Date: 17 Dec 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...
Can't say that I blame Edward for the lock-in. They were finally able to talk like adults. I just hope that Bella remembers this..." There was something else, too. In my desire to please him, I’d lost myself. I was back to the wishy-washy girl who let herself be run over by Renee and Jacob. I wasn’t happy about that at all." All I can say is, exactly.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...
well i hope it goes well for her! i want her to keep her job! keep the chapters comming
Date: 16 Dec 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...
I'm glad Bella was reasonable... why cut off your nose to spite your face. She loves him and would be miserable without him and Carlie... I must admit I'm glad Edward had to grovel... ;-)
I can't wait to see how the Review Board goes... I'm so glad it drew a crowd.
Thanks for the update.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...
Is it wrong that the last sentence made me laugh. Lol, great chapter!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Moving Day
Oooh a story based on where I live Yay!!!! I'll actually know where things are that they reference. I love Imo's and Sybergs!!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...
Its was good that he grovelled. I suppose there was no point in prolonging the agony for both of them. I cannot help wonder if he'd been a sub he wouldn't have had his bottom paddled but good. LOL
I cannot to find out the outcome of the hearing. I also want to know what up with that Mrs Cope?
Until the next time.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...
Great Chapter. Ms Cope sounds like an evil harpy and is going to have a revolt on her hands if she's not careful.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...
so glad Edward was able to fix everything :)
Hopefully the hearing goes well...post soon pleaes
Date: 16 Dec 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...
Gahhhhhhhhh... I hate Cliffies!!!!!!!!!!!
First you let us suffer through Edward acting like a total dipshit causing Bella to leave and then lead us through them mending their relationship, over to the hearing, where lots of parents want to speak in favour of Bella, only to end with Heidi walking up????? You truly are evil!!!
But we love you, nontheless, your story is really great, thank you for writing and sharing it with us. And, as I think you love us, too - you will not let Heidi ruin everything, won't you?
Be safe
Sabs
Date: 16 Dec 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...
Awww come on!!!! How's the hearing go?? Please tell me we're not gonna have to wait too long for another update.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...
I am so happy that Edward took Carlisle's advice and basically just took Bella to a hotel and they just talked it all out. And I'm glad that she listened to what he had to say and understood that it was all said in the heat of the moment and he didn't mean any of it.
And what is the deal with Mrs. Cope? Can you say witch hunt? There seems to be a ton of support for Bella at this hearing. What goes on in her private life is just that - private. It's how she treats and educates the kids in her class that is what is the most important.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...
still love this story even if you left it with there. I loved how you didn't drag out their fight they have enough hurdles to over come :)
Date: 16 Dec 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...
Thanks for the update and saving us from the dangerous cliffy. But I am sorry to say you have to go back on the naughty list for this new one. :) Thanks again- nancy
Date: 16 Dec 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...
I loved the lock in that was the best move Edward made it goyt the both to talk and to open up to each other. I love this story and pimped it out on facebook to TFFA and alot of ppl love your stories .I can't wait to see what Heidi has to say but I hope everything goes well and Bella can keep her job.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
Why would we hate you? You've once again given us an excellent chapter! I'm off to read the next chap of Rusty & Spidy! BTW- It still will not let me review. I saw where you had Bob check, but everytime I try to leave a review it gives me the same error msg about only leaving one review per chapter. I've never had a problem reviewing any other fic before. I'll keep trying, though I can't help but wonder if there are others having the same problem. R&S is too good to have such a low number of reviews. I've only been allowed to leave one review, even though Ive tried repeatedly. Will keep trying...
Date: 15 Dec 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
God I love this story. As much as I love Edward and never want anyone to be mean to him, I have to say he deserved what he got! :-) But please don't drag out their reconcilliation. I love them together. Can't imagine that bitch Jessica has a leg to stand on re. custody though.
Date: 14 Dec 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
oh my...my heart is breaking.... I hoping your gonna be posting very soon....edward needs to fix ths...please please post soon
Date: 14 Dec 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
WOW! Can't believe Edward was such as ass! I understand getting angry but some words can't be taken back. Even if Bella does forgive him, he has damaged the relationship and has a lot to make up for.
Date: 14 Dec 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
Figured that bitch would ruin their first Christmas together. Damn that bitch, Jessica, urgh!
Good thing they found her. I didn't want her going to St. Louis alone. And I LOVED Em's surprise gift to Rosie, it totally saved his ass, LOL! And of course now Edward has the study all to himself.
*Pow!* That was me hitting Edward in the back of the head with a cast iron skillet before handing it back to Bella and Esme.
Great chapter, I'm totally not mad at you. If Jess gets ANY custody or visitation rights to Carlie, then I'll be mad. ;) If Edward's agreement with her is so iron-clad, then I shouldn't have to worry. But then again, why would he say what he did to Bella before she left?? Hmmm... maybe not so 100% sure of himself? Hmmm...
Date: 13 Dec 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
Whoa! That was a doozy of a chapter! Poor ClassicWard, looks like he´ll be spending the remainder of the holiday on the pull-out! Serves him right for the foul things he said. When will people learn to think before they speak! Lol! Great chapter! Hope it won´t be long until we find out the outcome!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 13 Dec 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming
Wow! A broken arm. How are you typing? I love that she wants to adopt Carlie. It´s so funny how people are thinking on the same wave length, but it´s never known because they don´t talk to each other. It really would save alot of heartache sometimes. Lol! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 13 Dec 2010 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
Ok not really happy with either one of them I know Edward was freaking out over the Jessica thing but he was so wrong for what he said,and Bella always runs she needs to grow up if she wants to be in their lives and we all know she does he will have some ass to kiss but they will work it out .I have faith in you . They love each other and after they learn how to be open and honest with each other these problems won't be as big of a problem as they are now .
Date: 13 Dec 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
Edward really did it this time. HIs temper is one of his worse enemies. He just lashes out with out thinking or considering how hurtful he can be. He has done it too many times in the last three days. Apologizing isn't enough any more, it won't be for Bella. He has hurt her too deeply it seems. She has self confidence issues, Thanksgiving wasn't that great of an experience, what just happened at school and his outbursts. If it weren't for Carlie, she would never have come back. Poor kid, she will suffer plenty because of her dad's temper. I wonder how the holiday will end, how will everyone behave and what will Bella do now.
Date: 13 Dec 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
Wow, this is turning into a Christmas nightmare...First off, Jessica has some nerve trying to petition for custody after giving up all rights, and 2 people living together is hardly a legal issue in my opinion. Edward and Bella do seem to have some communication issues, and they keep emotions bottled up until they snap and overreact...I hope they can calm down and get back together.
Bella is absolutely right in being upset at what he said and for not letting her in, but leaving without telling anyone on Christmas seems irresponsible, even if she is mad at Edward. Good news is that it definitely Edward know how bad he messed up and how serious it was. So I was happy the Cullens found and brought her back, but wasn't expecting her to be so cold to Edward once he apologized
Date: 13 Dec 2010 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
I might be in the minority, but I'm glad that this chapter happened. Not glad because of what Edward did, cause yeah he's a jackass, but because it adds to the excitement of what's happening. I'm so excited to see what happens next time. Hope you can update again soon. :)
Date: 12 Dec 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
love how Carlie called Bella momma and Edward was so mean!
Date: 12 Dec 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
Excellent chapter. What a rollacoster of a chapter. Edward was a king sized ass. Its right that Bella makes him work for forgiveness. Maybe he'll think twice before he talks to her like that again. LOL
Date: 12 Dec 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
Wow...I don't know what Edward say that to Bella, but I have a feeling he is going to regret it for a while.
I am proud of Bella for her rant at the end even if I hope it doesn't come true and they can make it through this. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Dec 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
I'm sorry, but I think Bella was majorly harsh with Edward. Esme and Carlisle told her why he reacted the way he did to Seth's phone calll and that he was just scared he would lose Carlie and that he realized that what he did was wrong. He apologized to her and everything, and she is talking about never seeing him again? Come on!!! I think she is taking this way too far.
Date: 12 Dec 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
Lynch mob, grab your pitchforks.....
Date: 12 Dec 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
there both saying things out of hurt and anger ,maybe they should start talking like rational adults and realize that neither of them are the enemy but jessica is and bella should of had some patience with him
Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
Good, Bella DOES have a backbone. After getting talked into moving in with E, I was beginning to wonder.
Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
well i would of said that right back and i could imagine how heart broken and hurt she is about it all ! cant wait to see waht happens next chatper
Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
please tell me there is a HEA on the horizon for them? I have loved this story and where it was going, but this is just too much! Breaks my heart for them,
Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
Holy.... s%##! PLEASE, don't leave us hanging too long. And a christmas too.
Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
cant blame her for leaving but his mind reallly wasnt there.
Date: 12 Dec 2010 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming
Can't wait for updates!!
Date: 12 Dec 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating
Damn...maybe I should take up teaching!
Date: 12 Dec 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Moving Day
Getting really interesting....
Date: 09 Dec 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming
Loved christmass. Can't wait for the beating of Jess & mrs cope. Your preveward is so fun! Meg
Date: 06 Dec 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming
I love Esme and her covert ops. I can't wait to see what happens next. They need to talk more and be honest about what they want and where they want to be in the future. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 06 Dec 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming
update soon!!!
Date: 06 Dec 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming
Sorry to hear about your arm!!!! Hope it gets better soon, and don't worry about the mistakes;) I honestly didn't see any.
Wow, Esme is such a clever woman, she is a mastermind at manipulation. No wonder Edward is so good, he learned from the best. She has done an amazing job so far helping Edward. Then with what she heard while she took a nap at the spa. Edward's dreams can come true and be even more than he imagined.
It will take work, something I am sure he doesn't mind. As for Rose and Emmett, is great to find out she is going to forgive him, after sometime of course. And Jasper, he is smitten and happy about it.!!!!!!
Date: 05 Dec 2010 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming
I loved the BDSM part and the whole marriage talk can't wait for more!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style
Loved the song! Too funny! Can't wait to see what's in store for Jessica. Thanks for another great chap! :)
Date: 04 Dec 2010 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming
awww, I love a Cullen family Christmas!!! They are so great together and I love how they all tag team each other to get what they want. And Merci on the French Maid lemon, that was great too! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming
i hope for her sake that he finally talks to her! keep the chapters comming
Date: 04 Dec 2010 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming
Good chapter; Sometimes easedropping can be a good thing, as Esme was able to overhear Bella and Rose talking about how Bella wants to adopt Carlie. I really do hope that Edward proposes soon, though I think he will be doing that shortly.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming
I loved this chapter. Edward and his mom are right slippery characters aren't
they? :-)
I liked the little bit of kink in the bedroom, best place for it. LOL.
I am so looking forward to the time when they do marry.
Take care of yourself and your broken arm.
All the best
Caroline
Date: 03 Dec 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming
Ohhh.... sorry about your arm! I hope it feels better soon... keep it elevated and iced.
This chapterwas ...HOT! Love it. Can't wait for more, love the way these two love each other.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming
I love covert Esme! So funny
Date: 03 Dec 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming
Great job hun. I broke my arm last x-mas.....Loritab worked wonders
Date: 03 Dec 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming
OOOHHHHH MMYYYYYYYYYYYY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSSSHHHHHHHHH!!!!
Excellent!! *claps and jumps up and down*
Date: 03 Dec 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming
I left a review on twilighted for the last chapter saying I didn't like how manipulative Edward is. He still is and I still don't like it. I don't like that Bella has no backbone, at all. I love the general background of the story. And I usually love a good BDSM story, but for someone who never considered that type of relationship before, Bella sure fell into sub mode for the most part. I just feel is if she really isn't much herself anymore. I guess that's the key to it for me. Bella isn't herself. I hope this doesn't make you feel bad about anything, like I said I like the story. It has just become more of a do what Edward says thing then I originally thought it would.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Settling In
I don't se the point of having drinks with Carmen. She's a Dom and she's just going to piuss B off again acting like she still owns E.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)
HMMM, EITHER THE BABYSITTER THINKS SHE'LL EVENTUALLY LOSE HER JOB OR SHE WANTS HIM FOR HER NEICE. KEEP THE MONEY IN THE FAMILY, YOU KNOW.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style
At least we get a break from Jessica and Mrs. Cope, that will be a tough fight I guess.
Emmett... sadly there are men like that. They see things differently and they forget to think and think about others. At least he is realizing his mistakes. He still has a lot of begging to do, and he should.
I loved tough Esme putting Emmett in his place, that was priceless!!!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...
I love it all and I will admit I thought it was going to be Bella. I hope Emmett comes around and soon! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 30 Nov 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style
Oh, I'm sure that Edward will be able to talk Bella into going with him to DC. He does have his ways and once he sets his mind to something, he usually figures out a way to make it happen. hehe
Date: 30 Nov 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style
Great update. Thanks!
Date: 30 Nov 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style
Wonderful chapter... Em is being very selfish! Love the family get together. Thanks for the update.
Date: 30 Nov 2010 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Every Time
Wow...I love the way Bella put it all in the line for Edward...that was awesome! The girls falling in the bathroom was kind of scary....good thing Carlisle came over. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 30 Nov 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style
i really loved this one! one of my favorites although rose and em arent doing as well! i love how close and tight knit bella, edward, and carlie are at the moment! i also loved the traditions, can't wait for more!
Date: 30 Nov 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!
Love it! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 29 Nov 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style
Yea Mrs Cope has a lot to answer for......Emmett too Idiots
Date: 29 Nov 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style
Oh Emmet - big oaf!!!!! But I am sure, they will come around. And I hope, that there will be big consequences for Mrs. Cope and that excuse of a mother.... I would love for them to be put in their places while Bella is attending. So now I am wondering what Edward got Bella for Christmas?
I will wait (im-)patiently for your next update and thank you for sharing your great fantasies with your readers.
Greetings from the "7 mountains" (a region in Germany near the city of Cologne, on the river Rhine)
Sabs
Date: 29 Nov 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style
I thought Emmett was being a super douche to Rose, but that Christmas song was hilarious. Esme and Carlisle rock as always. Riding Dr. Cullen´s morining wood is never a bad way to start the day! Great chapter!
krazi
xoxo
Date: 29 Nov 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style
What a lovely family the Cullen's are. Emmett is a big idiot as everyone told him. LOL.
My monies on Edward getting his way. Glad there is more to look forward to. Just
love this story.
Date: 29 Nov 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style
Oh how I love to see Emmet tortured a bit for his stoooopidity! Thanks for a fun chapter, Nancy
Date: 29 Nov 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style
LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!!!! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT ELSE SANTA HAS WAITING UP HIS SLEEVE.......
Date: 29 Nov 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style
Great chapter .I feel so sad and heartbroken for Rose Emmett is an asshat but I still love him he just needs to get his head out of his ass .I hope Bella and Carlie do go with Edward to DC they will have a great time.I can't wait to see what happens next with Bella's job and that evil bitch Jessica.I loved Esme you always make her a great mom in all of your stories .Can't wait for the next update this is such a great story
Date: 29 Nov 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style
well i hope she lets him take her with it sounds great!
Date: 17 Nov 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?
Aw poor em and rose! I love that Bella and Edward are ready to fight! I can not wait for more!
Date: 17 Nov 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...
I thought it was Bella
Date: 17 Nov 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Every Time
Loved that they talked!
Date: 17 Nov 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!
Sorry it's taken me so long but I tend to shy away from angst and drama so when you mentioned it I procrastinated! Mybfavorite part was when Edward slipped with the whole mother thing!
Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?
That was quite a chapter.... I was wondering when jessica would show her diseased self in the picture... Renee should be neutered... she´s trailer trash... Go Bella way to let Cope have it... so if you fire me... you better get ready to be fired...hahaha...great chapter!!
krazi
xoxo
Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...
haha... I knew it wasn´t Bella because they haven´t used condoms since the first time they slept together...what... sue me I pay attention...great chapter...and I`m off to check out the new story..
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?
Man, who is the biggest bitch in this chapter....Renee, Mrs. Cope, or Jessica? Tough call on that one, but great chapter and can't wait to see what happens next....also loving the Bella and Edward kink you have going on throughout this story!
Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?
Things went really, really wrong for Thanksgiving. Bella's actions might not have been correct entirely but they are completely understandable. She had a very good idea of what might happen, and sadly she was right. Edward was more than shocked with what happened. He simply could not believe a mother could act that way.
He reacted quickly and took his girls to a much nicer place. Things were getting better, but something that sadly can happen with kids happen to Edward, Carlisle and Carlie. It was a huge scare, yes, she might not have realized what happen and could have happened.
Then, to finish the chapter, Bella simply became mama bear and risked a lot to keep Carlie in school. It was a surprise Jessica wasn't expecting and neither was Mrs. Cope. Bella knows she is in trouble, but Carlie is much more important. Thankfully Edward just arrived. It will be an interesting conversation, to say the least.
Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?
Oh wow, I feel so bad for Em and Rose...
and for Bella for thinking her Mom would accept Edward and Carlie with open arms...
and then the whole ethical thing at school gets me. St. Louis is a big city, so I don't see how the school can have such a rule. That's very old fashioned, small town thinking that needs to be updated, LOL. ;) Good drama for the story though, LOL!
Geez, the nerve of Jessicunt! Bleh! Urgh!
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Date: 15 Nov 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?
you go edward!! i do not like mrs. cope
Date: 15 Nov 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?
I'm glad i came across this story, really enjoying reading it. Can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?
Yea Eddie..... Glad he got there quick. Let's smack Mrs Cope upside the head.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?
i love it.....stupid cope and jessica...post soon please
Date: 15 Nov 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?
Loved this chapter!!! Can't wait to read more. Especially after that ending! :)
Date: 15 Nov 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?
That was so good so much drama happened first renee being a bitch to bella how could she? ugh hate her happy edward put her in her place,then poor em and rose i really feel for them i hope that they can heal and grow for this heartbreak .and now jessica evil bitch she must be out of money and now she wants to be in her life never .and i feel bad that bella got in trouble for being w/edward but outside of school what she does shouldn't matter i hope edward can help her with the school loved it great story
Date: 15 Nov 2010 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...
I loved it and i checked out your other story i really liked
Date: 15 Nov 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?
well in the end i would of done the samething! renee was a piece of work its awful! i hope in the long run that she dosent loose her job! cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 15 Nov 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?
I enjoyed this chapter even though it was full of drama. Jessica, Renee and Jacob should be put on a bus for far far away land and left their. Nasty peices of work.
Poor Bella, called a h00r by her own h00r of a mother and then sacked for saving Carlie. Not to mention Rose loosing the baby, so sad.
Until the next time.
Date: 14 Nov 2010 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating
so sexxxy
Date: 14 Nov 2010 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)
KINKY
Date: 14 Nov 2010 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)
WOW SHE REMINDS ME OF JAIME'S NANNY {ONE TREE HILL}
Date: 14 Nov 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...
very very good chapter. Ha ha by the way *raises hand and waves it* I was one of the ones that thought that Bella was pregnant :p
Date: 13 Nov 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
boy he has some nerve. poor demetri
Date: 13 Nov 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)
yeah jacob is dick. do we have a carmen issue. she needs to take hike with jacob
Date: 13 Nov 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Revelation Number Two -- It's a Biggie...(Part 1)
oh no who is it. jacob?
Date: 13 Nov 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating
that was damn perfect. great chapter
Date: 13 Nov 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)
i liked the lemon. let them gradually build up to it.
Date: 13 Nov 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)
okay marta needs to go! loved the chapter