Date: 02 Nov 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 85
I love this story.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 85
omg that was funny , love it and feel ready to go finish my day at work now :o)
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2010 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 85
One word for this chater.......FUNNY! Just too funny they mess they got into. I knew Rose would know Bella was in the room, I guess Em just didnt even imagine her in there. LOL
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2010 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 85
Such a great chapter! What fun! Poor Edward! It is fortunate that one can't die of embarrassment.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 85
I am still laughing out loud!!
Michelle L.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 67
Oh shit! The boys are already spread thin and now this! Poor carmen! I have a deal with hubbie, I get to die first! Heehee I don't think I would last long without him he is my other half.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 85
hysterically funny chapter. loved it.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 85
very funny ending to the chapter. needed a good laugh and reason to smile and you definitely delivered.
thanks!
Date: 02 Nov 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 85
ha ha I wondered if he'd ever find out that Bella saw him in only his hat and boots that time. :0) This was funny with Emmett. It was so nice for Rose to cover for Bella like that. It shows they the girls have become pretty close.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 85
O M G!!! I am laughing SO HARD right now!
That was just...freaking great!!!!
Gwen (still laughing)
Date: 02 Nov 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 85
Ah, I loved it. You had me cracking up.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 85
Best Parts:
Rosie peeked in, looking from one naked man to another. “Well, I have to say, the sight of you two naked together in a bedroom is something I would’ve never imagined seeing.” Emmett blushed and scowled a bit.
“C’mon, Em. I think I can appreciate your nudity more than Edward can and we wouldn’t want to wake Bella. I just checked on her and she’s sound asleep,” Rosie added.
Emmett scowled at Edward one more time and turned to leave. When his back was turned, Rosie winked in Edward’s direction. It was obvious that she knew that Bella was in there.
She nodded and rested crossed her arms over the edge of the mattress and rested her chin on them. There was a genuinely curious look on her face as she asked, “What’d Bear catch you doing in the shower?”
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 85
LOL! that was priceless! i can't wait for them to finish that conversation!
Date: 02 Nov 2010 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 66
The men folk are off defending the cattle and the women have to hold down the homestead and wait for their hearts to come back.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2010 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 33
i hope edward marrys alice because they are a good couple and im a fan of edwards i like him so much i love this story to
Date: 02 Nov 2010 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 32
you are doing a realy good job on this story and i hope you write some more about it and i realy love it
Date: 31 Oct 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 84
Hurry to see the next chapter
Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 83
Good chapter.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 31
you did a realy good job
Date: 31 Oct 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 84
Well that was not nice but I guess that we at least know that they are getting married and that Bella is alright. Oh and Rose is pregnant!!! Wow I guess that Emmett is going to get the family that he has always wanted.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 83
Oh no!!! Bella can't die!! I can't believe that James has been carrying around a picture of her for years hoping that she would come here to stay with her brother!
Date: 31 Oct 2010 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 82
Well I think that they are finally making their move on getting Bella back! I wonder what Emmett and Edward are going to do when they see Bella's face.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 81
Well now I hope that Carmen and Rose can band together to get through all of this crap that seems to come their way! I hope that they go in soon and get Bella!
Date: 31 Oct 2010 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 80
Oh man so it wasn't James and Laurent that shot Emmett it was Mallary!! I hope that Rose hurt him because him and his band of no good men deserve whatever is coming to them.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 79
Well maybe Carmen and Rose are working out their problems even if they just got alot worse by Mr. Mallary coming to The Big E. And Jenks is risking his life for Bella and she doesn't even know it! I just hope that he gets to them before James and Laurent wake up.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 78
At least Bella is going to get to put on clothes that will cover her up. I just hope that James doesn't try something else with her because it might get ugly for her then.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 77
It seems that Rose has things better under control than anyone thought that she would and I am glad for that one. How sad is it that Tyler has passed away now and they are already short handed and now even more so.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 76
I am glad that it seems that they are gaining on them and they are problally only a couple of hours ahead of them. I wonder what is going on at The Big E?
Date: 31 Oct 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 75
Well I guess that James shouldn't have trusted all of them. He didn't see Raoul staring and I am thinking that he is the person that Bella is screaming about.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 74
Well I hope that Carmen will come to see that Rose is doing the best job that she can with what information that she has been given.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 73
It is really sad that Edward doesn't know that he is sitting in the same place th at Bella was at. Emmett and the others just have to find Bella before something bad happens to her.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 72
Is Carmen mad because of all of the heartache that Emmett has been through because of Rose?? I really hope that is all it is and there isn't going to be anymore problems while Emmett is gone from those two he really doesn't need that too.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 71
Wow I wonder where they are and how far they are from The Big E.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 70
Well at least Alice is there and is on their side! I would really hate to be on the other side when it comes to that.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 69
There is so much going on right now it is sad that they have more people out there that don't know what is happening and they have to deal with this and try to get word to the rest of them.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 68
At least Edward saw what was happening to the barn and now there are others coming to help.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 67
Oh man they have killed Elazar and now possibly Alice and Tyler! I really hope that Emmett, Jasper and Edward can get to Bella before something bad happens to her too.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 66
Oh no James and Laurent waited until all the men were gone and now are going to hit the homestead. Emmett isn't going to be happy about this one.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 65
Well I guess that I was wrong and now Emmett is losing money right now as we speak! I hope that everything is going to be ok.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 64
Well leave it to Emmett to overreact and ruin poor Edward's proposal. Well she said yes and now Alice and Bella have weddings to plan!
Date: 31 Oct 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 63
Maybe they will keep the cattle away from that part of the ranch for a while. I hope that noone get hurt or dies because of that.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 62
They are trying to kill off Emmett's cattle and it seems like they might just win at this one.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 61
Emmett is really a wonderful brother to let Edward buy part of the land from him. That is sweet of him because it use to be his land before and it is like it is coming full circle.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 60
YEA!!! Jasper finally got her to say yes! I am glad that she finally told Jasper about her past and it seems that Alice did it to protect someone and that is a good thing I knew that Alice couldn't kill someone in cold blood.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 59
Oh what a smart man Jasper is!! Now will Alice go along with it or tell them that Jasper is lying and not be able to keep her job.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 58
Who is watching them?? Hopefully it isn't one of the children.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 57
It is nice that Jasper isn't giving up on her even though she is trying to get him to because of her past.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 56
I hope that Edward doesn't wait too long to ask Bella to marry him it might get Emmett off his back a little to know that he wants forever with his sister.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 55
Who did Alice murder??? That is kinna scary that Alice is wanted for that it surely has to be a mistake!
Date: 31 Oct 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 54
I am crackin up that Emmett wanted to have that conversation with Bella!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 84
This chapter was amazing, I had to re-readit a few times to make sure that I was reading it right! You have done and amazing job with this story, I can't wait for the wedding and the night before!!!!!! I can't wait for the sequal, you have done an amazing job. Thank you for writting.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 84
Not at all, great way to leave us hanging! :-) Thanks for the update!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 84
The start of this chapter was brilliant.......if any damning should take place it would be after that first paragraph...haha
Date: 30 Oct 2010 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 29
this story is starting to get better i love it even more
Date: 30 Oct 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 84
So glad she's ok. I was a little worried when I was reading Edwards dream at the beginning. Sad to see that the story is ending, but I know it can't go on forever. I've really enjoyed reading it. :0)
Date: 30 Oct 2010 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 83
Oh no! .... she's gotta be ok. They finally found her she can't die now.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 28
it is starting to be realy good and i realy love it i hope you keep writing more about this story
Date: 30 Oct 2010 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 82
yay the rescue has begun!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 81
Really loving this story
Date: 30 Oct 2010 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 80
Go Rose! I hope it wasn't just a warning shot. :0) I don't think she'd kill him but she could hurt him enough that he couldn't get away so that Em could deal with him when he got back. :0) I'm so happy Jenks reached Alice, Edard and the others.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 79
Yay Jenks is going to help lead the search party to Bella. Wish he would have gotten Bella and just brought her along with him. :0) Glad James and Laurentt passed out.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 53
Well I am sure that Emmett would have killed Edward if he knew what him and his sister just did out in the woods.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 52
How sweet is it that Emmett saved Edward and helped him out when he needed it the most.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 51
Wow what happened so that Edward doesn't have any land and Emmett and Mallory own everything that use to be his?? And how awesome is it that he is finally talking about his past!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 50
How sweet is her brother to get her her own horse that she has wanted for years!! oh and it might be a good thing that Jacob is coming back to the Big E to help out.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 49
Well I guess that whoever is doing this is watching Bella that is what is making me think that it is James because of the way that he is always leering @ her.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 48
Well what is this present that has both Edward and Emmett all excited? I am also glad that Emmett is starting to get use to the thing that is happening between his sister and his friend.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 47
Is Alice in trouble with the law and that is why she won't marry Jasper?? I am glad that noone has been seriously hurt in all of this but I am thinking that it is going to get worse.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 46
What is Alice's past is not letting her just accept her feelings for Jasper. He wants to marry her and we all know that she does too but there is something that she hasn't told anyone yet that is causing her to question her feelings.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 45
Well I really hope that Jasper makes it back to town in one piece since he left before Edward was ready to come with him.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 44
Ok so maybe it wasn't Jasper. I hope that they can find the person that did that to Emmett.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 43
Oh man did Jasper lose his mind when he saw Emmett?? I really hope not because that might not turn out well for the Sheriff.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 42
Well That is terrible that their time together today must end but guess all good things must come to an end sometime.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 41
Wow! Is it James or Laurent that is going to be causing the problems or the both of them together. Why is Alice now saying that she can't be with Jasper!!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 40
Well I guess that Bella did the hard part for Emmett and he should be thankful to her for that. Jasper's whole flower incident cracked me up! Who did he think that he was fooling.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 39
How sweet is it that Edward is making sure to keep his promise and take her to see Alice.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 38
It is good that Bella and Emmett are talking and she is right in that he needs to talk to Alice and i think that she is going to take it better than he thinks that she is.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 37
It is sweet that Edward came to find out how Bella was doing but I am thinking that he was inquiring about something else and got interupted but I could be wrong!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 36
Well I am glad that Emmett is finally letting his emotions go because keeping that stuff inside is really bad for you to do that. Hopefully Emmett will find peace in letting this stuff go and find the strength that he needs to let the people that matter the most to him in this world know how he feels.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 35
Finally!! I never thought that Edward was going to make a move with Bella. And she confronted him about Rose! I hope that he comes clean with Bella about him not being able to marry Alice but still wanting her to stay.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 34
Well I guess that the Big E will be short 2 people at least for a while. I am glad that they are both going to be ok.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 33
Man it is terrible that Mallory's men are playing dirty and now Alice and Bella are in the line of fire and that is not what they need! Emmett, Edward and Jasper are going to be looking out for blood after this.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 32
I am glad that Bella had a chance to talk to Rose about what she saw. I think that Rose needs to listen to Bella and what she has to say because she knows Emmett well and might be able to help everyone involved in this mess.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 31
How sad is it that Bella knows all of this and can't say anything!! I really hope that she talks to Emmett about what she saw.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 30
Well I wonder what he is going to say to Bella now that she has seen him with Rose.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 29
So Emmett is totally clueless as to Alice and Jasper. I wonder how hard Emmett is going to take it when he finds out that Bella and Edward like each other.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 84
OMG it is such a relief to find out that Bella is ok. I really was anxious about her. I love this story so much and feel connected to the characters. You are doing an awesome job. Keep up the great work and can't wait for more.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 84
lol confused the hell out of me in the beginning of this chapter loved it like the rest cant wait for more
Date: 30 Oct 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 28
It is good that they are missing each other.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 27
I really hope that rose gets a chance to talk to Emmett soon about what she has heard.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 84
I am so very happy you will do a sequel, continuation. I love your writing.
You weren't damned to hell, just worried us all. Because at that time gun shot wounds usually ended in death.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 84
love it and cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 84
LoL, I think I can see why you got evil comments. This is a great story and the cliffhanger had me screaming at my laptop. So glad it was a bad dream.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 84
you BITCH! almost had me crying lmao! you total bitch! oh my gosh when edward was screaming i was tearing up, thenedward woke up. the only word in my mind was Bitch. i'm super excited to read the continueation though
Date: 29 Oct 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 26
it is good that Rose is helping Emmett even if he doesn't know that she is.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 84
I almost freaked about his dream and then i thought i missed a chapter then i caught on im a little slow some time LOL. I am loving this story