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Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2020 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2017 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2017 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2017 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2017 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: kopec82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 10

So obvious that Jacob out a 4 on bella! 

Reviewer: anbond41 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 32

awwww......Dont leave us hanging!

Reviewer: karemay Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2013 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved this story. Hope you update soon. Need to know what happens.

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 32

Loved it

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

loved it!

Reviewer: Teeam_Emeett_4_Lifee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 32

this story is awome!!! update soon cant wait to read more

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 32

Bella needs to realize a lot of men freak out about having the first baby. Maybe not as much as Edward did in this story, but it is common. It is the ultimate sign that you have to grow up and be an adult. They also had not been talking about children, so he wasn't prepared at all. It is in most women's nature to be a parent. We can turn on the mom gene very easy. It takes a little longer in men. They have to see a heartbeat or feel the baby move. Some sign that the baby is real is what it takes to turn on the parent gene. I see it often  in my ultrasound career.



Author's Response:

What you just said was totally what I was feeling when I wrote the last two chaps. ;D 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 32

II can't ay enough about this story!  It's marvelous - rich and intense with characters that are well thought out and multi- faceted.  A true gift to your readers.  Thank you.  I discovered it at 32 chapters and read straight through. ( recharging my IPad along the way.).  I'm looking forward to your next update!  Again, thank you for a great read!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the compliment. I'm glad you liked the story. =) *hugs*

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 32

Thank goodness Bella and Edward are working things out and the baby is still alive.

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Thank you. =)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 32

Oh good!  The baby was safe.  I half expected Emmett to beat him up.  Glad Rose interfered. :-)



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Thanks, bb. =)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 32

 Loved it.



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Thanks. =)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 32

i am so glad his head is out of his ass!  great chapter



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Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 32

oh boy you had me going there.  i think if she lost it she would never take him back.... thanks for the update.  can't wait to see what happened.



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 32

Thank goodnes the baby is fine! and that Edward is really wanting the baby now..

Author's Response:

Thanks. =)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 32

go rosie.   Well ya know they had to make up sometime.  lol



Author's Response:

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 32

Rose is a good person and the best best friend Bella could ask for she knows what Bella needs and that is Edward.  I am so happy the baby is still ok and Edward gets the conection now.



Author's Response:

Yes, Rose has a good heart...and she knows Bella needs Edward.

Anyway, thanks. ;)

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 32

Another great chapter, cant wait to read  more.



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Thank you. ;D

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 32

Did anyone think or guess it would be Rosalie who would help Edward? We knew she has an amazing though selective heart, now Edward knows it too. He ows her much more than a Ferrarri, he knows and will never forget.
The fear Edward saw first and then felt was necessary for him to realize that although it's scary to vring a baby into the world it's also the greatest prove of love there can be. Once Bella saw it in Mase's face she let go of the bitterness.
Look out here comes overprotective Edward!!!

Author's Response:

Lol. Totally right - brace yourself for overprotective Edward! =D

Thanks!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 32

God, I think my heart just about stopped.  I knew if she lost the baby her and Edward would be over.  She would have blamed him due to the stress.  Maybe its twins!! Im gonna be sooo sad when this is over, I love this story, I love Mobward!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. =D

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 32

Been there, (pregnancy and hospital) done that and it is terrifing...same outcome and he was born healthy and strong.



Author's Response:

Glad to hear you and the baby are fine now. Thanks for reading. ;)

Reviewer: anita blake Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 32

Awww, gotta love this chapter, Edward finally realizing that he wants the baby. But not just because Bella wants it, but because it's part of him as well sweet.



Author's Response:

Thanks! =)

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 32

I love it...yay!!!  They can be a wonderful happy, crazy family...



Author's Response:

Thanks! =)

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2012 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 31

I started this story today, i love it and cant wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you. ;)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 31

ok i love that she is making him work for it.  for his reaction and then lack of contact for so long, this strong bella can bring him to his knees.  happy thoughts :-)



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Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2012 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 31

Major grovelling.  Flowers, chocolates, and some foot massage might get her to forgive him. ;-)



Author's Response:

Totally agree with you there. ;D

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 31

I think she needs to kick his ass then maybe she should think about letting him kiss her ass.  He would loss control if she filed for divorce not that she should but that would make him think twice about running his mouth.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that'll be a good idea. hehehe

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 31

Yeah I'm ready to have him forgiven or at least yelled at, so they would at least be talking.



Author's Response:

Yes, they'll have their talk next chap. Thanks.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 31

This is hilarious! Edward is truly paying a penance for his bad behavior! I wonder how much longer Bella will punish him?

Author's Response:

We'll see. They'll have their talk next chap and they'll sort things out their way. 

Reviewer: mariskaatje Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 31

i'm sorry but she shouldnt forgive him. I have reread the first few chapters of this story and i'm still not happy with the fact that she forgave him NY so easily. She is a swan for god sake she should put a bullet in between the eyes of vicky for her part in ny and for her disrespect when they met again and him aaargh the way he said he fucked others while thinking of her is just sick and than saying it to her as if it is a good thing.Also he was allowed others but he demanded to know if he was the only one talking about double standards. And she is the daughter of a mob boss not a pathetic little girl, but not once did I recognisez a mob boss daughter in her actions the first chapters where is her dignity. I would have liked if she fought him harder and stood more up for herself. So I really hope she does it now. So Go Bella Go

Author's Response:

Yeah, sometimes even the toughest girl will bend and forgive without batting an eyelash when it comes to love. I can totally understand your stand for her not to forgive him, though.

Maybe she'll do just that. hehehe

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 31

Nope, he needs to suffer and wallow a bit more. He went too far this time, not only with what he did, but then just leaving... That was wrong. He then got some really bad luck, true, but still. It's not the first time he has hurt her really bad. He is aware of his temper as he said, but he has to learn.
Bella will forgive him but he needs to sweat it out a bit more. Maybe Vicky could be the one to help Bella. It would be interesting to see them join forces, that would really make Edward tremble.

Author's Response:

That's a good idea...Bella and Vicky. hmmm. *grins*

 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 31

oh boy.. poor bella i don't feel sorry for you cullen!! can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 31

an:  hell no.  Fucktard deserves a long stint in the doghouse.  But Bella does need to eat and see a doctor again if she hasnt already.   hmm  Surprised Alice and/or Jasper hasnt tried to go see her?  



Author's Response:

Of course Bella is moping, but don't worry they will have their talk next chapter. Let's see what happens. 

Thanks.

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2012 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 31

I think Bella needs to make him sweat it out!!!  He needs to be grateful that she is carrying his child...even if it was unexpected...it is still a gift...



Author's Response:

Thanks! =)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 30

I think it is more that it was another weakness he had. It was another way someone could hurt him. This is the reason he didn't want a baby at this time. His world was not stable.

Author's Response:

You got that right...down to a T. 

Reviewer: twilightlover19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 30

update soon please



Author's Response:

Thank you. 

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2012 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 30

The story needs one or two chapters before the epi.
Edward is angry,mhe didn't want a bay but his reaction was a bit too much and one which I guess he will regret. Bella will have to make tough choices now. Choices that might not include Edward.

Author's Response:

Yes, he should have stepped back a little and let his anger fizzle before he reacted. Let's see him grovel for her forgiveness.

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 30

wow  he left though.  jackass



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! ;)

Reviewer: amanda29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 30

Love the chapter. Poor Bella I know Edward didnt want kids, but to get that angry about it he was an ass. He was acting like it was all her fault he should know that it takes two people to make a baby and birth control is not 100%.  Bella needs to stay stong she dont need him.



Author's Response:

Yes, he can be an ass sometimes...even to Bella. Let's see him grovel when he realized what he did.

Thanks!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2012 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 30

I can tell that Edward's freaking out.  I believe that the baby would be a welcomed surprise once it finally made it to them.



Author's Response:

Yes, once he'll get over his anger...he'll go to ask for forgiveness. Bella won't make it easy...but this story has a HEA...so you can bascially see where I'm going with this. hehehe

Thanks, girl! =)

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 30

Jesus, he is a freaking asshole. Me being Bella, would've pounced on him right there and smack the shit out of him. I can't believe there's only one regular chapter.  Hope to see you soon



Author's Response:

Yes, I'll try to not disappoint. ;)

Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 30

Yes I want another chapter one where he begs her forgivens for being such a dick head.  Did he forget he was part of the baby making.  Is she going to go back with Rose and Emmett???  Cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Another chapter it is then. Thanks! 

Reviewer: turquoise1581 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 30

I knew she would end up pregnant! With the way they go at it, it would only be a matter of time. Can't believe what an ass Edward is about the whole pregnancy. Looking forward the next posting!

Author's Response:

Yes, it was inevitable for her to become pregnant. 

Thanks!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 30

glad she Is helpIng rose.  poor aro...NOT.   wow, eddie is an arse



Author's Response:

Yes, Edward can be an ass...sometimes even to Bella (just like in this chap.) Make no mistake Bella will make him grovel once he get over his anger.

Reviewer: SimonsOwner Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 30

 I like it, but please update soon.



Author's Response:

Yes, I will. Thanks!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 30

He better damn well get passed this.. because Bella didn't do this on her own!  Edward loves Bella.. he just needs to have some kick his ass for him to see the good in this situation...



Author's Response:

Yes, he will soon realize what he did...and he will grovel for her forgiveness. 

Thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 30

Yes, the answer to the question more chapters is always yes. He said no kids but he's really good with them.



Author's Response:

Yeah, he'd realize soon he fucked up...but the problem is, Bella will make him grovel for what he did. 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2012 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 30

oh boy had to have some drama before the end.. you are a dumb man ed!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, something to keep it interesting. hehehe

Reviewer: kayjacut Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 30

hope she leaves him what an arse! great story but i really thought that he loved her but he has a funny way of showing it!



Author's Response:

Edward can be an ass, even to B. Don't worry, Bella will make him grovel once he realized what he did.

Thanks!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 30

Come on Edward, don't do this.  He's gonna mess up and Bella's gonna leave.  He better come around soon. Will Bella go back to Seattle to her brother or wait around there for Edward.  I think she should leave and let him come to her.   Is his anger cause he is scared for Bella's safety or cause hes not ready to share her??



Author's Response:

It's a little of everything. Bella will make hime grovel once he realized what he did.

Thanks!

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2012 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 30

Please post another chapter!There is so much going on right now...the baby, Emmett and Rose, the trial. A sequel would be really nice! ;) Update soon.

Author's Response:

Yes, there will be another chapter before the epi. Thanks!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 30

Hell yeah, clear this mess up befor you end it please?

Author's Response:

Of course, I will. 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 29

Thanks for writing.

I gdont think it's a good idea to go but I hope she doesn't go against Edward.



Author's Response:

Thanks again, bb. ;)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 28

Yes I liked it. I'm dieing to know what the third thing is & am realllly worried about Bella's safety. F'ing James seems kinda scary mean. Aro too. Great chapter.

Thanks for the update & hope you can write more soon, missed reading this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks. =)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 29

I am glad Bella finally realized why Edward was worried about her. She needs to be smarter about her actions.

Author's Response:

Thanks! =)

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

I won't say Im not disappointed that there wont be a sequel, but it is just because I love the story and its soooo  good!!  You really did a great job and you should be very proud!!  I will be looking for more of your work!!!  HAVE A GREAT AND PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR!!!



Author's Response:

I'm honored to know you would read my other stories. Thank you. ;) Happy 2012 to you, too. =D

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 29

He better not give her shit about this. He can set up adequate security as well as go with her himself.

Author's Response:

E might surprise you. hehehe

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 29

I love this story,  PLEASE    PLEASE   Consider a sequel.  So much can be discussed.  Their marriage, thru the years, kids, life in the mafia,  Rose and Em, do they have kids...Im whining, I know, Im just spoiled and wanting more!!!



Author's Response:

gosh, I'm so blushing right now. Thank you so much for reading this story. I'm so happy you love it...but as of now, there won't be a sequel. I'll rethink about it in a few months, perhaps. Sorry to disappoint you. 

Thank you for all the love you sent this story. I appreciate it. Mwahz! =D

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 29

I miss Rosalie and Emmett.  Happy New Year!  How are you?  Still need to adjust my body clock from staying up late for the new year.



Author's Response:

I'm fine sweets! I missed you. ;) hehehe tweet me if you're not that busy.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 29

Aro is a creepy bastard and Edward should be worried about Bella.  Is she going to get away with out him or with out him being so pissed when she sneeks off????



Author's Response:

Bella is asking permission to go to Seattle. Whether she goes if E says no is yet to be seen, but at least its a change from before - just doing her thing without thinking of her husband.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 29

Happy new year.  how will you resolve the Aro danger in one more chapter?  Great update by the way.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm trying to do just that. hehehe let's see if I suceed. hehehe

Thanks! ;D

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 29

poor rosie.   Glad B is looking out for her and not letting Edward keep her in the dark.  he acts like she doesnt know who she married



Author's Response:

Thanks! =D

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 29

Both Bella and Edward know the risks of theirl ives, but still there some that can be more shocking. This is one of them. They worry about each other, knowing that Aro's veiled threat is set on hurting deeply. If either one is hurt it will cause the other pain. Aro is smart and knew how to rattle Edward. And now that Bella is determined to go to Seattle... I wonder if Aro is having her followed.



Author's Response:

A threat is always a threat. They should be ready at all times...they should be ready for Aro.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 29

Thanks for the update.  Happy new year to you too!



Author's Response:

Thanks! =)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 29

Of course, Edward will have a coronary when Bella tells him she is flying to Seattle!

Author's Response:

Yes that might actually happen. lol

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2011 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 28

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Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews sweets! ;)

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 27

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 26

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 25

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 24

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 23

Jacob is probably the one threatening him.

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 22

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 21

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 20

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 19

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 18

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 9

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 2

I read the first chapter here at TWCS but something over there messed up when I tried to review. So I read up to 21 at FF. Im gonna leave quick reviews & finish reading now. By the way, I love it so far.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and taking time to review. =D

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

:)

Author's Response:

=D

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2011 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 28

a very omnious meeting.  Can't wait to see how you write the next few chapters.  This James and Aro are very scary!



Author's Response:

Thank you. ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2011 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 28

Aro is a creep I hope Bella is where she is to be.  I think Aro needs to die.



Author's Response:

Aro is one sneaky bastard. That's why E is wary of him. 

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 28

WTF?!  Should Edward have eyes at the back of his head to watch Aro?  Aro seems like a snake to me. 



Author's Response:

Hey girl, I missed you. How was your Christmas? Hope it was fantastic! =D

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