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Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 89

It is good that they were able to be together alone on their wedding night.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

It was a good story.

Thanks for enjoyed my days

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 89

beautiful chapter

Great job

Reviewer: elmarie1123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

That's the perfect way to end this awesome story!!!

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 88

Good chapter.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

wonderful ending, I am sorry to see this story go, but a taste of the future was just what was needed. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

It was lovely but I am going to go cry now!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 89

I loved it! It was absolutely perfect!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

:)

Reviewer: elmarie1123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 16

It sounds like the spanish we speak in Puerto Rico.

Reviewer: elmarie1123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 9

¡Ay, Patron!  ¡Te pegaron en los meros huevos!” OMG I can't handle Carmen! hahaha Imma pee my pants, sinverguenza!

Reviewer: elmarie1123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 3

"Cabrón" hahahahaha I like Carmen!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

That was great there is no such thing as afternoon delight with kids LOL.  That was a great ending to a wonderful story.  I will be looking forward to what is next.

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

I will greatly miss this story.  Definetly one of my favorite stories.  You did a great job.  Can't wait to read you have coming up next.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

Well I loved that they all had kids. It was also funny that Bella and Edward were caught in the act by their son. Even funnier that their son told Em and Jasper. LOL

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

Best Part:

 

Charlie looked confused and looked over to his father.  “Pops?  What’d Uncle Em catch you doing in the shower?”

Reviewer: knae Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

Awww I loved Lonesome Hearts! Im glad your writing a sequel!

Reviewer: GwenCooper426 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

"Leave 'em laughing!"   ; ) 

Hugs,

Gwen  (I have so enjoyed this ride!  Can't wait for the next one!)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

so glad everyone had kids and they all stayed together

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

This was a great story!  Thank you for sharing with us -- I look forward to your sequel!

Reviewer: punto819 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

This last chapter was great. Hope you write another!

Reviewer: piekat2249 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

....Good...but....I wanted Edward and Bella to have at least ONE girl!!

Reviewer: edwardbabymomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

Little Charlie is so adorable lol! Great Chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

great story. loved it all and am sad to see it go.

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

Loved the epilogue!  Thanks for writing this wonderful story.  It's been great and I look forward to your next story.

Reviewer: guest1977 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

This story was outstanding. Your attention to detail makes the reader feel if they are in the scene experiencing everything first-hand, play-by-play. Have you ever considered doing a drama/romance centered around politics/Washington DC? I would love to see you do something like that. PLEASE!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

Lol, i loved reading this story!

Reviewer: raemoferg1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

I loved this ending. It's just a random future shot that shows how your characters progress. I loved following this story and am excited to see what else you have in store.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue

Its been a great ride hun.  THanks for taking the time to write.

Reviewer: lillinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 89

yea it was worth the wait. :) i cant wait for the sequel :)

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 89

Worth the wait! Great chapter! I love the humor mixed in with the passion!  The lemon was yummy!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 89

perfect cant wait for the sequel

Reviewer: twixdaisy Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 89

very very good!!!!!

Reviewer: jol27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 89

sequel? best word ever!
loved it so worth the wait :o)
thank you and hope you feel better soon xx

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 89

Yes this was worth the wait. Can not wait for the epi and then the sequel.

 

I have had walking pnuemonia, take all your medicine and drink lots of fluids. REST.

Don't expect to get over it soon, it takes time to get over pnuemonia.

CONTRATS on GRADUATION.

 

 

Reviewer: nellie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 89

Thank you for writting this story and I am really looking forward to the seqal!!!!

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 89

well and truly worth the wait. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 89

woo hooo  they are married and got a new house!!!

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 89

Great Chapter......

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 89

Hope everything is going well for you now all healed up???  That was a very nice lemon very sweet thanks.

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 89

Lemon was worth the wait.  Great chapter, loved it.  I hope you feel better.

Reviewer: BELLWARDC Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 89

So worth the wait!

Reviewer: GwenCooper426 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 89

JESUS!!!  *giggles*

That'd be a "Hell, Yes!" on the wait there, D.

Hugs,

Gwen

Reviewer: edwardbabymomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 89

Great Chapter!

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 89

In a word....Perfect

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 89

:)

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 89

You wrote their wedding night perfectly. A wonderful and addictive story. I cant wait for the epi and the sequel. Hope you are feeling better.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 89

Definitely worth the wait ;) !! Great job!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 89

loved the chapter.

Reviewer: sandys4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 89

This story is wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I loved the chapter!  It was perfect!  I cannot wait for the sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Jdonovan09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 88

awesome job! love the story..and congrats :)

Reviewer: luscious34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 88

congrats damsell, phd!!!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 88

I can just imagine seeing the fear in all the men's faces when they heard Esme screaming in pain. :0) Happy news, They have a son.

Reviewer: alyten1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Congratulations!!!  and once again great chapter

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 88

congratulations doctor and best wishes for the future. A wonderful chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 88

A son for Carlisle and Esme is wonderful.  Congrats on your success!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 88

Congratulations! I'm terribly impressed! Great chapter!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 88

congrats

 

 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 88

Nice to see you back...I was spoiled with your frequent updates so I was curious as to the delay...so now their son is born, I can't wait to read what happens next

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 88

Congrats on all of your hard work!! How exciting is it that Carlisle and Esme had a litle boy!!!

Reviewer: stmur Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 88

Congratulations Dr. Damsell.

Reviewer: desintx Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 88

Wonderful update, so glad that Esme and the baby are okay. I won't lie, I hate leaving reviews, but I feel a HUGE congragulations is in order for the doctor! Thats a hard road to accomplish and you have, so big hug, pat on the back, and congrats (again)! I hope no one hassled you too much on updates, people need to understand the authers on these sites do this for no money and it is just a hobby, so the way I look at it, if yya update you do....if you don't oh well I will just be that more excited once you do,lol! Thanks for the update, congrats again, and look forward to the next chapter...no promises on an update, like I said I am a lazy ass when it comes to that, but I love your story and have been around since the first chapter posted and will continue on till the end and any other works you may put forth later on!

Reviewer: GwenCooper426 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 88

Woooooootttt!  *cheering for you*

Gwen

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 88

Great Chapter....

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 88

awww, YAY! a boy! so happy for them.....congrats! Dr.! :)

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 88

First off, great chapter. Secondly,CONGRATS DR. I'm sure all your hard work that you have put into your doctorate will now pay off.Again congratulations and may all your dreams come true.

Keep wriitng sweets your an excellent author as well.

Reviewer: rhapsody9278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 88

YAY, congratulations on the completion of your dissertation!!!!! Oh, and I really enjoyed this chapter. :)

Reviewer: Sophi517 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 88

Congrats Dr., Love the story it,s definately worth the wait....

Reviewer: peridotskye Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 88

Well, first off congrats on passing your dissertation...Second, great chapter, Esme had a boy and it has the same B-day as E&B's anniversary...Can't wait for the next update. Now E&B just need to have a honeymoon...hehehehe

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 88

don't worry about posting. congrats on passing. just can't wait for more

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 88

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 88

great chapter. glad all went well with esme.

Reviewer: angelburt84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 88

COngrats on the acomplishment and cant wait to read more

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 88

Men thinking about the pain of child birth thats an eye opener.  One thing for sure Bella and Edward wont forget when the babys birthday is.  Whats his name????  Congraulations on being a Dr,  what kind???

 

Reviewer: jol27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 88

perfect!

Reviewer: laylieb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 88

Great chapter Doc!!! Congrats!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 88

Woo Hoo  Congrats on the dissertataion.

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 88

Great chapter.

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 88

:)

 

CONGRATS

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 88

No apology necessary Doc! Lovely chapter!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 88

Great chapter!  Congrats on officially becoming a Dr.! 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 79

have you abandond us? You used to write once a week sometimes two chapters. I look for you every day. Please update..

 

Reviewer: knae Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2010 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 87

LOve this story! Cant wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: lillinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 87

Awesome story. :)

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 81

i realy love this story

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 80

this is a good story

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 79

i like this chapter to.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 78

its a good storyi love it

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 77

that was sad that some died

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 76

this is a very good story so far

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 75

i like this one to.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 74

this one is very good to.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 73

it was a good chapter to.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 72

i like this one to.

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 71

i loved this one to

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 70

that was good to

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 69

that is realy sad chapter but i loved it

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 68

you are doing a good job

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 67

i like this one to

Reviewer: daisey35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 66

that was a upseting chapter but i loved it

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