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Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 65

this is a very good chapter to

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 64

im am happy for them all

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 87

gotta love Emmett's timing, wonderful chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 62

i like this one to

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 61

a very good chapter

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 60

im glade that jasper marryed alice because she look so lonely and i felt bad for her and you did a good job one this chapter to.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 57

thats all right i still love the story so far hope you keep writing and you are doing a very good job on this story to.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 55

no it was realy good and i realy loved it to keep up the good work to.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 53

that was a good chapter to

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Date: 07 Nov 2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 52

very good chapter i love it

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 51

you are dong a good job

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 49

well any way your still doing a good job and the story is getting better to.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 48

i am realy enjoying this story it is realy good to me and keep up the good work to.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 47

hopfully someone marrys alice because im feeling realy bad for her and i hope bella and edward gets marry to they make a good couple to i love this story it makes me want to cry keep doing a good job on it.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 46

we dont hate you i realy love you story and you are doing realy good on it to.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 45

i realy do love this chapter and you are doing a realy good job on it to.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 44

i realy love the chapter and the story and you are doing a realy good job on it toand i hope emmett will be ok to.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 43

this is a realy long story but i realy love it and i hope you write some more and you are doing a realy good job to.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 42

i reraly do enjoy this story and i hope you keep writing some more to.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 41

it is all right i love the story so far you are doing a realy good job and im a edward fan to so its all good.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 40

i didn't have trouble at all and it was a good chapter to and i realy love it you are doing a good job on it to.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 38

it is realy,realy good keep them coming im realy loving it to

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 34

it is geting better as i keep reading im realy loveing it to and i hope you keep writing some more to

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 87

The baby is coming for Esme and Bella and Edward are married. Good chapter.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 86

Awww how perfect that he is getting the Ranch and Em gave them the part with the tree.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 86

Good chapter again.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 85

Good chapter.

Reviewer: shookie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 87

LOL Love Emmy

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 87

Wonder what Alice thinks of "her vision" for the wedding now. ha ha The baby is coming! How exciting. :0)

Reviewer: Mari Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 87

OMG, very nice!  Em is too funny! Glad E/B are now man & wife and looks like we get a new baby soon! Can't wait!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 86

It brought tears to my eyes when Em told Edward he gave them the land that had his parents tree. Bella was pretty smart to buy Bar none. I like that they'll all get to stay close.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 87

Aww... Esme is having Edward's neice or nephew on his wedding day!! That is so exciting!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 86

Aww... Now Edward owns part of what use to be his parents!! That is sweet that Bella and Emmett did that for him.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 85

Oh that was funny! I thought that Emmett was going to shoot him but I am really glad that he didn't but probally would have if he knew what was going on in there.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 87

omg....too funny! had to be Emmett....lol!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 87

Loved it!!!

Reviewer: Mizz Volturi Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 87

so funny!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 87

What a wonderful day wedding and a baby

Reviewer: laylieb Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 87

HONEYMOON! HONEYMOON! HONEYMOON! Geez Louise!! Great story but dang girl! Let's get to the secks!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 87

:)

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 87

Awww, so cute!  And it's going to be a Boy!!!

Reviewer: jol27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 87

perfect big smile now :)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 87

Whooo hooo and YEEE hawwwww   they done got hitched and now Esmom is gonna pop

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 87

Great chapter.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 87

well at least they finally got married! cant wait till the next chapter keep thme comming

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 87

Alice is obnoxious.  I hate that Bella doesn't stand up to Alice.  It's not her wedding so she should butt the hell out.....

Reviewer: pierard85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 87

it's fabulous

deeply the continuation

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 87

lol for Em.

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 87

love it and the ending was funny

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 87

very funny. It figures something would keep their ceremoney far from normal.  look forward to more.

Reviewer: GwenCooper426 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 87

LOL!!!  Oh, Emmett!  I heart you.

Gwen

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 86

Loved it!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 86

how very cool so every thing comes back to them all the land is conected again.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 86

good

Reviewer: westernem Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 86

aw so close to the wedding, love it :D

Reviewer: AmandaHPLO Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 86

I love this story. Great plot, storyline, imagination the list goes on and on. I watch for an update on pins and needles.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 86

:)

Reviewer: jol27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 86

going to the chapel and they are gonna get married!!!!!

 

loved it and the fact Edawrd got his tree :o)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 86

awww eddie gets his tree

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 86

I love how you're wrapping up this story!  Thanks for the chapter!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 86

glad he is accepting the gift without putting up a fight.  look forward to more.

Reviewer: GwenCooper426 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 86

Sweet!  Guy talk is so adorable!  (And wow on Mallory.)

Gwen

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 86

Yeah! Edward gets some of his land back! Loved the chapter!

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 86

awww that was so sweet..

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 86

nice wedding present :) i just hope he won't be a stubborn overly prideful man and he'll accept the gift :)

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 85

That was HILARIOUS!!! Would LOVE to see me some naked Emmett and Edward.YYYUUUUUMMMMYYYY!

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 85

:)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 85

ok so no sexin the night before! that was too funny! and bella being all innocent with her questions about the shower and her revelation that she had seen eddie in the buff before and the size difference.... poor eddie is gonna just die!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 84

ok that was so not nice! it was a dream at the beginning?!?!?!? here i was thinking poor eddie was gonna go hang himself at the tree with their initials! and wow did we jump ahead! wedding is tomorrow but sexin is tonight! whoohoo eddie! but isn't that dangerous with emmy right down the hall?

what happened to mr mallory? the rest of the cows? the water? so many questions you have missed the answers to. *pouts*

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 83

well they all almost made it out ok... almost. and they are who knows how far away from doctor c.

seriously creepy shit that james has kinda been staulking bella for 3 years lying in wait for his chance to get her. *shivers* ewwww! creepy!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 82

aha! time for the rescuing to start! yay! and i am pretty sure eddie and em are gonna be a might pissed when they see bella's face!

i hope real life has calmed down for you a bit.  think possitive. 'this too shall pass'

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 81

oh i love carmen! and reading her cusses are bringing back some of my spanish, heehee it is always the swear words you learn first!

time for alice to shine her daddy would be proud!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 80

please tell me she shot him in the leg! that fucker needs to be brought down hard, not given the easy out of death!

and eddie and the gang are on their way to get bella! they know where she is and can ride like the wind to get to her now! maybe james and laurant will still be passed out when they get there and it will be quick and easy with no shooting? yeah i didn't think so....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 79

so that is why carmen is being a bitch?!?!?! because rose won't marry em? can't she see rose is hurting too? can't she see rose's side of this? what she is trying to save em from? not that it matters but still she has good reasons - at least in her own mind.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 78

well at least now bella will have some real clothes, and get to wash up a bit. gotta look for the bright side right? and she did draw first blood with james. just the start of all of the hurt about to come down on his ass!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 77

poor tyler! well now as i see it james and laurant now have arson, kidnapping, assult, and now murder on their hands. not that it will make much difference seeing how they won't live long once emmy and eddie find them.

glad to see rose is stepping up. back then i am sure there were quite a few kids whose momma's were working ladies. especially out west, gotta survive and the sad thing is a woman can always sell her body. gotta do what you gotta do......

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 76

james shot his dick off! that is too funny! only a few hours away time to ride!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 75

i think that james is gonna have to defend bella's honor. how ass backwards is that?!?!?!?! all good as long as it holds out till eddie can come kill his ass for taking his bell!

Reviewer: amanda29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 85

I love the chapter  Damn I dont think I laughed that hard in a long time

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 74

wow rosie really is stepping up to the plate and trying her damnedest to keep everything good for emmy and his family. i think that carmen will give her respect due to the way she is acting now.

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 85

lmao  big time

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 73

poor edward! you just want to hug him and tell him it will all be ok. he will get there in time.

congrats to you on your milestones. definately well deserved! great story thank you for sharing it with all of us! :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 72

well rosie is finally at the ranch, at home were she belongs. and carmen better get that bee outta her bonnet because that 'puta' is gonna be the missus as soon as emmy can get her to agree.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 71

hold it together bella! the calvalry is coming have faith and stay strong.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 70

Rosie is gonna be the mistress of the ranch in em's absence. Alice is gonna prove her worth and maybe have to confide in the others about her daddy and some of her past. Bella they are coming for you!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 69

Will elzear live through this all? Time to saddle up and take the posse out to find bella and the bad guys.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 85

That was so sexy and then Emmett arives to funny now poor Edward is going to have to explain what he was doing in the shower maybe he should show her??? 

Reviewer: westernem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 85

haha oh man what a night for those two, and go rose :D

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 85

lol   poor eddie.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 85

Too Funny!!!!  I am glad they got caught before they went all the way so their wedding night is still special!  Besides I think poor Edward is going to have a hard time (pun totally intended) getting it up after he explains to Bella what Emmett caught him doing, LOL!  Gotta love Rosie for covering for Bella!!!  : )

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 85

haha!! :)

Reviewer: Mari Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 85

Oh man, E/B just can't get a break! Good luck explaining that one Edward! Can't wait for the next update! Thank you.

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 85

LMAO!!!! Too Funny!

Reviewer: maryannabella Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 85

Absolutely the funniest thing I have read in forever. I needed a good laugh and boy did you provide it! THanks! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: BELLWARDC Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 85

Ha ha that was too funny. Poor Edward!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 85

well sucks to get caught ! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming

 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 68

Well here come the boys! Too bad they are too late for the barn. Too late for elzear. And too late to keep bella away from james... For now. There is gonna be hell to pay!

Reviewer: laylieb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 85

Emmet the Cockblocker strikes again!! ARGH!!!

Reviewer: SummerMeadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 85

HAHA! LOve this chapter update more.

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 85

great chapter, very funny at the end.

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