Date: 29 Aug 2015 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Bedroom Confessions
I've had your story on my favorite list for a while now to hold my place, but I've just gotten a chance to read it. It was sexy, funny, and sentimental. Another home run from you.
Thank you for always being a sure bet! (Yes, my husband is playing the horses today because American Pharoah is in the Travers Stakes - and guess who is being left to her own devices?) Haha. See you next time.
Date: 17 Jan 2015 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Bedroom Confessions
i loved this story!!!!! ;) please can you add some more D/s time ;x btw in chapter 1 the e-mail from bella to edward said his name was masen? and can you put them at a play party? as you can tell i really hope you can add to this story although you've pressed complete ;D
Date: 07 Sep 2014 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Bedroom Confessions
She is going to keep him happy for years and years lol. I think Edward is going to have nightmares about his parents for years lol. I want more of these two when are they getting married and kids.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 8:09 PM Title: Enlisting of a Rose
WELL, WELL, WELL, IMAGINE HOW EDWARD IS PURE ECSTASY a submissive, LOLLLLL.
ALWAYS FOUND IN THE BOOKS THAT MS BELLA WAS A WOMAN TOO STRONG AND DETERMINED.
CONGRATULATIONS FOR IDEAS, CONTEXT, WRITTEN.
AM I enjoyed myself.
Date: 04 Sep 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 2: Hot Under The Collar
Edward is happy with this arrangement. He wants to give it all the time and energy he can. So he has to speed up work and move it around in order to be on time.
Bella pushed him, she is pushing him plenty and fast. He is enjoying it, a lot.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 2:24 AM Title: With Flying Colors
Hmm... this story (or chapter, if you decide to continue it) was entertaining, I like Edward being submissive with Bella. If I could "complain" about something is that it was too short, I would have loved for Bella to really, really get into a scene with him, because she barely tested his restraint in this part of the story. Even so, it was pretty sexy, so I can't really complain about anything. ^_^
I think what you wrote can be the beginning of a very interesting story, I would love to read more about this characters, their backgrounds, family/friends, their goals and why they want a dom/sub relationship; for example, it would be interesting to read Bella's impressions about Edward, and how long she has been a Domme; likewise, I would love to see the contrast about the 'everyday-working' Edward in opposition to submissive Edward, he mentioned having too much control in his life, so what exactly was he referring to?... So many interesting possibilities in this story, that if you decide to continue it after you finish Shadow of the Day, I'm up for it!
Good one-shot/first chapter! (hopefully not the last)