Date: 10 Sep 2020 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Date: 05 Apr 2016 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
So obvious that Jacob out a 4 on bella!
Date: 23 Apr 2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 32
awwww......Dont leave us hanging!
Date: 14 Feb 2013 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved this story. Hope you update soon. Need to know what happens.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 32
Loved it
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 32
this story is awome!!! update soon cant wait to read more
Date: 01 Mar 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 32
Bella needs to realize a lot of men freak out about having the first baby. Maybe not as much as Edward did in this story, but it is common. It is the ultimate sign that you have to grow up and be an adult. They also had not been talking about children, so he wasn't prepared at all. It is in most women's nature to be a parent. We can turn on the mom gene very easy. It takes a little longer in men. They have to see a heartbeat or feel the baby move. Some sign that the baby is real is what it takes to turn on the parent gene. I see it often in my ultrasound career.
Author's Response:
What you just said was totally what I was feeling when I wrote the last two chaps. ;D
Date: 08 Feb 2012 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 32
II can't ay enough about this story! It's marvelous - rich and intense with characters that are well thought out and multi- faceted. A true gift to your readers. Thank you. I discovered it at 32 chapters and read straight through. ( recharging my IPad along the way.). I'm looking forward to your next update! Again, thank you for a great read!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the compliment. I'm glad you liked the story. =) *hugs*
Date: 08 Feb 2012 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 32
Thank goodness Bella and Edward are working things out and the baby is still alive.
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 08 Feb 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 32
Oh good! The baby was safe. I half expected Emmett to beat him up. Glad Rose interfered. :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks, bb. =)
Date: 08 Feb 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 32
Loved it.
Author's Response:
Thanks. =)
Date: 08 Feb 2012 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 32
i am so glad his head is out of his ass! great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks. ;)
Date: 07 Feb 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 32
oh boy you had me going there. i think if she lost it she would never take him back.... thanks for the update. can't wait to see what happened.
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 07 Feb 2012 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 32
Thank goodnes the baby is fine! and that Edward is really wanting the baby now..
Author's Response:
Thanks. =)
Date: 07 Feb 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 32
go rosie. Well ya know they had to make up sometime. lol
Author's Response:
Thanks. ;)
Date: 07 Feb 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 32
Rose is a good person and the best best friend Bella could ask for she knows what Bella needs and that is Edward. I am so happy the baby is still ok and Edward gets the conection now.
Author's Response:
Yes, Rose has a good heart...and she knows Bella needs Edward.
Anyway, thanks. ;)
Date: 07 Feb 2012 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 32
Another great chapter, cant wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you. ;D
Date: 07 Feb 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 32
Did anyone think or guess it would be Rosalie who would help Edward? We knew she has an amazing though selective heart, now Edward knows it too. He ows her much more than a Ferrarri, he knows and will never forget.
The fear Edward saw first and then felt was necessary for him to realize that although it's scary to vring a baby into the world it's also the greatest prove of love there can be. Once Bella saw it in Mase's face she let go of the bitterness.
Look out here comes overprotective Edward!!!
Author's Response:
Lol. Totally right - brace yourself for overprotective Edward! =D
Thanks!
Date: 07 Feb 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 32
God, I think my heart just about stopped. I knew if she lost the baby her and Edward would be over. She would have blamed him due to the stress. Maybe its twins!! Im gonna be sooo sad when this is over, I love this story, I love Mobward!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. =D
Date: 07 Feb 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 32
Been there, (pregnancy and hospital) done that and it is terrifing...same outcome and he was born healthy and strong.
Author's Response:
Glad to hear you and the baby are fine now. Thanks for reading. ;)
Date: 07 Feb 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 32
Awww, gotta love this chapter, Edward finally realizing that he wants the baby. But not just because Bella wants it, but because it's part of him as well sweet.
Author's Response:
Thanks! =)
Date: 07 Feb 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 32
I love it...yay!!! They can be a wonderful happy, crazy family...
Author's Response:
Thanks! =)
Date: 05 Feb 2012 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 31
I started this story today, i love it and cant wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you. ;)
Date: 05 Feb 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 31
ok i love that she is making him work for it. for his reaction and then lack of contact for so long, this strong bella can bring him to his knees. happy thoughts :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks. ;)
Date: 04 Feb 2012 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 31
Major grovelling. Flowers, chocolates, and some foot massage might get her to forgive him. ;-)
Author's Response:
Totally agree with you there. ;D
Date: 04 Feb 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 31
I think she needs to kick his ass then maybe she should think about letting him kiss her ass. He would loss control if she filed for divorce not that she should but that would make him think twice about running his mouth.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that'll be a good idea. hehehe
Date: 04 Feb 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 31
Yeah I'm ready to have him forgiven or at least yelled at, so they would at least be talking.
Author's Response:
Yes, they'll have their talk next chap. Thanks.
Date: 04 Feb 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 31
This is hilarious! Edward is truly paying a penance for his bad behavior! I wonder how much longer Bella will punish him?
Author's Response:
We'll see. They'll have their talk next chap and they'll sort things out their way.
Date: 03 Feb 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 31
i'm sorry but she shouldnt forgive him. I have reread the first few chapters of this story and i'm still not happy with the fact that she forgave him NY so easily. She is a swan for god sake she should put a bullet in between the eyes of vicky for her part in ny and for her disrespect when they met again and him aaargh the way he said he fucked others while thinking of her is just sick and than saying it to her as if it is a good thing.Also he was allowed others but he demanded to know if he was the only one talking about double standards. And she is the daughter of a mob boss not a pathetic little girl, but not once did I recognisez a mob boss daughter in her actions the first chapters where is her dignity. I would have liked if she fought him harder and stood more up for herself. So I really hope she does it now. So Go Bella Go
Author's Response:
Yeah, sometimes even the toughest girl will bend and forgive without batting an eyelash when it comes to love. I can totally understand your stand for her not to forgive him, though.
Maybe she'll do just that. hehehe
Date: 03 Feb 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 31
Nope, he needs to suffer and wallow a bit more. He went too far this time, not only with what he did, but then just leaving... That was wrong. He then got some really bad luck, true, but still. It's not the first time he has hurt her really bad. He is aware of his temper as he said, but he has to learn.
Bella will forgive him but he needs to sweat it out a bit more. Maybe Vicky could be the one to help Bella. It would be interesting to see them join forces, that would really make Edward tremble.
Author's Response:
That's a good idea...Bella and Vicky. hmmm. *grins*
Date: 03 Feb 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 31
oh boy.. poor bella i don't feel sorry for you cullen!! can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 03 Feb 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 31
an: hell no. Fucktard deserves a long stint in the doghouse. But Bella does need to eat and see a doctor again if she hasnt already. hmm Surprised Alice and/or Jasper hasnt tried to go see her?
Author's Response:
Of course Bella is moping, but don't worry they will have their talk next chapter. Let's see what happens.
Thanks.
Date: 03 Feb 2012 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 31
I think Bella needs to make him sweat it out!!! He needs to be grateful that she is carrying his child...even if it was unexpected...it is still a gift...
Author's Response:
Thanks! =)
Date: 30 Jan 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 30
I think it is more that it was another weakness he had. It was another way someone could hurt him. This is the reason he didn't want a baby at this time. His world was not stable.
Author's Response:
You got that right...down to a T.
Date: 24 Jan 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
update soon please
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 22 Jan 2012 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 30
The story needs one or two chapters before the epi.
Edward is angry,mhe didn't want a bay but his reaction was a bit too much and one which I guess he will regret. Bella will have to make tough choices now. Choices that might not include Edward.
Author's Response:
Yes, he should have stepped back a little and let his anger fizzle before he reacted. Let's see him grovel for her forgiveness.
Thanks. ;)
Date: 22 Jan 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 30
wow he left though. jackass
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! ;)
Date: 19 Jan 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 30
Love the chapter. Poor Bella I know Edward didnt want kids, but to get that angry about it he was an ass. He was acting like it was all her fault he should know that it takes two people to make a baby and birth control is not 100%. Bella needs to stay stong she dont need him.
Author's Response:
Yes, he can be an ass sometimes...even to Bella. Let's see him grovel when he realized what he did.
Thanks!
Date: 18 Jan 2012 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 30
I can tell that Edward's freaking out. I believe that the baby would be a welcomed surprise once it finally made it to them.
Author's Response:
Yes, once he'll get over his anger...he'll go to ask for forgiveness. Bella won't make it easy...but this story has a HEA...so you can bascially see where I'm going with this. hehehe
Thanks, girl! =)
Date: 18 Jan 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 30
Jesus, he is a freaking asshole. Me being Bella, would've pounced on him right there and smack the shit out of him. I can't believe there's only one regular chapter. Hope to see you soon
Author's Response:
Yes, I'll try to not disappoint. ;)
Thanks!
Date: 18 Jan 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 30
Yes I want another chapter one where he begs her forgivens for being such a dick head. Did he forget he was part of the baby making. Is she going to go back with Rose and Emmett??? Cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Another chapter it is then. Thanks!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 30
I knew she would end up pregnant! With the way they go at it, it would only be a matter of time. Can't believe what an ass Edward is about the whole pregnancy. Looking forward the next posting!
Author's Response:
Yes, it was inevitable for her to become pregnant.
Thanks!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 30
glad she Is helpIng rose. poor aro...NOT. wow, eddie is an arse
Author's Response:
Yes, Edward can be an ass...sometimes even to Bella (just like in this chap.) Make no mistake Bella will make him grovel once he get over his anger.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 30
I like it, but please update soon.
Author's Response:
Yes, I will. Thanks!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 30
He better damn well get passed this.. because Bella didn't do this on her own! Edward loves Bella.. he just needs to have some kick his ass for him to see the good in this situation...
Author's Response:
Yes, he will soon realize what he did...and he will grovel for her forgiveness.
Thanks!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 30
Yes, the answer to the question more chapters is always yes. He said no kids but he's really good with them.
Author's Response:
Yeah, he'd realize soon he fucked up...but the problem is, Bella will make him grovel for what he did.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 30
oh boy had to have some drama before the end.. you are a dumb man ed!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, something to keep it interesting. hehehe
Date: 17 Jan 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 30
hope she leaves him what an arse! great story but i really thought that he loved her but he has a funny way of showing it!
Author's Response:
Edward can be an ass, even to B. Don't worry, Bella will make him grovel once he realized what he did.
Thanks!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 30
Come on Edward, don't do this. He's gonna mess up and Bella's gonna leave. He better come around soon. Will Bella go back to Seattle to her brother or wait around there for Edward. I think she should leave and let him come to her. Is his anger cause he is scared for Bella's safety or cause hes not ready to share her??
Author's Response:
It's a little of everything. Bella will make hime grovel once he realized what he did.
Thanks!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 30
Please post another chapter!There is so much going on right now...the baby, Emmett and Rose, the trial. A sequel would be really nice! ;) Update soon.
Author's Response:
Yes, there will be another chapter before the epi. Thanks!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 30
Hell yeah, clear this mess up befor you end it please?
Author's Response:
Of course, I will.
Date: 15 Jan 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 29
Thanks for writing.
I gdont think it's a good idea to go but I hope she doesn't go against Edward.
Author's Response:
Thanks again, bb. ;)
Date: 14 Jan 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 28
Yes I liked it. I'm dieing to know what the third thing is & am realllly worried about Bella's safety. F'ing James seems kinda scary mean. Aro too. Great chapter.
Thanks for the update & hope you can write more soon, missed reading this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks. =)
Date: 06 Jan 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 29
I am glad Bella finally realized why Edward was worried about her. She needs to be smarter about her actions.
Author's Response:
Thanks! =)
Date: 04 Jan 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
I won't say Im not disappointed that there wont be a sequel, but it is just because I love the story and its soooo good!! You really did a great job and you should be very proud!! I will be looking for more of your work!!! HAVE A GREAT AND PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR!!!
Author's Response:
I'm honored to know you would read my other stories. Thank you. ;) Happy 2012 to you, too. =D
Date: 03 Jan 2012 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 29
He better not give her shit about this. He can set up adequate security as well as go with her himself.
Author's Response:
E might surprise you. hehehe
Date: 03 Jan 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 29
I love this story, PLEASE PLEASE Consider a sequel. So much can be discussed. Their marriage, thru the years, kids, life in the mafia, Rose and Em, do they have kids...Im whining, I know, Im just spoiled and wanting more!!!
Author's Response:
gosh, I'm so blushing right now. Thank you so much for reading this story. I'm so happy you love it...but as of now, there won't be a sequel. I'll rethink about it in a few months, perhaps. Sorry to disappoint you.
Thank you for all the love you sent this story. I appreciate it. Mwahz! =D
Date: 03 Jan 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 29
I miss Rosalie and Emmett. Happy New Year! How are you? Still need to adjust my body clock from staying up late for the new year.
Author's Response:
I'm fine sweets! I missed you. ;) hehehe tweet me if you're not that busy.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 29
Aro is a creepy bastard and Edward should be worried about Bella. Is she going to get away with out him or with out him being so pissed when she sneeks off????
Author's Response:
Bella is asking permission to go to Seattle. Whether she goes if E says no is yet to be seen, but at least its a change from before - just doing her thing without thinking of her husband.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 29
Happy new year. how will you resolve the Aro danger in one more chapter? Great update by the way.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'm trying to do just that. hehehe let's see if I suceed. hehehe
Thanks! ;D
Date: 02 Jan 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 29
poor rosie. Glad B is looking out for her and not letting Edward keep her in the dark. he acts like she doesnt know who she married
Author's Response:
Thanks! =D
Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 29
Both Bella and Edward know the risks of theirl ives, but still there some that can be more shocking. This is one of them. They worry about each other, knowing that Aro's veiled threat is set on hurting deeply. If either one is hurt it will cause the other pain. Aro is smart and knew how to rattle Edward. And now that Bella is determined to go to Seattle... I wonder if Aro is having her followed.
Author's Response:
A threat is always a threat. They should be ready at all times...they should be ready for Aro.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 29
Thanks for the update. Happy new year to you too!
Author's Response:
Thanks! =)
Date: 02 Jan 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 29
Of course, Edward will have a coronary when Bella tells him she is flying to Seattle!
Author's Response:
Yes that might actually happen. lol
Date: 30 Dec 2011 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 28
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the reviews sweets! ;)
Date: 30 Dec 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 23
Jacob is probably the one threatening him.
Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
I read the first chapter here at TWCS but something over there messed up when I tried to review. So I read up to 21 at FF. Im gonna leave quick reviews & finish reading now. By the way, I love it so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and taking time to review. =D
Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
:)
Author's Response:
=D
Date: 29 Dec 2011 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 28
a very omnious meeting. Can't wait to see how you write the next few chapters. This James and Aro are very scary!
Author's Response:
Thank you. ;)
Date: 29 Dec 2011 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 28
Aro is a creep I hope Bella is where she is to be. I think Aro needs to die.
Author's Response:
Aro is one sneaky bastard. That's why E is wary of him.
Date: 29 Dec 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 28
WTF?! Should Edward have eyes at the back of his head to watch Aro? Aro seems like a snake to me.
Author's Response:
Hey girl, I missed you. How was your Christmas? Hope it was fantastic! =D