[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 84
Totally wasn't expecting that! The last chapter was full of action and left with a cliffie so I didn't get where you were going with it until I reached towards the end of the chapter and figured out you jumped way ahead.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 25
Emmett will do anything to get out of going to church won't he?? I wonder what James wants and why he is staring at Bella?
Date: 29 Oct 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 24
That was funny that Alice got Emmett to say he was sorry to her. Edward and Bella both got good advise lets see if they follow it.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 84
LMAO, I'm sorry that someone damned you to hell! That's funny though. It wasn't me was it?? Lol, kidding. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 84
whew!....she's ok....you had me so worried in the beginning of this chapter! so happy you're doing a sequal!
Date: 29 Oct 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 84
Loved it! Thank you for not killing B off!
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 84
wow how far did you jump ahead in this chapter? 6-7 months?
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 84
What happened to Mallory and his property?
Is Rose living with them now?
What is going on with Alice and Jasper?
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 84
well that is not what i expected but it was interesting and good. look forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2010 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 84
Oh, that was mean! O_O I was, like, WHAT???! And then I realized it was all a bad dream! Whew. *_*
Gwen *giggles & sighs* Some ride!
Date: 29 Oct 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 84
so sweet and no a long wait..... you can come back out from under the bed now all is forgiven lol
love this story
Date: 29 Oct 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 84
well i hope that in the end that everything turns out alright fort he both of them
Date: 29 Oct 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 84
You totally freaked me out! I am glad alls well that ends well. I will definitely read the sequel!
Date: 29 Oct 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 84
lol...nice :)
Date: 29 Oct 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 83
you can't do that - please?
Date: 29 Oct 2010 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 26
your realy doing a good jod on this story and i really like it to
Date: 29 Oct 2010 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 25
you are welcome and im realy loving the story
Date: 29 Oct 2010 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
thats ok its a good story
Date: 29 Oct 2010 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 23
this one is realy good to
Date: 29 Oct 2010 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
yeah but its realy good to i like it
Date: 29 Oct 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 23
So now Edward is in the doghouse with Bella again. I think that he needs to just open up to her because she might just be the person to talk to.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 22
Is Emmett really upset that Edward is taking Bella out to show her the ranch or is it all of the other stuff that is weighing him down?
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 21
How cute is he that he brought the kitten back for Bella!!!
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 20
Aww... Little Bella was jealous when she saw Edward with another girl!
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
That is really sad that Emmett and Rose can't even talk to each other. I really thought that Rose would listen to what he had to say.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
Well I guess that they are going to be getting looks for a while aren't they? And what is it that the banker needs to talk to Emmett about?
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well at least Edward got Bella to laugh that is a start!
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
Well it doesn't seem like Bella is going to let Edward off that easily. And poor Emmett is only thinking of Rose as wife material and thinking of Alice as a friend I am sure that Jasper would take care of Alice if he could get Rose.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
It is good that Edward finally know what is bothering Bella. I really hope that she forgives him for making fun of him.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh man they are all in so much trouble with Carmen.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well at least Alice and Bella got to meet and get to know each other. Can't say the same thing for Emmett, Edward and Jasper!
Date: 29 Oct 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well what a way to meet the person that you are going to be married to!! I really hope that Emmett and Edward feel like asses tomarow.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh man this isn't going to go well for Emmett when he finds out what happened in town with his bride. Of all the people to get into a fight with.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
Well what would have caused Alice to wind up in a jail cell upon first getting off the coach in town?? And Emmett is about to have problems because Jasper has just fallen for his bride.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
Ok now that was just funny even if it ended with Edward getting beaten up! I just hope that Emmett can forgive him.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh I think that Edward is going to be in trouble with Emmett for this one even if he didn't do anything.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
And there is Edward always helping people. I am cracking up that they are meeting for the first time when she falls off the fence and ripping her shirt.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
So Emmett is going to marry Alice. I hope that Rose doesn't cause trouble for her when she finally gets there.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well I am guessing that Edward works for Emmett in this story and is working with the cattle.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well I guess that Rose should have asked more questions about who came to live with Emmett. I just hope that Emmett can get through to her.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
I wonder how Emmett is going to handle people showing attention to Bella or whatever they said back then.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well it seems like Jasper just got it all wrong. It is sad that word never got to Emmett about his parents passing.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Somehow I am thinking that she isn't the person that he had sent for but I could be wrong.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 83
OH NO, I hope Bella's ok. Great chapter.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 83
omg you are killing me. I knew that bastard Riley would be up to no good.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 83
omg! NO! please don't let her die!
Date: 29 Oct 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 83
well jeez poor bella is really taking a beating. great chapter
i hope i get to read and review the next couple of chapters but i am going camping for a week or two with no luxury of internet or computer. i will have to catch back up, but this chapter will do me until then.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 83
oh no..........not our Bella. You can't save people back then. They died of gunshot wounds.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 83
You left us THERE?!?!?!?!!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Date: 28 Oct 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 83
oh no!!! update!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 83
OMG, I think you are trying to kill me and Gwen, LOL. I would be needing some heavy drink right about now if I didn't have a clue as to what is still to come.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 83
what a cliffy? now i want more
Date: 28 Oct 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 82
love this bella alot
Date: 28 Oct 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 81
i missed this story because i was moving and was getting cable set back up and that took a week
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 83
O my, she just gets saved to be shot???!! I hope she lives. Cant wait for an update now, lol.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 83
oh holy crap !
you have to be kidding me ! really! omg omg omg !!!
Date: 28 Oct 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 83
M:
Grrrr. I dub you the queen of cliff hangers.
However, I do love your story.
Michelle L.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 83
WHATTTTTTTTTTTTT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!Enough said..
There will be an update like in the next few minutes RIGHT????
I know you are not that Mean.
I am using mind control now YOU WILL UPDATE NOW YOU WILL UPDATE NOW YOU WILL UPDATE NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW. Nothing can move forward until you UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now...PLEASEEEEEEEEE!!!! I am not above begging
Date: 28 Oct 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 83
I just started reading your story, and I absolutely love it!! I believe I am addicted to it! I can't wait to see what happens! Please let Bella make it! You are a terrific writer!!
Date: 28 Oct 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 83
well i hope that she makes it for the sake of edward keep the chapter comming
Date: 28 Oct 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 83
WOW poor bella. Carlisle's gonna have a hell of a time fixing her up..... Hmmmm I'm thinking that B & E should get Mallory's land for their troubles.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 83
O.M.G! *shrieks very loudly* Here I was, all happy and clapping that No-Good James is dead---and then, gasp!!! Bella! (Now chanting along with Edward, "No, no, no. No!")
Gwen (biting her nails nervously)
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 83
NOOOOOOOOO!!!! Bella can't get shot!!!!! Update soon please. I have to know what happens. Great job!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 83
oh snap, she got shot??? well at least james and everyone is dead so they just need to fix her up, but they have her. update soon please :D
Date: 28 Oct 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 83
OMG..... really bad place to leave off..... god damn you!
Date: 28 Oct 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 83
oh my god non
Deeply the continuation
Date: 28 Oct 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 83
ok after all they have been through I have to believe that she is going to recover from her wound. It would be to heartbreaking if she didn't.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 82
Eager to read the next chapter.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 81
Short but good.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 80
Good chapter again.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 79
good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 82
great chapter sure know how to make a cliff hanger lol cant wait to read more like always
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 82
Oh wow, thanks for the update! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 27 Oct 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 82
Thank you for the cavalry!
Date: 27 Oct 2010 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 82
They should of shot James first but I know you have other things planed and I trust you this has been the best story so far i cant wait for more
Date: 27 Oct 2010 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 82
how many shots will it take to bring down those nasty men? hopefully we will know soon, lol. great chapter.
Date: 27 Oct 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 82
I am missing your double updates.
Things are very busy here.
Date: 27 Oct 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 82
ugh finally!
how slow was that horse! lol
good chapter
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 82
Finally they are going to get Bella out of there. Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 82
oh of course you held off for one more chapter, gosh no one's going to live once they see bella's face, are they? hope they get james good. please update soon if you can, hope life settles down some (or keeps being crazy as long as its a good/fun crazy)
Date: 27 Oct 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 82
I am very disappointed that the rescue is being dragged out for another chapter......
Date: 27 Oct 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 82
Yah....looks like help is there!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 82
Exciting! Hope there's a bullet (or two) for James in there soon!
Gwen (Really, really hates James)
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 82
James is so going down!!!!! Loved the update, thank you!
Date: 27 Oct 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 82
Poor B. Hope someone beats the crap out of James for his comments to B about just do what I say.
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 82
omg!, did Edward and the gang finally find her!?
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 82
well i hope they get to her in time ! keep the chapters comming
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 82
All right! Now we're getting to the gun fight and Alice's awesome skills!!!
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 21
you are doing a realy good job on this storie and i hope you make some more stories to.
Date: 26 Oct 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 81
oh good, let the kick assing of those snakes begin. whoo hoo and maybe poor bella can get some licks in too.
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 81
LOL... Thanks so much for the quick post. Mixed feelings about the gun shot wound... But happy Rose and Carmen have formed a Team. Good Luck with School! - Meg
Date: 26 Oct 2010 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
i like the story so far
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 81
I HATE James. (It bears repeating.)
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 26 Oct 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 81
Go Rose!