Date: 15 Oct 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 78
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh of course, well it's a good story - so much anticipation is building! Thanks for the update!
Date: 15 Oct 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 77
Good chapter! Damn, Carmen has the attitude ! I was afraid Rose would encounter that.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 77
good story ,keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 77
Poor Tyler. I think Rose is doing a great job.
Date: 15 Oct 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 77
Oh No!! Miss Rosie is doing a fab job taking care of things,but now she has to take on the responsibility of Tyler's death *shakes head*,poor poor Rosie.
Hope Emmett and the gang can get Bella home safe and sound soon.I don't like Miss Carmen's attitude toward Miss Rosie,she may be going through alot and this may have a setting of in the older days, but Miss Rosie just gave up everything for Emmett,so Miss Carmen needs to build a bridge and get over it already. I also didn't like it that she threw perfect food away out of spite,*shakes head* just isn't right.Well at least there were gentleman present.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 77
oh man, if carmen doesn't streighten out em's going to have to have a few words with her. hate having her act so mean. well, if you find time to post tomorrow it will be beyond exciting but if not have a good weekend too!
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 77
I'm beaming with pride for Rose! Just so proud. Heartbroken that Carmen is acting so cold. Patron will be disappointed.
Very sad that life and work will keep you from playing with us tomorrow. I so understand. That will my next week. The forums have been fun the last 2 weeks. Need to catch up on the drinking.
Thanks for feeding my addiction. Meg
Date: 14 Oct 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 77
oh no!
but good on paul rose deserves some back .
good luck on your deadline xx
Date: 14 Oct 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 77
Carmen needs to get off her high horse and accept Rosie. She is really starting to make me a bit angry with her. look forward to more.
Date: 14 Oct 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 77
that is okay and i want to beat carmen for making those comments about rose
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 77
My goodness, so sad about Tyler. So much going on - hope the guys make it to Bella soon! Thanks so much for the back-to-back updates!
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 77
Like Paul's admission---awesome. And again, go Rose!
Gwen
Date: 14 Oct 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 77
No worries... We shall be patiently waiting for your return :-)
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 77
I feel like I killed Tyler, lol! Oh well, Eleazar is much more important than some cowpoke! Seems to me, Rosie needs to put Carmen in her place sooner than later about her attitude. Can't wait to see how their relationship plays out. Carlise must be so torn by leaving Esme and helping the others when he knows she won't stay off her feet unless he is there to make her. If anything happens to her or the baby, he will be beside himself in grief! If we don't hear from you I hope you meet your deadline and have some time for yourself this weekend. You will be missed but I think I can handle withdrawals for three days : )
Date: 14 Oct 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 77
aww poor tyler.
Date: 14 Oct 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 77
Poor Tyler head injurys are a trick thing. I thank you for keeping Eleazar alive so far anyway please let him live so he can help put Carmen mind at ease. Carmen is really being a bitch to Rose.
I hope you get your work done. I will miss you if you are not able to update till next week but I will put my big girl pantys on and wait LOL.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 76
I hope they are getting closer. I hope they are right in going south. I want Alice and Edward to handle up on James. Edward was denied in the books... So I hope you let him have at it. Oh so what is in Jame's pocket? I bet Alice will shoot him in the chest. Sorry I missed reviewing a few chapters in the 60's. Forgive me?
How is Esme doing? Will Doc C bring her to the ranch? What will happen when the town finds out what all has happened? The Sheriff, and school teacher and doctor are sure to be missed soon.
What is Mallory trying to do. make Em sell? Damn Edward for being a dumb kid after losing his parents and having to sell off his land.
Can't wait for more!!! you give us so much! It is a blast to follow along with you are we enjoy the adventure out west. - meg
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 75
Oh Shit! James is a sick sick crazy man. I do not envy who ever suck in to Bella's room. Meg
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 74
Well I am proud of Rose! She handled her self well! KUDOS to her and Em's wise decision to bring her to the ranch. I hope Carmen will come around when Patron comes back. Meg
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 73
Poor Edward. I cant imaging what you have going through his head. makes me want to kick James in the family jewels.
Yea! for being in the top 10! You deserve it and the story is too good not to leave a little love. meg
Date: 13 Oct 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 76
James is very bad but he protect her.
Good chapter
Date: 13 Oct 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 75
Good chapter again.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 74
Another good chapter.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 73
Good chapter.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 72
Good chapter again.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 76
please post another chapter, I'm so ready for them to geet her back . lol.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 71
Good chapter.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 70
Another good chapter.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 76
love it! love the quick updates!
Date: 13 Oct 2010 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 69
Another good chapter.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 68
Good chapter again.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 67
Hope eleazar is not dead please.
Good chapter
Date: 13 Oct 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 66
oh no....*run for read the next chapter*
Date: 13 Oct 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 76
Good for Bella. I'm glad she protected herself. :0)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 75
Gotta hurry and see wha the scream was for...
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 76
yes it has and i can't wait for more
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 74
Rose is really stepping in and helping out. :0)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 73
How frustrating it must be for them to have to stop for the night. I hope they get to Bella before anything bad happens. :0)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 76
I think that in that day it took longer to get anywhere and communication was definetly harder so you could not call ahead.
Oh poor Bella.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 76
That's because more time HAS passed, for us... that's the problem with short chapters, they feel like they take a lot longer than they are...
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 76
Go Bella, that'll teach 'em!!! ; ) Can't wait til Alice gets a chance to do something too! (Wow, I'm vicious, huh?)
Gwen
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 76
You are a very evil writer :-) I just new when they came upon the shack Bella would be saved.. Oh you torture so.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 76
Wow at least James did something right shooting him.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 76
shot to the nuts good and I love that she ripped them.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 76
wow that was great..poor edward he is so upset.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 76
edward is so pissed and i hope he gets to tear james balls off. i hope bella can hang in their a while longer.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 76
Oh I can't wait for the next chapter, and when they catch up to Bella and James.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 76
Go Bella! At least she could fend his attack off! Good chapter!
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 76
Hi ho silver ..AWAY>>>>
I still say call the lone ranger cause i still feel that Edward is taking to long.lol
I am just ready for them to be reunited.....I get inpatient
I love this story can't wait for more updates.
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 76
i knew it! that's my girl!
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 76
I really hope they get to Bella soon,I hate seeing Edward so heartbroken.Emmett is going to tear some bodies head off if lil Alice doesn't do it first. Despite James kidnapping Bella he doesn't seem that bad in this story.Hmmm *scratches head and shrugs* Maybe he just wants someone to love.
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 76
oh gosh, go bella!! but they are so close, i hope they can get to bella in the next chapter, please update soon - all this suspense is really getting to me haha
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 76
I was thinking it had been days since she was gone . Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 76
My heart was pounding the entire time! Poor Bella! Poor Edward! Poor Me!!! Forget Gwen, (sorry ( : ) I'm going to have a heart attack!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 75
Yeah James is a sick SOB. I hope he gets whats coming to him.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 75
I just started this story today and I"m in love with it. Can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 75
damn.......better call the lone ranger to save her,edward is taking tooo long.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 75
thats horrible! and i cant wait till edward and emmett get her back and beat the living shit out of james and his possy!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 75
killer how can you leave us here ! no fair damn you
but man its getting bloody good lol
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 75
LOL, ITA about James. ICKY BASTARD. *shudders* Hate James. Mucho.
Gwen
Date: 12 Oct 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 75
Poor Bella!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 75
hope she is screaming from her dreams only.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 75
Did one of them other sick bastards sneak in there????? If they did I think they will be dead I am sure James made it clear that she was his.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 75
love it and can't wait for more.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 74
wow carmen was rude
Date: 12 Oct 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 75
I tried to send a comment from the last chapter, but was having computer issues:
First, I love that Rosie just stepped in and really took charge. I hope that this shows her that she belongs with Emmett and on his ranch.
Second, James is super creepy. I don't know what Bella is screaming about, but I hope that Edward hears her too!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 75
sigh you're killing me.
LOL
Date: 12 Oct 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 75
ewww what a creep.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 75
wow he really is sick..great chapter.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 75
oh jeez, i am wearing out the carpet pacing again, hurry edward hurry. ewww just ewwwwww ,bella needs some clean clothes and a bathe to wash away all the nastiness of james.
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 75
i bet my left tit that scream was from raoul lmao if i know my girl bella i know she light his ass on fire from trying to touch her lmao
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 75
ahh another cliffhanger, but thanks again for posting multiple posts at once. gosh, what is with bella? hopefully she's just freaked because she's in a tiny room alone and there's nothing else going on. great chapters
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 75
OMG!!! James is so f'ing creepy. And you let him use Edwards shirt to wipe off his nasty filth? How could you? LOL! I think you are going to give Gwen a heartattack with this last chapter!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 75
Thanks for all the updates! It's really nice to get frequent updates when the story is at such an exciting/intense point.
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 74
Go Rose!!! *cheers*
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 12 Oct 2010 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 74
Rose is a good person!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 74
Rose is a good person she was just put in a bad place at a young age. I dont think Carmen is against her because she is a whore I think it is because she has seen what it has done to Emmett.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 74
well it looks like rosalie is gonna do a fine job on handling things for emmett, i am sure he will give her a BIG reward .....giggles......
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 74
Go Rosie! Woot Woot Woot!!! The Big E Ranch is never going to be the same
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 74
Yikes! Carmen has a sharp tongue! Rose has such a good grasp of things ~ surely after this Em will be proposing again!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 74
I absolutely love this story. Keep up the wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 74
I am glad Rose got everything sorted. I cant believe how much Carmen hates her.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 74
good chapter. hope carmens attitude changes towards rose. I suspect after this ordeal she just may become his wife.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 73
top ten because you write with feeling and substance. Too many are elongated sex scenes that quite frankly are repetitious, story lines are weak.
And the biggest thing is you keep the story going. Updates are often.
No matter how good a story is if you update monthly or every 6 weeks. I have to reread a few chapters to get back into it.
THANK YOU,
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 73
good chapter hopoe to read more soon
Date: 11 Oct 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 73
wow good chapter.. Congrats on being in the top ten!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 73
oh poor edward , i just want to climb in his bedroll and snuggle with him ......................okay i would do more than snuggle ....snickers.......
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 73
Yeah! Thank God for Jacob! (Yeah, NEVER thought I'd say that.)
Gwen *giggling*
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 73
oh gosh the separations definitely killing me, but i'm so glad that you update so frequently - if this had been a story that only updated once a week or month, i'm not sure i would have made it haha