Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 73
Thank you for the quick update!! Feel bad for Edward.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 73
My heart was breaking for Em and Edward. I can see why Edward cant sleep, how could he other than sheer exhaustion.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 73
My heart is breaking for all of them.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 73
Congrats, you deserve it! Poor Edward, he will never forgive himself if something happens to her.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 73
i want more right now
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 73
I like
Your story has a lot of success in French
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 73
those poor boys.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 72
Carmen's not happy. Doesn't she know about how Emmett feels for Rose?
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 72
I'm back! Wow I leave for a week and all he'll breaks loose. Literaly blasted hogs just scored again. This may not be a good year for either of our foot ball teams :)
Well the story is just getting going. Can't wait for next week. I'll try to log on the forum and leave a longer review. It was great reading Meg.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 72
Poor Rosie, Carmen shouldn't have said that. I hope Rose takes charge!
Date: 09 Oct 2010 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 72
oh wow!
one positive rose is outta the whore house finally!
thanks for the little extra loved it as always!
Date: 09 Oct 2010 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 72
Carmen is a good women and is just freaking out right now I feel so sorry for her.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 71
Yep, my bad. Ooops? I'm with Bella on this---James is freaking scary---and yucky.
Gwen (who thinks Bella needs a gun, like now)
Date: 09 Oct 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 72
OOPS.. Carmen nailed it. Then again, she needs her.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 72
well i hope emmette will put carmen in her place ! cant wait till the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 72
well rose is a whore, maybe she shouldn't have said it but she's broken em's heart over and over again and like you said she's going through a tough time - so i don't blame her one bit. glad rose came though
Date: 08 Oct 2010 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 72
love it and can't wait for more
Date: 08 Oct 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 71
james is one sick puppy
Date: 08 Oct 2010 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 72
uh oh what did she do to carmen?
Date: 08 Oct 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 72
Thank you for the update!!! Can't wait to find out what happens next!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 72
Hahaha! Gotta love Carmen!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 72
oh dear...... guessing carmen is a little angrt. LOL
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 72
So happy for all the updates. Great job. Can't wait for more.
Date: 08 Oct 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 72
well i was kinda missing rosie as well.lol
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 72
Great to have Rosie back in the story! Thanks for all the new chapters this past week!
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 72
OOooo, cat fight! This ought to be good!
Hugs,
Gwen
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 72
Carmen sure doesnt have any love for Rosie. lol Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 72
I love you!!! Thanks for giving a junkie her fix! Go get'um Rosie!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 71
I cant wait to find out about what James has in his mind
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 71
well at least he's not some jerk and taking advantage of her right then and there, so as scary as it would be to be abducted by someone who thought they loved you, there are some perks as well. hope edward can get to them soon, hate having them apart. thanks for all the updates!!!!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 71
poor Bella. Hope they find her before anything really bad happens.
Date: 08 Oct 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 71
Poor Bella! At the hands of James! Hope she can escape, soon! It would also be great if Alice could shoot J and L!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 71
oh crap run bella and where the hell is edward! RUN DAMN YOU!
loved the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 71
Bella sure is in a world of trouble. It is not looking good for her.
Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 71
oh dang it, poor bella has to put up with a touchy,kissy and gross snake james. oh hurry edward, i am still pacing back and forth. lol
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 71
It's official, you hate me! You are killing me woman! Still love you bunches : )
Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 71
Love it..can't wait for more!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 71
I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for updates! Thanks for updating so often!
A couple of typos/mistakes: and went down her parched through she couldn’t help but drink thirstily. Do you mean parched throat ?
Also, at the end: as he whispered in her ear made her nauseous This should definitely be nauseated. To be nauseated is to feel sick to your stomach. To be nauseous is to make others feel nauseated. For example, sour milk is nauseous and if you smell it, it will probably make you feel nauseated. When in doubt, think of the words poisonous and poisoned. Nauseous and nauseated should be used the same way you would use poisonous and poisoned. That's how I always check to make sure I'm using the correct word.
I hope this is helpful!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 71
Hurry up boys and save Bella!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-)
Date: 08 Oct 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 71
i am so scared for bella ...update soon plz
Date: 08 Oct 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 70
I recently ran across this story, and I have to say that I was hesistant to read it just because I usually dont read western theme stories. But after the first 3 chapters I couldnt put it down. I read the whole thing in a day.....this is a really good story and I can not wait for the next chapter....I am hoping that James and Lauent gets what is coming to them!
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 70
Hmmm,Rosie will do them all proud,I just know she will.Hopefully Bella will fight the scum off long enough for them to find her.
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 69
This chappie made me cry,that's really all I can say.
Date: 08 Oct 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 70
Great chapter! I like that Edward's riding Bella's horse. I know it's really no big deal, but at the same time it's the small things that mean the most. :)
Date: 08 Oct 2010 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 70
I am so glad that Emmett sent for Rosie! Now she won't have to go back, he can just keep her. I hope they catch up to Bella soon!
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 70
yes alice is going!! haha loved the little demonstration and the dirty playing to get jasper to agree :D
Date: 07 Oct 2010 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 70
Alice is going to have to tell them all her secert????
Date: 07 Oct 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 70
felt a little tingly at the end with the anticipation...hope they find her...before she is raped or killed.
Date: 07 Oct 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 70
oh goodness i hope they make it in time.
Date: 07 Oct 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 70
love the idea of alice helping out
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 70
Thank goodness Em thought to get Rose to come back to the Ranch. I hope they get to Bella quickly.
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 70
Thanks for the frequent updates! It's so nice to get regular LH "fixes"!
One question/possible typo: Paul gave him a weary look but nodded.
Do you mean that Paul gave him a tired (weary) look or a guarded (wary) look? I wasn't sure which you meant and I thought it might be an important clue if you meant wary/guarded.
Author's Response:
Nope, definitely meant weary!
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 70
Yes! Although, it would be pretty funny if Bella manages, somewhat, to get away from James on her own... But who am I to deny Edward a swoon-worthy hero moment if not.
Gwen (Happy Eclipse is safe!)
Date: 07 Oct 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 70
as always excellent chapter. Keep it up.
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 70
Go Alice! She is my new hero. : ) Can't wait for Rosie to show!
Date: 07 Oct 2010 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 70
Ha ha ya gotta love Alice. :0) I wondered if Rose would get more involved in this story and now it looks like she will. Great job. I hope they find Bella and get her away from James soon. :0)
Date: 07 Oct 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 70
GO! GO ! Go!.. I am ready to save Bella and read some B&E action......Please don't hurt Bella!! Let her be okay. Shoot um up Alice !!!!
Date: 07 Oct 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 70
hmmm Alice gets to shoot off James' Dick I hope....
Date: 07 Oct 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 70
go edward go go ggo go !!!!!
hope they make it there super quick sticks
loved the chapter :o)
Date: 07 Oct 2010 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 70
well i hope they get to her in time cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 07 Oct 2010 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 69
wow! what a turn of events....i hope Eleazar lives because that would be really sad and I like having Carmen and Eleazar in this story together.
cant wait to read more!!
Date: 07 Oct 2010 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 69
I have to say your story is one of the most intricate and unique fanfics I have read, and I absolutely adore it! Can't WAIT for more!!! Keep it up!
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 69
Wow the hits just keep coming huh? damn!! I can't wait to see what else you have planned for these guys.
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 69
I was hoping they would make it in time. Damn!
Date: 07 Oct 2010 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 69
love it and can't wait for edward to kick james's ass
Date: 07 Oct 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 69
I hope they get those horses soon -- I am in almost as much of a hurry as Edward to rescue her and string up James and Laurent!
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 69
*still really scared for Bella*
Gwen
And where is Eclipse? I hope James gets a bullet right between the eyes! (Bloodthirsty aren't I?)
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 68
*still scared*
Gwen
Where's Eclipse????
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 67
Someone needs to hold my hand! *scared*
Gwen
ps, I really, really hate James
Date: 06 Oct 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 69
very nice!!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 69
Yikes..
GOOD story, you are playing it out and keeping it interesting. AND you update often.
GOD BLESS YOU,
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 69
Such a sad chapter, poor Alice had to tell them that Bella was gone and what happened. Then after that they cant even leave because the horses are tired and they cant find the other horses.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 69
Several great chapters! Lots of excitement! I don't know what else to say except that I'm really glad the updates have been so frequent.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 69
thank you for the quick chapters. Love the story. Hope Eleazar makes it.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 69
whoo hoo, saddle up boys and lets go kick some ass!! okay sometimes i get carried away. lol
Date: 06 Oct 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 69
I love you and cant wait for another chapter. Thanks for not killing Eleazar.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 69
oh man, i guess it was too much to hope that someone heard them talking and saying names. but maybe rose will know something? she's in town and doesn't hang out with the best people, so that would be a good way to bring her back and for her to help em. gosh this must be tough, where are they even going to start? great story, thanks for the double chapter update :D
Date: 06 Oct 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 69
That's gotta be torture to want to go after the men that took Bella but not be able to.
Is it at all possible that Rose found out what James is up to or that she'll hear he has Bella and that she'll be able to get to Emmett and let him know??? ha ha I'm just looking for a way they can get Bella back and also get Rose involved. or maybe Bella can escape somehow your Bella seems pretty tough. :0) Looking forward to seeing how this all plays out.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 69
Hope Elezar is ok
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2010 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 69
Eleazar is still alive!!! Oh I can almost breathe again. Almost! I hope Carlise makes it to Eleazar soon.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 69
Yay, got me another fix of this story today. Great chapter!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 69
Yes you have us hook line and sinker.. Now go save Bella!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 68
I knew that the men would see the fire, but there was no way they could get there in time to help with anything other than the aftermath. I was not expecting the fire at all. It def left me wanting to read more.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 68
I feel bad about all the cattle but I was so happy when they headed back to the ranch at full speed. They are going to lose there mind I hope they find all alive.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 68
Oh I really hope you can post again today. I need my fix. Lol. I'm on the edge of my seat and can't wait to find out what happens next!!