Date: 13 Nov 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Hammering Out a Plan
another great chapter.
Date: 13 Nov 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One
ALICE WAS GREAT. SHE CRACKS ME UP -Oh.My.God. I haven’t seen those kinds of underwear since my grandmother was alive,” Alice exaggerated.
LOVED THE CHAPTER. GLAD THEY ARE MOVING ALONG
Date: 13 Nov 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Moving Day
I loved it. emmett, OMG he was just too funny.
Date: 13 Nov 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One
ROSE AND ALICE INTRUSIVE MUCEH???
Date: 13 Nov 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Moving Day
CARLIE IS TO CUTE...
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...
Ha ha, yeah, my hand's up! LOL!
Rose doesn't seem the motherly type (in this story), and I don't blame Em at all for taking off after she slapped him. Poor Em. :( Hope they figure it out. I'd have a baby with Emmett!! hee hee
And as for Bella learning to be a sub and supporting Edward's need to have a bit of the lifestyle, I say go for it! ;)
Date: 12 Nov 2010 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...
yea I thought bella at first too. But eddie is smarter than that now.
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...
Honestly, I'll always read whatever you write...but I didn't know you had a new story. I'm heading over to read it now & will give you the God's honest truth about it. You are, after all, our honorary Southerner! ;) Elle
Date: 12 Nov 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...
I'll be honest, I thought about it, but wasn't completely sure, didn't fit.
I liked their talk, it was open, honest and what was needed. Bella does need time to think about what she is willing to try, especially since Edward has so many doubts about it. It might work for them, it might not, lots of thinking and talking ahead.
As for Emmett and Rose, they are both scared, and both had natural, understandable but wrong reactions. Now... should they work it on their own, or with some assistance? I still can't decide.
Date: 11 Nov 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...
well im happy that they are all moved in ! cant wait to see how emmett steps it up
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...
Loved the chapter and am really looking forward to reading more.
Just off to check out your other story:-)
Date: 11 Nov 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...
Loving this story. Read rusty and spider the other at loved that too just couldn't review for some reason! will rectify that for you now. Can't wait for next update...
Date: 11 Nov 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...
*raises hand* I mean, how could you not think its Bella with that title...excited to read what happens on Thanksgiving, so don't keep us in suspense too long. Oh, and great chapter as always
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Every Time
Gotta say that I absolutely LOVED the "mother fucking maid" comment! It's actually used fairly frequently in my own home! ;) Thanks again for another great chap!
Date: 03 Nov 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Every Time
Wow... reality check for Edward! Bella & Esme rock putting him in his place. I've gotta hand it to Edward he took it like a man. Thanks for the update.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Every Time
I think this was a very important and key chapter for them. Mixing lives and homes isn't an easy task. And as fast as it happened to Edward, one can get over comfortable while the other takes a bigger load, if it's not timely noticed, like here, things can turn ugly faster than they turned nice.
A living arrangement has to include responsibilities, chores, privileges and plenty of other things. If none of this is set and talked.... Well, I think I've said enough. I am just really happy they are being able to work all these things out.
There's still plenty more to take care of, plus plenty of surprises along the way, but they will make it through, one step at a time...
Date: 02 Nov 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Every Time
Wow what a week they had lol... glad they worked it out. Post again soon please :)
Date: 02 Nov 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Every Time
Glad he realizes he was being a wanker.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Every Time
That was great when ever ppl move in there are bound to be problems at the start and edward was putting to much on her.But iam glad he is fixing it and that they had that talk it will really help them out in the long run.I hope that their trip to see renee goes well but since she loves that ass hat jacob i guess it wont but i hope it does.As for school she cares for all of her students and would never treat any child better over another because of who she is dating.love this story
Date: 02 Nov 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Every Time
i just hope in the end she dosent loose her job because of her relationship! cant wait till the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Every Time
Kudos!!!! I loved it... especially when Bella handed Edward his ass for breakfast... that was awsome... the fall in the bathroom was pretty scary... I´m kinda dredding the visit with Renee, but we´ll see.... and the school thing I hope won´t be too messy, but Mrs. Cope sounds like a handful, and course Jessica is just waiting to blow things out of the water as well.... great chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 02 Nov 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Every Time
These two are so cute. Thanks for the update- nancy
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!
Can't wait to see what is in the bag...lol Thanks for the update! :~)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!
I can say I have truly enjoyed your story. Edward and his slip in this chapter was awesome.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!
People at the party were mostly nice. They surprised Edward and Bella by being accepting, the ones that found out. It was a great evening, add to it Martha being nice too and willing to come back and help, yep, good night.
Even better when they went to bed. Edward is really pushing to try new things with Bella. She might be a bit hesitant at times, but she is going along, and enjoying it.
So, she is really moving, it's going to be a huge change. They will all need to work as a team and make a big effort so things will go smooth. There's also the fact that the school still can't know about it.
Then there's Florida and Renee. Will Bella finally make the call?
Date: 25 Oct 2010 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!
Hmmm, sounds like a playroom might be added in the basement as well!! lol
Date: 25 Oct 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!
well i hope that bellas mom takes to edward alirght cnat wait till the next chatper keep them comming
Date: 25 Oct 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!
I think Eddie has some explaining to do... and I'm very curious about what is in the goody bag. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!
*jumps up and down excitedly* LOVED IT!! LOVED IT!!
Very fun chapter!
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!
haha.... nice slip up calling Bella Carlie´s Mother.. I thought it was kinda sweet actually and truth be told everyone actually sees her that way now.. I am so not looking forward to meeting this Renee... sounds like she sucks rocks.. That little scene with Heidi and Jane was pretty funny too.. the invite for Bella to joing them was priceless... great chpater and I´m certain that Carlie will be exicted about the move and want to now call Bella mom..*tear*
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!
I loved it the bag is burning a hole in my mind too lol i thought his slip of the toung about bella was so sweet i love edward .i can't wait till she is living w/them carlie will love having bella move in w/them
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!
Loved this chapter.
Really loved the way Bella had loads of attention at the party. It got Edward all hot and bothered.
Now that Bella's agreed to move in with him, it should take their relationship to the next level.
Really looking forward to the next update.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!
hmmm who was the scum watching her at the party? Thinkning they are going to be trouble.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!
I think my favorite part was Edward referring to Bella as Carlie's mother in front of everyone. Such a cute moment. :)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)
Wow...so much happened. I am worried about Jessica. I am not really surprised Edward wants Bella to start thinking about moving in. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 16 Oct 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Pumpkin Patch Incident
Loved everything and how they're a cute little family already!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 12 - The Pumpkin Patch Incident
I really enjoyed it... lov´n how Bella gave him whack in the gonads...lov´n how her relationship with Carlie is developing nicely...I know you have alot in store for us when Renee comed into the picture... that meeting should be very interesting...Can´t wait to go to Disneyworld!!!!! Great Chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 13 Oct 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Pumpkin Patch Incident
Great chapter, I'm glad Bella is moving in.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Pumpkin Patch Incident
Bella got really, really jealous, who would have thought? Edward had no clue and was, of course lost until Alice told him about it. In a way, it was good they had their little fight, that made them snap and talk about "the pink elephant" in the room.
Hallooween was great!! I loved the costume idea, it was really good. Bella did really good saving the situation with Esme about Thanksgiving, and I am sure it will be a great experience for everyone. Also, it will be good if visiting Renee will go as Bella thinks.
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Pumpkin Patch Incident
Nice chapter. Their relationship seems to be moving along nicely.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Pumpkin Patch Incident
I love these two. Thanks for the update. Nancy
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Pumpkin Patch Incident
great chapter.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)
Sorry it's taken me so long but rl is crazy right now! I love that Edward finally asked her and they'll be together hopefully through everything with Jessica.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
wow poor bella, carmen is a pyscho bitch!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)
Well I hope Bella does get a chance to pimp slap Carmen's old azzzzz!!!! lol... And as far as Jessica is concerned... bring it on... she's unfit... I have faith in Carlie to choose Bella.. Edward and the rest of the family already have... So let the games begin!!!!! Great Chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)
Thanks for another awesome chapter! As for "the other site", I love reading over there also, but PLEASE don't wait to post because they're incredibly slow!! We NEED to know what's going on with your Edward, Bella, & Carlie! ;) See ya next time...
Date: 06 Oct 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)
I love this story!!!! I'm a native Missorian myself (from SoMO) in the Springfield area. Can't wait to see her answer (which had better be YES!)
Date: 06 Oct 2010 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)
Carmen isn't the biggest concern right now, not by a long shot. So lets not think about her for a while. There are bigger things to think about. Jessica showing up, Edward saying out loud to his family he wants to marry Bella. Asking Bella to move in is also a huge thing too.
Life has twisted itself strangely for all of them, it can't be easy to think clear right now, but to take things as they come, but most important, as a family. I guess that's what Edward wants. Just as Bella, we too have lots to think about.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
So Carmen did have an agenda under her sleeve, she wasn't too clever in keeping it there. Edward tried to hold his ground and while doing it, realized a lot of things. One very important, he is the one to make the calls on how he conducts his life and the lives of his loved ones. The key word being loved. He loves Bella, she loves him, he doesn't need to prove things to himself or her. Sadly Carmen wants to fight and she isn't fighting clean. She is hurting all around and herself. There will have to be lots of damage control after this.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)
I am really enjoying your story. It will be interesting to see what Bella says since there is still the teacher issue, and I bet Jessica becomes more of a problem. I can't wait for your next update!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating
I am glad that Rose told Edward that it was Bella's birthday -- still, she did get quite the present the night before!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)
hmmm jessica is gonna be the one to out them I bet.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)
Just read the whole thing. I love this story!! Please post again soon
Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)
Wow -- talk about saying thank you!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Hammering Out a Plan
I am so glad she went to the BBQ. I am also glad that they aren't pussyfooting around -- good for Edward for pursuing things.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One
Squee! So cute!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Moving Day
I have been trolling this website all day trying to find something to spark my interest...and here it is! I can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)
Wonderful chapter. As you say a lot of ground covered and covered very well. I am glad he wants a more balanced relationship with her. That kinky stuff should stay in the bed not spell out of it, ever. Carmen is nuts, Jessica is trouble and Bella is dazed. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)
That little skank has a lot of nerve. She left before that child had a name. Now what court in this world would allow that piece of trash to grace that little girl’s presence? His mother should have told him when that first card came. She foster Jessica’s bad behavior or her craziness which ever.
Yes, Carmen with her old, ancient, and decrepit ass self-need to go back to hell where she belongs. How dare she think that her cob web behind was appealing to Edward over someone like Bella, DELUSIONAL.
My man Edward, what can I say! He stepped to the plate on both incidents. He put Carmen in check with not even a thought as well as Demetri. Yes, I feel bad for him, but hay he’s a man now man up LOL. As for Esme, I love her dear sole, but mama has to understand that that was a decision that wasn’t her to make by keeping that very important info from Edward. I hope she understands that now.
This story again is very good and entertaining. Thx
Date: 04 Oct 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)
Great chapter...I am so happy to have recently found your story and look forward to future updates. Keep up the good work!
Date: 04 Oct 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)
well im sad that they dont get a nice quiet weekend ! i cant wait to see whats instore for them
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)
that was such a good chapter.i hope bella will not let jessica get in her way i know she will try to put the moves on edward but edward has told her and expressed his love and feelings for her to know that nothing can get in their way.I think moving in might be too soon for her she is just on her own really for the first time and she nneds that for a little bit more i think ,but she should think about it i would love to see them live together .love this story so much great job
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2010 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
Damn that Carmen!! *burning mad!* I am SO glad Edward told her off!! I wish they had left after the first few minutes when it was so quiet at their table you could hear a pin drop. URGH!
Poor Bella...and I'm a little sad for Dimitri too. I hope he doesn't go back to Spain with Carmen. Surely he can stay and find a job?
Carmen needs help...bleh. Demented old bag.
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
wow! génial!
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2010 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
Carmen's a bitch! ... Another great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! :)
Date: 21 Sep 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
Loved this chapter. Can't wait to see what Carmen has to say to Bella.
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
That old ass hag better take her ass back to Spain!!! I can't believe that Bella let that cobb web make her cry. Edward I'm am proud of you even though you were a douche'. Bella need to lock down on his.....
Date: 21 Sep 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
I'm glad Edward figured out all the things he did during their meeting. Glad he realized what he wanted and didn't want out of his lifestyle with Bella. Can't wait to find out what Carmen said to Bella in the bathroom and what happens after Edward finds Bella. Great chapter!
Date: 21 Sep 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
Wow...I didn't see that coming. I actully feel bad for Demetri. Carmen is out of her mind.
I love that Seth and Bella reconnected. You never know where old friends may be.
Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
Ok... you wanna know what I think... I think I´d like to bitch slap Carmen... so there I said it.....but other than that.... I enjoyed it as always... I´m loving the relationship developing between Carlie and Bella and that Esmom is threaten to flog Edward if her hurts Bella...two thumbs up for that!!!! can´t wait for the next chapter!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
Next chapter fast please. :~) Women usually know these things ~ if men would only listen sometimes it would make life a lot easier...lol
Date: 20 Sep 2010 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
idiot. that meeting was a mistake from the first.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
I knew that crazy bitch was up to something she just happened to run into him lies oh i hope edward can fix this and fast w/bella she knew what was up with carmen the whole time .I just hope bella will listen to him when he tells her he dosen't want anyone else but bella. very good chapter i hope you update soon evil cliffy lol
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
Please post the next chapter soon--can't wait to read that conversation bewteen Carmen and Bella. Hope this doesn't upset Bella's self esteem too much. Also hope that this will be the end of Carmen for good.
Date: 20 Sep 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
well im happy that she found a friend from back home cant wait to see how thatt goes ! cant wat itill the next chapter keep them comming
Date: 19 Sep 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Settling In
I love it! I am glad that Carlie is okay with speding some nights at Bella's house. I don't like Carmen at all. I am sure that is going to be an interesting meeting. Great job...I love it as always!!! Thanks so much!!!
Date: 19 Sep 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Settling In
Inloved their family time so I'm scared for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Settling In
J'adore
Date: 15 Sep 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Settling In
I liked that Bella so openly invited them both to spend the night. It is a huge proof of her commitment to the relationship. Including Carlie in as much as possible.
Bella isn't struggling financially but she could use a bit more of an income. But, would she let Edward help? How could he tell her?
I love the idea for the seminar, it will be amazing, and exciting. How will the drinks on Friday be? Exciting too?
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Settling In
Yeah...I can´t wait..for some reason, I don´t trust Carmen very much and with Bella she has ulterior motives...but of course we shall see..can´t wait for the next chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 14 Sep 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Moving Day
"No, just stupid" best line ever!
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Settling In
Excellent chapter, thank you.
Date: 14 Sep 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Settling In
ohh cant wait!!
Date: 14 Sep 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Settling In
hmmm now who is going to catch them and report Bella....
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Settling In
Hmm--still worried about Carmen. Have a feeling that she is going to be causing a bit of trouble for E & B.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Settling In
I loved it that was ss hot i can't wait to see how drinks with carmen goes i know bella will be on edge because of edwards past with her but he loves her not carmen ,so no matter what happens i hope they talk to each other. love this story
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)
it was great and the sending Jacob to hell while bidding Renee hello on the way was funny as heck!!! Now off with Carmnç´s head!!!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)
Wow this has been a great stoy. Love your Edward. Enjoying the smattering on d/s. Is bells submissive enough?
I fear that Jake will not go away that he has to have Bella do something to end thier marriage in the eyes of the tribe. Ooooo what would the Elders say if they knew why Jake married her?
Carman. I want mama Esme to go have a drink with her. WWEsme smakdown. Thanks for sharing will look for more. Meg.
Date: 08 Sep 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)
ooh carmen creeped me out! can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)
J'adore!
Date: 07 Sep 2010 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)
Well, I'm glad he left without too much trouble, hope he takes the hint and disappears- though I have a feeling Renee is about to show up! Can't wait for more!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Revelation Number Two -- It's a Biggie...(Part 1)
J'adore votre Edward... un papa Dom! wow!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating
wow! Je le veux ton Edward!
Date: 07 Sep 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)
Yep, plenty to talk about and deal with. And it's all coming at the same time!!! That has to be a lot to handle. Friday, Jacob leaves Friday, Carmen hopes to see them on Friday, will they? I am certain Jacob will be returning to Washington without hearing from Bella at all.
It was a surprise to Bella and Esme to see Carmen there. I don't think Esme will leave things without speaking her peace, that should be interesting.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)
I knew it was Jacob. I hope he is goine for good. He is not worth Bella's time. Hope Carmen moves along quickly too. She may be just a friend, but she may be the kind that is not needed. Bella does need to trust Edward though. I don't think he wants anything to do with Carmen. I can't wait to see what happens next! Great job...thanks so much!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)
LMAO, I think Carmen needs to take Jacob back to Spain with her!!
;)
And I DO like the pacing of this story! :)
Alice better change her security code! Ewww, what a creep!
Date: 07 Sep 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)
I wish that Jacob would go to hell in a hand basket and take Renee with him. Carmen is just sad and pitiful...find a real man your age and go eat a meal. UGH I just want Edward and Bella to be together and be happy.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)
I like the pacing of the story, just FYI. I'd never be able to do the whole submissive thing. I'd end up punching the guy within 5 minutes. Lol
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)
What Edward said about Carmen being in the past is all well and good but he should have put a stop to her kissing him on the mouth and all that touching. That is just not cool.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)
Jacob and Renee are dumber and dumber! Carmen needs to retire.