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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Great Job.     Loved the story from the very beginning.    Thanks for taking the time to write.

Reviewer: jonesiia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2011 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Excellent...Well Done...noe excuse me while i go cry because it's over...I am born and raised in St. Louis!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

sad to see them go but great ending and im glad that they worked everything out in the end! 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2011 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Shit you Rock   I loved this story, of course I am going back and going to re-read it, I know there are chapters that I did not post a review on so I will try and cover those chapters and YES, I will read "Trip of a Lifetime"

Once more, this was a very well done story, loved it!!!

Later BB  Kathy xoxoxoxoxo

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2011 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

excellent story and excellent ending

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Thank you for a wonderful roller coaster of a story!  I will be looking for new adventures from you.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Great story. Had us in a bind sometimes but overall great..

 

Thank you,

Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Beautiful ending ... as it should be.

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Amazing story with a beautiful ending....i loved it from start to finish :)

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Lovely ending. A new generation joining in on the fun. So glad Bella and Edward are still together.  I have loved this story and will miss it.  Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

amazing story:)

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

awesome story.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

You know this is life.  Things happen and I am so grateful he did not sleep with the TA. That would have been bad.  Older men require a lot of nurturing. They revert back to childhood at one point. I have an old one and he acts like a baby sometimes. SIGH.. I am so tired of raising kids. LMAO

 

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Perfect...you have me in tears.  I will miss this one a lot.  There where the times I wanted to scream at Edward and Bella, but they made it through and they were better and stronger because of everything they went through.  Great job....thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE :)  I really loved it!  Go baby Ruth ;)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

Can't wait for the Epilouge - Yeah! He was really stupid to take TA KStew to the dinner and then to not realize that he was letting her flirt with him.  I had to admit that the use of the TA's name was pretty classic especially when he goes to pick her up and he says how much like his Bella she looks, now that was priceless..

 

Okay nuff said from me... Your a great writer and author  Later BB  Kathy xoxoxoxoxo

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

dear lord, I laughed and sobbed in this chapter...What a fantastic writer you are  Damn this is a good story

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

good story i have been reading it for the past three days.  

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

Bella was stupid to be upset with Edward in the first place. Nothing happened with the TA. He stopped it from happening. Bella was ignoring her husband. If she  was paying attention, she would have known his TA was female. She would have been at his school events. She would have gotten the dry cleaning etc. A kiss should not break up a marriage. It was like Bella was looking for an excuse. Bella has always been a runner and she took it again. I am glad that Edwards family got them back together. It is too bad it messed up their daughter's wedding.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Heartache

wow!!! eating disorder makes alot of sense actually considering the situation

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Pain

I am speechless, but have faith in your story line and plot line, as well as your wonderful writing abilitites

 

:-)  Later Kathy xoxoxoxo

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down

I'm sniffling and taking calming breathes right now..  Okay not getting on the kill Edward band wagon.  Nope am not, am not... well maybe I am... Holy Hell Edward WTF!!!  Sometimes you do not think before you speak.  Shit man, when has that woman once said or done anything to you without you and Carlie being her first thought.. She would have no more told you that you were a worthless piece of shit over First the Damn Carmen fiasco, then that Money groveling whoremonger Jessica she put up with could very well end her career, because she was protecting Carlie your flesh and blood...I'm just so disappointed in him right now...  TEAM BELLA!!!! 

Okay yes, .... :-( I am a lover of Edward too, actions speak louder than words Butt wipe...   Yes, I love my Edward... he best do some deep deep damage control here..  Just saying!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)

wow Carmen is crazy

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Date: 07 Mar 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...

I did!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)

Wow Marta!!! WTF!  Time for a new Nanny!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Hammering Out a Plan

I nearly Peed on myself laughing at this.  Too funny!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One

Really really liking this story.  Edward is different but the same in a more I'm not sure but honest and tender, yet reserved sort of way. 

Later   Kathy xoxoxoxoxo

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

What a wonderfully written story!  I know this is my first Chapter but I am really intrigued, I wish I had found it sooner.

 

Later Kathy  xoxoxo

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

OMB I was scared there for second I almost cried!!!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Wow caius was a total creep and Jack was just too funny!

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

Temptation is usually right there at the corner, always ready to pounce on the first one who gets distracted enough. This time it was Edward. However temptation had some helpers, Edward and yes Bella and of course life it self. There are two people in every relationship, and it takes two to ruin and to fix things. The amount of guilt varies, but both did put something into the situation. 

This time, Edward has more guilt. Yes, life turned hectic, but he wasn't last, he felt that way but it wasn't exactly true. He should have tried to see things from a different perspective. As for Kristen, well she saw what was happening and figured it was the only chance. She was right. Thankfully Edward kind of snapped not that late.

Life is like this, we might not like to see it portrayed with such accuracy, but this is it.

Reviewer: sherriola Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

Wow, i've raced through this story in the past couple days completely blown away by it.  Even during the times I wasn't sure I liked where you were going with it--such as when Bella and broke up over Jessica's threats and everyone was bashing Edward only for it--i still loved the story and you always made it right.  I loved the then psychiatrist called bella on her always running away thing, because I firmly believe it takes two.  I loved the kids, how you progressed the story, crazy emmett, all of it.

 

I'm sorry but this chapter was really upsetting and really didn't seem to fit with edward's character as you've created him.  It really dimi8nished the story for me.  Also, another way Edward is bashed and bella is again the innocent victim of him.  Even hios daughter mad at him.  He didn't do anything, he was tempted but stopped it, and that's really what matters.  Oh please, can't perfect bella have doen something wrong too? 

 

Anyway, every single bit of this story till this chapter was magnificent, and i am positive I will read it again, which I don't do with many fan fiction stories.  I can just stop at this chapter and not read it, because for me it just ruins the whole rest of the amaazing work that went before.

 

Your characters are so engaging and fun to know,a nd for me, it's all about characters in anything!  Thank you.

Reviewer: Lilygirl88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

Oh thank fucking god for Emmett I thought dumbward was going to lose her again.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)

i want a hot ftd-ward in my house.   guess they nanny just wanted a piece of the money pie herself huh.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

Awesome story. I like the ending.

 

Reviewer: Edwardsbrunette Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

OMG Carlisle!! ROTFLMAO!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

GReat story

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

wow, really enjoyed it so far.  you have pulled me in hook line and sinker !!!!!

Reviewer: JamesB Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

You are amazing, and I still love this story!!  It really is a story of true life in most aspects, and we middle of the road, everyday people can relate!  Thanks again for your story!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

He was an idiot but she over reacted I think.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

I actually like what you did, it does happen in real life so it is good to see it in a story.

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

Good God! This Edward is a total fuck up!!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

Bravo!! Woot Woot! Perfect!!

=D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

That was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved them so much!  So happy everything worked out in the end :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

well that was a great ending! im sorry to see them go! 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

I am so glad they made it up.  She was so quick to throw him out.  I can understand why she would be angry but really.  LOL.  I am glad you fixed it though.  I have to say I just loved the note Carlisle sent to Edward.  It was brilliant.

Reviewer: TwilightFann1969 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

Ok, I'm not going to kick your ass. I'm going to trust that things will be explained in the Epi. I have really enjoyed this story. Thank you for keeping me interested.

Reviewer: EmmettsGirl89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

i...wait...but...he...what?

...i can honestly say that the ending to a story has never caught me so off guard.  I LOVED IT.  ur an amazing writer, keep up the good work!

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

I sobbed my heart out... again!  Wonderful story... can't wait for the epi.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

love that they got back together and i loved this story it has made me yell and scream at times but all in all it was the best i have read since your last story.

Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

I understand the sentiment behind this chapter. In any relationship it is important to keep the lines of communication open. Reality can take a toll, especially when children and work take  up so much of a person's time. While I do not necessarily agree with E's behavior, I do get it. I am also proud of him for stopping before he got too carried away. B had every right to be hurt. I do feel though that she went a bit overboard in his punishment.

Loved the ending. Sometimes you just have to go back to the beginning and remember what things were important before all the chaos of life entered the picture.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Ewww.... I am glad Carlie was just tricking Caius, and not really a submissive, that might have sent Bella and Edward over the edge.

And too funny with the Jack "experiments"...Nair, that has got to burn...I guess the olive oil makes sense, but Edward should probably get the kid some lube before he hurts himself.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Well that was a a very interesting chapter wasn't it??? I am glad that Carlie isn't with Casius anymore because I knew it was trouble when the name Aro was uttered... And Jack... what to say about that kid you can't help but love some of the things that come out of his mouth!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

Ok well I am thinking that the girls just need to go away and leave the little boys with their grandfather and father's and maybe they will get some better help then.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

Well I am shocked that Esme didn't tell her family about the cancer. I really hope that Edward will really stop and think about what Carlie is asking him for because she is right in the fact that Edward went to Europe and I think that he should just be happy for her that she is such a great kid and let her go!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

I am so glad that Carlie was not really envolved with that creep. Edward would never forgive himself if she was. She could deal with her parents being a little kinky better than him dealling with her being a sub to Cauis. I loved the talk Edward had with his son. As a mother of a 13 year old boy I am right there with him. But my son asks me all the questions. He saids he would rather ask me because I am a woman and know what a woman likes plus I work in the medical field. He thinks I'm smarter than his dad and I won't lie or make fun of him.It is hard not to laugh and accept them growing up. It was easier with my daughter.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

LOL

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Great chapter. I have to say since reading this almost every time I get in the car that damn Miley Cyrus song come on and I crackup laughing! The boy discussion was great I can't wait til my husband has to do that in about 9 years! Are you going to add the new story over here? Thanks again for the great chapter and looking forward to the next one!
Shannon

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

great chapter.  glad carlie is so smart.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

I am glad the deal with Caius went like it did. That could have gone badly.  Jack and the "virgin" olive oil..........SO FUNNY.

 

Rust & Spidey is so funny.  I will check out trip of a lifetime.

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Excellent chapter... I wanted to kill Caius myself... I would have strangled him.  The conversation with Jack was a riot!  Thanks for the update, but I'm not sure I ready for the epilogue.

Reviewer: momams Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

As huge as Carlie's discovery was, I want to first talk about Jack. He was simply adorable, so funny, sweet and naive. I am impressed with Edward, he was able to hold the laughter for quite some time, not an easy task I am sure. And as for sending his son to ask THAT to his father, well, I hope you do share what Carlisle will say and think.

Back to Carlie, I am sure that kind of information is something no child wants to find out about her parents. But she is a wonderful girl and knew to keep it to herself. Then when something came up that could be a threat to her family she took action. She took a risk and got herself into things she didn't want to but family comes first. She is admirable.

I have one more question, did Bella and Rose had to go bail their men out?

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2011 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

What a totally fanastic chapter. Carlie coming home with that creep really had me going.  I totally loved how she dealt with him.   I hope Em gave him a good kicking. LOL.

Edward's talk with Jack was priceless.  So funny and a joy to read.


I hope you put you new story up here as well as Twilighted.net  cause I really do not like that site and never read anything over there.  

Until next time.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

well that was a trip! and all those reasons for his helpers i totally could see my son telling me that ! cant wait to see what ahppens next 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2011 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much ;)  I enjoyed it all so much :)  Amazing job, once again :)

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

It took Bella long enough to put both guys in their place. Yes, loosing your mom is terrible. We tend to forget we aren't the only ones suffering. Carlisle was hurting also, and his sons hadn't considered that. They just decided to get upset.

Esme was an amazing wife, Carlisle could never and would never forget her. He simply doesn't like being lonely, something very understandable.

Bella and Edward needed the time in the cabin, too bad it was interrupted and cut short.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

Aw the kids are a handful bu fun! I love that Edward and Bella did it in public and the guy thought she was throwing up!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

Poor Rose.  Em is like a big kid.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

What was Emmett thinking? Did he want to turn Jack into a theif? No one is going to have any privacy now. I worry about Carlisle. I hope he gets over his depression.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

Great chapter. I am glad Bella straightened Edward & Emmett out. I am also glad he and Bella are okay.

 

I hope Carlie doesn't find a dom sex partner to take her summer in Europe. Or maybe it is Will.  Edward had his adventures in Europe on his brain.  Edward is still?  I guess I did not get that.  I think he finally starts listening to Bella.

 

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

leave it to emmett to teach that! cant wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

I love your story so.  Hearing about Alice's kid and Esme's words to Bella was rather emotional.  Emmett is still a scream and such a bad influance on Jack. :-)

Edward is still growing up but then he is a man. LOL.  

I like strong Bella very much.  I am glad she knocked some sense into Edward and Emmett. Poor Carlisle, does he not have enough to cope with?

Until the next time.

Reviewer: TwilightFann1969 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

I'm glad Edward and Emmett got their heads out of their asses where Carlisle is concerned. What the Hell? I didn't review last chapter because I was so broken up about Esme. I guess that's what happens with charcters. Enjoying this story bunches.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

still here and enjoying it

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

That was fun... I'm glad Bella put the smack down on Edward and Emmett!  Poor Carlisle. Rose is a riot!  I hope JJ is ok... thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Wolf Lover Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

Thanks for the kill free zone :) I'm still happily with you. Thanks! Nancy

Reviewer: luckychris37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

i was just wondering why everyone ends up killing esme off or they make her a bitch. great chapter....

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

Wow, that eas INCREDIBLE!  I really loved the lemon until stupid Emmett interrupted, hope they can do that again without being interrupted :)  I loved the rest of it too ;)

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

This has been one of my favorite stories...as soon as I see the update notice, I drop everything and run to read it.  I hate to see it end...but as they say...."All good things must come to and end".  Guess I'll just have to suck it up and deal with it.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2011 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

Aw esmes gone! I almost cried a few times, this chapter really minded me of how life goes by so fast and is so precious!

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

It wasn't expected and yes it was a huge shock, but as you said, there is suffering and loss in life. How we cope and deal is all part of it. The guys haven't been doing a good job, so Bella has had to be the rock everyone leans on. Just at different moments.

I lost my mom to cancer three years ago. I will always love her and miss her, but if my dad wanted to go out with someone, I will support him, it's not fair for a man to be alone and feel sad about himself and miss the love of his life. I am sure the ones looking from above don't like seeing them depressed.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

Can't say I'm glad that you killed Esme, but I understand. Carlie turned into a bit of a spoiled brat. Just because you are 18 does not mean you are old enough to run aroung Europe by yourself or with a boy. She is just asking for trouble. Few parents would say yes run around Europe with your boyfriend. It is ok. You have by blessing. She is living in an altered universe. I am with Edward keep your babies close. They have plenty of time to be adults, which is after they are 21.

Reviewer: twifan788 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

well it was hard to read actually im not familiar with a dead esme ,at least carlisle is healing.

wow carlie is a young lady now,will she marry will?

won't e&b have another baby?since time passed mayde there are new developments in medicine for bella's condition...

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One

Another great chapter......love love it!!!

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

One chapter in...and I am hooked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

well im glad that you are making it kind of like real life! cant till the next chapter

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

life goes on and kids grow up and parents die, sad but true

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

I am so sad that Esme is gone.  Bella just took over as the glue though.  I am glad she is making Carlisle live again.  Esme would want him to.  Edward and Emmett need to remember that.  They shouldn't want their Dad to be alone forever. 

Everything Carlie said at the end was perfect.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

:)

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

Death happens, I can accept that if it makes sense for the story.  What is hard to believe is that Esme knew she had cancer and ignored it - even being married to a doctor...that must have almost felt like a betrayal to poor Carlisle, once it was too late to treat.

Glad that Bella was able to step up and assume her role in the family, even if Edward is dumb enough to initiate a sexbargo to prove a point...hint, hint - nobody wins!

It has been quite fun watching this family and all their quirks interact over the years, and I look forward to see how you wind it down, just please don't kill Bella or Edward - the readers might stone you if that occurs

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

 great chapter. glad they used the money for good.  poor carlisle.

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

That was a lot to digest.  I cried hearing about Esme, she was so supportive of the family. 

Double standards are notorious of Dad's with daughters!  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

I shed a tear for Esme.  Other than that the chapter was wonderful.  Dear Edward can still act like a 5 year old, bless him.  Bella is great and is totally right to encourage Carlise to find someone else.  He doesn't want to be alone and why should he?  I am really going to miss this story when its done.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

You. Killed. Esme...

Holy shit!  *gasp*

... much later, after the shock has worn off...

Great chapter, moving things along quite nicely.

*cough*

Run for that safe house now.  Please, no babies should be harmed in writing this story. Thats a good dear.

*shakes head*

I cant fucking believe you killed Esme...

Although picturing a geriatric Carlisle gettiin' it on with the neighbor lady...

That HOT! *waggles eyebrows in Emmett fashion*  lol

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

Well I think the family death is appropriate. IT happens. This very thing happened in my husbands and when Papa took a new girlfriend all Hell broke loose. This was the daughters not accepting, the boys seemed to understand. Daddy was lonely. Only thing she was 18 years younger close to his oldest daughter's age. 

 

Oh well I am more concerned over Bella and Edward not getting along. He needs to realise she is the ROCK of His family. In fact Esme would be so proud of Bella.

 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much, despite the loss.  I cannot wait to find out what happens next :)

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

Great chapter!  Loved your A/N at the end.  Lol

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

Bella could help Edward do a lot of good with that money. She could help a lot of kids go to college that never would get the opportunity. Bella is smart. She will see why he took the money. He just has to present is correctly.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

Glad to see that life goes on, and they had a nice time away from the kids. 

Now, I am a bit confused why Bella would be so mad at Edward because of Carmen's will.  He had no knowledge of it and didn't ask for it, so why can she blame him for it and be mean to him...it is pretty much out of his hands...of course she may be upset when she finds out he is keeping the money, but it sounds like he has good things planned to use it on.

On a sidenote, what the heck did Carmen do for a living to leave that kind of estate behind...wowza

 

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