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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 9

I see this never has been finished, so I'm extra glad you did finish the first Dreaming of Edward! It was a great little story and I really liked reading it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 8

Good old block-headed Jake! Always with the wrong information and attitude!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 7

It about broke Edward's cold dead heart to think Bella might abort his child. Silly boy, she would never kill a part of the love of her life!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 6

Poor boy, he still doesn't realize that Bella has this condition Carlisle hasn't yet diagnosed, sexsomnia!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 5

Silly girl, you know we all love Edward because he's possessive and protective!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 4

I guess he's so caught up in the throes of his first mad love affair, he doesn't notice anything odd about Bella's sleep habits! She, on the other hand, still thinks it's all a dream!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

Of course we didn't think that! We always knew Edward loved Bella right from the start, that's why he couldn't kill her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 2

We who have read Bella's story already know he says the words, and so does she! For a smart vampire he's clueless about Bella doing all this in her sleep!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love the added background , from Edward's point of view!

Reviewer: shorty1773 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it! Hope you can add more to this other side of the story!

Reviewer: Bookjunkie2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2011 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 5

OH!!!I sure love a possessive and protective Edward!!<3 <3

Reviewer: Bookjunkie2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2011 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 3

I really like your stories and these outakes.Especially Edward's Bella's panties collection->.<

I think you're real good at writing.....so keep it up...?

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 9

really love your story.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 9

Like all the different POV's

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 8

Stupid Jake.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 6

Super wow!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

I can't believe he doesn't know she's sleeping.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

So much for the Victorian. Love this.

Reviewer: Melibne Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 9

These outakes are really good, its nice to see it all from Edward Pov I really love it.. I of course love the smut.. I hope you write more in the outakes..

Mia/Meli

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thanks for the update- I love this story & am a big fan of your writing! I've been enjoying all of your stories! Thanks again! :)

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 9

that was awesome

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 8

great chapter

Reviewer: beng26 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 9

A CLIFFIE! i'm already on pins & needles for what happens next...

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 7

great chapter but curious on how you update this story and you should only be working on be my sub i think we may need chains

Author's Response:

I needed that giggle thank you. the reason i can update it is because the beat has tons of chapters thnat she is filtering to me slowly. no worries! sub gets top billing. Thanks for all your reviews they made my day. michele / Nails233

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 7

Iam glad you are back .I was missing this story /pov which ever you want to call it lol I loved it Oh to be a fly on that wall

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 6

do always love Edwards pov he so naughty

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 6

Iloved it this is so good .I have read be my sub and i i love it you just blow me away with your work .i will have to check out the other stories  too now great job



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading my stories! and of course for reviewing! I cant tell you acurately how good it makes me feel when someone truly enjoys my work! Thank you for that! I hope you enjoy the rest of my stories as much as these two.

Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 6

Poor Edward.  Although, with all the noise they, make, how does Charlie not hear them?



Author's Response:

It's hard not to feel bad for him. He is always the tortured soul. I can't say what charlie is hearing or not hearing at this point. Maybe i should write his side of the story and we can find out. Thanks for reading it.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 5

fire burning bright... possessive Edward = delicious!



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your reveiws and for reading it! I hope you enjoyed them, next chapter is already done and being beta'd so i will post it when it comes back. Thanks again!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 4

lucky bar of soap  :)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 3

hmmm Edward...

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 2

need a shower - a cold one

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

this is brilliant

Reviewer: Michellefoster12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 5

WOW YUMMY

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 5

good chapter

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 5

Well I am glad to see his evening ended well:-)

Reviewer: hcullen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

love it

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

I TOTALLY agree- there is NOTHING better than possessive & protective Edward. And I LOVE his POV! It's nice to have both, but his is definitely my favorite. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 5

Hale yes!  Possessive Edward is impossible to resist.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading it!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

i love a possesive edward makes him hotter to me loved it



Author's Response:

there is notting hotter! thanks for reading it!

Reviewer: Redneckrebel12 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 4

PLZZZZZZZ DONT LEAVE ME HIGH IN DRY..... :*( WAHHHHHHH I NEED MORE...

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 4

he took her soap lol so good can't wait for more

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 3

well at first i did but later on in the story you could see that he cares for her awesome

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 2

awesome keep going

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

very good like very much

Reviewer: hcullen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 4

cant wait till the next one

Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 4

Nice bit of Showerward

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 4

loved it just keeps getting hotter

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

that was so hot i love edwards pov it lets you into his mind

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 2

loved it i knew he always loved her

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Of course you should continue it I loved it update when you can thanks....

Reviewer: hcullen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

yes!!! put up the next chapter i love it



Author's Response:

I will be posting the next chapter tomorrow i have already completed through chapter four and will work on the rest as quick as possible. Thanks for reading it!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Iam so glad you are doing this loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you! I have the first three chapters done and will be doing more including one or more of Jasper and Alice during the times when she loses it and he's forced to react.

Reviewer: VampireEv Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

this shouldnt be rated it it should be NC 17



Author's Response:

i was trying to figure out if E stood for everyone or erotic? do you know?

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