Alex Outtake

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Date: 12 Apr 2017 5:30 PM Title: Alex Outtake

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Date: 12 Apr 2017 5:30 PM Title: Alex Outtake

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Date: 12 Apr 2017 5:29 PM Title: Alex Outtake

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Date: 12 Apr 2017 5:28 PM Title: Alex Outtake

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Date: 12 Apr 2017 5:28 PM Title: Alex Outtake

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Date: 12 Apr 2017 5:27 PM Title: Alex Outtake

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Date: 12 Apr 2017 5:26 PM Title: Alex Outtake

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Date: 12 Apr 2017 5:26 PM Title: Alex Outtake

Thank you!!!! This is one of my comfort stories I like to read every now and then.

Reviewer: tululah Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2017 6:46 PM Title: Epilogue

Really love these stories. The Cullens are hilarious. This is my second time reading both fics. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Alpha22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 7:24 AM Title: Alex Outtake

Jake should die. Like, he was driving then his fake leg got stuck against the accelerator, hit a tree and died instantly. Lol. Kidding aside, I'm glad Alex is not that stupid to pursue Jake. I would love to read more about her love story with Dan. I love the Cullens in your story. I feel like I personally know them, like they're neighbors or family friends. Thank you for writing a feel good family story. 

Reviewer: Alpha22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2016 11:55 PM Title: Epilogue

The best!

Reviewer: gingerbells Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2016 4:54 PM Title: Epilogue

Sometimes I feel like fanfics have too much of a fairytale ending, you know? Like it becomes unrealistic. I really loved the epilogue. It wasn't perfect at all, but at the end of the day, most of them were happy and it showed just how close they are in that family. I loved that. It wasn't just about their love lives, it was about their family and the love they share. 

I've had my dissapointments throughout this story. But there will never be a story where I won't feel like that. All in all I thought it was great, obviously, or I wouldn't have read the whole thing :) So thank you for a great story, and I hope you keep writing!

Reviewer: gingerbells Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2016 10:47 PM Title: Gray Matter

Okay seriously this family has a way of ALWAYS blaming Edward for everything. He didn't let Bella help. So hey it's okay that Bella cheated on him. WTF! Edward shouldn't have hit her. No one can argue with that. But good god! She was wrong! I don't care if her intentions were good, that shit was fucked up. I could never agree with Carlisle. Kissing is still cheating. 

I get that she was doing what she thought was best. Did she not learn anything from this whole debacle? Things escalate when you lie or keeps things from your husband. That's what got them into this whole situation in the first place. She should have told Edward the truth about Randall from the beginning. She admitted that herself? Yet she made the same mistake again... I don't get it. But maybe that's just me. 

At the end of the day I'm not saying I don't understand where she is coming from. Because I would do absolutely ANYTHING for the people I love. Even something like this. But at the end of the day, she did it for herself, for her piece of mind. She knew that sleeping with Randall would hurt Edward a lot more than anything Randall could ever do to him. 

Carlisle was right about one thing though. Don't let Randall win. 

I loved their reunion. And I totally started bawling my eyes out when Bella did! :) So glad that she apologized. So sweet what she said about not being able to live without him!

I liked how EJ got to understand where Edward was coming from. Debbie turned into a real bitch... 

Michael is really my favorite character in this story. He's adorable and so funny!

Reviewer: gingerbells Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2016 9:33 PM Title: BIG girl panties

I thought Bella was horrable in this chapter. She should have talked to Edward as soon as Randall called her. How could she think that Edward would ever just be okay with it? She seemed so shocked when he walked out. What did she expect? He loves her, and no way would he ever be okay with her doing that, even if it kept him out of prison. And the way she treated Randall really pissed me off. So he's in love with her? Boo fucking hoo, not her goddamn problem. How could she feel sorry for him after what he did? 

I didn't like that Edward hit her, even though had I been him I would have done the same thing. And he did warn her to stay away. Doesn't make it okay to ever hit someone! But I do feel like she would have slapped him too, had the situation been reversed. 

I hope he doesn't forgive her too fast. She really doesn't deserve it.

Reviewer: gingerbells Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2016 3:15 AM Title: Unchained Melody

Glad Rosie stood up for Edward here. It was about time someone did. 

In this sequel I am really starting to dislike Alice, she seems so judgemental and has an opinion on everybody else's bussiness when really it seems like she's the one with the most problems... Glad Rose told her off. 

And the whole hitting EJ thing, I'm with Rose on this one. Bella shouldn't have such a double standard. It isn't justified just because EJ would hit back? WTF? Now I really don't believe in hitting your children at all. But I really hate double standards..

Really not liking the whole let's hit on a hot guy even though we are married, just to keep our husbands on their toes. I don't have a lot of respect for people who that. Glad B didn't agree. They really were being immature. They're adults not high schoolers. 

Glad they talked and worked things out. He shouldn't have put his hands on her and I think it was important they had that conversation. And Oh my god, I love it when he calls her turkey leg!! Thanks for not dragging it out.

Holy shit. ADULTS helped some kid beat up EJ. What the hell is wrong with some people. That's just fucked up! Poor little Michael had to see that. He was so adorable. I'm glad EJ talked to his parents finally. And so sweet how he let Michael sleep in his bed :) 

Michael has to be my favorite, he's just precious!

Reviewer: gingerbells Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2016 2:05 AM Title: Choices

I can't really get my head around how this happened? How did Bella blow things so out of proportion? This came out of nowhere for me and it kind of confused me. But at this point I guess Bella is just like that. I feel like she blows every fight they have out of proportion... I can't comprehend how she could act like he beat her. I mean fuck. I guess I just can't understand her behavior because I would never have reacted like that. Her insecurities are getting a little annoying at this point. 

I mean I am not saying that Edward wasn't wrong at all. Because sure he was. But he just wasn't alone in this. 

For me, she was the one who startet it with the whole baby thing. I guess maybe I think like a man. Because I often find myself sympathysing more with the males than the females, and I always feel like there is such a double standard from the women. 

And EJ should really stay out of it. 

 

Loved the explanation Edward gave Michael. That was seriously adorable!!! :)

Reviewer: mr-and-mrs-edwardcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2016 4:56 PM Title: Alex Outtake

I want a future take on the Cullen's like did ej have more kids and did cc marry Bethany and what happened with Natalie and did Alex ever find love and did Edwards dad die.  I also want a outtake on the day Bella and Alice meet Phils kids 

Reviewer: J_Bokan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2015 6:48 AM Title: Epilogue

Enjoyed this story! To be honest I'm disappointed with the pairings. I can't stand that EJ ended up with Cecilia and Al with Emily. I wished CC and Natalie stayed together, and Alex with AJ. So disappointed. Btw I don't mean to be rude.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2015 5:44 AM Title: love taps

I don't get why they can't be together - Age just isn't that big a deal - Both are adults, no one is a creepy ass perv, all is good.

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Date: 22 Jul 2015 4:49 AM Title: The Hills Have Thighs

Loved the chapter, the trailer has been pulled though.

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Date: 15 Jul 2015 4:15 AM Title: Holidaze part two

Glad they finally broke up, she wasn't good for him. And I love that Natalie is so comfortable with her breasts, truth is when they are huge everyone notices - just roll with it and be comfortable in your own skin.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2015 12:18 PM Title: At a loss

I can't even imagine the hell that would break loose if a physician/family member extubated a patient/family member - yikes (but I'm also thinking that he will probably have his ass very well covered), and it makes for a good story point. I hope these two find some common ground, my heart is breaking for them here.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 11:43 AM Title: Asshole

I hate cliffhangers, so much so that I only read completed Fics. That and I've gotten absorbed into too many characters only to see the story abandoned for one reason or another, and  I get we all have lives; but I obsess over it and find myslef wanting to complete the story in my own head. It's like that little unresolved thing hanging out there in fantasyland is driving me nuts. And yes, when I go into a room if the pictures on the wall are askew, I straighten then.

I love this story, I love the dynamic and the depth to which you have explred these charaters. I thought initally when I read that part II was going to revililve around the kids I thought - "I'm going to hate it, but oh well at least the first one was good". And now I am totally invested.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 4:05 AM Title: That's Amore

I like the little nod you gave to the original here in the interaction between EJ and Debbie. Nice. Alternating POV are fun when they dont rehash the same scenes and repeat the same dialogue, glad to see you using it to explore the characters.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2015 8:19 AM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen

I was so glad to see this wasn't over, I grown so attached to this family and I love the dynamic you have created.

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2015 3:52 PM Title: Romeo and Juliet

You did a great job on the dad and son talk. Very honest and real. Great writing.

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Date: 20 May 2015 5:09 AM Title: Back to basics

Some absolutly great, funny lines in this chapter.

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Date: 17 May 2015 8:53 PM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen

Great chapter.

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Date: 19 Apr 2015 6:22 PM Title: The Best Years

I love love love this story and have not been able to stop reading it since I found it in FanFiction. I would love to read more. I can't seem to get enough of these two and their family and friends.  Thank you so much for sharing this story and I only hope you did continue it in "Some Instructions" I am so excited;-)  Thank you again for sharing this FREAKINGFANTASTICAMAZING Story ;-)Narcy

Reviewer: crazydaisy Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 3:03 AM Title: That's Amore

I absolutely loved this chapter, EJ is sooo much like his father and I love that this Debbie seems like Bella and doesn't put up with anything.  She is playing him really good and I can't wait to read more on these two. Thank you for sharing this story  I have fallen in love with it and can't seem to stop reading, but I had to review this chapter.  YOU ROCK! Narcy ;-)

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2015 4:09 AM Title: Shut up and Drive part two

I think he's a huge manwhore, and if he was my son, I'd be embarrassed and pissed off! He treats woman horribly, and is a spoiled little bitch. Edward and Bella are enablers, and should restrict him and kick his ass! I wishes he would get an STD....maybe it would teach him something!

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Date: 10 Mar 2015 2:53 AM Title: Gray Matter

EJ may be a manwhore, but he's also very level-headed. Michael is a riot. Glad E&B have reconciled.

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Date: 08 Mar 2015 10:42 AM Title: At a loss

I could barely read this, as I was crying so hard! I hope this will start them healing.

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Date: 07 Mar 2015 3:57 AM Title: Kill Bill

I grew up with 3 brothers, so I know boys will be boys, but this is up to a whole new level! I still think that E & B need to step in and kick some ass. These two need some kind of help!!!

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Date: 07 Mar 2015 2:53 AM Title: Asshole

Often, it's not clashing personalities....it's that they're a lot alike. I was like that with my Mom as a teen, until I matured and realized that I like who she was, and who I was, too. Unfortunately, I lost her to leukemia when I was 27. Luckily, we were extremely close! I have wonderful memories.
I think that Edward and Bella have spoiled their children, and have been somewhat enabling. They don't seem to have to do much to earn their cars, money, etc. That's JMHO!
xoSus

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 9:09 AM Title: Unchained Melody

Wow....intense!

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Date: 03 Mar 2015 5:55 AM Title: Party like a Rock star

C.C. isn't a manwhore like EJ! He's a little weird, but honest and sweet!!!

Loved this chapter....and a drunk Bella, too!

xoxoSus

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Date: 02 Mar 2015 7:21 AM Title: A day in the life of Bella Cullen

Oh, yay! More of this story....looks like 46 chappies more? I'm glad you've carried this on...

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Date: 01 Feb 2015 6:15 PM Title: Alex Outtake

i LOVED this sequel!!! and i'm looking forward to reading more ;D

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Date: 29 Jan 2015 6:45 PM Title: Mr. LoverMan

i can't believe you left us hanging like that!!! i got so excited for a great lemon and then nadda!!!!! ;)

Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2014 11:01 AM Title: Choices

you know, i get what Edward did was wrong but so is Bella. not once, since this moment did he know that he hurt her. if he doesn't know then how can he correct his behavior. she says its done, but acts like he beat her. thats bullshit and she needs to grow up.

Reviewer: NY13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2014 3:40 PM Title: Alex Outtake

I love this story and 'The Story of Us'  They're one of my first Twi fanfics and just made me fall in love with your writing.  I always felt like this ended too soon or with a little more to go w/ this outtake and maybe just a bit more of my favorite E&B.  Hope you're doing well and enjoying life. 

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Date: 29 May 2014 2:21 AM Title: Big Poppa

Awwww I really want CC to have an Happy Ever After!!!

A Really Hot Lemon for CC as well......Loved Him!!!!

Hope for an outtake soon!!

 

S.

Reviewer: lucky4me13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 2:20 AM Title: Mr. LoverMan

Not to be mean but....how do you not know the difference between their, there, and they're? 

Reviewer: Spunkie09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 11:15 AM Title: Epilogue

I just re-read this story for about the 10th time.  This story is my favorite of all fan fiction stories and trust me, I have a lot!

I love how your write, I love the characters and their personalities.

I want so bad to be in this crazy family!!  I imagine myself right there with them in the house arguing or chasing kids.  LOL

I have a 13yr and 16yr old so I feel Edward and Bella's pain a little with raising them. LOL 

Whenever I need a good laugh all I have to do is read this story.   I just love it!

 

 

Reviewer: Elleg Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 2:16 PM Title: Alex Outtake

I just re-read this series and I still love it! Any chance you might write more outtakes? A girl can dream!

Reviewer: justreader Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2014 11:57 PM Title: BIG girl panties

 Hey, I don't want to be rude, but the further i get the more dramatic this story is getting. What happened to the happy times? And seriously... hitting? That's not cool at all. Rough sex i get, but hitting... I'm not sure if I'm going to continue reading this story, although it was really good... I don't do well with angst, nothing personal. Sory

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 7:49 PM Title: Kill Bill

So what is CC problem? Those boys need to keep it in their pants.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2013 3:38 AM Title: That's Amore

Debbies the one keep on writing

Reviewer: Passion422 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2013 5:06 AM Title: Epilogue

I just loved this whole story! Couldn't get enough of it and am sad it's come to an end. I fell in love with all the characters and this family. You did a wi fearful job bringing them all to life! I wish it could continue on ...I would read it all! Thank you!

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