Date: 09 Sep 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 33
*run for read the next chapter*
Date: 09 Sep 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 47
oh that poor jasper, he's trying his best to court alice, keeping the town and everyone safe and poor bella gives him hair tonic by accident, lol oh my gosh that is funny, about the hair tonic. well emmett farted in church(LMAO again) and now jasper drank hair tonic, i wonder if something funny is going to happen to edward. oh god i am still laughing about emmett farting......................
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 47
Aww man we missed the steamy kiss. I scream outtake!!!!!!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 47
hmmm yeah its odd she is willing to marry em but not jazz.
LOL for the hair tonic.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 47
oh my gosh, that ending was so funny!!!!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 47
Edward kissing Bella behind the barn door was sweet. Sorry to hear that the down is having so much trouble. Poor Jasper. Looking forward to seeing how they all pull through this. :0)
Date: 09 Sep 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 32
Good chapter.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 47
love it and the end of the chapter was so funny
Date: 09 Sep 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 46
Wonder what's up with Alice??
Date: 09 Sep 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 45
ha ha loved Jasper's reaction :0)
Date: 09 Sep 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 31
Hope Bella will have a small talk with her brother.
Good chapter
Date: 09 Sep 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 30
Another good chapter.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 29
Good chapter again.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 46
Swoon! Loved it!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 46
hope you tell us what her problem is. great chapter
Date: 09 Sep 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 28
Another good chapter.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 26
Good chapter.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 46
hmmm still got me wondering what alice's problem is.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 46
thanks for making confirming that there will in fact be a HEA.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 46
Did I miss something? What is up with Alice?
Date: 09 Sep 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 46
love it and can't wait for more
Date: 08 Sep 2010 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 46
I love Jasper his is the man. Why OH why is Alice saying she cant be with him.???????
Date: 08 Sep 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 46
jasper is such a sweetie. nice chapter
Date: 08 Sep 2010 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 45
Jasper is a happy man what is going to happen when he gets back to Alice???? Emmett not the brightest crayon in the box lol
Date: 08 Sep 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 46
I must tell you I am LOVING this story!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 46
I've known people like Jessica and all I can say is Aggghhhhhhhhh!!!!! Go Jasper! Love how he is not taken no for an answer. Can't wait to find out what the heck her deal is......
Date: 08 Sep 2010 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 46
I don't get it. If she could marry Emmett, who didn't love her and who she didn't love... why can't she marry Jasper? Doesn't make sense.
Date: 08 Sep 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 45
finally that was cleared up and now all we need is for Rose and Em to get their fingers out of their butts and do something about being together as well...lol
Date: 08 Sep 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 45
hmmm what will alice say to jazz
Date: 08 Sep 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 45
hope Jasper convinces alice to marry him or at least to give him a chance.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 45
Carmen makes me laugh! I knew Emmett wasn't getting a drink, but I thought she might throw it on his wound for cleansing purposes. I was totally waiting for it and expected him to squeal like a girl. LOL!!! Glad Bella is still thinking about the shooter out there even though no one else is. Jasper was so excited about Alice he completely forgot (way to go Sheriff) about the danger lurking outside! Thank you for letting Carmen smack Emmett upside the head, but I think she still gets to do it at least one more time since he has yet to have a much needed conversation with Alice. Pretty please??????
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 45
FINALLY,that comes out,now we have 1 down 2 to go.That was comical,I don't think Emmett was expecting that one.But I do think he will be a little more prepared when Edward approaches him about Bella.That is WHEN he approaches him about Bella,I know all in good time. Good chapter doll.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 45
that was awesome, now hopefully everyone can get to some loving (wiggles eyebrows up and down).
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 44
So very sorry I haven't been reviewing all chapters,but RL has caught up with me.my nephew was in a horrible motorcycle accident so I have been away.
I have now caught up til now,I have fallen in love with this story so much that I keep my family up to date with it.My hubby even asks about it,lol.That is very unusual for him but I have sucked him in on this one.
Have a Happy and Safe Labor Day doll!!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 44
I love this story and can't wait to read more!! I only just started reading this a few hours ago and couldn't stop!!
Date: 04 Sep 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 44
So creative. I can't wait for the next bit :)
Date: 04 Sep 2010 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 44
Cant wait to read more, loving this story.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 44
Damn...shit just got real! I want a new chapter right now!
Date: 03 Sep 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 44
Thank god he is not hurt really bad. We all know that Edward would not have been able to stop Bella with Emmett hurt.
Date: 03 Sep 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 44
thank goodness emmett is okay, maybe they can fiqure out who shot him. great chapter.
Date: 03 Sep 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 44
2 whole days with out anything! really ! ugh no fair *pouting lip and everything*
Date: 03 Sep 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 44
Ooo, exciting! (Me likey!) Have a great weekend!
Hugs,
Gwen (practices waiting patiently)
Date: 03 Sep 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 44
I'm glad Emmett is alright. I know he's hurt but at least he's alive. Wonder who shot him??? Funny how he promised he'd be more supportive of Edward and Bella and then started to think of taking that back. ha ha She's his baby sister I think that one's going to be a little tough. :0) I'll be looking forward to the next chapter whenever you get to post it.
Date: 03 Sep 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 44
love your story
glad to get daily updates but wish the chapters were longer
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2010 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 44
Yippee!!! I so knew it wasn't Jasper (yet, hehehehe) and I so knew Bella jumped on the horse before Edward even knew what was happening! THANK YOU for not letting Edward go alone. Bella was not there to protest so I was going to do it for her, but thank goodness Jasper is in his right mind! Can't wait til next week's update! Hope you have a great Holiday weekend!
Date: 03 Sep 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 44
Excellent chapter.
Date: 03 Sep 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 44
I think Emmett needs to take some time to get to know his sister again.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2010 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 43
Oh no.
I love this story, keep writing. You are so faithfull to your readers.
THANK YOU
Date: 03 Sep 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 43
No not Emmett I hope he is not hurt to bad??? What is Alices secret???
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 43
This story is really good. It has a little of everything and I have really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing it.
Date: 03 Sep 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 43
Oh no! did someone shoot Emmett???
Date: 03 Sep 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 43
I know its wasnt Jazz so I;m guessing James.
Date: 03 Sep 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 43
you better not kill my emmy bear
Date: 02 Sep 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 43
oh crap, poor emmett.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 43
Yikes! Iknow that wasn't Jasper! Why can't Alice marry Jasper?
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 43
AH!!!!! I love your story, but god I wish your chapters were longer!!! I cant wait to see the next chapter!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 43
well i think that im happy hes finally realized that alice isnt who he wants to marry! hate the cliffe but cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 02 Sep 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 43
This story is charming.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 43
hmm, I'm confused with why Alice thinks she can't be with Jasper, but I know we'll find out when we're meant to. Nice cliffhanger too!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 43
OMG, that's not just a cliffhanger, that is the MOTHER of all cliffhangers!!!!!!! Although he has been a bad Bear (I am totally giggling right now cuz my cat Buddy Bear who we call "Bear" gets told he is a bad Bear all the time!) I know Jasper wouldn't shoot him, well just yet anyways! I can't wait to find out what the hell is up with Alice!!!!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 42
AWWEEE that was the sweetest kiss that I have read about in a long while.. So heart warming.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 42
its abut time something happened between them!
:D update soon
Date: 01 Sep 2010 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 42
love it and i can't find the forum for this story
Author's Response:
If you click on the coffee cup under the banners for this story it's linked to the forum for this story. If you want to go directly into it, login to the forums, click on Twilight under the Fanfiction section. From there click on All Human and then the NC-17 secition. Lonesome Hearts is the first entry under the forums there.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 42
awww now thats a real proper kiss and omg finally! lol
Date: 01 Sep 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 42
Yay more progress for bella and edward I hope they now will pick up the pace or at least have more time together. Hope Alice accepts Jasper's love and sees a future with him.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 42
Oh thank goodness they kissed now they can see what is going on with feeling.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 42
Great chapter! The kissing scene was really well written.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 42
awww, there so sweet
Date: 01 Sep 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 42
enjoying this story. Good story line. Romance is building and other story line has detail. I say good job!
Oh, and I love that Bella is strong and not so mixed up!
Date: 01 Sep 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 42
Sigh, very dreamy!
Date: 01 Sep 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 42
awwww that was sweet
Date: 01 Sep 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 42
love it alot cant wait formore
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 42
OMG, best chapter ever! Ok I am a little biased but still totally awesome. Edward's crooked smile makes me swoon too and also spreads warmth to my... LOL! Seriously though your updates make me a very happy camper. See you in the forum!
Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 42
aww, that was a sweet kiss for edward and bella.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 42
wow that was sweet..
Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 42
I loved their kiss. :0) It's so sweet seeing them fall for each other.
For some reason I still can't get on the forum. I registered way back when you posted chapter 30 but It still won't let me on. I have no idea what I'm doing wrong. :0)
Author's Response:
I'm sorry you're having trouble with the forums. You can click on the coffee cup under the banners for this story. If you still can't access it and have registered for the forums, please send a message to jennmc75 and she'll fix it so you can gain access. Hope that helps!
Date: 01 Sep 2010 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 41
Carlise sending Bella in to ask for lunch and the story Edward told about that was really funny. As for the little bit at the end .... I have know idea who it could be. I could guess Jacob only because he's not in the story yet and didn't I read somewhere that he'd be in the story? I read so many fics sometimes I get things like that confused. :0)
Date: 01 Sep 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 41
No idea who you are talking about and it is killing me :) I need to know. When is Edward going to make his move???? Why cant Alice be with Jasper???? so many ? waiting for answers :)
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Date: 01 Sep 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 41
hmmm wonder why she couldnt be with Jazz since Em cant marry her.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 41
I hope Bella and Edward admit they like each other before things start going bad.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 41
i think it is jacob
Date: 31 Aug 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 41
So the plot thickens!!!! I'm thinking maybe it's James but I really don't feel it is. Only time will tell! Edward is so cute even if he only thinks of himself as a cowpoke.
Date: 31 Aug 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 41
uh oh, the crap is gonna hit the fan soon and i am thinking maybe jacob is involved but i could be wrong. poor carlisle , he just wanted to eat, lol if i was esme i would have fed him gooood. lol (evil grin)