Date: 09 Mar 2014 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
I see this never has been finished, so I'm extra glad you did finish the first Dreaming of Edward! It was a great little story and I really liked reading it!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 8
Good old block-headed Jake! Always with the wrong information and attitude!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
It about broke Edward's cold dead heart to think Bella might abort his child. Silly boy, she would never kill a part of the love of her life!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
Poor boy, he still doesn't realize that Bella has this condition Carlisle hasn't yet diagnosed, sexsomnia!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
Silly girl, you know we all love Edward because he's possessive and protective!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 4
I guess he's so caught up in the throes of his first mad love affair, he doesn't notice anything odd about Bella's sleep habits! She, on the other hand, still thinks it's all a dream!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
Of course we didn't think that! We always knew Edward loved Bella right from the start, that's why he couldn't kill her!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
We who have read Bella's story already know he says the words, and so does she! For a smart vampire he's clueless about Bella doing all this in her sleep!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the added background , from Edward's point of view!
Date: 08 Jun 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it! Hope you can add more to this other side of the story!
Date: 11 May 2011 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
OH!!!I sure love a possessive and protective Edward!!<3 <3
Date: 11 May 2011 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
I really like your stories and these outakes.Especially Edward's Bella's panties collection->.<
I think you're real good at writing.....so keep it up...?
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
really love your story.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
Like all the different POV's
Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
I can't believe he doesn't know she's sleeping.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
So much for the Victorian. Love this.
Date: 17 Jan 2011 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
These outakes are really good, its nice to see it all from Edward Pov I really love it.. I of course love the smut.. I hope you write more in the outakes..
Mia/Meli
Date: 13 Jan 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thanks for the update- I love this story & am a big fan of your writing! I've been enjoying all of your stories! Thanks again! :)
Date: 09 Jan 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
A CLIFFIE! i'm already on pins & needles for what happens next...
Date: 31 Dec 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 7
great chapter but curious on how you update this story and you should only be working on be my sub i think we may need chains
Author's Response:
I needed that giggle thank you. the reason i can update it is because the beat has tons of chapters thnat she is filtering to me slowly. no worries! sub gets top billing. Thanks for all your reviews they made my day. michele / Nails233
Date: 29 Dec 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
Iam glad you are back .I was missing this story /pov which ever you want to call it lol I loved it Oh to be a fly on that wall
Date: 23 Sep 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
do always love Edwards pov he so naughty
Date: 21 Sep 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 6
Iloved it this is so good .I have read be my sub and i i love it you just blow me away with your work .i will have to check out the other stories too now great job
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading my stories! and of course for reviewing! I cant tell you acurately how good it makes me feel when someone truly enjoys my work! Thank you for that! I hope you enjoy the rest of my stories as much as these two.
Date: 20 Sep 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Edward. Although, with all the noise they, make, how does Charlie not hear them?
Author's Response:
It's hard not to feel bad for him. He is always the tortured soul. I can't say what charlie is hearing or not hearing at this point. Maybe i should write his side of the story and we can find out. Thanks for reading it.
Date: 17 Sep 2010 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
fire burning bright... possessive Edward = delicious!
Author's Response:
Thank you for all your reveiws and for reading it! I hope you enjoyed them, next chapter is already done and being beta'd so i will post it when it comes back. Thanks again!
Date: 17 Sep 2010 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
lucky bar of soap :)
Date: 17 Sep 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
hmmm Edward...
Date: 17 Sep 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
need a shower - a cold one
Date: 17 Sep 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
this is brilliant
Date: 27 Aug 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
WOW YUMMY
Date: 17 Aug 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well I am glad to see his evening ended well:-)
Date: 17 Aug 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
I TOTALLY agree- there is NOTHING better than possessive & protective Edward. And I LOVE his POV! It's nice to have both, but his is definitely my favorite. Thanks! :)
Date: 17 Aug 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
Hale yes! Possessive Edward is impossible to resist.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading it!
Date: 17 Aug 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
i love a possesive edward makes him hotter to me loved it
Author's Response:
there is notting hotter! thanks for reading it!
Date: 31 Jul 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
PLZZZZZZZ DONT LEAVE ME HIGH IN DRY..... :*( WAHHHHHHH I NEED MORE...
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 4
he took her soap lol so good can't wait for more
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
well at first i did but later on in the story you could see that he cares for her awesome
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
awesome keep going
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
very good like very much
Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
cant wait till the next one
Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
Nice bit of Showerward
Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
loved it just keeps getting hotter
Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
that was so hot i love edwards pov it lets you into his mind
Date: 23 Jul 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
loved it i knew he always loved her
Date: 22 Jul 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Of course you should continue it I loved it update when you can thanks....
Date: 22 Jul 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
yes!!! put up the next chapter i love it
Author's Response:
I will be posting the next chapter tomorrow i have already completed through chapter four and will work on the rest as quick as possible. Thanks for reading it!
Date: 22 Jul 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Iam so glad you are doing this loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you! I have the first three chapters done and will be doing more including one or more of Jasper and Alice during the times when she loses it and he's forced to react.
Date: 22 Jul 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
this shouldnt be rated it it should be NC 17
Author's Response:
i was trying to figure out if E stood for everyone or erotic? do you know?