Date: 31 Aug 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 41
Good chapter! I'm just happy that you post!
Date: 31 Aug 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 40
sounjds like James there at the end.
Date: 31 Aug 2010 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 40
Really enjoying this story, cant wait to read more.
Date: 31 Aug 2010 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 40
excellent, lol jasper cracks me up and edward is .....sigh..... wonderful.
Date: 31 Aug 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 40
I love seeing the truth finally come out. :0) Jasper handing the flowers to Carlisle was funny. :0) Great chapter!
Date: 31 Aug 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 40
Poor Alice, she's a mess. Jasper's too funny.
Date: 31 Aug 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 40
Thanks for sticking with it till we were able to see it. Please tell me that Alice is crying harder now because she can be with Jasper or is she crying harder because she is feeling betayed by Emmett????
Date: 31 Aug 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 40
Woo Hoo! It's fixed!
Date: 30 Aug 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can not see any of the chapters
Date: 30 Aug 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 39
OH man bella is so lucky getting to share that saddle with edward, it's too bad she can't flip herself around the other way.....snickers.......
Date: 28 Aug 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 39
awww very sweet
Date: 28 Aug 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 39
D: Poor poor poor horse. Has to carry Emmett and Edward.... Poor horse
Date: 27 Aug 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 39
love it and how nervous edward was in asking bella to ride with him
Date: 27 Aug 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 39
How sweet riding double. That is funny Emmett drooling on Edwards back LOL
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 39
Short but sweet. Bella and Edward are so cute together. Glad you love the banner. It was AWESOME to log in and see it up.
Date: 27 Aug 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 39
aww, this was kinda sweet
Date: 27 Aug 2010 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 39
Love the banner! Good chapter! I was wondering if Bella might show Rose the letter that Emmett wrote their Mother?
Date: 27 Aug 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 39
glad to see a little edward and bella again. hope there is more in the next chapter.
Date: 27 Aug 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 39
I love when I get to read about these two. I'm happy that they get this little bit of alone time on the way to town. :0) Gives them a chance to talk and be together. :0)
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2010 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 39
Sweet! And their outing has only just begun. Supper and the ride home under the stars is sure to be something I'm so excited for more!
Date: 26 Aug 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oops, forgot to add---can you leave the link to the forum at the end of each chapter? *hunting backwards through chapters now*
Thanks!
Gwen
Date: 26 Aug 2010 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 38
Still loving on this story---I miss Westerns soooo much.
Hugs,
Gwen
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 38
Wow, what a great chapter. The letter was just beyond words. I love Emmett and Bella's relationship. I foresee another conversation between Bella and Rosalie not to mention trouble coming to town if it does not already reside on a nearby ranch.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 38
yay, I'm so glad that Emmett stopped in to see Bella and that they are talking. I didn't like seeing him so upset. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. :0)
Date: 26 Aug 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 38
So happy Emmett went to talk to Bella and that letter tells all to Bella.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 37
love it and i think that she should make emmett worry about what she is going to do
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 37
I love all the chapters and can't wait for more! Please update soon!
Date: 25 Aug 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 37
aww how sweet update soon please i want to know what he wrote.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 36
Oh I really felt sorry for Emmett. He is a good man he is just trying to please everyone at once. And Jasper staying with Alice was sweet. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 25 Aug 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 37
I hope Emmett comes to visit Bella and they have a nice talk. :0) Speaking of talking... wonder what Edward was going to say? Thanks for all these speedy updates.
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 37
a279;What a GREAT chapter, well except for the Edward getting interrupted part. Are you doing this to torture me??? Just kidding. I loved the sibling/family history you added as well. I am dying to know what Edward was going to say but I know that part of the story is more than likely not coming next so I will try to be as patient as possible.
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 37
Edward just can't catch a break.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 37
oh poor edward, got interupted and couldn't tell bella what he wanted , maybe next time.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 37
Oh lord I have a feeling that letter will not be a good thing. PLease keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 37
Edward has it bad :). I cant wait to see what Emmett wrote to his mother and it will probley explain alot of things to Bella????
Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 37
hmmmm wonder what the letter will say.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 36
everything looks good and can't wait fro more
Date: 25 Aug 2010 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 36
First off, we readers are lucky that writers like you choose to share your talents with us for free. While I do appreciate good grammar; I understand that when someone is writing for "fun"; it's not always the first thing on their mind. I have not found your story to be hurt by your grammar. In some cases; it is difficult when a writer has spelling issues and grammar issuses, I have not found that to be the issue with you. I would prefer you to keep up with the fast and enjoyable updating schedule and not worry with a beta. Just my two cents.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 36
Emmett needs to man up and strong arm Rosie to be with him.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 36
I don't think you need a beta! I'm hooked! Good chapter ~ poor Emmett!
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2010 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 36
The stuff with Alice and Jasper was so sweet! Hopefully she said something in her sleep that will let Jasper know she returns his feelings. Poor Emmett! He really could use Rosie right now for a shoulder to cry on. I have no doubt he will do the right thing (he already came to that conclusion on his own) but I hope he sets things right with Bella first and explains everything to her. I love their relationship. I have two older brothers (8 & 12yrs between us) and I am very close to one of them (8yrs between us). I could not imagine the feeling of knowing someone you adore, who looks up to you or vice versa, being very disappointed in you and your behavior. I would be sick with grief!
Date: 24 Aug 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 36
Poor Emmett. He's so sad right now. I hope Bella comes in and talks with him and lets him know she still loves her big brother. I think I think they both need a good cry together. I didn't realize till this chapter (or is slipped my mind) that Emmett never did show much emotion when Bella told him their parents died.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 36
oh poor emmett, he got himself in a mess lol.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 36
aww, now i feel sad for Emmett. Not sorry, but sad
Date: 24 Aug 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 36
poor sad Em.....at least Jazz will get a shot at Alice now.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 36
Jasper has made his claim. Poor Emmett he just needs to go and talk to Bella. I am loving this story and if you are writing this at 30 min at a time wow you are amazing thank you
Date: 24 Aug 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 36
love the story...poor emmy..
Date: 24 Aug 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 36
NOOOOO I am fine with any grammar issues!!!! I really enjoy the fast updates. :)
Date: 24 Aug 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 35
I'm glad Bella finally let Emmett have it for his actions. It means things are really gonna start getting interesting!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 35
great chapter. glad she spoke up and told him what she was angry about.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 35
Oh Emmett better watch out. Bella is going to tell Alice everything. I think it's sweet how Edward cares for her. She needs that right now. I would love to see Emmett and Rosalie be able to be together with out people talking shit because she is a prostitute. She is still a lady. Please update soon and keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 23 Aug 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 35
emmett is sort of a jerk..
Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 35
I they cant figure out that Edward Loves Bella by now no one is paying attention LOL the poor boy is like a little puppy. Emmett must have shit himself when Bella said that she had seen him and Rose what is the boy going to do????
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 35
oh poor emmett, maybe he can be with his rosie soon. edward and bella ..sigh... looks like things are heating up and poor jasper he needs some alice loving, of course when she heals.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 35
Edward being there for Bella the whole time while at the docs was so sweet. I like the rugged cowboy but I also like to see him being tender and loving toward Bella. :0) I'm glad Bella told Emmett about what she saw so he won't have to wonder what's she's mad at. Poor Emmett, I wonder what he'll do? Loving the story! :0)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 35
Absolutely loved it!!! Edward's crooked smile makes me swoon and it's so cute that he won't let her walk. Now if Emmett has a problem with a man like that for his baby sister, no man will ever be good enough. Bella's scolding of Emmett was awesome and I can't wait to see what he is going to do!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 35
I have tried numberous times to get to the forum and it would not allow me to enter or view your's. i will try again seeing as you have with little luck fixed the problem.
great chapter you write all of these guys well and i am enjoying the wild west setting very much xx
Author's Response:
Hi Jol27,
If you're still having trouble, please send a PM to jennmc75 over at the forums. Include your birthdate in the message and let her know the problem. Hope that helps.
Thanks,
Damsell
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 35
Dang! You left us hanging! Good chapter! I love the kiss between Bella and Edward! I knew Bella was going to confront Emmett ~ I think we all know that Alice will not be brokenhearted as she and Jasper seem to feel the same way toward each other. Which leaves us with Rosalie...?
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 35
I have gone tot he forums numerous times to find the story and can't find it anywhere. I would love to participate but for some reason I am toally lost.
Author's Response:
Hi hpllyn28,
I'm sorry you're having so much trouble with the forums. Please make sure that you are a registered member, login, then go to the Twilight board. There, click on "All Human" followed by "NC-17 (Coffee Liquer)" and finally Lonesome Hearts. If you are registering for the first time, please make sure to include your birthday (the forum is only open to 18+). If you have registered and are still having trouble, please enter your birthdate on your profile and wait 24 hours to enter. Contact jennmc75 through PMs if you're still having trouble after that.
Hope that helps!
Damsell
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 35
love it and can't wait for more
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 34
love it and can't wait for more
Date: 20 Aug 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 34
great chapter. glad they are going to be ok.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 34
Oh I wanted them to kick James ass. Maybe in the next chapter. PLease keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 20 Aug 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 33
Oh this is really getting good. Finally Emmett decided he can't marry Alice. Now for him to tell everyone to go to hell that he is marryng Rose. PLease pdate soon and keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 20 Aug 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 34
I adore this story! ; )
Hugs,
Gwen
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 34
Awesome! Loved the chapter and the end result with Alice staying in town. She will be there for months during her recovery. I have NEVER been so eager for Monday to come, until now!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 34
I'm glad the girls are ok. I guess Alice having to stay in town will make it easy for Jasper to visit and check up on her. :0) It could be fun trying to see Edward and Emmett trying to take care of an injured Bella. :0) Love the story1
Date: 20 Aug 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 34
I put my birthday on the forums profile edit thing and it still isn't letting me see this forum, so that's not the problem. It says "You are not authorized to read this forum" when I click on the link to it, so I don't think its an age thing, I think you must have locked it so that only "authorized" people can get into it. You should probably check that. If its not on your end, then this site just sucks.
On a happier note, I love the chapter and story, I wish the chapters were longer, but that would probably mean that you would update less often, but I'm okay with that...
Date: 20 Aug 2010 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 34
Thank goodness they are not to bad Alice is not going to be making any dresses for a whail. Bella is a brave girl. Jasper will have time to spend with Alice since she will be in town :)
Date: 20 Aug 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 33
and here comes Jasper to Alice's rescue! When is Emmett going to realize that he could ask Jasper to marry Alice. :0) Jasper saying he never touched his biscuts was funny :0)
Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 32
I'm surprised she actually got to talk to Rose and now she knows the story between Emmett and Rose. Can't wait to see how things go. :0)
Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 34
oh that poor jasper, but he finally got to carry alice, lol . oh and edward is so good at translating .....sigh........ . great chapter once again.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 34
Phew! Good chapter!
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 33
i can't wait until you update. i hope bella and alice are ok and were smart enough to move from thos monstrosities lmao i hate being too close to horses with their dangerous hights and weird penises lmao just kidding wanted to make you laugh! update soon!!!!!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 33
gotta love the cliffy's too. lol
Date: 19 Aug 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 33
i love this story keep it up
Date: 19 Aug 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 33
i do like a good cliffy every once and a while but hurry it up!!! lol!!
Date: 19 Aug 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 33
uh oh spaghettios! Lol, i think the cats gonna start coming outta the bag soon
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 33
Oh, I am so happy to see Emmett come to this conclusion on his own. LMAO at Jasper. It would have been a fraudian slip if he said I didn't touch HER bisquits. Too funny! The Race! Oh my goodness, you had me sitting on the edge of my seat. Go Eleazar!!!! Evil cliffhanger!!!!! You do know you are killing me, right??????